Date: July 02, 2011 6:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
sango is going off the deep end. but, she doesn't know the history behind inu and naraku, so she can't be blamed. i guess. he can be smooth and manipulative. i swear this was one of the funnniest chaps you have ever written! i was rollin' during the whole classroom scene! bank is too much! i am still worried about izayoi and i hope that she will be alright. she atleast needs someone to share her pain with. tai is going to be furious when he finds out.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Damn Sango either your hats to tight or the idea of lil' Miroku in Kaguras mouth gots you jacked up to.Sure the idea of being with the bad guy seems fun but this is Naraku , Not The Phantom Thief Kid from Case Closed (Detective Conan(sp?) .Theres one Big different one wheres Purple eye shadow and one doesnt.Please update .Love your work.I missed Kags.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Damn, great chapter. Love when you update so quickly. Hope your Christmas was a good one.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank, you, for blessing us all with a new chpt. Personally, i was a bit hopin' for some inu/kags time but sango and miroku are fine too. whats been wrong with inu's mommy( frowns heartbreakingly)? i hope she gets better. i know that miroku can have his own slow moments every now and again but why else would a friend girl get pissed after hearing he got a bj from some other bitch( think miro, think!!) WARNING: Sango, naraku may be hot, but girl, he is BAD ASS NEWS!!! oh girl, watch ya self!! inu knows, girl, he knows. WEll, anyway thank you once again for the brand spankin' new chpt.^-^P.S. don't be shy of giving us some more lemons(wink, wink) in the future if all hell don't break loose too soon( i know you will)^_^!!!!! love ya, Boop
Date: July 02, 2011 6:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh it's 'bout to be some drama! I love this chapter because it was very funny and I needed cheering up for today. My class is just like that. Rowdy and shit for no reason. Anyways, I wish you luck and prosperity. ^_^!
Date: July 02, 2011 6:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
KiKi!!! Another update so quick? Your the best, lol. I thought Inu was gonna confront Kags in this chappie, maybe next one. And what's up with Sango, and *gasp* Naraku? I can't wait till the next update, luv ya, and hope you had a great Christmas. May you have a happy new year too!!! ;-) *hugs and kisses* -Trini
Date: July 02, 2011 6:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I love your story! Ever since I started reading your stories I've always avoided this one. The reason why I did this is because there was this movie I saw called "Edge of Seventeen," I don't know if you've seen it but it's about this boy who's on this journey of self-discovery because he realizes he's gay. I thought the movie was pretty stupid, so I assumed that your story would be similar to that stupid shit movie. I finally got the balls to read the story when I got a little curious and read ch.21. It was awesome and I read all of Edge of Seventeen from ch.1-21. I'm sorry I underestimated you. I should have expected a lot more from you. Usually I wouldn't make such a hasty judgement about an author I like, but the hate and loathing I have from that movie over-fucking-whelmed me. I love your story and I can't wait for another update.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Naraku should stay away from her! She's crazy to be going after InuYasha like this. It's kind of pathetic. I'm on borderline about Kagura and Miroku. She seems like a nice enough girl(In THIS fic) but I guess I'm so used to SanxMiro. I guess a change in a change in the Sango and Miroku is always together thing is good. I'm glad that Kagome will tell Yash even though it may hurt the relationship. Just hope that he understands the whole "trust" thing. Um....that's all I have to say about the chapter and what the reviewer below me said about the movie "Edge of Seventeen". I have seen it and didn't really bother to connect your story with it. Anyways, I wish you luck and propserity ^_^
Date: July 02, 2011 6:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
You said Sessh had violet eyes, and then green. Thought I'd let you know. Don't feel bad, I do it all the time, lol. :D Wow, Miroku wants to have his cake and eat it too. What an asshole. And yes, baby says I must mention that I was alot like him at one time. oops. :D Wow, I can't believe Naraku just doesn't really care. Sounds like he's kind of mature. I can't wait to see what happens between Kagome and Inu! heh. :D And Sesshomaru has alot of ass kissing to do. I'm glad I don't often make my baby that mad. heh.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hey great chapter, I'm glad Kagome is going to tell Inuyasha, I mean it will bring some drama, but its all for the better...right? lol..and wow Naraku has heart?? haha JK..anyways again great chapter. Update Soon!
