[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 12:11 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
im so glad kagome gets another chance! and she thinks she can just forget about inu, lol!
and damm, is that naraku making an appearance now??? im guessing he is what ties kagura to bank?
Author's Response: Sheena!!! You may be right >.> or wrong <.< I can't give it away yet!! Thanks for teh review!
Date: May 12, 2007 12:05 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Kagome better kick his ass..Show him what he's missing..Your stories always get better and better it makes me jealous..lol
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and nope, Kags isn't a pushover in this one ^_^
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 11:15 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Omg! I loved the scene with Miroku and InuYasha in the kitchen, it was so funny. InuYasha as a Martha, I could never ever see that one coming, hehe. Those two are so mean towards each other but you wrote it so wonderfully that even if they are mean, they’re showing their love towards one another. Even though it was short, the conversation about Sango and Miroku was quite amusing.
I feel so sorry for how Rin’s past was. It sounded horrible and I wouldn’t have guessed that’s why she does drugs. I’m not sure if Sesshomaru would be good for Kagura, but I think it would be better for the over all picture for Sesshomaru to be with Rin. It would help her a lot and would get her through all the tough spots she hits. Though.. If Rin *An addict* was going to be with Sesshomaru *Major dealer,* that might be a bad thing… then she wouldn’t stop the addiction. So many ways, but Kohaku treats Rin nice so I’m pretty happy with either couple.
I’m totally guessing since I’m not sure who it could be.. Bankotsu trying to scare or be… Shippo’s ‘dream,’ hehe, it sounds a little… weird. But I hope he doesn’t get himself killed. Shippo’s barely in any of the fics that you write. Though.. I can see why you wouldn’t have him in since he’s young and he doesn’t really have much of a love interest besides Kagome and it’s only a mommy son love. Though in this you’re portraying him as actually love and jealousy. Which is different than what other authors would do, though you don’t follow what others do since you make them your own story :)
Kagome’s going to perform again?! She truly is a great show lady even if she just sings. But when InuYasha and Kagome get together in the next chapter or the chapter after that… it’s going to be huge! I can’t wait!! ^-^. I’m sure it will be cute. Though I hate the fact that InuYasha will be using Kagome to find out about Kagura’s connection to Bankotsu etc. I could just see the downfall right there. Kagome will be even more crushed when she finds out! It will.. Break the girl. Hopefully Kagome *even though she said she wouldn’t* doesn’t go to drugs for comfort like Rin. It would break Kagura’s heart.
So much happened in this chapter but it was done beautifully. Keep up the good work ^^
Author's Response: Nat!!! this was the most awesome review! Thanks so much for really telling me what you thought! You made really good points and I think my scenes between Miroku and InuYasha are my faves. They just play off of each other so naturally, but like you said, they're brothers without the blood. They'd do anything for the other.
Kagome is a great one, but so is Rin, and even Kagura. I like all three women and that's a first for me. They each have a story, and for once, I like all of their stories, Sango's too.
I'm supa happy that you liked it. Some days I just *feel* an update and it flows well and this was one of those times. I just wish the flow came sooner! I hate taking so long with updates!
Shippo, you're right. I almost never write him, but I don't really like Shippo. I know I've said that before, lol. But I don't. So he's scarcely used, but in this, he plays a big part and I like what I made of him. And thanks for noticing that I don't follow the patterns of other writers. I have my own way of doing things (as you see) and I'm prone to OOC-ness, but who wants to read them the same way all the time? :P I'm okay with being the odd one out!
Date: May 12, 2007 10:21 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
I hate to say this but I think I'm okay if Sesshy will be ended up with Kagura in this week. She seems quite nice with Kagome.
Poor Rin, but yeah she's such a... (too rude to say) in this fic. I love Rin because she's very sweet and innocent. But sometimes, too sweet, innocent or even weak Rin in some fanfics really makes me sick. I think beside her sweetness, Rin is a tough girl (and a little bit rebelious sometimes). That's why I can't decide whether I love Rin or not in this fic. This Rin is quite complicated. Nice job...
Update soon! I can't wait to see what happen next in this fic. Especially to see who is going to be Sesshy's mate.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, I agree, most Rins in fics are WAY too chirpy, follow sessie w/o question at all, and have no backbone. I tend to write tough Rins that know how to stand up for themselves. I think she deserves something more than the same ol' thing ^_^
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 8:14 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Awesome update, KiKi! Can't wait to read more. Take care of you.
