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Reviewer: razorbladesinner (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

"Except you're a Kagome with ALOT more power now." I'm so reminded of Lion King right now. This story is definately becoming one of my favorites, and oddly enough giving me this sudden urge to watch Gladiator LOL. 



Reviewer: razorbladesinner (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Interesting concept. I've read each of your stories so far and each one is interesting and well written. I love how everything is becoming longer as you gain confidence in your writing abilities. I can't wait to read more of your work. 



Reviewer: angelfire777 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

There aren't many who can write action sequences as well as this. But you are one of them! Your style of writing is top notch as well as entertaining. I thank you for your time and passion because it does show in your use of every word that is written. Take care of you, KiKi



Reviewer: angelfire777 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Heya there: I don't think I have written a review for this awesome story yet! But I will now. I love the fact that it is detailed, action packed and very well-written. I just adore your writing soo much InuGrrl!!! I can't get enough of it! This story is so strong with human emotions, and I like the playfulness between Rin and Sess. I can't wait to read about Inu and Kagome getting rid of Kikyo so they can be together soon. Thank you again and take care of you! Christal 



Reviewer: Sand_Demon (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

YOU ARE EVIL LIKE NARAKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! OR I WILL STEAL INUYASHA'S TETSUSAIGA AND USE BAKURYUU-HA TO BLOW YOU AWAY TO THE LAND WHERE FLOWERS AND SMILIES RULE ALL!!! *shivers*



Reviewer: Sand_Demon (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

THIS IS MY FAVORITE OF ALL OF YOUR STORIES!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON...if you don't...well...to put it bluntly...FUCK YOU! Evil me: she says that to everybody. -.- Me: shut up! *whips out machine gun* Evil Me: O_____________O 



Reviewer: sempai18 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Okay so when is the happy reunion with inuyasha and kagome going to happen.



Reviewer: sempai18 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

You have to update soon. That ending made me sad. 



Reviewer: sempai18 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Very good chapter. PLease update soon. I knew the charm was special. I hate Kikyou. Is Naraku really dead? It seemed too easy. I mean I know Sesshoumaru is powerful but is he truly dead? I'm sad for Kagome. Stupid Inuyasha jumping to conclusions as always. I hate cliffy's so please update soon.



Reviewer: Yash_Lover (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


:( :( :( poor inuyasha keep updating please!!!i love you!!!:) :) 



Reviewer: Yash_Lover (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i love your stories soo much keep writing, i love them they make me cry and laugh so just keep going please? and when people write bad reviews just dont listen to them, k? 



Reviewer: Yash_Lover (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

update update, update!!!!please!!!! i wanna see wat happens!!!!Love you writing!!! 



Reviewer: Caitriona (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Very enjoyable story. Sess is OOC, but I like when he and Inuyasha get along. I think that my favorite two characters are Inuyasha's mom and his warrior friend. Their budding relationship is almost as interesting as Inu/Kag, Sess/Rin, and Sango/Mir. I look forward to reading more soon. Caitriona



Reviewer: Caitriona (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


I like Fatality almost as much as rebound, but for very different reasons. In this I think that you have done a really great job with a very unique storyline. Inu's helplessness is very different in this one, but equally appealing. Sess's relationship with Rin, while just starting, is just as breathtaking. I liked their little reparte in this last chapter. Sango and Miroku have an added twist with the addition of the new slayer. I like that triangle better than the usual one of Sango/Miroku/Miroku's womanizing ways. Kikyou is still a bitch and I dispise her. Last but not least, I'm glad that you put more in with Inu's "parent's" It just seems to crack me up all over the place that they are talking about the same person and neither know about it. I wonder what will happen when they find out. :-) Thanks for writing for us Caitriona 



Reviewer: Caitriona (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Another couple of great chapters. I am glad that Inu's surogate dad, his mom, and the whole "fan damily" have finally gotten together to save Inuyasha. The addition of Kagura is rather interesting to this whole storyline. I wonder how she will play into the final battle that you have planned. Sess's declaration of mate-hood was rather interesting...as was his interest in Rin's saftey. I look forward to reading the final chapters. Thanks for writing this interesting story! Caitriona



Reviewer: PrincessMelissa83 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


I'm so glad that you decided to keep posting publicly! Isn't Muteski (sp?) - the guy training Sango - wasn't that the name of the lord that wanted Sango to marry him in the anime? I can't remember...By the way, I love the chapter. Poor Inu. 



Reviewer: PrincessMelissa83 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Kyaa! OMG! Poor Inuyasha. First all that fighting and now thinking Kagome doesn't want him no more. Poor thing. *squeezes Inu to her* Update quick please????



Reviewer: PrincessAngel (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

She making him do her dirty work. That that I don't even know what to call her calling her a b**** would be a insult to Inu, Sesshy and the whole dog race. On another note Rinny got herself a date with the sexy, hot did I mention sexy Sesshomaru. Go Rin!



Reviewer: PrincessAngel (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Their right Inuyasha is going to be destoried. When he finds out about what Kikyo made his do. Maybe she not as slow as I TOOK HE FOR she's noticing Narkau behavior. When Sesshy finds her she better pray.



Reviewer: angelevie (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


I love this story!! Keep up the good work. It's definately an origanal piece. I know I've never seen one like it!! I love it!



Reviewer: angelevie (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you get it out soon. I'll be waiting!!! 



Reviewer: FallenAngel7891 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

...i take it back. i take it all back!! i shall no longer request Kikyo's head in 'Rebound', she can keep it...i shall require it served here (except scratch the side dish of Bankotsu off the order and put him in a to-go bag, please!). ^__^;; dude...just how do you rattle off three well rounded and very entertaining fictions at a time? i get caught up writing one and a half. wtf? okay...so! awesome characters, interesting gladiator aura about inu (so russel crowe!) and it's Sesshiles to the rescue again! wOoT! i've had many fun
images reading the story as well...it's just to friggin great not to. (kouga carrying bankotsu through the whirlwind...that's to good, i just see this poor kid being whirled around like a hamster in one of those ball things). oh...i need caffine! ::shakes head:: i love the plot, the action is intense and your circle of life is perfect (mother meets 'father', 'father' saves mother, end up having same son anyway...). it's all peachy! the only part that got me was how fast inu fell for Kag. Don't get me wrong...very kawaii...but...i don't know...it felt like it was mising something. i'm glad though to read such a well writen Bankotsu (i swear, he really is a good guy). oh, and you pulled a tear (only one this time) with poor Jake's (LMAO) death. domo arigato for writing this, you are now the only author with three 'to read' stories on my list! bravo!!! hehehe...ciao! 



Reviewer: FallenAngel7891 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I love this story so far. Your a good writer and the amount of detail you use is great. I'm glad Kikyo is dead, I HATE her. I'm anxious to read the next chapter. Keep it up! :)



Reviewer: Broken Dreams (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I really am AMAZED at the beauty of your writing. You do something so amazing with your charcters. Besides, you write such flattering reviews! You are so good to me. ;_; Thank you for writing such a beautiful work of fiction. ~Broken Dreams



Reviewer: Broken Dreams (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Up...date... Or I shall have to take away the nudie posters! ;_; I'm so deepresseeeeed. No good fics out now.



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