Date: July 02, 2011 6:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow Kiki, the next chapter. Has Naraku finally dropped the bag o' dirt? Has he gone soft? Well who would've thought, lol. He seemed sincere with Snago, but I don't know... And Kagome telling Inu, please step back, for fireworks are sure to ensue. And not the good kind, I just know it. Well I can't wait for the next chapter, and this was a great update!!! P.S. Have a Happy New Year!!! ;-) –Trini
Date: July 02, 2011 6:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
They are trying to use Sango like that. Sesshy is sorry. He should tell Inuyasha he sorry in his on way of course. Rin will probably forgive him because she can she his true emotions now. I hope Inu not to mad when Kagome tells him the true. I just hope everything works out alright.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
hi, ive enjoyed ur fanfiction a lot. ive never read anything like that b4^^! bravo my dear, and please update soon, happy new year.
Date: July 02, 2011 6:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
sorry that im so late to review. ya know, life and all. ^.^ happy new year to you and your family!! i liked this chap. it sets the stage for forgiveness(rin/sessh), betrayal(duh), and scandal(miro/kagura). i am ready as hell for the next chap. it's going to be good. i can tell!
Date: July 02, 2011 6:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
DAMN MM TO HELL!!! WHERE THE FUCK ARE MY NOTIFICATIONS YOU SSTUPID PIECE OF SHIT!??? Oopss... hey there y'all... hehe... Kiki, gomen about the , yet again, late review... PC has been pissin me off. Also... I'm kinda havin writers block for HBL... stupid stupid me... but am currently working on a new fic. YAY!!! Say hello to Tao Moons in the near future! Luv you always, Shar Shar
Date: July 02, 2011 6:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This story is so great!! I even like how naraku is not all bad! I hope Kagome's honesty doesn't turn on her!
Date: July 02, 2011 6:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I love this story!!! Kouga & Kikyo hmmmmmm... interesting. I can't wait to see a new chappy, so plse update soon. :)
Date: July 02, 2011 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG!! i love this story!! it has 2 b 1 of the most intricatly woven ones u've ever written!! i like it how every1 has feelings for every1 else around them that r uncertain, the love triangles r awesome ^_^ duz inu hav a bit more of a thing 4 sango?? i thought it would b strange but i'm actually kinda fond of the pairing, even tho i kno that they wont end up together /_ well its kinda a tease but its 1 i like so pleez answer soon with an update ^_--
Date: July 02, 2011 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
AHH i needed to update this fic(yet another one of ur fics that i ADORE)...so..i have a question,WHAT is up with Sango and..ahem..Naraku? oh jeez bad vibes lol.well great chapter,cant wait to read more.Keep up the good work kiki! But dont work TOO hard lol ^-^
Date: July 02, 2011 5:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I forgive sango. lol. somethings had to be said and done, right? i am still wondering if kagome will be honest with inu about the date. he is such a sweetie in this fic. scary. j/k i keep thinking he will lose it and explode at some point. good job! even tho you claim to have a bit of w.b., it was awesome. you're so modest. if only all of our w.b's looked as "bad" as yours. : P
Date: July 02, 2011 5:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG i cant stand the suspense,i swear every story of yours that you'v wrote i fell in love with! lol.great chapter update soon ^_^
Date: July 02, 2011 5:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
So Narkau is falling for Sango. But he can't have he. Her and Miroku belong together 4ever. Inuyasha just stuck in the middle of all this. And he already has his own problems. Like when he finds out about Kagome going on the date. Why does Souten know it's Kagome. When she knew what she was wearing and she fits the description.
Date: July 02, 2011 5:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I was actually going to comment on that, but your AN beat me to it. You're so much more well rounded. You're becoming a better writer. I still have trouble with plot holes and shit, but I'm working on it. Anyway, I like Naraku's character in this fiction. He's pretty funny, and he's a normal guy.
Date: July 02, 2011 5:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I actaully think Naraku is a cool guy now. The change of character when he played the song showed something to me and rarely people do that. I liked this chapter because it seemed real. The three way argument was real and I felt like I've been in them before. The way Miroku and Yash reacted tpwards Sango being with Naraku was even real. Kinda cute even. Sess and Rin getting together in this is a plus and the fact that he wants a normal realationship with Yash is like sugar on top. Anyways, great chap and good luck.
Date: July 02, 2011 5:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kiki!!! Hi. LoL. I loved this update. Inuyahsa's life is very hectic, I see. Souten got the first wind of another girl. I wonder how she'll react when she finds out it was her *gasp* own older cousin, lol. And Naraku is starting to like Sango, ey? Who would've thought. You sort of turned him from a gross mean guy to a nicer, caring guy. Nice. Well I can't wait for the next I/K filled chapter, ttyl, bye!!! -Trini ;-)