Date: September 01, 2006 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter Two
OMFG Sesshomaru's going with Kikyo knowing his little brother is in love with her! That is soo cold.(Sorry for the spoil for anyone that reads the reviews first) Plus, Kag and Yash's bickering is too cute! Now off to Chapter 3.
Author's Response: Sexy C!! What up, girl?! I sooo have plans to read the rest of Secret Window and I think you added a second chap to comple -gotta hit that up too. Woot for good reading material this weekend. Oh, & yeah, girl, ain't Sess a trip? Shit like that happens a lot too!
Date: September 01, 2006 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter Five
That was so good!!!!I was listening to Ceremony by New Order while reding this and it kind of fit. I love this story. I think it's on of your best!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love New Order, but I haven't heard that one. *off to download*
Date: September 01, 2006 9:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One
Yay! New story! Great start and I hate to see Yash so whipped over Kikyo. But he's trying to learn the guitar for her and that's just plain hott!
Date: September 01, 2006 9:49 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter Five
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Date: September 01, 2006 3:54 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter Five
Omg. I have no words. lawd. like none at all...gah, I have yet to stop crying. *sniffles* You know I love you. ^-^ but i'm telling you anyway. i wuff j00!! *cheekies* :) This was so sosososo beautiful nee-chan. lol. ^-^ *happy flails* =P I'm so giddy now. and crying. lawd. LOL!! ^-^ *shimmies* Thank you sooooo much.
Author's Response: Chibi-kins!!! I'm so happy you liked it! You know fluff isn't my strong point <.< but I wanted to give you something I knew you'd like *cheekies* SQUEE! We celebrate Chibi-nee-chan on Sunday!
Date: September 01, 2006 3:05 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter Five
OMG...that was just sooo....sooo, FMS that was awesome Onna!!!
....I haven't cried like that reading a fic in a along while now, but you DEFINATLY managed to do it with this one.
It was just so beautiful.
And Happy Birthday Chibi....
Author's Response: Lawd, you did not cry! :-D I'm glad you liked it though, Onna. Writing smutless material wasn't as hard as I thought it would be. This one made me get in touch with my fluffier side (Yeah, like I have one!).
Date: September 01, 2006 2:01 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter Five
You made me cry! Honest to goodness! I can't believe it! I mean, I get teary eyed sometimes but I can't REMEMBER the last time I actually CRIED while READING something!!! It was at the part when Inuyasha had finished his song and was confessing his love to the entire train station. I love this soooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps you to death for writing it* Chibi is so lucky to have such a great birthday present. Thank you sooooooooooo much for writing it! (And as such, giving me something great to read!) It was five chapters but it didn't feel rushed at all. I hope that you'll forgive me for only writing one review for the five chapters. Know that I REALLY loved it. Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!
(Definitely my favourite of your short stories and on my top ten stories written by Kiki list)
Author's Response: 'Tina!!!! *huggles* Welcome back, chica!
Glad you liked it and I can't believe you, Deb, and Chibi. This was a "no tears" kinda fic, lol. BUT if it moved y'all, I'm awfully proud!
Date: September 01, 2006 10:33 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter Four
yes, now i am a review whore, i just have to keep giving...and you just had to drop the bomb and stop...i'm sending chibi after you! next chappie is gonna be awesome though, confessions, dealing with feelings, birthday surprises, making kicking sesshie's ass then kikyou's. i do have to say as far as heart clenching, gut wrenching angst this one had the least but is still lovely in its struggles.
Date: September 01, 2006 10:29 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter Four
This is A.W.E.S.O.M.E. Im totally in love with it....now on to the next one....:P
Date: September 01, 2006 10:12 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter Three
kiki...that's cruel. now you're just setting him up to hurt her! cute and fluffy yes, but are we going to have to send chibi out after you? okay one more chappie up so one more to go...sweet fluffiness, so kawaii.
Date: September 01, 2006 10:04 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter Four
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
Date: September 01, 2006 9:54 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter Two
ohhh she's boinking the older brother behind the little brother's back and they both think they are doing him a favor by not telling him. why do people always do that? onward...
Date: September 01, 2006 9:46 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One
i come out of hiding and you have a new fic! total awesomeness. and inu is so boyishly pathetic. sigh. those are the kinds of boys that are easy to ignore. the pathetically whipped when you haven't even had the chance to break out the leather. on to the next chappie!
Date: September 01, 2006 6:43 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter Four
Ahhh young love. It's sweet, it's tragic, it's cute. I like the story so far, can't wait to read the ending.
Date: September 01, 2006 6:16 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One
Hooray I'm the first reviewer (but that's what happens when I can't sleep). Good start so far. It's different reading PG fiction from you (not bad just different) :)