Date: July 07, 2011 1:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OMG what a great chapter keep up the good work luv yvonda robels
Date: July 07, 2011 1:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I love this Story more soon KK lunerflower@)~
Date: July 07, 2011 1:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
beautiful piece of work. though sess-chan can't really get mad at rin. i understand seeing how he is a very powerful inu-youkai, but it's not like rin knew that she was a miko, because if she did, i'm sure she wouldn't have tried to purify him.
Date: July 07, 2011 1:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
hey inugrrrl i at school and i was wondering if you could update today cuz i can't wait ttfn yr
Date: April 23, 2011 4:41 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Heya,
Gutted that this is on hiatus, because - like your other fics - it's wonderful, and features my favourite IY ships. Regardless, thank you for writing your fics, I enjoy reading them a lot. And when I have more time I will endeavour to read and review others! :D
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much. <3
I'm actually pondering trying to do one last chapter, condensing the ending (It was only missing 1-2 anyway). I just need to see if I can get my head back into it again. (Stranger things have happened!). But either way, I appreciate the kind comments and thank you for reading!
Date: November 12, 2010 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
HOW DARE YOU put this stowy on hold!?!? (* o) is so mad you only had two chaps left *puts up two fat fingas* *._. I want my stowy back. * :( so waves her dusty banner. PLEASE COME BACK TO THIS BABY KAU I'LL GIVE YOU SPECIAL LATTES EVERY DAY FROM NOW ON>
Date: July 27, 2010 8:52 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I Love this story. I am total sucker for Rin/Sess pairing and I am very curious how they will untangle themselves out of the mess. I hope you can update soon, thanks for sharing :)
Date: June 11, 2010 9:00 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Umm don't leave us with the cliffhanger like this. It's getting interesting. Why can't Sess just tell Rin the truth rather than keeping her in the dark and make everything worse. Not so wise Sess...
Date: January 27, 2010 7:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
LOL. Bobbie Jo asked the question I was gonna ask. Not to rush or anything. It's just my favorite story of yours and my favorite pairing. ^_^ Although, in the time that its taking for the story to be complete I've gotten hooked on Kagome/Sess, Inu/Sess, Kouga/Sess, and Inu/Kouga. But Rin's still my favorite character. ^_^ But take your time to do it justice. It'll be much appreciated.
-Shea
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for hanging in there! I feel bad that I have yet to finish this. I honestly didn't think many people cared about this story, but I'm starting to see otherwise! I like Inu/Sess, too, and have dabbled in it, but normally, I'm Inu/Kags and I think I do my best stuff for them. However, you certainly gave me a boost of confidence for this story and I will make every effort to finish it soon.
[Report This]Date: January 24, 2010 7:00 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
When are you going to update?? :/
Author's Response: Wow, Bobbie, it's been ages! Hope all is well. :)
Honestly, I don't know when I'll be updating this one. I've had block on it forever, but if it ever comes to me, I'll definitely finish it. (There's only about 2 chaps left)
Date: January 01, 2010 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Out of all your fics, this is my fav. So I was wondering if you were going to update anytime soon. Also, I was wondering what you would advise to someone trying to improve their writing style. Plz and Thanx and Happy New Year
Author's Response: Hi there! Sorry this response is so late. I didn't realize anyone left a comment (since I haven't updated in so long). I don't know when, or if, I'm going to update this. I'd like to, but it really hasn't come to me yet. I guess you can call it block from hell. But if it ever does, I'll finish this one (it's VERY close to the end).
As for writing, I don't really advise because I don't consider myself an authority. But if I had to give any kind of direction, I would say, write what YOU see for your characters. There are no such thing as rules; don't let anyone define you or what you're trying to say with your story. Follow your own formula and don't worry so much about grammar. Concentrate on telling a great story and conveying your thoughts in your own unique way. Anyone can be a textbook writer; it takes a vision to become a great storyteller. :)
Happy New Year!
Date: August 06, 2009 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Stomps foot when are you going to update this. DOUBLE HOCKEY STICK (* -) I want this done by my 31sts birthday -.-* you've been warned.
Author's Response: <.< Quiet you!
Date: July 26, 2009 2:32 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
whyyyyyyyyyy??? why havent you updated this story in nearly 2 years???? its a beyond awesome story!! and i cant wait to see the ending of it!!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! :D
I know I'm awful, especially when the fiction is a chap or two away from completion. *sighs* I do that a lot and I feel terrible for it. I used to be really good and completing fictions and I'm trying to fight my way back to that state, so don't count me out yet. ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 15, 2008 10:21 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison
YAY, I GOT IN! XD Lolz.
Omg, where to even begin? I've been reading this fic all day.
First of all, I LOVE the dynamics you set up between the different couples. Once again, you've made Sango/Mir hot for me, when they usually don't interest me at all. I also really am enjoying the fact that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru get along in this. Well, not get along, but you know, are able to co-exist without wanting to seriously kill each other.
