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Reviewer: Boop   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 6:09 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul

they have TRULY fucked up rin's head....damn.

-love ya,

Boop



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 6:08 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: Fortune is Ever Still

So, is Kikyou friend...or foe? Gotta start wondering.

And something tells me that THIS dinner's going to be FAR from normal.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 1:47 PM
Chapter number: 23
Title: A Fear is Born

And the cobra rears it's ugly head. Let's just hope Rin uses her newfound powers for good.

Just one thing, though. I'm surprised that Kagome isn't a Miko in this story, too. She should be. Rin's gonna need all the help she can get.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 1:22 PM
Chapter number: 22
Title: Terrible Instinct

Outta the frying pan & into the fire. She shoulda taken her chances with Sess.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 1:11 PM
Chapter number: 21
Title: You Take All of Me

First the Wind Witch, now the Miko Bitch. This is getting really good.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 12:55 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Asphyxiation

The only thing that I can say is just how sorry I feel for Rin. she really does NOT deserve that kinda shit.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 12:31 PM
Chapter number: 19
Title: Would?

Oh, what a tangled web we weave when we practice to deceive. Serves Sesshomaru right. How's he gonna get outta THIS bullshit?



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 12:19 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Down Poison

Sacrifices BE DAMNED! If Inuyasha could stick to Kagome, he should've been able to tell Rin. Talk about foolish pride!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 8:11 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Into the Void

Why do I get the feeling that Sesshomaru just took the word 'jerk' to a WHOLE new level?



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 7:59 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: My Favorite Disease

FINALLY! It's about time these two idiots woke up!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 7:39 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Your Beginning is Our End

From bad to worse! I LOVE IT!

You've got one hell of an imagination, Sweetie. I'm just sorry that I didn't start reading this earlier.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 7:13 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Temptations

HOLY SHIT!!!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2007 7:05 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Housewarming From Hell II

The Generic Jerk Gene strikes again". How STUPID can Inuyasha GET? And Kanna deserves to get the boot, as well as the others!

I love where you're taking this, Kiki!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 8:16 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Housewarming From Hell I

Yes! The air DEFINATELY has to be cleared. Somone really needs to give these two egotistical fools a good slapping down!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 8:04 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Let's get it Started

Ooooh! Da shit is gonna start flyin', now.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 7:56 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: No Leaf Clover

Why do I think that jealousy's gonna rear it's ugly head?



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 7:43 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Breakdown

Is 'jerk' a genetic heritage for these two idiotic brothers? At least Sess got his come-uppance, for that I'm glad. And it's about time Inu got taken down a peg.

Let's just hope the girls will make it out okay.

 

Fun stuff, Sweetie!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 7:18 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Giving In

Ooooou! Da boys are in for an eyful, tonight!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 6:03 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Let the Games Begin

Sess is being a jerk again. I hope he gets his just rewards. Rin oughta kick his butt, but good.

And Kagura The Bitch Strikes again!

Great story, Night Owl!.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 5:18 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Brothers Taisho

Very fast move from Inuyasha. Nice.

Unfortunately, Kagura The Bitch has OTHER ideas.

Nicely done, Sweetie.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 5:03 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Dangling the Bait

Oh, boy, poor inu.

Great lemon.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 4:54 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: A Day of Surprises

Now we're gettin' somewhere. About time Kaggie fell for Inu.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 4:38 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: First Impressions Are Killers

Which one's telling the truth? Rin or Kags?

I'm betting on the both of them. 100% all the way, each in their own right.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2007 4:29 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Welcome to Westwood

Why is Sess being such a 1st class jerk?



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2007 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul

Oh man! Poor Shiori! that was a crazy scene! Had me cringing the whole time...and damn...Rin's pissing me off! lol...can't wait to read more!



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