Date: July 02, 2011 4:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
KiKi!!! Those last 2 chappies were great. You were thinking about dropping this fic? Why? Well... I'm glad you decided not to, it's really good, and a favorite. The previous chapter was fluff/lemon. This one was... Drama city, lol. I can't wait for the next update, but I feel bad for Inu cus Kag's lied straight through her teeth. That sucks. TTYL!!! ;-) -Trini
Date: July 02, 2011 4:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
HOLY SHIT! A SMITHS FAN! Holy fucking shit. I'm falling in love woth you more and more every minute! Anyhow, very nice chapter, as always.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
i like this story alot. ive been reading it since the first chap but haven't had time to actual review. sorry abou that. but i will start now. i notice that all of your stories seem to have Kagome the one to have hurt Inuyasha and everyone is against her and care for Inuyasha. well at least "Rebound and this one does. don't get me wrong i think your stories are all great and fantastic plus original but it hurst to know that Kagome is the one always doing wrong. just wanted you to consider maybe next time it should be Inuyasha who needs to ask for Kagome's forgivness. just noticed that alot of stories (not just yours) seem to have Kagome the bad one. anyways since you left it at a BIG cliff hanger im holding you to it that you will update when you can next. thanks so much for the read!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Why on earth would you drop this fic?? This is an incredible read! I absolutely HAVE to know how this all ends up--especially now with Kagome and her big f*ck up! Please don't abandon this fic--I like the idea of 'forbidden fruit' and I want to see how you work this all out. I swear, all the good Inu/Kag fics are just drying up or completely disappearing *so sad* Please, PLEase, PLEASE!!!! finish this??.......ummm,yah--update when you can:D PS--DAMN!! Sure do love your lemons--can you write 'em or what??!!.....*grumbles off wandering aimlessly*...need a cold shower AND a box of chocolates.......
Date: July 02, 2011 4:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I randomly started reading this, and not until I got to chapter 22 did I notice the author. I then realized that I've read a few of your other stories and they're all just so amazing. I love your writings. This is my favorite so far, it's really amazing. Please don't let it die! You simply MUST finish it. You don't want to disappoint all of your drooling fans!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow, that was awesome! Its so good to read a 'good' lemon. I forgot how masterful you are at that. Poor Inu. I feel so sorry for him. Hate to say it but maybe its for the best, at least until he comes of age. Those two are playing with fire and he doesn't seem to realize that. If they get caught,he's not the one who will get in trouble. She is taking all the risks in their 'relationship'. Oh well, enough of that. I bow down to you oh queen of lemon writers. I've been reading another fic thats very good, its just the lemons (don't know why she even bothers to call them lemons) are weak. I feel refreshed by reading your style again. So please update soon. I love it!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This is fic is fantastic!! I just love this story, you write awesomely well! I just read the 25 chapters and it's really great. Poor Inu Yasha though =( I think the law is so unfair! Where's the problem if they love each other?! Why should the age matters? I mean, my parents have 6 years of difference... the only difference was that they met when they were both adult... why wait before the younger is adult before having an adventure? I think the law is so ridiculous about this!! >.< It's not as if Kagome actually raped Inu Yasha... (er, that sentence sounds weird O.o) well anyway. I think this is pretty unfair for what's happening to Sango and Miroku too =( Your characters are a bit OOC (particularly Sesshoumaru =p) but the story is really great so I'll forgive you for this =P I really enjoy reading this story so far, and I hope you'll update soon
Date: July 02, 2011 4:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT SIGHNING IN BUT i just had to write an update!!! I am loveing it!!! please update. i hope that inu and kags get it all worked out!!! i am hopeing things turn around big time for sango and miro. i dont like the naraku thing..but if i didnt have dislikes i dont know what id have!!! see ya!!!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Again a really good chapter. I think teos is your best fanfic so far. I seems a lot more mature then some of your earlier ones. Continue with this great work and hopefully update soon.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
What!Yasha what the hells your problem.It was just a little lie.I do it all the time to my boo .He wouldn't know if it bit him in the ass.He makes up for his stupidty in other ways. But,does he even think about all she is giving up.She was just trying not to blow his cover.Please update.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I simply love how you wrote this chapter.I was worried that kagome was going to show on her knees at Inuyashas door just begging for forgiveness. I am so glad she didn't Please update soon I want to know what will happen next please your fan Darksaint
