Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 2:08 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: And So It Begins..

Evil people. Who doesn't want to see Kagome and Inuyasha be together in the end?



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:54 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Want You To Know Who I Am

this is really good.



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:47 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: All My Roads lead To You

Uh oh o.O



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:40 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Not Just Any Cheer

That's really good! And funnyy!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:24 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Secrets and Schemes

I din't kow rin could be that evil.



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:11 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Feelings Are Like Rollercoasters

High-speed chases! I love them!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:02 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Plots, Resolutions, & Random Acts of Silliness

lmao! I wish my friends had conversations like that!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:51 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: If He's Your Man Now...

That's such a sad chapter--I actually feel bad for Kikyou and i've been against her this whole time



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:45 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: What a Lord Wants...

You do know that most girls lose their "maiden barrier" doing normal things, right?



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:34 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Race and a Kiss

She's messing everything up! Kikyou go away! You're unwelcomed!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:07 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Spider's Pit

You're really great at this, InuGrrrl. Sugoi, sugoi!



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 11:57 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Saturday Night Prep

Sango and Miroku are trying to be matchmakers? o.O



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 10:01 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Anything You Can Do...

Wow. When Kagome gets mad, she can be a bitch with the rest of them.



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 9:43 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

Still very good. Could you do a songfic to "Angels" by Within temptation for me?



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine

That was really good. Kikyou is a bitch.



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 8:35 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Partners in Crime

OMG! That was great! I say kill off Kikyou, though. She's going to mess up things between Kagome and InuYasha



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 6:48 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: It's Always By Chance

This is really great! InuYasha better get her in the end.



Reviewer: Ayumi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I thought Kagome had brown eyes. GREAT JOB!



Reviewer: greensquirrel   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 3:45 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

WOW! THIS WAS AMAZING! HER ANSWER WAS AWESOME!



Reviewer: Lexxii   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2006 2:18 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Jeesus Christ thats so good. Im like litterally crying it was so happy and sad and...and...it was amazing. ;]

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! That was my first full-length fic and it was just all over the place, lol. But as long as they get together at the end, ne? ^-^



Reviewer: Ginger   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2006 2:03 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

i really like it. I was so petrified by rin's torture, omg it was painful. i even cried. thanx to kag power rin healed :), good work



Reviewer: Ginger   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2006 9:42 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: What a Lord Wants...

awwww, i love this two, sess/rin.(mature) they are my fav couple.
good chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews ^_^
I'm actually in the process of rewriting this one (basically cleaning it up beta-wise and adding detail) but I haven't posted the newer chaps yet. Thanks for being able to stand reading it even though it's a mess :-D



Reviewer: Ginger   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2006 8:57 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

wow i like the part when inu was kissing kikyo but looking at kagome. that kind of thing it is really mmmm i can't put words... kinda uncomfortable , it happened to me



Reviewer: Ginger   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2006 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

interesting



Reviewer: bewildered   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2006 9:08 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

"abso-fucking-lutely" amazing story. you and your obra maestra never cease to amaze me. til my next review. sayonara! :]]

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of the awesome reviews! I love it when readers find something I've done enjoyable ^^ I apologize for the achingly bad grammar in this fic <.< That was actually my first full-length story and it smacks of grammatical terror, lol. Heck, even now my grammar isn't good... just not THAT bad, lmao! BUT, this is on the beta "to do" list, so soon it won't be horrid -just downgraded to bad! 0.~



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