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Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Wow. Miroku is a fucking stalker. He always just happens to be there. ewww CREEPY!!! lol. Poor Inuyasha. I can't wait for Kagome to fix things. :D And you did do a good job, and you know you did, so stop feeling bad.......... Luc 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Woah, I liked this chapter, and you know why... rawr, nice sessh/rin action. I love how they play their game. He's such a foolish male... she will win. I speak as a very happy casualty of the game. heh. Wow, for Ayame to speak to Kagome about such things is surprising, although promised. I don't think such things were as taboo as people imagine them to be back then. Sex always has been prevalent. I'm going to write a nice Kikyo story. We always make her this mega bitch, and although I don't see her being the most comprimising person, I do think she had a heart at one time. I still miss jakotsu. :( How romantic for Shiori. :D I love camping under the stars. And under baby's skirt. Shhh... don't tell her I said that. heh. :D 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


MM deleted ALL of the comments on fan wank with the exception of one rather rude note in which the only thing the guy could point out as being wrong was my spelling. LOL. That's when you know you have the rats cornered, is when the only leg they have to stand on is the one leg, spelling, that it's explained in every other fic I don't care about. ROFL. At least one of them had the balls to contact me, although I am sure they registered with a bum address so they can't see my retort. And since MM deleted all the rest of the reviews and not that one, I requested a removal. I'm sure one of the mods must be a wanker to do such a thing anyway. Can't get away from 'em can ya? Ah well, I'm getting ready to start either looking for a new site, or hosting on a journal. It'd be much easier to get away from those kinds of people. 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Holy cow... I didn't expect him to still be in love with her. She's soooo nasty. But you did have me there with my favorite couple. heh. rawr. :D Luc 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


oops, wrong fic. lol. I wasn't logged in... copying and pasting. :D 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

GROSS. Kikyo+pussy=UNGH. Nasty. But imagining it's your girlfriend is entertaining! :D lol. Rawr... That's right Sessh. Show her who's boss. That was sexy, Kiki. My hot little hentai. ROFL. And w00t for Shiori. I never expected you to hook her up with Kinto in the begining, but I am glad you did. And I'm also not big on sweets. but Sessh read my mind on that one. 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


WOW. POOOOOR Inuyasha! I never knew you'd take it there. My arm is sore. Baby read it before I did, and she was slapping my arm telling to to read the part with Rin and Sesshomaru. I'm guessing she liked it because she was all blushing and giggling. She's really weird. *smack* OW! :( ::hugs Kiki:: I hope Kagome can save Inu soon! And Miroku needs to grow some balls and take his woman instead of moping.



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Thankyou honeybee for saving Yash from skankazoid. I like what Andrea calls her... "The Clay pot". rofl. I love this fic. Thanks for putting so much into it lately. :)



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Awesome as usual, honeybee! I hate the ending of chapters, I was SO into that. I love fatality. :D Kikyo made my stomach turn in this story. literally. But I guess that's not so difficult, with me being sick and all. lol.



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I like where this is going. You're so expressive. I'm so glad you're on a fatality kick. I missed this one. I'm working on soooo many fics right now. I can't wait to release them, but I need to write at least 3 chapters before I release the first. That was my problem with YY. Didn't have enough written ahead of time. Ah well. :D



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Oh don't leave it there! "Something wicked this way comes", I was rolling. Harry Potter, gotta love him, lol. :D "Who are you?" "I am your death". Hell yes. Didn't expect such a quick end to Naraku, and I still don't you'll bring him back. Poor Jakotsu. :( I can't wait to find out more about the charm. :D 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


This is one of my favorites so far. Detailed and action packed. It goes deep. :) My heart is breaking for Inuyasha and Kagome. Will somebody else PLEASE catch the fuck on, and explain it to the bakas? ;) 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Damn, amazing as usual, and I never expect less. Mwah. Luc



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Damn, this is getting good. Oh so many unanswered questions! I can't wait... :)



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


How frustrating. You reel me in then make me wait. You're such a tease... rawr. lol. :) I love your fics, Kiki. I don't know how you do it. It's awesome. Did you get baby's note? She doesn't have her own name, so she just left me logged in to leave you one. XP



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

honey bee, I had to stop and let you know I am reading this. Baby and I have somewhere to go today, but I'm letting her sleep in. I'm glad you talked me back into it, because this is awesome! It's got a definite depth to it that alot of fics ((like mine lol)) lack. Superb, incredible. I love it thus far, and I'm only on chappie 7 :) Your Luc 



Reviewer: Lucient (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

This is the only problem with you writing several stories at once. You leave me free-ballin, lol. I was gonna say hangin', but I thought that'd make you smile. Baby wants to give me a proper good morning (*coughs*) so I will talk to you when we get back from the BR... Luc 



Reviewer: Az (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

gah! here i am catching up on some reading when i stumble across this fic, well...you've done it again! i'm undeniably hooked to this fic, you probably hear this like everyday of your life but did i mention your now oficially my favourite writer? its 2:30am here in australia and i think i've been in front of the computer screen for 4 hours now -sighs- drr...why'd you have to be such a damn good writer?! just kidding, i'm not angry ^_^ but seriously keep up the good work! as long as you keep writing, i'll be there to keep reading - update soon please ^_--



Reviewer: Az (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

you're amazing! four updated stories in a row! i just came from 'Blood & Roses: The One Shots' and figured i'd check this one again and OMG! you updated -cries- i've never been so happy!!! -bows to god..or should i say goddess of fanfics- argh! you simply must update soon i hate it when you leave us in suspense..drr..i'll be moaping until you update -sits patiently- 



Reviewer: Az (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

whaaa!!! you updated again!!! -jumps up and down like psycho maniac- yay!!!! i cant wait till the battle!! -vibrates in excitement- 



Reviewer: Az (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

yay! you updated! and what an awesome update it was! i loved the battlescene, they're pretty hard to write but you did it so well it was almost as if i were watching it on tv! and best of all inuyasha and kagome are finally together yay! well, i eagerly await your next chapter - i hope sess accepts rin, till then! ciao 



Reviewer: littleolmee (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

hi just found your story, it has an interesting start. hope you stay with it! can't wait to see where you take it



Reviewer: jtcl (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I like your story I hope you up date soon



Reviewer: kagome95323 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

hey gurl... not bad..... i like the whole fluffy wanting to save inu instead kill inu LOL luv ya babe 



Reviewer: woo hoo122 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

it was great but its not my favorite of ur fics well it was great =) P.S. CONTINUE WITH BREAKING THE GIRL & SUICIDE RAIN!!!



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