Date: July 07, 2011 1:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OMG!!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!! That was ........ suspensful! Rin is being so strong and Sess.... OMFG!! I love your fanfiction!!! But it's sooooooooooooo sad at the moment!! Kikyo from another era... hmmm... that's pretty cool. And the Kagura thing, wow. You have to make Rin Understand!!! This is such a great fanfiction! Your writing is amazing!! Please keep writing! Was Sess about to cry!!?!?!?!? WAH! That hole thing almost made me cry!! I'm pathetic... I know. L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
Date: July 07, 2011 1:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I totally love this fanfic!!! Drama...love...heartache.. pls pls pls cont asap!!! thank you so much for such a good fanfic! i love sess/rin pairings..i wonder when will they realise the truth.hmm... i hope they do soon!! it's just so sad to see them like that. = )
Date: July 07, 2011 1:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OI~!!! I can't wait for the next update! This fanfiction is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome, I lurv it alot! Poor Rin and Sessy. They're both sooo confuzzled. lol. Kagura's fucking annoying, it's giving me a headache! Even though Naraku's the 'bad guy', he's still awesome, I can't help but lurv the dumb ass. hehe, great fanfiction, I hope you continue soon! L8RZ! (^o^)/~
Date: July 07, 2011 1:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Ah most excellent, most excellent indeed. Poor Rin, just goes from extreme to another, damn, and the plot thickens! OH, Happy belated Birthday to you. Hope it was a good one. Update when you can.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I like how you end this chapter I hope you write some on this story.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I know you updated, but I didn't know I missed SEVEN chapters. I was reading the latest installment and didn't get any of it. So, I read the chapter that I remember reading and found out a missed a WHOLE lot. I just finished reading this chapter and was stunned. Damn, she almost killed him by accident then he tried to kill her on purpose and her jumping in Naraku's car and saying all this great stuff about him is irony for your ass.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
hey Kiki long time no see. I'm just getting around to reading your fics because of school, sorry! I don't want you to feel like i'm not a fan of your work honorable Kiki-sama ^..^ . Well anyway your chap turned out quite nicely. Inuyasha must stop Sesshy from mating Kagura!!!!!!! Sesshy could always tell kagura the truth to end this whole problem. Ok i'll review after i read the next chap. SEE YA
Date: July 07, 2011 1:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK JUST HAPPENED!?!?!?!? they were soooooooooooo close to understanding the situation, sooooooooo fucking close.. why, why, o angels above? WHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYY?????? sesshy has GOT TO UNDERSTAND that rin didnt know WHAT THE HELL SHE WAS DOING. o yeah, one more thing..... DAMN YOU NARAKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!! new chappy, NOW!!!!! ..........please? -love ya, Boop
Date: July 07, 2011 1:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Love how it is going Please please update soon i l really want to know what happens next
Date: July 07, 2011 1:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
well, i just think you are the SH*T! having rin almost, accidentally purifying sess is f'ing awesome. i never saw that coming. then him getting all youkai'd out over it and her escaping with naraku... i love it. what a blow to his ego, huh. "me, the tai-youkai?! i've slaughtered bitches for less" ahhh. damn, she was right to run first, explain later. oh yeah, i think when inu and bank f*ck around with eachother, it just makes my rainy days sunny. funniest sh*t ever! just like in edge of 17.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Holy shit Sess is pissed off. She tried to purify his ass, that's just funny.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
What are Kikyou, Midoriko and Naraku up to? Are they all in cahoots? It's kinda' funny that Rin gave Sess a shiner and then almost purified him. Woops. But that's what you get when you screw with the woman you love (who loves you back). Inuyasha and Bankotsu crack me up. They were definitely the comic relief in this chapter. I can't wait to see what the next chapter reveals! (You've updated this, Edge of Seventeen, and Fogive Me Anything 2 lately so now we need an SMC update!- more soap operas!!! One more week until Spring Break then I can relax and watch all the soaps I want- for a week so in the meantime could we PLEASE get an SMC update? Okay I'll stop asking now). Awesome update! You're keeping me on the edge of my seat!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Kyaaa! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw "Pretty Brown Eyes" updated! *skips around* Damn... I wonder what Midoriko and Kikyo are doing in this story? LOL. Aw... Poor Sess... he almost got purified (XD can't help but find that funny) and he cried... aww... in his demon state no less! And Rin! Whoa! I never expected that! You're a damn great writer! ^_^ Gya! What the fudge is Naruku doing there?! O_O;;; That's just creepy. I really hope everything works out already T_T. Poor Sess and Rin... Update whenever you can! *skips off and reads more of your stories that I just can't get enough of*
Date: July 07, 2011 1:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
omg rin almost purifying sesshy i knew you come up with something great. please update soon ,i just know naraku is going to use rin in inhumane ways!!!!!!! luv ya yvonda robles
Date: July 07, 2011 1:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
absolutely amazing! the following events! good thinking! i always enjoy reading your story and i am glad you continue! i can't wait to read the next chapters because i feel there is going a lot of surprises! continue on this way! hae a good day! bye and see you soon i hope!taka care!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
oh i forgot to ask you in your story kikyo and midoriko are mikos rin too and what about kagome?thanks if you could answer me.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
omfg, that did not just happen...as of now i hate this story -_-
Date: July 07, 2011 1:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OMG!!!! O-O SESSHIE WAS SO CLOSE! SO FUCKING CLOSE!!! I FRIGGIN SCREAMED!!! Me: WHAT?! AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! And then when Sesshomaru lost his control! GOSH! That was great! He friggin chased her! My heart was POUNDING!! O__O AND THEN HER SAVIOR TURNS OUT TO BE NARAKU?! NO WAY!!! I was thinking Kikyo and then I tried to calm down and think logically. AND YEAH OMG THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD!!!! DAMN!!!! U R SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! MY FAVORITE CHAPTER THUS FAR!!! Damn, I love this story!!! IT'S MY FAVORITE!!!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
"...You can call me Naraku." Ah, shite.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
you shouldn't have gotten in that car rin bad idea very bad idea.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
kikyo = cunning and evil!!!!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Well, this was a steller chapter! Your story is approaching a climax with such force and your characters are all so alive! Keep it up!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
as usual, i am hoping for the best (rin/sess), but am still enjoying the f*ck outta the ride even if it is angsty as hell. you know i luv this sh*t. damn, i sure do curse alot after midnight! what the hell is rin gonna do now that she's actually training as a miko under kikyou? can't wait at ALL 'till next chappie. *huggs from your #1 fan and humble beta*
Date: July 07, 2011 1:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
wow very good how you put things together! rin is the central key but not everybody seems to notice it! continue the good job and thanks again bye!
Date: July 07, 2011 1:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Ohmygawd! I knew that bitch Kikyou was involved in this in a bad way. She's up to no good Sessh get Rin away from her! At least after lunch Yash will know that Rin didn't mean to almost purify Sessh so he can tell his brother. Of course, that doesn't help Sess a lot since he has to contend with Kagura, Naraku, the jewel and trying to get Rin not to hate him. I love this fic! The angst is an awesome break from real life angst (NCAA brackets= angst). Great update! Keep 'em coming.