Date: May 30, 2011 10:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
there is just too much that i can say about this chap. one is that kag is mighty brave to make an attempt at relationship like that. though, i know if you love someone, you're willing to do whatever it takes to be with them. but, i also think inu needs someone like that. they are so perfect. and of course, the sex! wow. I thought it was incredibly sweet. giving away your virginity is a gift. it's a good thing inu sees it as such. holy crap, the hottness!!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
man, this next chap coming up has "awkward" written all over it. you write those kind so well. lol. kouga is an Ass, and, hooray for sango! lucky.
Date: May 30, 2011 10:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
oh man. this is just... i have no words. holy crap. i must show all of my single friends that lemon. i'll say, "see look, if your man doesn't do you like THAT, he's not the one!". yes, that's what i'll do. ;P
Date: May 30, 2011 10:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
i love how laid back this fic is. it's so fun to read. the banter between all of the girls is too funny. all of this tied in with the sexual tension and innuendo is enough to have you on my favorites permanently!!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
you must be on a roll here starting another fic. the whole hospital set up is great. so many opportunities for things to go wrong...or right. ^__* well, as usual, i cant wait to see where ya go with this one.
Date: May 30, 2011 10:29 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Wow, you know lately I've been the last person to read the updates, lol. No matter, as long as I'm reviewing I guess. Kidding. Oh, and I have no problems with a "plotless" story, lol. How come whenever I write a lemon people call me a pervert? Lol, I mean they say they like the story but that I'm a really perverted person. Is that like a compliment? I find it a bit offensive, lol. I guess I could always look at it like this: I'm a pervert for writing it and they're perverts for reading it, lol. Gotta go, robinstar
Date: May 30, 2011 10:29 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
I havent really read anything in a while *sniff, sniff* because of school. Lol. Gotta love this story. It's like all lemons, lol. Ok, I gotta go now because I have homework. Blah. Oh well, this education shall hopefully serve me well in life.
Date: May 30, 2011 10:27 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
I wanted to read another one of your stories, and I thought I would go with this one. I hope I can keep up, as you update quicker than I have perverted thoughts--and I have those quite a lot! I am not complaining! Plus the thought of playing doctor with any bishies in this story, well makes me HOT! Haha!--- Inuyasha is a GYN? Ohh sweet merciful gods, where in the hell is this doctors office?--I am soooo happy you will be continuing!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:27 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
*Raises hand* Hell ya I would schedule a unnecessary pelvic exam!! Where in the hell do I sign up at?~~ Oh he was in the process of biting here--*Hurries to the next chapter* Wahooooo on that action between Bankotsu and Kagura! Damn where's his officer at? Ohhhs *starry eyes* Kouga just entered the picture!! MFSOB I have to take a nap so I can go to work later, damnit! *swats job*~~ Snort, run for cover , I shall be back tonight to read some more! I am loving this. I LOVE modem day stories!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:27 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Chapters4-6- Sweet bajeebus, I open chapter 4, and right into smut. Wahoooo!! "What's my fucking name, bitch?" How yummy! Rawr! 5- I love the whole dance scene. That was great! 6- Hehe, I love the way you are doing this. It is so realistic. I about died when she asked about going to the waffle house. We always go there after being at the club! Ohhs Inuyasha wants to take her home!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Ohhs the dark hottie Naraku showed up! *starry eyes* That explains why Inuyasha was so reluctant to have a relationship with a co-worker. 8-9 Woooweees that was quite hot! Hot assed lemon there. *crosses legs* 10- Those 3 little words can so dramatically change a relationship...ACK- those 4 little words the chapter ended with 'we have to talk '..I so hate when they are said to me, means mah ass is in trouble...AGAIN! 11- Ohhs another hot lemon! He bit her? Now what happens?
Date: May 30, 2011 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Chapters 12-15~ I wish we had cute doctors like this at the hospital I worked at. There was this one hot as hell surgeon, and wows he... anyways! haha! Wooowees another lemon. (Ohh hot)--Ohhs nice cliffy there with Kikyo and the pelvic exam. 13- Poor Inuyasha with that exam! 14- Ohhs Poor Kagome, she walked in at the wrong time. Ohhs the beautiful Sesshoumaru shows up. 15- Kouga is such a naughty wolf. *Oh how I heart him so -hehe* Holy hell, what a mean assed cliffy you ended that with... I would never do a cliffy like that *shifty eyes* ACK... where's the rest? Hope to see more soon!!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Ohhs the dark hottie is the new admin, and he is already being his bad, hot self. *starry eyes* Opps I mean poor them. *Shifty eyes*---Ohhs Bankotsu was caught with his pants down--Hehe! And the plot thickens. Great chapter!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Wows I get home from a day of pure hell at work--I open the newest chapter, and right into a hot lemon. You so rock! Ohh sweet bajeebies on this line-- (as she drank from his seemingly never ending fountain.) That was just too HOT! Wahoooo you perked up all mah muses! *Down boys*--Ohhs he marked her for life!--Then onto another hot lemon. Dayum ya made my night! Holy hell those two lemons were hot! I need a shower now!!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:25 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Wahoooooooo right into a hot-assed lemon! --I loved the part on what people use to get people talking on dates. Touché. Oh gawd, the smell of 4 day old sex. Eww! For once I am glad I am human! --Ohs and enter the dark hottie-Naraku *starry eyes* Opps! What havoc will the sexy assed bad boy create? I cannot wait to read more about this mark!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:25 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Wows you updated quickly! Wahoo!-- *Raises hand* Yep, I would be one of the nurses/staff drooling over Naraku! Mmm... he is so fkin yummy. I so wish our admin was that hot. Ut-oh tempers are flaring over his presence. Miroku had me rolling, he was trying so hard to keep the peace. Oi, how is Kagome and Inuyasha going to get through this one?
