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Reviewer: darksparkle   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2006 6:20 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Giving In

umm I have a question is this susposed to be how long the story is cuz inu girrl was there more on this chapter



Reviewer: Kairinu-is-inuyasha   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2006 8:48 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Giving In

ummm I think the chapter got cutt off...But i like it so far! XD



Reviewer: Neddi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2006 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison

Hey, great chapter. Not surprising considering who wrote it. I loved it. I think you did a great job at portraying Sesshomaru. He really has a temper...tee hee. I can't wait to see where this goes. Its hot when he gets madd....oooooh and hes mad! Love ya, Neddi



Reviewer: axel   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2006 2:10 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison

nice chapter!
rin and sess sure are stupid



Reviewer: !nu-Add!ct   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2006 2:26 AM
Chapter number: 25
Title: Tonight is Forever

fucking OUTRAGEOUS lemon! holy shit! makes me want to call my bf up... lol:P it was BEAUTIFUL! made me feel like a peeping-tom, sitting there waking off to the whole thing. great GREAT story, keep it up



Reviewer: Christina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 6:38 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison

I knew he wouldn't hurt her :P The story would've ended much too easily without anything solved! I loved that encounter in the bathroom...very, very good. My eyes were glued to every word. I can't imagine what is going to happen next! Till next chapter, I will be eagerly awaiting their next encounter. Have fun and Happy Writing!



Reviewer: Jen   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 4:36 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison

Hooray and update! Of course, that chapter sucked because all it did was make me want more. So damn you, Kiki and your "crappy" writing for making a chapter so full of intrigue that I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for what comes next. Your writing "sucks" so bad that I feel bad for the characters (all except Naraku). I feel bad for Kagura because she just wants someone to protect her and keep the jewel out of Naraku's hands. I feel bad for Rin because she loves Sesshomaru and she's very likely to hurt him (unknowingly or knowingly) and she's being played by everyone in this situation. I feel bad for Sesshomaru because he has to hurt the woman he loves and he's convinced that he's going to be alone forever (or stuck with Kagura which is worse than being alone). And I feel bad for Inuyasha because- oh wait I don't feel bad for him he has everything he wants (the fuck) :)

Author's Response: Jen, that was the most hilarious reviw I ever got. How can I thank you, girl?? That brightened my day by a 1000 degrees. And guess what? A new chap of SMC is almost complete *gasp* It was supposed to be on hiatus! Thanks so much for reviewing, you rawk!



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 11:11 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison

Glad you updating on a story. I enjoyed this chapter. Rin is such a dolt, along with sesshy, but all will come to an end soon, ne? Hurry update soon....Ja



Reviewer: Lucient   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 7:49 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: From the Spirit Runs Poison

Damn, baby, that was awesome! I could see everything, and feel the emotions and... and... damn! You get this out of writer's block, and I get something that makes me never want to write again. Have I told you before how divinely talented you are?

Author's Response: My Luc-baby!!! I'm so happy that you were okay with this chap. I'm sorry it took so long, but you know it's all for you, ne? :-) I know just what I want to do in the next chap, so I PROMISE there won't be a huge wait. I'm finally breaking that block! xoxoxoxo, Honeybee



Reviewer: Aways the best!   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2006 7:13 PM
Chapter number: 25
Title: Tonight is Forever

Kiki sis! lookie now I can review for ya!! I love the site I love all the fics. You're still the shit and will aways be the best. I really want to thank you for the chapter you've givin' me. I still have songs for you if ya want them. I'm working on my own fictions too! It's little hard with the music but I've aways had ideas for them anyway. I hope all of you who read this fic enjoy the song too!^_^ and most of all enjoy every fic that's on here. kiki lov yas

Meanha!O.~

Author's Response: Kid Sissy!! Thankies for the review, girl! I missed your crazy self. How's Yasha-boy & Shar-Shar doing? I haven't talked to her in a minute. *huggles*



Reviewer: cjflutterbye@yahoo.com   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2006 10:49 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: A Day of Surprises

I'm reading these chapters, and it seems like there is a whole bunch missing - Chap 4 is referring to Inu and Kagome meeing - there isn't anything in Chap 3 after Rin gets to the diner... Could you check it out?

Author's Response: Thanks, CJ! The chap didn't fully upload. I don't know why, but i fixed it. ^_^



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