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Reviewer: Megan Consoer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2011 2:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? 



Reviewer: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2011 2:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

THIS ONEEEEEEEEEEE! IM STILL WAITING FOR THIS ONE! T___________T o_ o just dropping by :| 



Reviewer: Sci-Jess (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2011 2:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

I can believe it that they would delete you from this site. I would like for you to inform me when you update your wonderful stories. My email addresses are jh0007419@yahoo.com or jhurdleann@msn.com. Its there lost if they do not keep you.



Reviewer: MalevolentHuntress   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2011 6:23 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

Wow this story was stressful!!! I'm a lil sad there wasn't more Kag-Inu romance butttt...its still a fantastic story!

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, thanks. This was more about getting their lives back than "romance". This whole series was angsty, but for some reason, this sequel was really well-received.



Reviewer: Eris   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2011 9:48 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

And here I thought that Forgive Me Anything part One  made me cry...wow...I was wrong! Number two was even better! A pleasure as always to read something so well done.  Ever think about an epilogue?

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! :D I appreciate the good vibes! I actually have thought about an epilogue, but figuring out what to do with it (without leading into a third arc) has been hard. Don't count it out yet, though, because I just might surprise you! ^^



Reviewer: soliea0death   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2010 11:30 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

I cried for most of the first one, then in this one I was in a mix of emotions. I loved the way the others were able to fit in that time. And then Sesshomaru......hehe....that just made me laugh, with his job and behavior toward his family, but he's still the same on the inside. I loved the passion that was between Inu and Kag, even though there was that situation of her holding on to her mate's memory, even though it was him (get's kinda confusing to describe cause it's not really like Inu/Kik). Then I wanted to seriously kill Kaila for ruining it for them, like just grab her by the neck and...Ugh!!!

*Deep breath* Well anyway, I love the battle for love that Inuyasha and Kagome had to go through, and that it all turned out for the better. To not be able to live without the other really is true love. There's just one thing I was a bit confused on. Now I'm assuming Tensaiga didn't work because Kikyou was holding it back, well that's my guess. But when Midoriko said she wouldn't be reborn again, did that mean that the 'memory of Kikyou' within the soul would dissapear completely, since Kagome has her soul as well? Just wanted to clear that up.

Anyway, I love it everytime I read the series, like when I read everything else that you have. Don't stop your creativity....or else we'd all be bored. XD ;)



Da Grrrl Says: Heya doll! *waves*

I'm so glad you liked this one. Sadly, it was never a fave for me until way after I completed it. I guess I kinda got into this mode of just "getting it done", so it's always awesome to hear that someone enjoyed it and my irritation by the end didn't show!

Now, the question about Kikyou. What I was going for is that the soul always belonged to Kikyou. Kagome only got it because she died. When Kagome killed herself, the soul was returned to its rightful owner -Kikyou. But Kikyou finally understood that InuYasha could never truly be happy without Kagome. Their time had passed and it was time to let him go. So, she asked Midoriko to return the soul to Kagome's body; it was a final act of kindness for the one she always loved. So, the memory of Kikyou still exists within that soul, which is Kagome's now. Midoriko was just confirming with her that she, Kikyou, would never be able to return in any way (like the way Urasue called her back through the soul? Well, that can never happen again. Kikyou's soul would be forever Kagome's). The only way that soul could be reborn at this point would be through Kagome's own reincarnation after she passed on.

I hope I explained that right. It's been a while since I've thought about it!



Reviewer: Melissa-J   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 12:16 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

Words can't Explain How Much I Loved This Story. Deeply A Wonderful Story. KUDOS!!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D



Reviewer: InitialA   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2009 7:56 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

And now cue the part where I need a good cry from all the angst and emotion from reading this.

At this point I honestly can't put how good this was into words. I did love Sesshoumaru without the stick up his ass. X3

Just so good. I know I read the part where your heart wasn't completely in it, but you totally could have fooled me. Even if it wasn't a 'I want to do this for my readers' and more of a 'I need to do this for my readers', it was wonderfully written and I'm seriously full of emotion right now. (like, a freaking webcomic almost made me cry because I read all of this last night XD)

<3<3<3



Author's Response: Stop making me blush! xD

But seriously, thank you SO much. I admit, almost from the start this was a "for my lovelies and not myself" kinda fic. The outcry I got from the first one gave me a shock -and made me pause. It was supposed to stop with his death and no second chances. But when I got bombarded with letters and reviews of anguish, well... Let's just say I'm a sucker for the lovelies. :)

By the end, I could barely finish it. It was almost dreaded. However, the reason why each of the last 3 chapters took so long was because I wanted to at least try to end this in a way you guys were worthy of after all the time y'all invested. So the positive reviews I've gotten really means a lot; it makes me feel like I didn't let y'all down.

