Date: July 08, 2011 5:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Firstly, I'm not signed in, so I'll apologize about that up front. Secondly, I'd like to commend you on how you've made Rin and Kagome in this chapter. I'm doing exactly what they are; saving myself for someone worthy of my innoncence, for lack of a better word. Not too many women these days are willing to screw around, which isn't a bad thing...Anyway, I definitely LOVE the drama that's going on, and I can't wait to see how you resolve everything within the next little while. Whenever I see you've updated this story, I nearly dance for joy, but I couldn't this morning, due to me not being a morning person. (However, this did make me feel more awake and alert, though!) I hate it whenever people tell me "Update soon", because then you're sort of obligated to, so I'm not going to tell you that. Simply, update WHENEVER YOU CAN, because if someone loves this story as much as I do, they'll have no problems waiting weeks and weeks for a chapter. Keep doing what you do best -- Writing awesome fanfiction! Sincerely, ~DarkCrystalis
Date: July 08, 2011 5:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Awwwwwwww I know Sess didn't just tell Rin off when all he is trying to do is get in her pants for a bet. Its obvious that Sess really does like her but she needs to be convinced. But you know when she does find out about his bet its going to blow up and then we have Kanna/Kagura up to no good. Which btw I am so happy that you are making Kanna into a real person. I dunno if I'm going to be able to handle all this angst.
Date: July 08, 2011 5:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
oh WOW!!! that was an INTENSE chappie!! this review is gonna be short, because i'm in health class. but WOW!! great stuff!! i can't wait to see what happens next! MORE SOON! XD
Date: July 08, 2011 5:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
God those guys were assholes. ((whistles)). Yeah, just like me. ::sighs:: I hope they see the err in their ways. Women like to go slow. The way those guys are acting, they don't fucking DESERVE those women. Sadly, there are men who are like that. The good news is, ladies, all it takes is the right woman to change them. ::hugs Lady J::
Date: July 08, 2011 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
That's so Funny!"inuyasha was molesting Kagome". I always love an InuYasha story with consentual(sp?) molesting! Great Chapter!
Date: July 08, 2011 5:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Please don't turn Rin and Kagome into "spine-less, I-need-a-man-to-make-me-happy" girls. I love the way you make them strong and take-no-crap kind of girls. I think that Inu and Sess are just too full of themselves, like half of the male population! Just kidding!! Seriously, though, great chapter and I hope that Rin and Kag stay strong!!
Date: July 08, 2011 5:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
OH! i have to say that is sweet i liked the chapter though it's kinda sad reminded me of my Ex who suddenly decided I had to bow down to him or walk out of hsi lfie forever and now he comes back to me saying he wants me back and weveing me into a web of lies... although thats not the point of this reveiw the point is that This is a great Chapter and i liked it alot But I seiously Hope Kagome and Inuyasha make it together as well as Rin and Sesshy! they all make great couples! anywho! i want to read more! Please Update soon.
Date: July 08, 2011 5:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Go For Kags and Rin stand up to those mofos Hott mofos but still . I glad they didn't tske that shit even if i felt that kags was coping out a bit .but Rin was in her Right they sould get with other people to make sess and inu see the error of their ways amon (my b/f walks inn) Robin: Yells All Men are Assholes Amon : oh great fanfic time there goes my sex life for 2 weeks Robin:(throws teddy bears at Him) Ha you sex life is over till she ends the story Amon: (under breath) shit PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONN!!!!!!! Robin: yes please update teehe Jane
Date: July 08, 2011 5:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
inu is an ass and i am wondering if that will get better or not. poor kag. its not like she isn't interested in doing the same thing, but sheeeit. sometimes girls feel more comfortable if they wait for the right time. though, i wonder why she is so reluctant to trust him? hmmm. about sessh and rin, i'm lost there. the truth hurts and needs to be said, but not by some totally hott guy you wanna *@#!. poor rin. ah well, i am in luv with this fic and can't wait for the next chap.
Date: July 08, 2011 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
did you make up the name "Dumplins'" or is that a real restaurant? bc that name is so cute!! It makes me laugh everytime i see it in the story! Great Chapter!!!
Date: July 08, 2011 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I love this story because its so easy to relate toin real life. Its like I'm hearing my friends tell a story ^^ Grr!! Inuyasha and Kagome need to make out up!!! hehe
Date: July 08, 2011 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Inuyasha is such a jackass. He is to quick to judge. Drama is what I live for. Update Soon. P.S. Love YA!!!
