[Report This]Date: March 16, 2007 6:38 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
Well, looks like the shit's hittin the proverbial fan, it seems. No matter what Sess does, its gonna look so wrong to Rin and shes not going to give him another chance.
Wonder too, ifin Bank will make it to Shiori in the nick of time. Its not her fault Narakus the way he is: ya can pick your nose, but ya cant pick your relatives, lol.
Great chap My Onna, to an awesome story. Hugzzz....
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Onna ^_^ Yesh, the end is looming and I'm actually going to try and get the last of it out really soon so I can close this one out. I'm sure Lucient will be glad for that!
[Report This]Date: March 16, 2007 5:55 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
Dayum! I can totally hear the dramatic music in the background building up the suspense. (That and the Quintet from West Side Story, too many musicals for me).
I liked this chapter. It had a feel to it that almost became frantic as the chapter got closer and closer to the end. Sessh is gonna be super fucking pissed when he finds out that "jewel" is a fake. Awesome update woman (definitely worth the wait).
Author's Response: Thanks, Jen! I'm really glad you liked it. I haven't updated this in so long I didn't expect to pull this chap off. But thene nd is near -and hell yeah sess is gonna be pissed, lol.
[Report This]Date: March 16, 2007 2:29 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
Gah!
I was actually hoping he'd take it =p Makes things more interesting, ne? I hope no-one gets hurt with this whole Shiori thing >< I love how you write an already mated Inu and Kag =p You seem to make them the ones having all the fights too often XD It's nice to see Sess take some heat for a change.
Author's Response: That's because you must have missed the beginning of this story. Their coming together was no easy road, lol. Sess is definitely taking the heat in this one tho -it's his fic after all, lol.
[Report This]Date: March 16, 2007 1:53 AM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
OMG!! O_O ARGH!!! I've never been so angry at Rin!! >_< And poor Shiori!! T___T
Author's Response: I know @_@ The Shiori part made me cringe too. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: March 15, 2007 11:24 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
When will Rin learn the truth? When will the big battle being? Please up date soon.
Author's Response: The battle is coming *very* soon, this one is definitely coming to an end. ^_^
[Report This]Date: March 15, 2007 9:33 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
gah, those two can't hold a conversation! if they would just talk to each other, talk! it looks like everything is about to hit the fan now. and now shiori is unraveling, secrets are dropping like flies. i have a feeling that the love everyone holds for their signifigant other is really gonna have to help them through this.
Author's Response: I know, they're infuriating, ne? And you're right, faith in their mates and their own abilities will be the key.
[Report This]Date: March 15, 2007 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
I love this chapter I hope you up date soon on it angain
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked it!
[Report This]Date: March 15, 2007 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Hush
Awwww! That was really good. Poor Rin. Poor shiori. Poor Sess. POOR EVERYONE! *cries* I hope every thing will be solved ,but not without blood shed and a daily dose of drama
Author's Response: I know, girl! So much insanity as this one comes to a close. But I'll try to make it worth the read!
[Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 2:08 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
awesome simply awesome
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: January 29, 2007 1:28 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
i loved how intimately you put sesshomaru and rin together! it's so sweet and yet the situation is depressing and i cry out for them! T_T this is my fav fic that you have ever written! [mostly bcz... well... it focuses on rinxsess] but i really love it and there is so much emotion!!
btw, yay! inuyasha shows kagome who's really in charge. lol.
i can't wait for another update!! thank you!!
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 12:12 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
FINALLY
i can read another chapter, it was so sweet, i wonder what will happen next. i mean is huge step rin and sesshoumaru took. it can change the situation fo better or for worse. who knows
[Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
One word...AWESOME...ok, another one...AMAZING!! I luv ya!! lol, you updated so much n school only gave me the opportunity to read 1...i didnt even read the light one with the angels...>< Am leavin the edge of 17 4 last!! =)
[Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 2:58 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Onna!!! A cliffy? Damn..."The silence was deafening." Damn, lol...that's it, do it to me again Onna, lol, you know you like to. And I listened the whole time to your Mamas fave too...so fitting My Onna. Great chap...
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 9:01 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Damn, grrl! I was listening to Out On a Limb as I was reading the lemon and I was chewing on the cord of my headphones the entire time. I think that was some of the best shit you've ever written!!!
