Date: July 03, 2011 9:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
WOW awesome update! I cant believe Kag may be pregant! O.O Poor Souten,i feel bad for her but jeez at last Inu still wants to be friends w/ her! *grumbles*.Great work,ur doin AWESOME lol.Update soon plz? ^_^
Date: July 03, 2011 9:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Thats the KIKI I know! Spreading Drama! I need more Kags though! Jeez Rin age ain't nothing but a number! If ya only knew! Please update.
Date: July 03, 2011 9:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hmmmm, very good. Shit is going down. Poor Kags and Inu....they are gonna get side swiped so hard they won't know what hit them. I am on holding on the brink of sanity as I wait for the next update. Take care princess! Love Neddi
Date: July 03, 2011 9:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Heh, Im with bluezinthos up there, lol. Its like a 50/50 mix here..half's delusional and half isnt. Oh just love your ration of soap in this opera. Wonder what other kinda kuso's gonna hit the fan. Excellent update.
Date: July 03, 2011 9:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kiki Kiki!!! I LOVE ya. You updated!!!! Yes!! I LOVED this chappie. I noticed how the 21 and 14 year old case has the same age dif as Inu and Kags. Coincidence? I don't think so. LoL. Great job!!! I can't wait till the next chap. Is Inu really gonna tell Sess about Kagome? And how will work go? And if it wasn't any surprise, I don't like Kikyou. LoL. You probably knew that though. ;p I can't wait for the next chap!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 9:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Truly awesome. I hope Inu and Kag will pull through after all this crap they went through. If only my teenage years were this dramatic!
Date: July 03, 2011 9:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
You finally updated, huh? well the late updation wuz worth it!! That chapter wuz awesome. Sesshomaru acting every bit the big bro he should be, n discussing about protections n stuff.lol I'm jus glad that he n kags made up, n those suppose 'illegal' postions must have been really something! But everytime something goes good, someone most likely has 2 fuck it up, ne? That...that...BITCH aka Kikyo, jus HAD to have seen inu. I hate her so much! She makes my eyes twitch off it's own accord, both in fics n in the anime it self. Pwease hurry n update this wonderful story! I wanna see wat sesshomaru is gonna chit chat about with Inu l8er...I LOVED IT InuGrrrl!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 9:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
've been looking for this story! i was checking all over mediaminer for it but i couldn't find. but now i know where to look! this is such an awesome story! i really hope you write again soon this is one of my favorites!
Date: July 03, 2011 9:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I was wondering if you were going to bring up the issue of pregnancy. Oh boy knowing their luck they probably already have a bun in the oven. I love that Seshy has no problem with the age thing as long as both partners consent to have sex, but what is up with Rin? She is really going to keel over when she finds out about her sister. And damn that Kikyo and Kouga if they mess up such a hot relationship, Ill be sooooo pissed.
Date: July 03, 2011 9:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Ooh, Something tells me it aint gonna be cake...I know u, ur gonna fuck it up for em arent u? noooooo!! *cries*(PS: Sorry for the language :D) Love, IK Obsession
Date: July 03, 2011 9:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh oh what a great chapter I love the friction between everyone.. I guess that's just my mood.. but I gotta say I hope Naraku does something to put Kikiyo in her place and fast.. that bitch needs a few pegs knocked off.. forget knockin' them down they need to come off completely.. All the emotions your stories put me through! It's great I love it..
Date: July 03, 2011 9:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
NOOOOO!!! Who the hell knocked out my Inuyasha!!!lol, yes..MY Inuyasha. That chap. wuz nothing short of phenomenal! I like Inu's vybez. Poor souten, when your hearts broken, you think real stupid things,ne? Pwease jus hurry n get someone to luv. My hatred for kikyo jus keeps on growing! I jus wish I cud kill her; hands down. Kags gonna be a speaker? Inu promises to take her somewhere in the building?!? That would be so kewl, especially if they almost get caught, kag will sure feel like a high skewl student again.Inuyasha is so sweet! That part with him cleaning her cunt n kissing is wuz so KAWAII!!!! I neva saw that one comeing. I wuz jumping up n down like some kinna gymnastic, after seeing an updation. I had dreams of what your next updation would be like( that crazy huh??). I LOVED IT KIKI!!! You know wat I always say; HURRY UP N UPDATE!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 9:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
amn it! it was that bastard kouga that knocked yash out wasn't it? will kagome come out and save her honey, thus proving once and for all kouga is a clueless ass? and that lemon. holy freakin' shit! and i read it at work. fans self madly. that boy needs to calm down a little, she can break! naraku having a conscience is nice, after all the shit he was put through i hope he helps out yash and kags. they aren't doing anything wrong (of course there is the whole grade thing...) as rin and sesshy will work through with their court case. you left me waiting for more!
