Date: July 02, 2011 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
AAHHH!!!!! NOTIFICATIONS SUCK ASS!!!! Damn SITE AND THEIR LOUSY.... things... anywho, awesome chap (s) as always... I was so freakin behind!!! AH!!!! Oh yeah... dunno if you got the notification... Tao Moons is up! Enjoy!
Date: July 02, 2011 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
the way you dealt out the emotions in this chap was so awesome. using the song tied everyone together in such a way that it couldn't have been more perfect. the characters all have their own specific issues, but they all want the same thing in the end..."i am human, and i need to be loved". you are so good. you make everything in each chap flow so well. the inu/kag moment was so f'n steamy. there isn't Anyone else that can write "it" like you do. that's the truth. i hope you never stop writing. i would read your work even if it weren't fanfiction. sorry for my embarassing display of love and devotion for your writing. later. : )
Date: July 02, 2011 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
WOW, this is by far one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and I'm becoming borderline obsessed. The way you write the sceanes with Kag/Inu are so steemy. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope InuYasha can forgive her, afterall, she was doing it for him, and their relationship... right.
Date: July 02, 2011 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I know I'm bad..I hardly ever write a review which is not very supportive. So I have to make this exception and leave one!!You are an absolutely wonderful writer.!! I have really enjoyed many of your stories and I'd hate to see you give up on this one. I think there's so much more you can do with it. Also, I just discovered the IYFan Guild and if you're not nominated yet, you should be!! Keep up the great work!! I look forward to the next chapters
Date: July 02, 2011 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
okay i know i don't review and all. but just to let you know i do read your chapters and i think every one of them is great. okay so i admit in the begging of this story i thought it was kinda bad but thats just because it was starting to sound like a sango inuyasha fic. but then it got good just like all your other stories and made me hold onto my seat because the suspension was that intense. well i hope you know i love your writing and i've read most of your stories except for those fanfics about rin and sesshy. so yeah...don't end this story coz then i'll be soo sad :[
Date: July 02, 2011 5:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
poor,poor, kaggy. she got caught. seriously though she was bull-shittin', but inu's just hurting right. miroku;s dumb abd sango's...well..desperate. kikyo's still a bitch and naraku finally developed a conscience. well, that's it. my two cents. -love ya, Boop
Date: July 02, 2011 5:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
oh my gosh. i can't believe you thought about stopping this fic. that makes me sad. all of your fics are my faves. i would hate to missout on even one of them. i still miss "an urban fairytale". i know you said that you wanted to tweak it a bit, so i can wait. ^_^ but i remember it. i enjoyed this chap and was honored to have it dedicated to me. i'm so not worthy. ha. everything i say in my reviews, i mean it, and i didn't expect to have a dedication. i was shocked. thank you! as for this chap, i knew it was coming, but it didn't stop the hurt. holy crap, inu was pissed (with reason)! she shouldn't have chickened out. man, does kouga have bad timing or what!? you really had me there for a second with the whole "pleasing" inu at the beginning! you turned that sh*t around real quick. XD good job!!
Date: July 02, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
What!?!?!Come on InuYasha think about what your saying (starts to cry).It was just n-nothing.Danm,a cliffy!Please update.
