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Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 4:20 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

Oh the slurs, the innuendoes, the mudslinging, the cock sucking and the bubble gum blowing!

Now, if only Inu could get his head out his ass. **bad dog boy, bad..**

Great chap Onna! :P



Reviewer: inuyahsaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2007 4:17 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

another review ate...



Reviewer: bewildered   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

whoa. it's so... intense. (i cant find the right word.) inu needs to get his shit straight and have some balls! his trust, or rather lack of, with his mate is unnerving. gah! well, i know it's all part of the story but i can't help but comment about that. anyway, thank you for the good read. please update soon... ~may you be prolific in your writings.~ ja ne!

Author's Response: Hey chica ^_^ Thanks for the review! I know Inu is stubborn and confused, but the hanyou can do no wrong! <.< ok, maybe a lil!



Reviewer: Laini   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 11:02 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

OH!..damn naraku, what a sneaky BASTARD! lol. Even tho this doesnt have a big plot i still enjoy reading it. Update soon chica! Ur doin great ^_^

Author's Response: Laini!! Thanks for the review , girl! Naraku is the pits, isn't he?? Love to hate him! ^^



Reviewer: Christina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 8:43 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

"I bet mine will be bigger."

Ohhhh boy. Pervert mind in overdrive! See what your fics have done to me?! LMAO, I'm just kidding. I was a hentai before I found ya'.

And I loved the crack about Rosie. I can't stand that woman; she is such a shit disturber.

And I am loving the KouAya!! I think that in this story, I may like them better than InuKag. O_O The aquarium...awwwww.

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: I know everyone hates on Inu in this, lol. He's hatey, I admit it, but that's part of it. He can't be the good, sweet guy in everything. You know the lead guy in every soap is a dick anyway :P



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 6:37 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

Ok, InuGrrrl thanks for updating my all time favorite story ok, I love ya much!!!. I still think Inuyasha should get Kagome alone and talk to her explain to her his and Naraku past instead of pushing her away. I hope he take Mirkou's advice and don't rush into anything, I love what you said about the "View" that was too funny.
Naraku using another woman to get what he wants Kaugra seduce Sesshomaru well after Rin kicks her ass (I hope) will Kaugra want Sango's job. Can't wait till the next update.

Author's Response: D-Gurl! Thanks for the review. I know I neglect this one, but I'll get better with it. Shit will be hitting the fan in our lil' soap very soon!



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 5:51 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

Ooooh! Suspense. I was taken back a little bit. The chapter was going along. Yash and Miroku scene had funny dialogue. Kouga and Ayame's scene was so cute. I was like 'Awww' Then, the next sentence I read is, "Suck it harder!" I was like 'Oh, shit!' It almost gave me a heartattack. But I love where the plot is headed. Kagura trying to seduce Sess is going to be hilarious, especially with poor Rin in the mix. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.

Author's Response: Sexy C! Thanks for the review, girl! That made me laugh like hell! SUCK IT HARDER! lmaoooo! You're outta hand :P



Reviewer: Jen   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 5:40 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

Holy shit! Kiki updated SMC...and it reads like Kiki's got her groove back on this one. Good chap, we had some confession, some sweet stuff and then, of course, we had some dick sucking with a little bit of intrigue at the end... Now we all must stay tuned for the next exciting episode of Sengoku Medical Center.

Author's Response: Can ya believe it, Jen? The best part is it didn't give me any trouble <.< but then again it was short! And yesh, I think I'm getting my swerve back for it -hope it lasts!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

Good chapter. I can't remember if I've reviewed this story before, but it seems like fun. Inu's thoughts on The View were hilarious. Rosie is annoying...but don't be so hard on us big girls. Not all of us look and act like her! LOL. As for Inuyasha, he REALLY needs to think before he acts and, more importantly, know all the facts before he goes off the deep end. And he especially should tell a woman when she's damned near married to him for life! When Kagome finds out, she is going to castrate him for both reasons. I'm SURE that she'll regret it later (I know I would), but I don't think she'll care very much at the time, lol. I'll be looking for the next update.

Author's Response: Ms. Goddess!! I most definitely don't hate on the BBWS :P I just don't like Rosie so I had to get her by way of Inu. <.< I really do loathe that show though, lol. Yash is very hard-headed, but he'll learn *evil glare* and get what's coming to him.



Reviewer: c-note   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

damn, girl! person views about "the view"? ths is BETTER than a soap opera and inu and kags so deserve each other! he's gonna walk in on the tail end over a conversation and realize that he fucked up again and have to do whatever it is men on soaps do to make up with their women. besides the shit always hits the fan bigger when they live together! finding bras that aren't hers, whips under the bed...

