Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: InuGirl   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2010 4:39 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

GREAT ending! i mean the way you tied in that one line really made the story! I LOVED IT!



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2009 3:24 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

For your first multiple chapter fic this was really good!  I also just noticed that I only review on the final chapter I thought you should know that it's because I'm so caught up in the story that I don't want to stop to review not because I don't enjoy those chapters!



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2009 9:19 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

inugrrrl, i just love this story. it never gets old! for me, it's one of those ones that you can read over and over. this is probably the third time i read it lolz!! you just have a phenomenal gift for creating perfection, don't cha?!! lolz!!



Reviewer: sesshiesboo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2009 3:54 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine

i love how fuckin raw yo shyt is im a big fan of ur stories u inspire me to right some good lob

Author's Response: Thanks! xD This fic is mad old, but I'm happy to see you enjoyed it anyway!



Reviewer: Amanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 2:15 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Plots, Resolutions, & Random Acts of Silliness

You know, its really funny.. I vaguely recalled reading the first like.. 20 chapters of this story way back in the day.. but chapter 12 was one that always always always stood out in my mind. I still remember it after like.. how long. and it never fails to make me laugh. great job.

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks! you wouldn't believe how many people have told me that over the years. Chapter 12 with the phones. :P I admit, that's my favorite chapter, too, because it was just so SILLY. It's always good for a chuckle. Thanks so much for the good vibes. <3



Reviewer: Luc   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 6:14 AM
Chapter number: 36
Title: In Your Pack You Trust

Oh the battle scenes... god I love em... but when Sesshomaru revived Kouga and then everyone laughed, I found it disturbing.

 "Look ever'bodeh! A fuckin' reanimated corpse! HAR HAR HAR."

 And you will tell no one of my momentary idiocy.



Author's Response: LMAOOO! I will tell everybody, and their mamas! :P



Reviewer: Luc   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 4:18 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Plots, Resolutions, & Random Acts of Silliness

Oh my god, I'm rolling fuckin' laughin... I forgot all about the shittin' phone scene. It's all so outrageous to me, anyway... I guess I can't relate to much in this story, except maybe fuckin' in a field... heh. I don't know any guys who chat to the phone that much... but then again, I don't know any teenage boys who drive nice ass cars, either.

Author's Response: I know rich kids that drive nice cars -it happens plenty in NY. But that is my fave chap, rolly in any fic, lol. It's so fucking silly! *sighs* These were good times, eh, My Luc... (and yes, LUKE, not Loosh!).



Reviewer: Luc   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 3:01 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

Them chickens is ash and I'm lotion... what the fuck does that mean? I hope you pronounce "Luc" like "Luke" and not like "loose" or "luck". I'll never forget how you tripped when we talked about the pronunciation...



Reviewer: Luc   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: It's Always By Chance

It's nice to revisit an oldie but goodie... This fiction was one of the first of yours I read, I believe.



Reviewer: GrammyInuLvr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2007 4:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Hey Grrrl, told you I would finish this afternoon ... he he he.  Abso-fucking-lutely loved it!  You are the best!  On to Rebound ... he he he

~ Liz (GrammyInuLvr)



Reviewer: Erin Johnston   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 3:56 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

I am running out of things to praise your writing for.... you are good... what else can i say. I am very drawn into your stories and cant seem to stop reading them. Wonderful!!!!



Reviewer: bowandarrow08   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 8:19 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

That was so amazing. I have read many of your stories and honestly i think you are one of the best authors that i have ever had the priviledge of knowing! You are so great at writing and i truly believe that you could go places. I wish that you had this posted on fanfiction.net so i could put this into my favorites. Furthermore i wish i could put this on my favorites list more than one time, that is how much i have enjoyed reading this story. It almost made me cry a few times. Congradulations on a job well done. I do hope to have you know that i have wasted an entire TWO full days just reading your stories alone :]. Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 1:03 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Abso-fucking-lutely Fabulous!

It may be a goldie-oldie, but it's a goldie-oldie-goodie!

GEEZ!! How I just love your stories, Sweetie! Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.



Reviewer: Inuluvr91   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 2:07 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Saturday Night Prep

i dont like the last line it makes him sound very inconsiderate other than that i am looking forward to reading the rest



Reviewer: anonymous   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 2:31 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

I read the entire story and it was wonderful. I read it over and over again!



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 21
Title: A Day of Discoveries

I always new Eri had a thing for hojou..!
lol
Hmm.. so 4 once kikyou gettin played interestin.. ukno shes not SO bad in this story .. i ALOMOST feel bad 4 her.. Heh! ALmost!
=]


Author's Response: Oi, Girly!! Thanks for the reviews, lol. This was my first multi-chap story ever and it needs sooo much cleaning up. But I'm glad you're enjoying it!



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 4:17 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Spider's Pit

...hmm... operation : fuck Inuyasha!.. .. in wat way.. i kno.. either the REAL way or the playin way or just ignorin him way.. u kno there is just TOO many possiblities.
lol
=]
r4k



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 3:50 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

HA! Thatz wat he get!
.. how is rin and sessy able to make out withouy sessh hurtin his back man he;s lika foot taller.
lol



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 3:34 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Partners in Crime

Heyy if Rins small than im a frickin midgit. Im 5ft 1 and a half.....sad i kno. =[
r4k



Reviewer: Hester Lewis(KaGoMe_26)   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

O.M.G!!!!!I ABSO-FUCKING-LUTLEY LOVED THAT STORY!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much!!!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 7:13 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

You're a really great writer. You should be a professional!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. One day I'd like to clean this story and rewrite it since it's my first multi-chap from 2 years ago. But I'm glad that you enjoyed it "as is". ^_^



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 3:44 PM
Chapter number: 22
Title: Secrets, Lies and Brotherly Love

man I wish I had a family like that!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 7:29 AM
Chapter number: 21
Title: A Day of Discoveries

What? When did Hojo come in?



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 7:09 AM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Anything For You

This is getting great!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 2:19 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: A Miko's Plot and a Romantic Interlude

Aw. That's so sweet!



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