And the turmoil between Inu and Kags totally had me calling them both morons and shaking my head. Glad Ayame had enough sense to force them to face each other. And that lemon in chap 25 was INSANE. Like, it was fluffy, but it wasn't. (Yeah, I'm making a whole lot of sense right now)
The thing that's really feeding me is this relationship between Sess and Rin. asdlfjsddskj. Mad incoherent status, lul. I'm reading it like O.O when is he gonna break and tell her everything? So then he goes to, and SHE ACCIDENTALLY ALMOST PURIFIES HIM.
That made me XD
Oh, and dry humping FTW. In one of the earlier chapters, after Sess and Rin's date, when they were back at her place, I was like OH NO HE DID NOT JUST DRY HUMP HER.
I'm adoring this fic. I'm trying to finish it tonight, but I have class tomorrow, so I might have to come back to it. But as of right now, ON TO CHAPTER 27.
Don't knock your fics. Ever. You could have written this shit in gibberish and I would have still loved it, if only for the intensity of the relationships.
Author's Response: OMGAWD! I laughed so fucking hard.
"Mad incoherent status, lul."
*ROFL!!!*
"Oh, and dry humping FTW. In one of the earlier chapters, after Sess and Rin's date, when they were back at her place, I was like OH NO HE DID NOT JUST DRY HUMP HER."
*Diez*
Your review is better than the fic!! I'm cracking up over here. xD
Okay, okay, seriously (hahahaha), thanks for the hilarious review. One of the best ones EVER 'cause I'm still laughing. :P
Every relationship I write is fucking dysfunctional. >.> Mad misunderstandings, everybody's fighting, nobody wants to explain what they REALLY meant... I take them bitchez through the ringer! But it makes the story interesting. I dislike fluff (can you tell?) I can only stomach that in small doses. But angst and strife? Three course meal right there.
I'm going to finish this (hopefully) soon. It's SUCH an old story. So old, that you can see the changes in the way I write as it progresses. (Damn -that's crazy.) I wanted to finish this like a year ago, but then I'd start new fics, get bored, be tarded... xD But eventually those last chaps will go up and I can kiss this one goodnight.
Thanks for putting up with it for an ENTIRE DAY!! (You gotz patience, girl.)
[Report This]Date: July 20, 2008 4:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Though I really dislike how the Friendship between Kagome and Rin is going I really am looking forward to how it will end. On another note though I really want to get this off my chest. I believe if Inuyasha really loved kagome he would have never and I mean never ask her to betray a friend no matter how bad the situation was. I still believe there is another way to make things right. Nevertheless, I am sorry to be a bother but could you please, please update soon Inugrrl.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) I've been working on this update forever and I'm sorry it's taking so long. Writing has been like pulling teeth for me lately. As for the story, I can understand your point of view. I imagine some would think that way. But in the end, your husband or wife should come before a friend (in my opinion). "Bros before hos" is immature to me. If this situation were real, and something as powerful as the Shikon jewel was about to be grabbed by someone like Naraku, I think lying, cheating, and/or stealing is pretty acceptable. :P Again, thanks for leaving your mark!
Date: June 20, 2008 5:40 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
*raises eyebrow* You've left me here, too... <3
Author's Response: All for you, love. Almost done, too! <3
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
SHIT! THIS IS NOT GOOD!
I am soooo looking forward to your next chappie Sweetie. But I can wait until the New Year. Don't overexert yoursel, YA HEAR?
Luv Ya.
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
The intrigue and suspense that you're putting me through is really starting to get to me, Kiki. Please let there be a HAPPY ending to this thing.
By the way, I LOVE this freakin' story! (smirk)
[Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 2:31 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
That was one HOT LEMON! I'm hoping that Rin finds out about the counterfeit & can eventually get the real jewel back before something happens to Sess.
Although I still think that Kagome should help out her friend despite what Inuyasha says.
[Report This]Date: December 20, 2007 8:24 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
YAHOO!
Rin's wish just might come true after all without drastic aftereffects!
Date: December 20, 2007 4:37 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Damn... I so didn't see this update coming! And notice I'm just now getting around to reading it...
I liked this chappie! Shit's gonna go down and it's all kinds of fucked up and I like it! Can't wait to read the next two.
[Report This]Date: December 20, 2007 1:17 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
AW...FUCK!!! NOOOO!!! This SHOULD NOT BE HAPPENNING!!!
[Report This]Date: December 20, 2007 11:11 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
This getting more and more complicated as time goes by.
I do hope that everything works out towards the end, though. This is really great stuff!
[Report This]Date: December 19, 2007 8:05 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison
I'm really starting to feel sorry for Sess & Rin. This shouldn't be happening to them.
[Report This]Date: December 19, 2007 7:50 PM
Chapter number: 25
Title: Tonight is Forever
ONE OF THE BEST INU/KAG LEMONS THAT I'VE EVER READ!!!
FANTASTIC!