Date: May 30, 2011 10:25 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Sesshoumaru is such a smooth talker. I loved the dialog between him and Inuyasha. That heightened sense of smell could be a problem at times. Ohhs my ass would be in constant trouble! *rubs butt thinking about it* What is the dark hottie Naraku going to do with those camera's? Wows on all the updates on this!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:25 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
The brothers are sneaky, sneaky... sneaky! Now if I could take my medicine like that... I might actually take it like I should.~~ Ohhs hot sex scene with Inuyasha and Kagome! Wahoo!--Sesshoumaru is such a smooth talker. He sure in the hell could talk me out of... umm... some information.--Ohhs Naraku is such a conniving hot bastard. How I heart him so. What a cliffhanger you left there. --Hope to see more soon!
Date: May 30, 2011 10:23 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
That was so funny, and sweet at the same time. How Inu got a nose bleed because Mrs. Toshi... LOL, I'm still cracking up.And that little bit of Inu/Kag fluff after was sweet. Then Kikyo... Well can anyone say about Kikyo? Okay, great update, and I can't wait till the next...
Date: May 30, 2011 10:23 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
I LOVEd this chapter, but I hated Kikyo, lol. And now the sexy Sesshomaru is thrown into the mix. Conflict sure to ensue. I hope Inu get's a chance to talk to Kagome, it'd be sad if he didn't. Gosh, I really don't like Kikyo. Okay I'm done Kikyo bashing, if that can even be considered Kikyo bashing. That's actually nice compared to what I know other Kikyo bashers would say. OKAY, really, I'm done rambling. Great update, chapter, story, everything. I can't wait till the next update for this story, and my personal favorite "Edge of Seventeen." Sorry if your irritated or anything that I mention that story on a review for this story... Weel good job writing great stuff, and I really can't wait for the next update for all, lol. *huggles you* ; ) -TrinityK (aka Krystal)
Date: May 30, 2011 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Hey I had no idea that you were being targeted on an author hate site. Don't let it get to you, as I already know you won't. If someone is going to critisize it should be in rational way. I know not everybody will like what some people write, and thats okay. But to target someone, and ridicule for writing the way their muse tells them to is just wrong. I'll always be on your side 110%, :). I LOVE your work, all of it. And those who don't and can't critisize nicely, can go shove it where the sun don't shine. LoL. ;P. So head up, chin out, and don't let any of that stupid stuff get to you alright. There are a great deal of people out there who love your work, so don't fret. Okay, I said my two cents. Remember head up. And on an ending not... Once again I love your work. ALL of it. Your a great writer, and I thank you for writing such great stories to entertain us and yourself. *hugs and kisses* -TrinityK (aka Krystal, but you probably already know that, ;) )
Date: May 30, 2011 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Kiki, NOOO! Kikyou is evil! Don't you know that?! LoL, of course you do, j/j. Hey it's me again, Trini. I told you I'd check this out shortyly after sending you that email, and here I am. This was a nice update, but I actually gasped at the end. Gasped! You know thought maybe Inu would start with and 'I'm sorry, please forgive me'. but hey whatever floats your boat. Nah I know what your doing, I'm just being all dramatic like, hehe. I wonder what Kagome will say to that great start off, I'm nt sure I'd know... Anyways, great update, can't wait for more, and don't write yourself to hard now, you hear? Get it? Hehe, I crack myself up. *crickets chirping* LoL. I can't wait for your updates, I hope I'll see edge updated tomorrow. Little after work treat, if you know what I mean ;p. Okay, ttyl, bye! Amd have a happy day! *Hugs and kisses* -Trini
Date: May 30, 2011 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Hey there Kiki!!! how've you been? I hope all good. Anyway, just so you know, this chapter was not crappy. It's just proof... That men are pigs. LoL. I did like this chapter though. I hope you find a muse somewhere throughout your writer's block, and continue writing all this good stuff. But Inuyasha sure is being fickle, is it that he still loves Kikyo, but loves Kagome too, like in the actual show? I too hope Kagome is enough, cus Kikyo's just plain evil, LoL. I can't wait till your next update, ttyl. *hugs and kisses* -Trini
Date: May 30, 2011 10:21 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Wow, Kiki, you updated SMC. It's been a while. This story really is a soap opera. Last chapter things were all hot and sweet, now it's all gone sour, lol, I LOVE IT!!! LoL. It makes me laugh how much of a soap this is. Really, one of my favorites. And does Kags really like Naraku? How anyone could ever find him attractive... *shudders* Well I loved this 2 chapter update, and I can't wait for the next. TTYL, bye!!! ;-) -Trini
Date: May 30, 2011 10:21 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
Aww so sad. Talk about the decption, lol. I mean if she knows Inu can smell all like scents and emotions, what's the point in lying? Oh, the hurt, the pain, lol. Sorry Kiki, I'm in a dramatic mood right now, and am currently thinking up my own groundwork. I loved this update, and can't wait for more, ttyl, bye!!! ;-) -Trini