Date: July 02, 2011 4:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I'm starting to like Naraku now and that is just crazy for me. I like San and Narkau as a couple in this fic even though it's not very conventional. I'm not picky with couples like most people. As long as the attraction is believable then I'm all for it. I'd rather be with Miro anyways. Miroku fan for life! Oh, and InuYasha, I feel sorry for him with his broken heart and all, but damn Kag fucked that shit up herself despite what Miroku said. Again sess wanting to be a big brother is so cute as well as his little thing with Rin. NEways, I rambled on enough. Luck,Prosperity, and all that.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Thank goodness for Miroku, where would Inuyasha be without him? lol (don't answer that) haha, newho this was another great chapter...and I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
Date: July 02, 2011 4:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Miroku got him some wisdom. Now where was that when he started fucking Kagura. I really hope Sango ends with Mirkou but if Naraku intensions are good and not bad I guess I can be happy for them. But Kikyo got stuff againist him and is using him in a way that at the end Sango may end up hurt. But at least she has Inuyasha and Mirkou there to help her pick up the pieces.Poor Kagome she thought going out with Kogua was the right thing at the time. Sesshy sixth sense thing is cool. I need one of those.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Aww, let me guess who those two sets of eyes belong to. Miroku and Kikyo. I know I've said this before, but poor Miroku. His heart's breaking and I'm not sure he knows hoe to stop it. I didn't like Naraku in the beginning, but now when I see him with Sango, I'm not too sure about that anymore. He's starting to seem like a nice enough guy. Kikyo's evil, nothing more to say there. I can't wait to see how Kag's and Inu act when they see each other again. And what about Souten? Okay Kiki, great chapter update, I LOVED it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. ;-) -Trini
Date: July 02, 2011 4:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
The world is a vampire... that song is so good for youth. It's so fucking angsty. I love where the fic is headed, although I know you're ass up in brokeback mountain, japan style, lol. You're doing so well kiki. :) I have to be at work soon. UNGH.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
inu is such a wonderful, Ideal friend. It's so hard to find one like him. i am so happy that sess has taken the first step towards mending his relationship with inu. *is proud* i hope things work out there. i swear, talk about mixed feelings towards naraku. i can't shake off my ingrained hatred for him. yet, you are peeling off the layers of disgust one by one. HOW?! magic? anyway, i just want to hug miro. he always has a hard time with sango. but, he's the type that if he didn't have to work hard to "get" her, she wouldn't be worth it. he's just a late bloomer in the love(real love)department. miro jr. is used to being in charge. time to move aside, jr. ^_^ i have problems. i promise to get help.
Date: July 02, 2011 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow, never before had I read something so similar to this. And I'm amazed that you made Inuyasha younger instead of Kagome. I love it, and hope they get back together soon, such a shame that she did lie. Update soon. Love and huggles Laura
Date: July 02, 2011 3:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
O.O omg i totally did not review before! *hangs her head in shame* but great chap. ^_^ i am totally loving miroku right now...*sighs happily* maybe there's hope!! :D and nope. no anger or whatever when i read the sango part. (especially because of the THING with thou-knowest-of-whom-i-speak) kwim?? LMFAO. luuuuvin it babe!! more soon! :)
Date: July 02, 2011 3:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
ok Im trying to catch up..I just started reading it and am on ch.5, and so far I LOVE IT! I want to read the rest, but its 2:00!! The time went by so fast! Oh this is so great!! I LOVE IT!!
Date: July 02, 2011 3:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
DAMN DAMN DAMN DAMN DAMN!!!! *Starts Crying* I hate MM!!! Why do you contiune to torture me!!! NEED NOTIFICATIONS DAMMIT!!!! KIKI!!! I MISS THEE!!! I have been grounded for ages and haven't been too cheery to update fics... and of course, everytime I search up your fics, they don't exist!!! AHHH!!!! NEED DAILY DOSAGE OF TEO17!!! AHHHHH!!!! WAAHHH!!!! GOMEN FOR THE LATE LATE LATE REVIEW!!! BUT HOLY SHIT! IT WAS SO WHAT I WANTED!!! NEEDED THE WHOLE LEMONY GOODNESS RIGHT ABOUT NOW!!! *SQUEES* *Huggles* also read your A/N... you were gonna give up this fic???? *Cries* I feel so left out!!! I hate it when I can't help my friends out!!! *Cries Frantically* Damnit... gotta go... stupid stupid sleepover!!! *HUGGLES* I love you Kiki, and thank you for hangin in there! If you wanna talk, you know how to reach me! Luv ya sissy! ----Shar AKA KAGAGA NO SUBABA
Date: July 02, 2011 3:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Heya! omg I love your story so far! its really keeping my attencion, keep up the good work and keep writing more cuz im itchin to read more! ^_^
Date: July 02, 2011 3:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
awwwwww i want you 2 update already!!! U are an amazing writer and you put so much detail into your story and its just...wow! I love it...keep up the good work. PS. I hope every thing works out!!!! ^_^
Date: July 02, 2011 3:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hello how are u am afun of ur stories and i will be no fan if u dont write soon and i will also cry i like gamble, edge of seventeen, sengoku Medical center, rebound, forgive me anything review soon or else i will cry ok good bye
Date: July 02, 2011 3:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Yes i would have to say uber angsty! *cries* great chappie,depressing but good.update soon b/c i wanna find out what happens.they need to get back together *sniffles*