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Reviewer: (Fanworks) Shea Sistrunk   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Update!Update!Update!Update! Update! Update! Update! I can't wait. Spare the mystery, please.



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

I just love this chapter.Ya for Inuyasha and Kagome it's about time. Now let work on Rin and Fluffy.For a person with writers block your too good. Hate to see you when you get unblocked (lol) keep up the great work. And just remember this (BEN AND JERRY'S help with about anything)



Reviewer: (Fanworks) inuyashaloverr   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

OOOHH, and the plot thickens. I also was wondering when InuYasha and Kagome would finally get it on, YUM! Rin and Sessh...thats it, keep me on the edge of my seat...now I need to re-fill my M&M bowl, dammit. :D



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Bridezilla   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

You keep saying you have block and that this chapter sucks but I'm not seeing it. (I'm not even seeing a lot of non-beta having slip ups- and lord knows I can't ever get myself out of English teacher mode). This was a great chapter. Hooray for Kagome and Inuyasha finally mating. (Next chapter =lemon?) Of course the shit is gonna hit the fan next chap with Sess and Kagura and Rin and Naraku all at the same place (and you do conflict so well). Keep working on the "block" with lots of chocolate (even if you're getting laid you still need chocolate) :-) Can't wait to read the next chapter!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Amanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

I can't tell you have any kinda block. Its wonderful as always. Keep up the amazing work



Reviewer: (Fanworks) SoraChiKaminari   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

OMG!! I LOOOOOOOOOVE IT! Great chapters, Inugrrl! And thanks for giving me this site so I could continue reading! I have decided to join because of you!! *huggles* Great job I love it sooooooooooooo much, and to tell you, it doesn't seem to me you have a writer's block! It's just as wonderful as it's ever been! Keep up the great work!! L8RZ! (^o^)/~



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

I am loving every bit of it. Sess and Rin is so sad and I was rooting hoping that they were going to get back together, but to no avail. Then I flipped back a couple chapters when Sess broke up with Rin and remembered all of the awful things that were said and I'm better now. Anyways, I lvoe how you're setting up Kikyo in the plot. I can't wait to hear her motives of coming to the modern era. Plus, I can't wait to see ho Sess is going to save the world and the love of his life. Such drama. Such suspense. You go girl. ^_^! 



Reviewer: (Fanworks) frostyshake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Aww that sucks the dreaded writer's block..........does this mean I won't get to read about Inuyasha and Kagome's "marking" I'm such a hentai lover ;) anyway your stories are worth the wait so take your time.



Reviewer: (Fanworks) bobbie joe   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

WHAT'S UP KIKI ?! it's been so long since i've reviewed i just want to say you're doing a great job on all of ur stories keep up the good work peace out! XD luv yvonda robles



Reviewer: (Fanworks) cwillia   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

I stayed up all night reading this story because it was just to good to go to sleep on.I'm so sorry to hear about your writer's block. I hope you become inspired soon because I'm ABSOLUTELY loving this story. It actually had my heart pounding cause I'm such a sucker for romance and a entertaining plot. I actually shed a tear at the scene when Kagome finds Inuyasha with that slut Kanna. You had me wanting to almost call up my ex to relieve some of the sexual tension for the characters. (hahaaha)



Reviewer: (Fanworks) sweetkijo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Mmmmm....I am hooked baby girl. I told you I was gonna read it and here I am. Wow, now when is the lemmon gonna get here??? Sooooooooooo friggin good. I love Sesshy..lov em lov em lov em lov em.....I could just eat'm up. slurp!! Anywayz...the sory rawks and I wantz more...and more and more...damn is there an echo? Hehehehe! Love ya, Neddi



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Angel_4_life   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

*whistles* Danggggggggggggg. That was one hot lemon Kiki!!! You describe everything so perfectly that I can actually see it in my mind! *blushes* And what a picture it is! It's good to see you back after being away for awhile. I like your updating system; you update really often and you don't just give one fic your attention and neglect the other ones. Good job! Can I say again how glad I am that you updated? Lol, I was spending quite a bit of time in the database since your last update. If I hurry, I can be the first reviewer! Update this story soon and Happy Writing! -Christina



Reviewer: (Fanworks) christal Thomas   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Awesome Lemon, KiKi!!! You are sooo worth the wait! Take care of you!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) jktcus   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

I really love this chapter I can not wait in still you up date again.