Author's Response: C-note!! My hibernating buddy :P Yesh, personal views on The View run amuck ^^ But I'm glad ya liked it. I'm taking it easy with chap length now because it was killing me. I found this one easy to pen because of that too. Inu/Kags interaction in the next chappie! That should be fun, lol.



Reviewer: sweetkijo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2007 5:10 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Devise the Demise

Pure sensual sin. Always for the fight for power...it is amazing what a woman can get from a man by using "His" head. lol...nice chappy sissy!
Neddi

Author's Response: My Neddi!!! I didn't even know you were online :P I'm so tired and starving with 6 updates to go @_@ send me some strength... and a biscuit with jam 0.~



Reviewer: kyonkichi-luver   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2007 4:46 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Another one of my favorites. Sessy's actin a little green, don't you think? And Kikyo needs to die and burn in hell!



Reviewer: kyonkichi-luver   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2007 4:46 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Another one of my favorites. Sessy's actin a little green, don't you think? And Kikyo needs to die and burn in hell!



Reviewer: sweetkijo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2006 11:36 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Sweet Jesus!!! Just finished this...This story is written differently from your others..its written from the males perspective almost. It really consentrates on that....it makes it different and very appealing to read. Man, Sess is such a dickwad....grrrr. Rin needs to put his ass in check..ya dig? lol. Cant wait til next time..ja ne my lov! Neddi



Reviewer: Christina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2006 5:52 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Heavy chapter. For someone that doesn't like Kouga, you certainly make him likable in this story. :D I don't think you plan on making KouAya a serious couple but I really like hearing about them. Naraku is an ass and I feel bad for little Rin...Sess is an ass too. *nods* And there is some serious tension between Inu and Kag...this'll be interesting!

'Tina

Author's Response: Ha, I know!! I dog Kouga so much in everything else <.< I just felt like showing he wasn't a complete turd :P



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2006 10:42 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Great update. I feel so sorry for Rin. Oh, she can be so naive and I love the drama between Yash and Kag and Kikyo is just a whore, no ifs, ands, buts, about that. Oh, and Naraku is evil as homemade sin. I also updated Best Man and is currently(more like struggling) with He Will Be Loved. Neways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.

Author's Response: Sexy C! I know I R&R'd BM. I love that one, but HWBL is my shit, girl. Even if you gotta take your time the wait will be worth it. ^_^



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2006 10:00 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

There is so much drama, it puts the soaps I watch to shame. Much love!



Reviewer: leilachan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2006 1:42 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

this is getting crazy! poor rin, she'll either be broken or pissed off to the point of murder. i hate how guys can be such asses about getting ass. (tho, you make it amusing and fun to read about XD)
and then kagome and inu have made a mess with everything. i hope things work out in the end. the ride getting there will be enjoyable. hope there's more soon.



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2006 7:27 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Really glad u updated!! This is so much like soap opera. Jus like you said!! He better tell her about the mating and they better make up!! Oh and he better starts treating her like sesshy treated rin, except for the jus week thing.I wonder how rin will act when she finds out!^^ Glad for the update, n i'll b waiting for one^^



Reviewer: New Fan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Now how will Sess "burn" for his action towards Rin?? How will Inu "burn"??? Update really soon.



Reviewer: TrinityK   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 7:47 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Kiki!!!! OMG, this story is seriously like watching a sopa opera.... I love it, lol. Awesome chapter. Hate Naraku. Update soon! ;-)



Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 4:04 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Nooo!!! You're still making us wait for the good part!! Whyy???
*cries and sobs* Please get inspired!! In some way... I need to know how this goes with IK!!! *cries harder*
ok *calms down* heh...
Love, IK Obsession



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 9:32 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

This is a great chapter. InuGrrrl, your Boo (Inuyasha) is slow on the uptake. When will he get a clue that Kikyou and Naraku they're using him and he lets his anger get in the way,and who pays for it Kagome, thank Kami for Sesshomaru (I just love fluffy, too). That is my rant for AM again I love this chapter and story. Till next update stay safe and happy ok ;)

Author's Response: D-Gurl!!! I know, my pork chop is slow on the draw :( He knows they want to get at him but he's not sure how or why. Fluffy saves the day! But he's also a cur <.< Glad you enjoyed!! ^_^



Reviewer: c-note   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 9:25 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

let's just hope that kagome sticks around long enough after work to "talk" to inuyasha! better yet, maybe he should tell her he'll explain things after work and she'll wait around. mind reading it so overrated!!!



Reviewer: Jen   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2006 6:38 AM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Sobering Days

Ahh... my morning dose of soap opera. I love it. I think it's hilarious that you were going to let this fic die and now your updating it again. Sometimes you just need the whole soap opera'iness of it.
Your public demands more. Keep it up! :)



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