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Reviewer: icecream (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


me gives you all 10's forever ^^please update soon the suspense is killing me. i wanna know what happens between rin a sesshy, kagome and inuyasha, miroku and sango and the trainer dude, and who ever else ^^ forgot there names soo please update please *begs*



Reviewer: icecream (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

O.O poor kagome and inuyasha!!!! i feel so sorry for thems.....UPDATE SOON!!!



Reviewer: icecream (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

BANZAIII!!!!!keep up the wonderful work master!!!! *bows* update soon 



Reviewer: icecream (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


keep up the fabulous work!!!and remember to update please.....i am going to keep reading this story forever!!!



Reviewer: icecream (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

WOW!!!! very special keep up the good work i love reading inuaysha fanfics they invade my mind.... yours makes my mind think and enjoy!!! update soon. WEEEEE!!!!!



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Kikyo's a bitch and a hoar. Poor Inuyasha. Love it. Please Update Soon!!! P.S. Love YA!!!!



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Another chapter. Love it. Please Update Soon!!. P.S. Love YA!!! 



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

That was a cute ending, I can't wait til Kagome gets her powers to kick Kikyo's ass. Update Soon Please. P.S. Love YA!!!!!



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

That bitch kikyo better have had mated with Inuyasha, it's only suppose to be Kagome. I'm on edge, update soon please. P.S.Love YA!!!!



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Now Kagome's training will began soon. I can't wait. Please Update Soon. P.S. Love YA!!! 



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Not much to say for this bad ass story. Update Soon Please. P.S. Love YA!!!!



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


What the heck was that. I'll tell you what, it was freaking awesome. Can't Inuyasha realize that Kagome is his. Update Soon Please! P.S. Love YA!!



Reviewer: 123Meme Go (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I'm getting excited, can't wait for the next chapters. Please Update SOON!!! P.S. Love YA!! 



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


plz update soon. im happy that inuyasha finally escaped but im mad that kikyo has him now...that ho. and the fight with the priestess was hard!! i thought she was gonna win tho...i hope he gets free



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


You captivate me!!! I love reading this story! I wish I could write like you. I can write stories but I dont put alot of detail into it but I'm getting better and better at it as I keep writing. I strive to make a story with as much originality as yours because I come up with my own stuff and things like that but sometimes I find myself naming characters similar to something I see on TV or on a video game such as Tekken or something like that. Your work is incredible and it doesnt matter how the story ended. Its always a cliff-hanger to me. So I hope you update soon and blah blah blah :)



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

this is a alternate universe so i think the author just named her with no particular reason. izayoi is actually inuyasha's mother on the show. 



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Sess can be so mean at times... and too bad for Miroku giving up on Sango for the time being. Great update, keep up da good work ;) 



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


i love action and this chapter was full of it. great update :)



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

that was the best fight scene i ever read! update soon! :) 



Reviewer: Angel_4_life (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Aw, the story is almost over...I will sincerely miss it. But oh well...I'll still have The Edge of Seventeen and (when I get around to reading them) Pretty Brown Eyes and Sengoku Medical Centre. Arigato for another wonderful chapter! You are truly gifted in writing fight scenes. 



Reviewer: Angel_4_life (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Yea! You updated! Firstly, I want to say thanks for replying to my email! I know that some authors that get hundreds of reviews won't bother to take the time to reply but I'm glad you did! Arigato! And YEA! Inuyasha and Kagome are back together and stupid Inuyasha has finally realized that Kagome in not Sesshoumaru's intended. Now we just need Rin and Sesshoumaru to make up and Naraku to die and everything will be right in the world! Happy writing!



Reviewer: Zelix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I am thoroughly enjoying this fic, this is so goddamn good... i may not review often, but i will review every few chapters you post, so just know this: Even though i am reviewing for each chapter, i am still reading and will review every now and then, i have you on my favourite author list, so i won't miss the next update. I amy not be reading all your stories, but i am definately reading this one. Once again, this fic is excellent and i hope you keep posting, and i share your hate, i too hate people who attack authors because we try something original instead of "Writing as it should be written" I mean, what sort of bullshit is that? Where does it say that "Write a fiction in this way, or otherwise it is trash"? I don't remember reading that anywhere nor have i ever heard of something equally as ridiculous, so, all i can say to all the people who spout such utter bullshit: Get your fucking heads out of your asses, we write these things however the fuck we want them, if you don't like them, THEN DON'T READ, just ignore them but please, spare us from your 3rd rate, pointless and ridiculous bullshit, you are only making asses, cowards and wankers out of yourselves when you do it, especially when you do it while hiding... keh, bunch of weaklings... Anyway, sorry about that, just keep updating so i can keep reading, enjoying and reviewing!



Reviewer: Zelix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


I'm loving this, i'm just simply LOVING this! Post the next chapters as soon as possible, i'm all fired up for more! This rocks!



Reviewer: Zelix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

not too many people say that about me, so... thanks. But, despite that, thanks also for the quick update, this chapter rocked, in so many different ways that i can't even describe them. It is amazing what a story you've cooked up here, when i first began to read this, i figured it would be somewhat complex but i never expected something like this, i mean, wow... I too am an author, and as an author to another, all i can say is that you are REALLY good at this, really good. I hope to read more soon! 



Reviewer: Zelix (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I inspired you again? Well, fuck me... i'm a regular inspire-o-matic! Insert a quarter to get free inspiration for writing, no refunds however. Hehhhehe, anyway, good thing you updated, it seems like the climax is approaching fast... can't wait for the next chapter, things are now coming full circle nicely and i love this story more and more with each chapter, i've read so many stories, but this is one that sticks to my mind very clearly, which, in plain language means i've VERY impressed. I've written some Inuyasha fics myself, which from the reviews i have received seem to be very good themselves... but, reading something good like this is a rare treat for me, i find many good fics these days, but so many of them are always lacking something... this is one of those stories that have so far left nothing lacking, if you can keep this quality to the end, i will be extremely impressed, i am already impressed with the story, and am eager to see how you will finnish it. I'm glad you wrote something exellent like this, keep it up and update again when you can! 



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