Wow Kiki, another one? Your very generous with us, LoL. Great update as usual, and I can't wait for the next one later. Poor Inu does love Kags, just doesn't know it. Poor, poor hanyou, lol, j/j. Well once again great chappiem ttyl, bye!!! ;-) -TrinityK 

soOoOo...i'm not used to such a ...damned...hot SEsshoumaru...i mean, holy horney hell, woman! he's...worse...then inu, and that is a rare gem to find! can we say Hawt?!??! good shizitt! and i laughed my ass off at the "You're a regular Martha-fucking-Stewart." He quipped. "Minus the jail time.". that is to perfect, cause WTF? it's so true!!! pocket wipes, toothpicks...and yet he still needs to nail girls. i'm worried for Rin...because you can see she doesn't see the true player nature in him. eep! but never the less, i wuff it!!! GREAT stuff!!!

sorry, for some reason, this asshole of a site decided to blank out my review. damn. it was long too. GRRR. anyway. okay, great chapter, really great story (love it and your writing to pieces). got to take a moment to break out the english/history major in me though. i had a hard time swallowing the dilect between bank and Kouga in the opening scene of the new chapter. it was very...Americanized. dont' get me wrong, dilect adds tons of flavor to characters with the proper back ground. while reading it, i was like, 'wow, i feel like i'm back in NYC!' it was stuff i would expect to hear between freinds on a subway, or in a diner. i have a hard time though, because they are in Japan and unless you've stated otherwise (which if you have i'll feel like an asshat) they are Japanese. it was hard taking it from Bank, let alone Kouga. dont' get me wrong, i love this story, i really, really do! i just think that it's hard to see someone from the Japanese culture, higher class if they are doctors, breaking into 'word?' type of linguistics. it adds a lot of flavor to the characters, honestly, cause sometimes ain't nothin' sexier then two guys who can just speak the truth in dirty ways, but we have to have some type of background for them to break into this dilect, ya know? maybe something of them studying in a culture where that diction is common, or something. i dont' know,...it's something that i've been wondering for a while. anyway, it is a GREAT story and a GREAT update!! 

good stuff! i love it! you have good dialogue and a good buidling support for the story. the way you flip through character's points of views is a little confusing but pleanty readable. i would suggest not to go into to many points of view. honestly, for those younger readers (granted, they shouldn't be reading it but who listens?), it can get to be to much internalizing so many characters. i love the inu/kag reaction and the inu-man whore idea. god i love badass inuyasha's! lol. great story, keep it up!!!! 

It's getting good, I loving it. Update Please!! P.S. "Breaking the Girl was awesome, Please finish Urban Fairytale. Love YA!!!!!! 

This was great!! I love that song by Destiny's child...and it fit this chapter soooo well...I enjoy reading all of your stories...they're what makes the world go round...just playin...lol...but they are good...great job...please update soon...luvs Ty 

this is WONDERFUL!!! pwease hurry update! I like how u put the mating ritual. It is soooooooooo cool with the marking of each other name on the back!! I love you n ALL ya stories...!!!! WONDERFUL I SAY AGAIN...kagom313 

hey grl its ur faithful reviewer lol i love this fic its so damn good lol yea so update soon i wanna see some drama happen

my god u finally updated only to leave me hanging by the way is more drama really necessary i mean cant we all be friends like miroku said y is the world so filled with grudges i swear if this turns out to be a tear jerker im never reading ur stories again...j/k but dont make it too bad i dont think i cld take it 

Wonderful but Inuyasha is sure being an ass, like she would figured out that there's a mate mark on her lower back? Please, she better have more brains than that. Anyways I really enjoyed that chapter and cannot wait for more. Bye for now. 

Oh no they better think up of something and fast or they better tell that Inuyasha and Kagome are mated. Can't wait til the next chapter. Bye for now.

okay now that I'm caught up with SMC I have to catch up with pretty brown eyes. This is hard work, but trust, it's worth all the effort. I would also like to thank you for the reviews even when I wasn't here and don't mind other people because they're just jealous of your great ass wrtiting style. I wish you luck and prosperity, Sexy_cap ^_^1

Yay! Yay! Updates. I love this story it's so...so...beautifully written and the plot is so well kept together unlike me which I just start typing and see what comes out. My stories always have the biggest plot hole, but not yours. Great job. ^_^!