Date: July 08, 2011 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
This story is great! ugh... Yasha and Sess are such asses.. XD ... sess = aSSES... hahaha! err.. O_O anyway... Update soon! Okay? Damn it all! When are RxS and IxK going to hook/make up? n_n i hope it's soon X_X update soon! lub u! lol ^_^
Date: July 08, 2011 5:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
*groans* oh man...SO MUCH MISUNDERSTANDING!!!! *sighs* (again, i got no notification for your update. x_x i am just taking to checking all of your stories daily now. i swear...*shakes head*) why can't the two of them just understand each other???? You know!!! like him understand why she won't fuck him..her admit she's in love with him...*sighs* or they could just fuck each other and get it over with. xD lol....i foresee more painful happenings here huh? :( *sighs* anyway, great update!! again, so sorry i wasn't able to read sooner! hope you update more SOOON!!! :P Luv ya huns!!! michiko
Date: July 08, 2011 5:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
i LOVE this story PLZ UPDATE!!!!! let inuyasha know the truth about kagomes situation and forgive her and her forgive him for acting like an ass : )
Date: July 08, 2011 5:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
im loving the story but I hope you update soon i just hate waiting for up dates but then again if it was me i probably never would because im so lazy
Date: July 08, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Hello, I just wanted to say how much I love this story! It has all the characters in it! i just wanted to know when are you going to update the story?
Date: July 08, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Dear, that was a wonderful chapter! I'm excited to see what will happen in chapter 12, because I think that's when the house-warming party will take place. Ohhh, it'll be so good! Inuyasha, however, is a dolt. The silly boy can't figure out that Kagome isn't ready for that...men are idiots. However, I feel that things will turn out in the end, but not before some heavy drama before-hand. Please, update whenever it suits you best! Sincerely, ~DarkCrystalis
Date: July 08, 2011 5:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
I knew if I was patient enough you'd update! YAY! Hee hee...can't wait for the next chap! Awesome work as always!
Date: July 08, 2011 5:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
So Kag's got a rotten punanny now?That's gross! I can't wait until you turn this around and have Kag teach Inu a lesson or two :P
Date: July 08, 2011 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
*howls with laughter* omg...hun...your language!! hahaha!! so DIRTY!! :P so hilarious! xD lol...*huge grin* I loved the convo between inuyasha and the guys. punanny!! HAHAHAHH!!!! :P *omg* lol. they are so fucking disrespectfully unbelievable! xD lol. anyway, i really really really really really hope something good happens between inu and kag in the next chapter!! i hate it when kagome cries!! :( great great update hun! very entertaining. xD more more more! lurve, michiko
Date: July 08, 2011 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
kagura is being an ultimate bitch. sess needs to drop her and move on. this party is obviously gonna be good with all of these chaps leading up to it. oh my. men and their giney jokes! X D
Date: July 08, 2011 5:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
If you don't update so I can see what the hell Inuyasha is doing, I'm killing Sesshomaru again. lol... just kidding. Wow... I'm liking this. You can describe the girls all you like, but Sesshomaru looked the hottest that night, lol. rawr. Feeling an itty bit better. Baby said hi for next time I wrote to you. She's passed out in bed, and I'm going to go there now too. Night honeybee. kisses... luc
Date: July 08, 2011 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
This chapter was great, you give a good description of each character. I just hope Inuyash does not act a ass to bad! Poor Kagome! Then Rin and Sess, Kagura is not about to let that happen. Please update sooooooooooon!!!!!!
Date: July 08, 2011 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: A King Amongst Men
Yep, you're definitely lucky. I rarely review...but I like this story so much, that I feel compelled to do so. I can't believe you left it as a cliffhanger...that's not very nice, or a way to win more fans *sighs*. However, no matter; I'll continue loving this story as long as you continue to write it ^_^ ! I don't remember when you posted this chapter last, but I hope you'll update "relatively" soon; you usually do, so I won't stress about it or anything. Besides, you have a DUTY to update soon now; you can't leave us with that damn cliffy for long...you're not THAT evil, are you?... *Sighs again* No matter, I'll have patience, and be two times as excited than usual when you do decide to update. I hope the next chapter isn't a cliffhanger...two of those in a row is killer on us. Keep up the lovely work, and I hope to see more from you soon! Sincerely, ~DarkCrystalis