Thanks for that. <3



Reviewer: Talia   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2009 6:53 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

That was a brilliant story! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you, Talia! ^_^



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2008 12:24 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

I was definitely crying while reading this final chapter.  I'm so happy Kagome ended up living - wasn't expecting Kikyou to do that for them.  Awesome, awesome story.  I just wish there was one more epilogue, but I understand that it's time to let it go and end.  Thank you for this; you are truly a gifted writer and have me hooked.  :)

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I'll share a secret with you. This story still nags at me. I feel like it does need an epilogue, but I just haven't thought of anything that I want to do for it. By the time I finished the FMA series, I was just burned out off of it and didn't want to touch it again. But now that it's been months and months, it doesn't wear down my nerves the way it used to. So, I guess I'm saying that there just may be another short epilogue just to give it a proper goodbye. Thanks again for reading my work; I appreciate it!



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2008 12:20 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Bring Me to Life

This has got to be one of the best stories I have read.  This chapter was done perfectly; I nearly cried!  Love it love it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I must admit that this is my favorite chapter of the entire story, so I'm thrilled that you liked it so much! :D



Reviewer: Chibi   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2008 3:52 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

Damn!! ARGH I cried again! When they died I was just like ;___; fanning myself and shedding tears. lmao. That was a wonderful battle sequence, Nee-chan!! Intense and made me sit on the edge of my seat. o_o I looove this fic. ^___^

Congrats on finishing yet another one!!! =P

(although, if you're ever feeling inclined to, i too would like to see a dash more ending...*winkwink*)

=P teehee. yaaay!



Reviewer: The Daimyo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2007 5:51 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Another Moment is Another Eternity

Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term!

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Reviewer: Kagatob   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

After reading "Forgive me Anything" I immediately started this one and was so hooked that when I had to go to work I took my PSP to work to continue reading the sequal on my breaks.

Again I think my favorite character was Sess, though until the end I couldn't quite figure out if he was honestly being nice and happy, or if he had simply cracked under the realsiation that he was only alive again to play a matchmaker.  I had also felt the stress being palpable with him wanting to yell hypocrite in Kagome's face for repeating history almost to the letter with the only difference that she was in Inuyasha's shoes this time.

Naraku's coming back was quite the surprise to me and while it happened I couldn't help but think of Sephiroth's resurrection near the end of Advent Children. 

The ending while perfectly fitting for this story did irk me just a tiny bit, while the Romeo and Juliet-esque suicide would have been perfectly fitting with so much agnst flying left and right, I couldn't help but feel that Kag/Inu were being selfish as they both knew they had children to take care of.

I won't let one lil irk get me down though, you still get a 10/10 from me, you've really outdone yourself with this one.



Author's Response: Wow, I'm really honored! You took me with you on breaks!! :P I'm happy you liked this one. It took me 1000 years to complete it >.< this fiction gave me such fits! Sesshomaru was my favorite as well. He was so versatile. He was evil, he was funny, he was impatient... He had a little piece of everything. Naraku was always supposed to come back, I just needed to figure out how, lol. I never thought of Advent Children even once, though. Horribly, I didn't even think of Romeo and Juliet until my friend, Axel, pointed it out. I just knew that I needed Kagome to die. So where we will disagree is in this: Kagome's move was selfish. InuYasha's was not. To bring her back, he needed to put his life in danger, so he did. Kagome, ruled by heartache, tried to kill herself because separation wasn't something she thought she could live through. So, yah. ^_^ But overall, I'm glad you enjoyed my little version of canon. I don't touch canon in any form if I can help it, but it's great to know that my small attempt was well received.



Reviewer: The Daimyo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 3:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A New Life... In More Ways Than One

This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

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Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007.

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Winners will be notified by me after November 1st.

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Reviewer: Erin Johnston   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 9:10 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think you've outdone yourself!!! I must say I am inclined to believe that this one is better than the first!!! Ok so maybe its a tie... not sure. LOL. Ok now onto the seriouse business, I don't see why you didn't like this one. It is FANTASTIC. Again your plot and characters were depicted beyond what I expected. It did move a little fast in some parts but hey if the whole story was slow it would drag on FOREVER!!! The end left me satisfied yet craving more, but alas all good things MUST come to an end.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much, Erin! I appreciate the feedback, especially on this one. I feel like I left some people unhappy with it because my heart was completely in it. I liked some chapsters a lot, while others I could just take or leave. By the end, I felt like I was just trying to "end it" and that made me dislike the work even more.

I'm still thinking about an epilogue just to try and bring more closure to those readers, but so far I haven't thought of anything. But it's great to know that even if I don't make one, some of my readers are fine with it. :-) Thanks again!



Reviewer: Tina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 8:45 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

Whoa.  It's finally over.  Congrats on finishing the fic you hate!! It has been really great.  The suicide section...whoa that was intense!! IT's been great Kiki. You have woven a magnificent tale.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tina. ^^ Yep, another one bites the dust. I'm just glad you didn't think it was too awful, lol.



