Date: December 17, 2007 9:25 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Poor Shiori...:( poor, poor, Shiori. That filthy monster. Damn him.
Rin and Kagome having a bitch fight. Tsk, tsk. Rin was the bigger bitch, but Kagome was at fault too. You can't say, "I won't choose you over my mate." and expect smiles and butterflies.
Sesshy is on his way to Naraku's, and so is Rin...I sense a little meeting. :)
Happy Writing!
[Report This]Date: December 16, 2007 9:22 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
yay! thank you for updating! can't wait for the other two chapters! ^^
but i must say, you are killing me with aniticipation.
i love rin, but gosh darn it!
[Report This]Date: December 16, 2007 1:55 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
*whistle* You can kick me a thousand times and i wouldnt feel it with so much shock! I cried for Shiori... Getting rape is so.... disguesting *shivers* It's funny how your writing can affect me so much... sometimes it's like you're reading my life, lol >.<
Kagome can be out of place... i agree, but damn rin was waay out of place; even if she was mad or not. She blved kikyou so easily and not those she knew for so long? Bullshit! But she's jus a troubled, and she keep falling in the wrong places... i mean NARAKU?!?! Now everyone will end up in that warehouse... and bank is gonna kill that fucker who raped Shiori... he disguest me! I seriously cant wait for this to end.... so much shit is going on and all because every1 isnt open... *sigh*
Update when u can!! Jja! =)
Date: December 16, 2007 12:46 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Yaaaaaaay! I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks, Bobbie Joe!
Date: December 16, 2007 12:40 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Communication would have been nice between the two starring parties, Rin and Sesshomaru. Everyone has their own "burden" and feel like theirs is the most important, but if they would have just talked about it, this whole mess could have been avoided. Rin is extremely pigheaded to the point of rage. I just want to hit her, she thinks that she is so strong but I have never read about a more "woe is me" character. Okay, maybe that's not true, but she is a pain in the ass. "He never loved me," boo hoo hoo. That is no reason to be a bitch to all of your friends. She never let Sesshomaru explain before she purified him, and she wouldn't let him tell her his side this time either. Why won't she let him talk so that she can see the whole picture instead her one little window? She's quite frustrating, and now she is going to make it even easier for Naraku to do Narakuish things. A lot is going to happen the next 2 chapters and I am ready for the big battle. As long as my Yasha is okay in the end, I won't complain if Rin has to "sacrifice" herself for the greater good.
Damn that was pretty mean...Ahh well.
And poor Shiori, I really like her and I hope they get to her like now. I've actually thought about a canon story with her and InuYasha getting together, after she gets older of course. I think that it would be cute since Kagome is such a pain, but if Shiori takes about 100 years to mature, he technically can have both if the whole increased lifespan thing doesn't happen for Kagome. Maybe someone will write about it. It would be different...
Well thanks for the great update, and take a break for a while on the major writing so you don't hurt yourself. And thanks for the dedication, I feel so special.
Author's Response: "now she is going to make it even easier for Naraku to do Narakuish things. "
HAHAHAHA! I laughed a long ass time off that one. Yesh, Rin is bullheaded, and that's because she's in love with Sess and she thinks he used her. But, yah, no excuse to be a cow to her friends. Personally, I was glad Kagome slapped her. >.>
Shiori -that was so bad. Had to be done, but I didn't want to get too graphic so stopped at a "good" place. "I hope they get to her like now. " LMAO. Another funny one.
I'm hardcore Inu/Kags, but if I weren't, the Shiori fic would be cute. I can only do stuff like that if Yash never knew Kags existed. I write so much insanity and have the nerve to be squeamish!
So happy you liked the chap >.> even if you don't mind Rin dying. lol.
Date: December 15, 2007 7:15 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
GOOD KAGOME, KICK THE SHIT OUT OF HER! I have no respect for Rin at all, I hope she gets her butt burned for the crap she causes. I know Sess is a fruit cake too...on second thought...
Both their asses should be kicked.
And jesus girl, the rape scene? That gave me shivers.
I hope everthing goes well for Shiori in the end and that she turns out alright.
Well, this chap was full of angsty goodness! I am in awe.
Author's Response: LOLOLOL! Paw Print, you're wild. But >.> I was glad she clipped her, too! Rin's being a real pill. I sowwy for the rape scene. *looks sheepish* I was going for major graphic, but I cut it back by a lot. Now I'm glad I did! Thanks for reading and leaving your mark! <33
Date: December 15, 2007 5:30 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
It was about time you updated.<.< I love the end especially her demon whore comment. Yeah I know I will be the only one but when Rin is pissed she pissed -.- and its not like anyone is trying to explain the truth to her. Hope the next chap comes out soon. o.o This ending was so crazy in a good way.
Author's Response: Gah! You only say that because you worship Rin! :P
Date: December 15, 2007 1:18 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
WOW, its like watching a movie! the suspense, how can rin be so ignorant -__- , and im proud of kagome actually.. rin deserves it,. i wouldve slammed the door in her face too. let her make the mistake and learn , does that sound too harsh? ^^" well. anyway, ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS? how you end all these problems in 2 chapteres? D: , ahah, well. what about sequel? ; ),
update sooon !