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Chibi   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

nee-chan...wow...lmao. that was so beautiful! SO well done. well worth the wait and time it took to write!! I got all tingly and waffy inside. LOL such a good lemon; sweet, romantic, swoon-worthy, and *hawt*. lol. all the makings of a great lem! :D *huggles*



Reviewer: bridezilla1015 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

What a great update! I don't know how Sess is going to be with Kagura when he is aching so bad for Rin. It will definitely be interesting. Now I'm almost certain that Kikyou is up to no good-especially if she's "in town" from the past. What exactly is she up to? Ooohhh the shit's gonna hit the fan soon and I can't wait to read it! Awesome, awesome, awesome update. 



Reviewer: (Fanworks) sweetkijo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

***exhales***so much sexual tension finally released. As always, it was finaminal...it that is how it is spelled. I am glad to see you're back. You were sorely missed. You are my inspiration girly. Love ya as always, ttyl...Neddi



Reviewer: icygirl (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

thanks for the quick chapter! i love the plot and don't give up you are a very good good writer! have fun and enjoy your day! 



Reviewer: ADarkNightsObsession (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

OMG...wahhhhh....Make them love eachother again?IT HURTS!!!!!!!!!!!!Lol pages are tasty but sticky and hard to chew. 



Reviewer: Nightly Dreamer (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Damn. Emotional chapter. So much drama. I LOVE IT! THIS FANFIC IS AMAZING! It's written wonderfully! Please update as soon as you can! 



Reviewer: (Fanworks) inuyashaloverr   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Well damn...what can I say that noone has yet. I will admit I had to read this chapter a...few...times :P ...and Im still shuddering over it all. Lol. But damn that was good. I always liked the Rin/Sess pairings and when you added Inu and Kags to the mix in this one, it made it all the more better. To me anyways. And with you dedicating a whole chapter to their union...WHOOO HOOO...Damn, but I need some more chocolate.... :P



Reviewer: AngelsRebellion (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

::sniffs, eyes leaking, damn you:: A horny Hanyou, a dissed Houshi, a whipped Bank, and a broken hearted Sesshy. My God that chapter was excellent. XD Good girl Rin! But you can't blame a youkai for trying can you? And Kinky-ho....well...I wont sully this review with all the nasty things I have to say about her. Something weird going on....It's either MediaMiner or my AIM, because I'm not getting my update e-mails until a few days after an update...hmm. BUT enough of my whining. Love the fic as always, love the chapter as always. And as always, update soon!!! 



Reviewer: (Fanworks) kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

*opens window* Phew! I'm hot! That last chapter wuz phenomenal. I am SO SO SO sorry for not review, guess I wuz to caught up with FMA2 and Edge of 17. But I have been reading this fic from begining and I love it so much, more than love actually. That lemon wuz awesome. And I see you won first place. That wuz no suprise to me with your wonderful style of writing. And you putting Rin as a miko shocked me. I like Sesshomaru and Rin romance thing, and the shikon jewel with Naraku. These fic truely is a balst. The way how Inu and kag act in public, especially in the Diner when they met kikyo. I'm still confuse about the kikyo thing. So, she's from the feudal era? I better stop hurt my head, my questions will be answered in the next chapter. Well I already told you I love this fic and the lemon. And how inu wuz in the red silk pants with out a shirt? *drools* Just delicious! seriously, You make me drool over the image alone, kami! *sigh*..I'm gonna stop and go take a cold shower. DAng, and I jus finish bathing earlier.*sigh*lol Great chapter kiki. I loved it. Ja ne!



Reviewer: bobbiejoe (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

i visted your xanga and read about your huge writter's block and i just wanted to say that your such a good writter and you'll most definitely beat it before you know it!!!!!!! Who knows;maybe the next chappie will come to you in a dream and you'll have us readers on the edge of our seats again with our faces glued to the computer screen^-^. I really can't wait for your next chappie , i've also started reading your other fanfics and i love them all YOU ARE A GOOD WRITTER SO DON'T GIVE UP!!!!!! yvonda robles ja ne! p.s i listened to "pretty brown eyes" by mint condition and now i'm hooked 0_0 



Reviewer: (Fanworks) Bridezilla1015   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 1:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men

Good Lawd that was hawt! Whoo! (Makes me wish my first time was that hot-lol!) If we had to wait at least we got a happy chapter (and happy it made most of us!) Can't wait to read the next updated story, wathever that may be. Keep up the great updates (and you know that the group will amuse itself even when you're away and dealing with real life shitiness).



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