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:00 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

*sniff* i cant stop crying! All i saw was blood blood blood *whimpers* I thought they died and.. and it was jus too much *cries* ah, was i too dramatic there? lolz, seriously girl... i loved this chappy.. i even almost forgot about it XD I can so hug kikyo now! and every1 else--not inu tho, i might rape him... lolz

ah ah, now dis is kinda for your reply in S.M.C... now... I MISS YOU MORE!! xd lolz *huggles* The last few days i was sick... really sick-- so sick i couldnt leave my bed at all.. ah, now 2day am still in da sick zone but when i saw that u updated S.M.C i was like @__@ no fucking way!!! Then afta reading n reviewing i was too sick to move on to this one, but i got on later n it made me cry!! But i love it... =)

I forgot about that one-shot u said... O.o lolz, well take your time with it, and again... take care! =)



Reviewer: Boop   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 8:28 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

(the "We Did it" music from 'Dora the Explorer') You did it, You did it, you did it, Hooray!!! yeah, they kick that asshole back in the past, yes you did, you did it, you did it, YAY!! LOL, ok i'm done now. I will admit though. i was becoming a bit worried when kagome died again,again,again,again, but i knew my InuGrrrl had something right up her sleeves. GREAT ENDING!!!! i still feel sort of sorry for Tsubaki though because of what happened to her daughter, but it did kind of serve her right for trusting Naraku in the first place. Well, that's another uber awesome story done and it was great (clapping for twenty minutes ^_^) i'm still in for the other stories and keep updating!!!
-love ya,
Boop

Author's Response: Thank you, Boop! I'm happy my core readers aren't ragging on me for not having an epilogue. I honestly wanted to give y'all one, but for the life of me, I just can't. I can't think of a thing to say, lol. But I'm happy it's over and y'all don't hate me -haha.



Reviewer: Mara   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 3:36 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

YAY IT'S FINALLY DONE......BUT SO SAD THAT IT'S THE LAST CHAPTER THOUGH *SNIFFLES*...............LOVED IT....BUT YOU ARE TRULY EVIL HAD ME TEARING UP THINKING THAT 'GOME WAS GONNA DIE..............BUT NEVER THE LESS EXCELLENT JOB TOOK YOU SOME TIME GOD JNOWS IT TOOK YOU SOMETIME.....BUT YOU STUCK BY AND FINISHED IT.....YOU SHOULD FEEL PROUD OF YOURSELF...........JA

Author's Response: Thanks, Mara! I'm happy that you were satisfied with the ending. It means a lot to me. ^_^



Reviewer: keiko-chan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 8:22 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

*sniffles* aaaaahhhhhhh.


i. freaking. love. you.


.. that is all I have to say


Author's Response: Keiko!!!! How's the trip going?! Girl, we miss ya to death! <3333 Thanks for reading (and liking) it. ^^



Reviewer: Jen & Ruri   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 7:23 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

Not bad. Happy endings for all!!! I would've accepted the Kagome and Inuyasha die ending, too. But all in all not bad (and really, who wants to hear the grief you would have gotten if it would have ended tragically?)

Author's Response: Believe me, I was ready to let them die <.< but you're right. The grief so would not have been worth it. >.<



Reviewer: Annie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 12:52 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

I love the ending. it was just... wow... and yes i know you dont want to do an epilogue, but well could you please? pretty please? just a little tiny one? please please please? either way i loved this story, ok i love all your stories... but still loved it! and again please do an epilogue....

Author's Response: Arigatou, Annie!! I'm happy you liked it and I really am considering a short epilogue if I can find something to say, lol. I know the ending was super simple, but I wanted it to be. They battled so hard, I just felt like the end should come in like a whisper. But who knows, I may pen a tiny epi just to give everyone a bit more closure. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: c-note   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 12:01 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

*cracks knuckles* you did it! did i cry, yeah, but you could have guessed that. lord, did you have the romeo and juliet moment down and then BAM! i can bring inuyasha back (just to torment him, but not kagome and let's start the hell all over again with just the opposite effects...and i really thought that's what you were gonna do! i did like it. it was a long ride, ups downs and sideways, had great twists and great lines, and ended with an air of contentment, which i'm sure is what you felt when the last lines were typed!

Author's Response: C-note!!!! hell yeah, girl. I remember aa few chaps ago when you told me "I know this one gives you fits." Boy, were you ever right! This was one of the >.> hardest stories to complete. Seriously. But it's over and we can break out the liquor!

Aww, but you cried! I didn't think anyone would >.> I know I didn't! But as long as you liked it I'm happy! And you're right! When I finished the last line, the oddest feeling came over me. Not horrid like when I finished EOS, but just like, "Wow. I really ended it." It was... nice.



Reviewer: wudelfin   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 11:28 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: For the One I Love ~Part 3.

wow

Author's Response: Thanks! ^^



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