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Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2013 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: Sons of Plunder Pt. 2

I actually feel a little sorry for Kagura. She hated Naraku as much as the others, but she had no search party coming to rescue her, unlike IY. She had to free herself, and by helping IY at the right moment, she gained her independence.



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2013 5:47 PM
Chapter number: 31
Title: Sons of Plunder Pt. 1

I'm enjoying reading this fight scene. So many angles to this makes it very comprehensive. Naraku is going to get owned.



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2013 3:04 PM
Chapter number: 30
Title: Bring The Pain

I feel so bad for Rin and Miroku. All they want is love =( And Rin saying that she didn't think to shield her heart from Sess was sooooo sad. *Sniff* Poor girl. I hope this will be the last of the sadness; I don't think I can take anymore.



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2013 2:45 PM
Chapter number: 29
Title: Before the Storm

Good chapter! An yet so much drama, with Sess being in the center of most of it. Calm down Sess! And though Naraku is evil, he has such a funny sense of humor - saying that IY has been on his 'to do list' lol.



Reviewer: SliverMoonLite   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2013 12:59 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Miroku, the Monk

I love how it us all coming together :)



Reviewer: SliverMoonLite   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 11:33 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Lord of the West

It's nice to see that Sesshomaru cares for his younger brother

DaGrrrl says: Thanks for the kind reviews. I'm happy to see that you're enjoying the story! o/



Reviewer: SliverMoonLite   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 11:27 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Enter Princess Kagome of Shikon Valley

Showing the ugly side of royalty I love it! Makes things a little more interesting on Kagomes side. :)



Reviewer: SliverMoonLite   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2013 11:15 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. Everything was well written, and I appreciate your writing and the way you word scenes. :)



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2013 1:04 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Clairvoyance

I completely forgot about IY's misunderstanding!! That piece of drama always made me a little upset...but then I reached the end of the chapter and I was sooooo happy! Of all the directions Kinto and Shiori could go, they inadvertently choose the one that will reunite the whole group. Now all that's left is to rescue IY =D



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2013 12:44 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Dredge This Wound

LOL I love it that Rin can put Jaken in his place. Poor Jaken, I have a feeling that there will now be two masters who can bully him :P
But having IY turn human complicates matters. How can he fight against Naraku when he is so weak? I'm sure some amazing twist is coming to change all that =)



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2013 12:26 PM
Chapter number: 26
Title: Forsaken

Holy smokes, what an ending! I didn't think it would go that far...but maybe things will even itself out once IY's youkai has "rested". I hope there won't be any more anger from him...



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2013 12:08 PM
Chapter number: 25
Title: The Eve of All II

Oooohhhhh, I didn't see that one coming. I should have known, since Naraku endlessly griped about Kikyou's stupidity, that she would die first. I guess I was expecting Kagome and Kikyou to square off in a future battle, but it looks like it'll be the group against mega-Naraku. I wonder how much trouble he'll be for our group of heroes.



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2013 11:43 AM
Chapter number: 24
Title: The Eve of All

How exciting - things are escalating on all fronts. This is so much fun to read! I don't know what I'm most anxious for - for IY and K to be reunited, for Sess and Rin to end their silly game of one-upping each other and fall in love already, or for Kikyou and Naraku to get their just desserts. So many angles! So many things to look forward to!



Reviewer: animetears4   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2013 1:21 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: To Rescue a Prince

Honestly, i've never been a big fan of Sesshomaru because he was always so mean and cold, but, in this story I can't help but go "dawww" whenever there are parts where he shows he really cares about his little brother and the blossoming of the SessxRin pairing. SessxRin(as an adult) FTW!! X3 hehe I wish Sesshomaru would show his caring side towards his brother more at the end of the manga at least but it did not happen poo :(

Da Grrrl Says: I'm the same way. I've always hated the way RT portrayed the brothers. I always felt that, at some point, they should have gotten along and been caring toward each other since they are the only family they really have. But she chose to play that out the animosity with no evolution, so I take a lot of liberties with my fics because I think brothers, in the end, should behave like brothers and be there for one another when it counts. :) Thanks for the great comments! ^^



Reviewer: Meika   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2013 12:05 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I remember reading this story awhile ago. Didn't exactly forget everything, but I'm so happy to be reading it again :)



Reviewer: Renomaru   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2013 4:14 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: True Friends, True Intentions, True Love

That damn Kikyou lol.



Reviewer: Renomaru   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2013 11:29 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Hidden Meanings

This will always be one of my favorites!

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, thank you so much. I appreciate that! ^^



Reviewer: animetears4   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2013 3:49 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: My Champion

I was first drawn to this story by chance because I loved the fanart title picture. When I read that this story would be like a gladiator type story I was instantly hooked. I have always been always fascinated with history particularly stories about gladiators. I am only a couple of chapters in and as with all Inugrrrl fanfics I am absolutely enjoying it! I am excited to read more. :)

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! The story doesn't remain in the gladiator world (I won't say why since you're still reading), but this is more of an action/adventure story, so there will be plenty of that. :) Thanks for the great review!



Reviewer: daisy069   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2013 10:00 AM
Chapter number: 36
Title: The Beauty of Patchwork

Aww such sweet ending. Thank you for the great story, I really enjoyed reading it

Da Grrrl Says: Thank YOU for all the kind reviews. I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it! ^__^



Reviewer: daisy069   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2013 11:22 PM
Chapter number: 32
Title: Sons of Plunder Pt. 2

wow! This was intense. So much action going on. The tension kept building. I couldn't stop reading. The battle was amazing... and FINALLY that filthy monster is gone!!



Reviewer: daisy069   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2013 8:48 PM
Chapter number: 28
Title: Clairvoyance

I'm glad Rin and Sesshomaru are together now. I like the idea of the bond between Inuyasha and Kagome. Aaaaa, I just want them together so desperately, I hate you Naraku.
I did not expect Kinto and Shiori to run into the group! That was a pleasant surprise :)



Reviewer: daisy069   Signed   [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2013 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Go!

All the sneaking and running and waiting in this chapter had me on the edge. I could just hope everthing turns out well and it did! I'm so glad they escaped. Great chapter. I liked how you maintained the tension till the end



Reviewer: daisy069   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2013 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Perceived Threat

This is so exciting! Sesshomaru met Inuyasha, Thanks for not prolonging this meeting more than necessary. I didn't review in previews chapters but I need to tell you that it is impressing the way you make the fighting scenes. You make it seem so easy to write, hahaha.



Reviewer: daisy069   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2013 11:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I saw the fanart for this and I knew that I wanted to read it! I like the concept of the story and well.. who doesn't enjoy a good AU. This is only the first chapter but I can't wait to see what happens next.



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2013 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 23
Title: Delirium Trigger

Tsk tsk Muteki. The more I read about him, the less I like him. Which is a good thing I suppose, b/c then Sango will favor Miroku. But he's making her life difficult; I feel bad for Sango. It's regrettable that Kirara belongs to Muteki. Maybe there's a way for the cute kitty to chose Sango as her owner?

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for all of the thoughtful reviews! I swear, by the time I finally finished this one, I hated it and just wanted it gone. But seeing it through your eyes has actually made me fond of this story once more. Thank you for that. <3



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