[Report This]Date: December 20, 2006 3:07 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I'm absolutely hooked on this story! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 08, 2006 5:05 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
oh man that was good, but that what an evil cliffy. can't wait till you update!!!! Yvonda Robles
[Report This]Date: November 07, 2006 8:15 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
wow i like the story a lot. i can't wait to read what will happen to sesshoumaru and rin, you left me in suspense
[Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 4:58 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
Must update this story soon. Very soon.
[Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 5:45 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
Woo that was a close one! Another great chapter and of course another cliff hanger. Now let's see if I can do this...
**Jen's Soap Opera Announcer Voice**
How will Sesshomaru get the "jewel" from Rin? What will happen when he finds out it's a fake? What will happen when Rin finds out her jewel has been replaced?
Will Naraku get what's coming to him? Will Shiori confide in Bankotsu about her uncle? Will Kouga get a clue? Will Ayame get some? Will Inuyasha go one night without screwing Kagome's brains out?
Tune in for the next installment of "Pretty Brown Eyes"
(How was that?)
Author's Response: *applauds* BRILLIANT!!!! I laughed my flippin ass OFF! Will Kouga get a clue? HAHAHAHAHA! That was just hilarious! You leave THE best (and only) soap opera reviews!
[Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 11:31 AM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
wowie! this jus keeps getting better n better! I hope rin understands kags decision n all. That naraku. tsk tsk tsk. I wonder what sesshy plan is. Mayb he'll woo her again to get the jewel? I really want them to get baq 2gether! hurry update!^__^Ja
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 11:54 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
FUCK! He marked the bitched!!!nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. This chappy wuz awesome! the ritual wuz cool, i luv it. Rin is such a baka! am off to read the next chappy!^^
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE IT ALREADY!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!! *chokes and gasps* This story is the air I breathe!!!!!!!!!!!! *Dies*
;) Happy Writing!
[Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 1:56 AM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
Ohhh, gettin to the nitty gritty here... lol. I knew something was gonna come bout that he didnt mark her. Cant wait for when Rin finds out exactly what she did do tho. And wonder where Kagura sped off to now? Is gettin good. Thanks for a quick update Onna. :D
[Report This]Date: September 28, 2006 4:43 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
Nooooo!!! You can not stop there. You must update soooooonnnnn!!!
[Report This]Date: September 28, 2006 2:16 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: That Feeling of Coming Home
woot-woot! kouga got his balls handed to him! such a dense wolf. girl you are on a roll today! and will rin purify sesshomaru without question? will they figure out the jewel has no real power?
[Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 9:47 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: O.o *runs from teacher Jen* Tee hee!
[Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 9:05 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
Holy shit! I totally forgot about this story!!!! But now here it is updated. You're really building up to the climax here. Can't wait to read the payoff. Keep it up, girl! They're awesome!!!!!
[Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 4:18 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
...
...
The rubber band just broke.
*
How the HECK are you going to write your way out of this one girl? I am truly at a loss! Update VERY VERY soon!
Happy Writing...
*Is in shock*
[Report This]Date: September 22, 2006 2:54 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
I love this chapter! Especialy the ending, very dramatic
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 5:55 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
Ooooohhh! that was so sad. I was hoping that the person that Sess was placing his incisors in their throat was Rin and not Kagura. Please update this stroy soon.
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 10:15 AM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
Damn but that was good! You really got me on the edge of me seat here Onna! Sessh does need smacked tho, he really does, lol. And at least Inu isnt being an asshat...for now, lmao...Damn, but this is gettin good!
[Report This]Date: September 21, 2006 9:40 AM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Night of Deception
dear god tell me that rin's last minute wish that she didn't know she made cause she's a twit and wouldn't talk to anyone because no one seems to want to look beyond their noses and listen to the others (rant done now) voided out the mating. please...and can we wack sesshie over the head with a newspaper. he listens as well as inuyasha but at least if you tug on his ears he'll pay attention.
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 7:54 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
Rin zap his ass! LOL!
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 11:59 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
It only seems to be getting more and more interesting. You feel for Rin and then you feel sorry for Kagome for being in the middle of it. Shess is just falling into a mess and it seems now that Inuyasha is going to be involved as well. I wonder how this is fgoing to effect all the characters.
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 11:36 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison
I hadn't read Pretty Brown Eyes in awhile so I had to read a few chapters to catch up. You seem to be on a roll. Even though I'm a Inu/Kagome fan I have really been enjoying your Sessh/Rin alot. Naraku just pisses me off but that is what you want. I will continue seeing where this leads too.
[Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 2:30 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
Ah yes...getting to the nitty and the gritty here...very good chappie. And its getting rather interesting on what Sess is gonna do bout Rin and when. I just love how you can weave a story like you can...thats always amazed me. Damned, but you're good, lol.
[Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 8:37 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
I have to leave another one because I still have shivers! Lol. Hope you don't mind!
EEK! When is the rubber band going to break? Next chapter? It seems like it!
*Is so far on the edge of my seat that I am going to fall off any second*
CRASH!
...Spoke too soon...
[Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 8:31 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Sideways
Like a thin rubber band...all of the lies, hidden truths, evil, deception and misunderstandings are being stretched and stretched and stretched...until it snaps, breaks, and causes immense pain and suffering.
*Shivers* Ooh...you're killing me here! Please update this one soon!
Happy Writing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison
Amazing chapter, amazing fic.
Amazing author? why... yes.