Date: May 26, 2010 4:00 AM
Chapter number: 29
Title: Is This How I End and We Begin?
Well, that was quite the read. I'm hoping that you'll finish this, I really like where you've taken this. The chracters and situations they put themselves in are so complicated and sometimes irriatating, lol. Inu's over reaction- people do it all the time and I like that you've shed some light onto that, many authors can't do it the way you have. Naraku's such an ass too, nice protrail of him... well, until there's more i'm sure i'll find myself occupied with other works of yours!
Date: May 26, 2010 1:28 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Let Me Love You I
My goodness, that was hot!
Date: May 26, 2010 1:20 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Choices
Lovin it!
Date: May 26, 2010 12:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Welcome to SMC
I love your metaphors and similies in this chapter. They were very entertaining. 'His reputation was something that followed him like an addictive blemish' was one of my favorites. And I love the way this chapter ended and how Kags so far doesn't seem to be non realistic about her and Inu. Off to the next chapter, I can't wait!
Date: March 14, 2010 1:42 AM
Chapter number: 29
Title: Is This How I End and We Begin?
Guess what, Kags?...you really can be his forever, since you're his mate!! Wahaha...great chapter, Grrrl!!! =) I wish there were more too it, but sadly, there is not...yet! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 14, 2010 1:27 AM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Secretly
Naraku really is an ass. Damn.... Great chapter! Sad that the next is the last that you have posted for this...because I really think you should have more! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 14, 2010 1:12 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise
Man...this just keeps getting more fucked up and more fucked up. Just like soaps!! Haha.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 14, 2010 1:01 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days
Sessie Sessie Sessie...Rin does not realize anything like that...*sigh* Damn. InuYasha, you should tell Kagome. And keep up with the idea of showing her what she means to you since she's feeling like you don't give a shit about her... neeeeways. Amazing chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 14, 2010 12:46 AM
Chapter number: 25
Title: Trust Breaks Like Bone
Sessie! You need to realize that Rin is soooo much more than what you think she is! She IS meant to be kept! Why do you think your animal wanted out so bad? Hmmmm?! And Naraku! You asshole! Ugh!!! InuYasha...don't be hurt, Kagome is just out with Naraku because he's an ass that is trying to hurt you...she has no intention of hurting you. *sigh* Amazing chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 14, 2010 12:12 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: Forfeit the Game
Welllllll...Ayame can be happy that Bank was such a jerk...and Kouga can see he ain't going to get no where with Kagome once the concealment thing fades or something like that...and thenn Kouga and Ayame can see they're meant to be? Yeah...that's a good idea. Hahaha. Great chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 13, 2010 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 23
Title: Love is a Razor
Naraku, you're such an ass.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 13, 2010 11:33 PM
Chapter number: 22
Title: Silver and Cold
Ugh....Kikyou....go away. You too, Naraku. Sessie, you should just take them out. That'd be sweet...hahaha. Good chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 13, 2010 3:25 PM
Chapter number: 21
Title: Balancing on a Ledge
Naraku and Kikyou...hmmm...I wonder, I wonder....
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 13, 2010 3:11 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: This is Only a Test
She didn't saw she wouldn't per say...she just said she didn't need to because he was the one for her. Everyone is attracted to different people, InuYasha! *looks point blank at Kikyou* Neways, Grrrl, good chapter! Rin and Sessie make me smile! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 13, 2010 12:10 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: It's Not Right, But it's Okay
Wow...isn't this a love/hate chapter?!...wow...
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 11:20 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chemicals Between Us
Won't Ayame and Kouga smell it on her, though? That she's been mated with InuYasha? Hmmm... Interesting. Very interesting. And we just knowwwwww this meeting is going to be beyond crazy!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 11:01 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Give It When I Want It
So...we now have mates, lovers, and soon to be come lovers...and then we have two assholes named Kikyou and Naraku! *sigh* Great chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 10:41 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: My Reflection, Dirty Mirror
Oh, poor Ayame!!! =( Mucho intersting, Grrrl!! Next chapter here I come! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 10:30 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Just Press Play
Like I said, if there were no dating in the workplace...almost everyone would be fired. Hahaha. Ugh, Kikyou...*glares at the name*
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 10:19 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Collide
I have to wonder what Sessy is gonna say to his little brother...hehehe. Ugh, Kikyou! Blah! Good chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Rearview Mirrors
Damn...poor InuYasha! If Naraku becomes administator..then there can be no office relationships for sureeee... Damn, then most of the hospital is fired!! Haha. Ugh...Kikyou, GO AWAY! =) Great chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Now That We Know Where We Stand..
Kikyou, go away. Weeee don't need you here right now. There's already enough drama...haha. I guess drama is for this story, though...so haha.
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 9:53 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Inu's Question & Kag's Decision
Yayyyynesssss!!! They're gonna give it a tryyyy! Yayyyy! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 1:30 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Crowded Thoughts
=( Not cool...Ugh, Kikyou! Why did you have to go and wreck his poor heart?!?!...*sigh* Good chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 12, 2010 1:20 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Let Me Love You II
Oh wow....ummm...wowwwww. This can only get more interesting from here! Great, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**