Date: July 02, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
hey I love this story! poor kagome though but I guess its for the best huh. At least she won't have to worry about going to jail.Please update real soon please. your fan darksaint
Date: July 02, 2011 5:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
haha I thank Leila too, becuz this story is just to good to stop, and also your an amazing writer, but of course we all have our own reasons to things and I respect that if you had to stop. Well I loved this chapter, its sad how Inu found out, and had this weird feeling it would end like that, well I can only hopw for a new chapter to see what happens next in this lil story!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I hope you don't drop the fic, because I've enjoyed reading it, even if I have been lazy about reviewing. I really hope you don't drop it now because they're at an awful point. It'll get better, surely. Inu doesn;t deserve to be meaner. But, on a bright note, Sesshy is getting a little nicer, or guiltier, whichever works. I look forward to seeing more soon. Ja ne!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Dropping?!?!? You would actually want to drop this fic? On purpose? I dont understand. This is a really great story. And you are one fanfuckingtastic writter. And me? I know I dont review much, cause I suck at it. I always read, but am not good at reviewing cause I come off looking like or sounding like a baka. But on rare occasions I do open my big mouth, like now. I know its up to you alone, but I hope you dont let any of your stories drop. It would be such a shame. You are oh so talented like a few other authors I read on here. Like I said before, you're one fan-fucking-tastic writter.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
BTW, you do write some of the best damned lemons Ive come across in a while. Made me have to go for the cold shower and M+Ms again, dammit! WHEW!!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Two updates in one day! Thanks! After a *very* long day at work (damn kids and damn subs!) I get to come home and read not one, but two lemons. Woo hoo! Kagome got what she had coming to her with Inuyasha's reaction. It's nice to see that Sess is trying to make amends to Inuyasha. Izayoi is definitely going to hurt her family if she doesn't tell them. There are so many questions left to answer in this story you have to finish it (like all the stories I'm addicted to it). Great chapters! Keep up the great work!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I knew Kogua was going to get Kagome caught. She should have told him in the first place.Sesshy sounds so sad and what that pictured said was really sad. Everybody is having problems. Nobody's happy at least not yet. Hopefully!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh my god how can you think about leaving this story unfinished, it rocks! I have to say thank god for leila-chan and her reviews. If she's the reason you keep this story going I have to say to her to keep reviewing.Please don't quit.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow..you did another great chapter...please keep up the great work..I want to read it to the very end...I wish I had the talent to write the stories that you do, you have such a nack...please..please..please finish... ^_^
Date: July 02, 2011 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Please don't leave us hanging like this. You can't drop this. It is so good... poor InuYasha, my heart breaks for him. And kags... wow. I hope things can work out... please, please, please continue. Your writing totally plays to the emotions of the soul. It touchs even the hardest heart.You have talent, lots of it.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I'm reviewing for chapter 24 then I'll R&R chapter 25. First off, That was so beautiful. I love how you protrayed everybody's current problems in one sweep. Especially Sess's problem. I almost cried. San&Miro, well, we know who fucked that up. Kag&inu, I'm scard for them. After Kag tells him, if she does, I don't know what'll happen. Naraku, I think he's a decent guy and should get his life back on track. Also, the lemon was good. "I want to sink into like the Titatic" I laughed my ass off. I love your little sayings. They're so good. Sxy_Cap
Date: July 02, 2011 4:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hi, I'm here to review chapter 25 like I said and all I have to say is DAYUM! I couldn't believe that! It was orchestrated sooo well,too. The building up from when he heard the answer machine and got a garment out the closet. Then he even gave Kag a chance to redeem herself and she lied AGAIN. Then he played that message and pulled out that dress. This should be a movie because I wanted to see Kagome's face on that one....priceless.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Why would want to leave us hagging like that,I mean for me this is the best story I'v read,might not sound like much but I didn't realy like to read as much before i read this story(stupid but true).
Date: July 02, 2011 4:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OOOOOOMMMMMMMMMFFFFFFFFFGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOW!! wowowowowowowoooww!!! you have no idea how...WOW i reacted when i read that lemon. so incedibly hot i wanted to squee. lmfao. WOW hun. FANTASTIC job!!!! O.O and the rest of the chapter....*cwies* the parts that killed me the most was the part with miroku and sess. ESPECIALLY sess....:( :( ok....i'm off to read the sad chapter now...breakup!! NOOOOOOOOOO!!! *cwies some more*
Date: July 02, 2011 4:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMMMMMMGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!! that's the SECOND consecutive time u've made me start my review with that!!!! AAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGHHHH!!! *screams* that was the such a fucking COLD, HARRSSHH break up! O.O omg! THEY HAVE TO GET BACK TOGETHER! THEY HAAAAVVEEEE TOOOO!!! *cwies* my eyes were SOOOO wide as i read this chapter!! the end damn near killed me. x_x and compliments on the lime!! OMG. hawt!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
WHAT THE FUCK THEY NEED TO GET BACK TOGETGER SOON PZ HAVE THEME MAKE UP AND DONT HOLD OFF ON IT FOR A LONG TIME THATS SO ANOYING AND IN YA STORY HAVE MORE PROBLEMS BESIDE THERE RELATIONSHIP KIKIO AND NARUKO. SO HUTTY UP MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Date: July 02, 2011 4:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Great chappie.Plz tell me they arent OVER?!!! omg im gonna cry now!.plz update soon b/c i wanna find out what happens! *puppy dog eyes*