Date: July 03, 2011 9:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OH MY GAWD!!! It was Kouga I'm sure of it. That fucker. Why do I get the feeling that no one will know that Inuyasha got knocked thefuckout until he's late for his guy time w/ Sessh? Nice to see that Naraku's not a completely evil soul less piece of crap (at least in this story). Kikyou however needs to get her face kicked in. Souten is stupid but everyone is stupid at 15 (or however old she is). This chapter was freaking awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next (but don't rush on my part just take your time and keep us in suspense if you have to... don't want the WB monster to rear its ugly head and have you freaking out the way you were over SMC).
Date: July 03, 2011 9:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow...intense lemon...poor Kagome :D I know that it was Koga that knocked Inuyasha out. I know it! Unless it is Bankotsu but I'm pretty sure that he learned his lesson last time! Ooh, Inuyasha is one crazy puppy! Doing that to Kagome when his teacher is on the phone!!! The teacher is going to be suspicious...Guest speaker...it'll be interesting to see how that turns out! Souten...how can she be so blind? After someone treats you like that...they just SUDDENLY decide to be nice to you? Souten is sooooo stupid. I felt sorry for her before but now she's as bad as Kikyo! And the part with the older couple in the store was beautiful. Maybe Kagome can learn from them. Update this amazing piece of art soon! Happy Writing! -Christina
Date: July 03, 2011 9:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kiki!!!! Damn, what a hot lemon. Man, that ending was... I think I know who it is!!!! But I'll wait until the next chap to devide. ;-) This chapter was really good. And yup, you were correct. It was long, and I enjoyed it. Thank you for all the time you take to write these wonderful chapters for us. Your the best!!! Again, I hope you have a grand time at the baseball game and the concert. Have a blast girl!!! :-)
Date: July 03, 2011 9:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I am not even going to guess who laid hands on his fine ass. But whoever it was better pay dearly. Well we can all assume you are feeling back to yourself once again, ne? You are writing the best angst in what seems like forever. This is almost as bad as when Inuyasha kicked Kouga's ass and Kagome didn't defend their love. Kiki, when is Sesshomaru going to get involved and kick Kouga's ass. You need to get my man involved....hello!! Don't leave my man out.....I need him. WANT HIM...MUST HAVE HIM!! ***chanting Sesshy's name*** Hmmm...well I will wait until the next chapter.....you done yet?? Uggg...alright.........love ya! Neddi
Date: July 03, 2011 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
You revised? I must admit, this is a great chapter, lol. but awexcellent story.
Date: July 03, 2011 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Who da hell did dat?!? I feel gangsta now so some bitch is in trouble. Whoes da bitch who hit em! I swear Im gonna front! Please update.
Date: July 03, 2011 9:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG NOOO!! ok who the hell knocked out Inu?! grrr..bastards they will PAY!!! *RAWR* lol.Great update, love this story SO MUCH, u go Grrrl!! Update soon 'k? Onegai?? *puppy dog eyes*
Date: July 03, 2011 9:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oi Hentai Partner in crime, thank you so much for the dedication...noone has EVER done that for me. Thank You, Thank You, Thank You...And Thank you for such a wonderful story to try and do any art for. Without it, I wouldnt have been so inspired to do them to begin with. I simply adore 'Edge', but there isnt one story you've writen that I HAVEN'T liked. I love them all. As for this chap: it was great. Loved the lemon. You really know how to write em. Sometimes I wonder if you have the Kama Sutra (is that the name,lol) there to get all those positions...(cuz frankly, I dunno if I could ever bend like that, lmao) Makes me wonder to why Kagome was bleeding. Could mean other things as well...hmmm...intersting. But will wait it out to see who did the dasterly deed and knocked Inu out. I do have a question tho: was Kags pussy shaved or not? Lmao...You know me, when I dunno something, I ask....
Date: July 03, 2011 9:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I read your message this morning and I'm so glad that I didn't read this chapter or I really would have been Late. Just a bit of Citrus my ass. It was so good I had to read it over again. Naraku is a dick and a mighty damn good one. You also took me by surprise with the end of it. You just couldn't play nice could you now we have to wait and see what happens next. Great Job Kiki.
Date: July 03, 2011 9:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
hat was an evil ending KiKi! Love your lemons!!! Great chapter and can't wait to find out more. Take care of you.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Super-Great-Awesome chpater!! I LOVE this story( and not just bc of all the sex that goes on!!)Many Thanks for the Update!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
first off.. anime lady pimp lmfao!! hahahaha. as for the chap, well cliffy, actually... so mean! who did it? kouga? bankotsu? kikyou? lol you never know. she's a crazy bitch. as for kags giney(?) you know you had some good sex when there is (just alittle) blood involved. so sweet that inu does the aftercare. he'd better! ^_^ he made da mess. XD dammit, f*ck kikyou to hell turining poor sweet souten into a inuyasha hater. *breaks kikyou over knee like a twig* *feels better*