Author's Response: Is that song the shizit or what?? It was one of my mom's faves. Teena Marie sings the HELL out of it. I think the only way you can really get the effect of the emotions is if you listen to the song. I'm glad you liked the chap! ^_^
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 8:52 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Wow...Sesshy, I did not see that coming! And Kiki, you WOULD put a cliffy in there wouldn't you? *sighs* I want more, more, more! More of this fic! Come on Rin! You have to say to Sesshy, "I love you too." Say it with me, it's not that hard. 11 letters, four words, one meaning. Say it dammit! Dammachu Rin! *cries*
*cough*...Happy Writing!
Author's Response: Tina!! I know, bad Rin. Will she say concur??? <.< aaah, only I know! *cackles evilly then coughs up a lung* :P
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 8:43 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
HOLY CRAP
Author's Response: 0.~ yah!
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 6:49 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
YAY! You updated!!! *Pumps fist* That was great, even though you said you were having a hard time with this chapter. Poor kagome can't help rin, but i truly doubt she wanted it. Any way, Since rin and sesshomaru didn't use protection is she going to get pregnant??????? That would be a good twist
"UM.......... SESS I'VE GOT A BUN IN THE OVEN"
"WHAT ?"
"IM PREGNANT"
"SHIT"
Well have a good day.
luv yvonda robles
Author's Response: Lord, lol. You got the girl knocked up! I doubt there will be a baby, but ya neva know. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 2:28 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
You updated. I am soooooo happy. Great chapter, please update this story soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm happy you liked it!^^
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 1:12 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Review Take 2. Okay I re-read the last chapter and I'm not so lost now. :)I still stand by my last review. It's just now I get it better. Umm... yeah... The whole Bankotsu Shiori thing; that's gonna get messy- oh wait the whole thing is messy... The last line says it all, "The silence was deafening" Never a good thing to read.
Tsk, tsk, tsk Kiki the Cliffie Queen...what are we going to do with you?
Author's Response: *grins big* Now, Teacher Jen, I did say on the forum that there would be more cliffies <.< I'm keeping my word! ^_^
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 6:23 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
DAYUM!!! Kiki the Cliffie Queen strikes again.... yeah so I'm gonna have to re-read the last chapter (before this one) 'cause I was a bit lost (granted it's 6:30 in the morning so that could have something to do with it...) I'll re-read and re-review this afternoon....(I promise it will be a better review, too).
Author's Response: Jen and her crazy morning reviews, lol. :P
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 5:13 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Yay, you wrote on my story! :P
Wow, there were so many lines I wanted to hold onto, lines I read over and over.
The silence was deafening? Oh jesus, don't tell me she won't tell him, too...
Thankyou so much... you made my day. You often make my day. Everything is always shitty, and then you're there and it's so much brighter. I'm blessed by you...
Author's Response:
My Luc....
The shining star in my sky.
I'm sorry my updates for this take so long. :-( I'll do better.
*hugs and kisses*
You're loved in NYC.
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 1:10 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
A great chapter! It's been a while for this update, ne?
Way to keep an audience wanting more! XD
Author's Response: Thanks, Axel! Glad ya liked it. Took all day to write o.> But at least it's done. Now just 3000 more! :P
[Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 12:26 AM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
GAH I HATE ENDING LIKE THAT!!grr I'm mad now *pout*Will she say she loves him back? will someone kill Kik!? oh please PLEASE say yes!
Author's Response: Girl, Kik's beeeeeen gone! So don't worry about her, and god bless the cliffies that make readers spit! :-)
[Report This]Date: January 17, 2007 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Ohhh..Myyy...Gosh...! Did he? Did he just say that?? Sweet Jeesum..I really liked the chapter. It's about damn time they got jiggy wit it. lol..I love happy endings and I can smell this one coming to an end**pouts** Gosh..and you write scenes between Kags and Inu so hawt. I love a domineering man...not that a I like being dominated...or..anything...ummm..how do I get myself into these type of confessions. **winks**I love you girly! Thanks for the awsome update. Your girly,
Neddi-luv
Author's Response: My Neddi!!!!
Girl, by the time I finished this, it was all I could do to crawl into bed. But guess what fic gets written today??? YOURS!! I'll try to have it finished and posted by tonight! I haven't even asked Court for beta because I don't want to overwhelm her or make y'all wait any longer than ya gotta. But it's coming! xoxox
[Report This]Date: January 17, 2007 10:39 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Out on a Limb
Just five words for you InuGrrrl:
God Bless Fan Appreciation Week!
.........I really dont know how you do it. God bless you girl, god bless you.
Author's Response: *Huggles* Thanks so much! I'm happy that you liked it. I've been so neglectful with this fic, but I'm going to treat it a lot better -promise!