Author's Response: Shankies!!! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. I know it's been a long time since I've posted anything to this one. And yeppers, only 2 chaps and then we say goodbye. It seems like lots of problems, but it's really not. It's just chaotic in the way I deliver it. :D I'll try to update soon!
Date: December 15, 2007 12:39 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Thank you darlin, I enjoyed it immensely. I gotta jet right now, but I will hit you with a more thorough review later. But you know I'm pissed at Rin for talking smack about my man!!! And that Katan too for violating Shiori.
Author's Response: I know, lol. Rin isn't a really a scab, she's just all messed up. But in 2 more chaps we can finally lay this fic to rest! In the end, I think everyone will get theirs. 0.~
Date: December 15, 2007 8:44 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
Great chapter, but.....WOW. This was a LOT of angst, girl, even for YOU! Shiori gets raped (and I felt so sorry for her; it was so AWFUL), and Rin and Kagome exchange nearly unforgiveable words. My goodness!
I haven't been following this story as well as I do some of the others, so I don't know it's subleties that well. But, there was nothing "subtle" about this chapter at all. The plot is so complicated....and there are so many misunderstandings. Talk about intense. It's good stuff....but I'm definitely going to have to go back and play catch-up. This was just bad all around. I can't wait to see how you dig everybody out of this Grand Canyon you just pitched them in, lol.
Author's Response: Ms. Goddess! This story is kinda insane. I started it so long ago >.< I oughta be whipped for taking this long to complete it. But like I always say, "I complete everything I start". :D The angst in this was pretty bad, but I have much harder stories I want to pen in the future so this is just a taste -haha. Two chaps left and I'm free!
[Report This]Date: December 15, 2007 5:36 AM
Chapter number: 32
Title: The Darkness of Your Soul
This has got to be one of the most powerful scenes Ive read in some time. Very moving, and very dramtic, and to tell ya the truth, I can hardly wait for the next one.
Very good chap, My onna. Most excellent! Hugzzz... <33
Author's Response: Thanks, Onna. <333 I know the chap was a little rough, but thanks for hanging in there. The end is almost here and then we can lay it on the completed pile! :D
[Report This]Date: October 11, 2007 4:51 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
awe :[ i can't wait til you up date this one ;; its one of my favorites (:
[Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
please update please update please update please update
[Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
please update please update please update please update
[Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
please update please update please update please update
[Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
please update please update please update please update
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Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
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[Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
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[Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
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[Report This]Date: August 17, 2007 4:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, i love this story. heck, i love all your stories! when are you going to update? .. . :(
[Report This]Date: July 31, 2007 6:38 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
.> I love this story. *Goes to her room and dust off her little banners* ^_^ *waves her little banner* UPDATE PLEASE O.O this is the best ^_^
[Report This]Date: March 26, 2007 2:48 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
Geez,can Rin open up her eyes for just a minute and see the big picture. Sheesh, so much uneccessary drama because each won't listen to what the other has to say. Keep up with the bangin job, read ya soon.
[Report This]Date: March 24, 2007 10:54 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
I knew that he was going to choose the jewel, but still...ouch. Poor Rinnie. But she knew that that was going to happen too. Poor girl. And Shiori...oh damn, that sucks. I hope that she gets away. I hope, I hope, I hope...*crosses fingers* DAMN DAMN DAMN! I wonder how you are going to end this...
Happy Writing!
Date: March 16, 2007 10:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
you'll add it for me? that would mean so much cuz it's my #1 song of theirs. I love those kinna songs n i actually listen to the words real good^^ But am writing this review saying a big---ARIGATO!!! *hugs* Adding that song would actually mean alot to meh, n it's so small >.> lol...thanx again kiki..When i saw your response i got so happy n am up to 4 pages of ma other chapter! Now am lazy >.> Am jus hooked on the new naruto episodes n fushigi yuugi^_^
[Report This]Date: March 16, 2007 7:00 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
I knew he would take the jewel! All men are bakas!! *pout* Poor rin. Oh well...the fight is near, ne? I mean all the weapons are coming out and Shiori is in danger. Man, that man is disgusting! *puke* I hope everything works out! oh oh, n have you heard of evanescence called tourniquet? I love that song, um, like if i ask this wee little favour for you to add it somewhere in one of your fic, is that too much? >.> I understand if it is...but that's not really my biggest thing now. Am jus happy u updated, on TWO fics. I've been baq n forth everyday checking to see if you updated cuz i've been bored n too lazy to start on my next chapter. I jus love this fic!! I really wanna know what's gonna happen 'tween rin n sesshy, tho we kno they'll b 2gether--thats like a big "duh!" lol, but what will happen bfre that...Ah man! the anticipation is killing meh! *sigh* Off to the next chappy!~~~~I wonder if a lemon is there!! *sparkle eyes* lol...am off
Author's Response: I love Tourniquet!!! One of the best Evan songs and ever -and YESH I will add it to a fic just for you! 0.~ I'm about to update 3 more fics so get ready!!