Date: July 03, 2011 7:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I LOVED the beginning of this latest chapter, it was just so intense Inu's eyes boring into Kag's. I LOVED it. I'm glad Miroku and Inu got things straightened out. I'll feel bad for Sango when she finds out Inu's true feelings, but I just LOVE Inu/Kag too much. I hope to see them more in the next chapter, love your work, and I can't wait till the next chapter. P.S. I loved the whole Rin and Sesh thing, the beginning of another romance I'm sure. Perhaps a hate to love thing? A pair of sisters and brothers together, one pair wanting each other but can't have each other, and the next a pair annoyed at each other, and they can have each other. What are the odds I tell ya... lol. Again GREAT update, and I can't wait till the next. When will Inu tell Sango how he feels, in the next chappie perhaps? LOL... ; )
Date: July 03, 2011 7:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
They could have a double wedding. A 2 sisters fetting married to 2 brothers. That would be so cute. And once again what is Inuyasha going to do about Sango. I know he sees it now that she likes him. He needs to tell her that he doesn't like her in that way and that Miroku does.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This is so good. Sorry I didnt review before, but since that new thing is in affect, I cant get signed in to do a review most of the time. But since am able now, just had to say how much Im really enjoying you story. So, thanx again and cant wait for the next update.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Great chappie,damn naraku and kikyou grrr i hate those bitches *wishes she could strangle them right now*.Update soon pwease??? *gives puppy dog eyes*
Date: July 03, 2011 7:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This is an original great story. I was nervous on how this would play out with Inuyasha only being 16, but your doing a great job! I even like the whole Sango having a crush on Inuyasha. I've never seen that before where Inuyasah wasn't interested. Which I like. Keep up the good work!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This fic is so different -well, with the same characters--and I am really enjoying it! I am almost shamelessly awaiting a lemon between a consenting minor and willing adult!! Well, of course only if that minor is Inu!! Great chapters!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
It's interesting how you can flip flop between the "real" world of jobs and the fun and back-biting of highschool. Ouch, Rin's ever the fire cracker, and Sesshomaru is ever the arrogant ass. memoriessss... rofl. What happens next kiki?! I know! You go to bed and rest, damnit.... Luc
Date: July 03, 2011 7:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I LOVED this chapter. I'm dying in anticipation of what's to come, literally, lol... I can't wait for the game, that should be fun, with Kag and hey maybe she'll see Inu right? *wink wink*. Okay I just wanted to say GREAT update as always, and I can't wait till the next. Prepare Sango for when the truth comes...
Date: July 03, 2011 7:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
still not knowing what to think about sango's inu-infatuation. it's a bit different since miro's not constantly grabbing and groping her, then getting smacked. ^_^ i suppose inu is the chick magnet in this one. eww, kikyou and naraku?! what are your plans woman?! ;
Date: July 03, 2011 7:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
HAHA!!! Damn MM to hell for not informing me about this marvelous update... and whoot whoot to Kiki! Who is the girl that rox this site!? YOU ARE YOU ARE!!! HAHA... *Laughs nervously* Damn it all... I ain't no fucking cheerleader!? Ahem... pardon my french but this is starting to piss me off... damn cursed f-ing site... I swear they have it in for me... *Grumbles* LMAO!!! I LOVED THE WHOLE LOCKER SCENE!!! I TOTALLY DID THAT ONCE TO ONE OF MY FRIEND'S BOYFRIENDS!!!! THAT BASTARD HAD IT COMING THE LITTLE PLAYER!!!! HAHAH... of course I meant the boyfriend not Naraku... though he had it soming too... CAN YOU IMAGINE THAT!? 5'2 me pinning a 6 freakin foot moronic guy to a locker like that!!! HAHAH!!!! He really needed a good ass kickin!!! WHOOOOO!!!!!! SUUUUUGGGGGAAAARRRRR RUUUUUULLLLLLEEEEESSSSS!!!!!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
the whole Naraku/ Kikyou thing had me gagging, but on the whole it was a good read. Keep it up yo.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
very lovely story, but I'm just curious...will this be ending up a Inu/Kag or Inu/San, haha i'm rooting for Kag but I can't quite tell where your going in relationship to this
Date: July 03, 2011 7:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hello there: I appreciate the fast updates on your stories. This was another great chapter! Take care of you. Your fan, Christal
Date: July 03, 2011 7:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Once again I LOVED this chapter, I love this whole one update a day. I can just come home go line, check my mail, and see you've updated. Then I can read it to cap off an exhausting day. You really are my favorite author on MM, lol. Now, I understand you don't want to answer questions and all, but I'm dying to read the whole game scene. And Inu and Kag weren't really together in this chappie, so maybe I'll see them in the next much more. Anyways GREAT chapter, I LOVEd it, as always, and I can't wait till the next update... : )
Date: July 03, 2011 7:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Ugh, you just had to stop right there, didn't you?!? ;_; Anyway, I hope you update again soon... I'm really enjoying this story! ^^
Date: July 03, 2011 7:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hot Damn this is good! Just love how you update pretty quick too. Cant wait to see where you take the characters tho. Should be interesting to say the least.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I just read this chapter again, and I just had to review again. It was so good, it made me smile it was so cute, and everything else that is good. I really love this story, okay I'm done, lol. Now I really, really can't wait for the next chapter. I'm excited...
Date: July 03, 2011 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Evil cliffie! Agh! You've got to be my favorite writer when it comes to Inu fanfiction, reallly.
Date: July 03, 2011 3:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
ROFL Kagome got busted. HAHAHAHAA! :D Ooh... Sessh and Rin. I can't wait to see what happens there. Kick his ass baby! ::thump:: Not mine. :( lol.
Date: July 03, 2011 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMFG!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!! I READ YOUR FIC AT HOME AND AT SCHOOL!!!! Though there are a lot of people staring at me right now cuz I just shouted:BUSTED in my high school library... I should be eating lunch not reading fics. HAHA food is for squares... InuGrrrl's fics are for meh!!! HEHEHE~~~
Date: July 03, 2011 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
what a great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love Rin's "NoShit" attitude
Date: July 03, 2011 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
'nother great chap. still waiting to see where you're gonna go with our obsessions. you hold all of the cards here and i am slowly going crazy!! @_@
Date: July 03, 2011 3:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kags and Inu alone in the park, Rin and Sess alone at home..... what happens when they are alone? Bet Inu has a sexy smirk after watching Kags dancing... "I'm lovin' it!"
Date: July 03, 2011 3:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I abso-fucking-lutly love this story...hell....ANY story by you please continue to grace us with your wonderful writing and update ill b waiting!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 3:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow! This was a powerful chapter and very well-written. The incest thing is a twist. Can't wait till the next chapter. Take care