Author's Response: Christal! <33 How are you?! I'm glad you liked the chappie and thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 8:13 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Good chapter. After all the events in this chapter, I REALLY can't wait until Inuyasha and Kagome see each other again. I hope she gives him hell, especially now that Sesshomaru has Yash pursuing her for ulterior motives. YES, I know that it will start out that way and Yash will VERY soon be caught up, but.....it's for the principle of it all. He was a real jerk to her, LOL. And Inuyasha wouldn't be happy with a weak female anyway. He needs somebody to give as good as she gets. And he has just met his match.
As for Rin and Kohaku....I feel so sorry for him. And now knowing Rin's back-story, I feel bad for her as well. But, she is just such a whore! Not just because she sells her body sometimes for drugs, but also because of how she uses those who try to be kind to her. Kohaku is a dealer, so my sympathy for him is limited, but he really doesn't deserve what Rin is doing to him. Sesshomaru could see straight through Rin, and Kagura is a better match for him in this story anyway, but even Kohaku could do better as well. Rin is what her awful world made her, but it just doesn't seem like she can be saved.
Author's Response: LMAO! Girl, that made me laugh my ASS off! "But she is just such a whore!" HAHAHAHA!!!! I hollered! That's awesome <333 You're right though (as usual). She's a total ho-bag that is a product of a wasteland. She doesn't know how to love and care because she's never had it, so she can't recognize it when she sees it. Sess is love <3 but he's a bastard, as is my Yasha. But Yasha doesn't want to use kags, he wants nothing to do with her at all. But what can he do? There are so many plot points I need to cover, but it's coming along. As always, thanks for the awesome review!!! I always look forward to them.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2007 8:59 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
I love this story,another wonderful job by you..Inuyasha is going to feel like an Asshat when he finds out Kagomes not a nobody i'm going to love that..One more thing I hope Kagome kicks his ass around sounds like he needs it...
[Report This]Date: April 23, 2007 2:17 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Seems like everybody's got an agenda here, now all that's to be seen is if they work out to all their favors. Inuyasha's ego has just been taken down a peg, good for Kagome, but I'm guessing it won't be a pretty picture for her later on. Love the story as I said before and I'll be looking for an update soon.
[Report This]Date: April 18, 2007 7:42 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Yasha isn't very nice. I think that he needs a "friend" to talk to. :P Poor guy, he has a lot of issues. But I loved the interaction!! We must have some more InuKag-goodness. ^_^ I really don't know what to write, only that I love the MirSan (A LOT! You did an incredible job with them!) and the InuKag. :) And I like that little spark you have between Sess and Kagura. :P
Happy Writing!
[Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 3:16 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Kiki!! Oh wow I loved this chapter. Writers block whatever... lol. I loved the Miroku and Sango part about the mushroom and him feeding her. I can't stop laughing, hehe. Ohhh but the part where Kagome and InuYasha fight was well done but it was sad... aww Poor Kagome. -_- I feel for her. Hopefully something great will come out of the next chapter. I can't wait ^^ Thank you!!
Author's Response: Nat! Thanks for the review and I'm happy you liked the Miro/San part. I always think of you when I pen them because I know how much you like that pairing. Hopefully you'll enjoy their side story too!
[Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 2:13 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
I don't normally give a review unless I think the story is really great and damnit this one is as were all your stories I burned out my eyeballs reading on my laptop this past weekend.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much! I appreciate hearing from you. It encourages me to continue when I know someone is enjoying what I put out. ^_^
[Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 6:02 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Yeah... so I totally meant to review this yesterday but, of course, I never freaking got the chance to (that whole being out of the house the whole day and then H stealing the computer first thing when we got back...)
Anyhow! I liked this update! It wasn't action packed but they don't all have to be and it gave us some good insight as to what's going down. Miroku's trying not to be a hentai (until Sango trusts him enough to let him into her pants) and we got a little bit of background on Sango. And now two people have made the connection between Kagome and Suga. What Inuyasha does next will be *very* interesting. :)
PS it didn't suck :)
Author's Response: LOL! Jen, you and H are such a trip. "Warcrack" haha! Yesh, this chap was laid back, but I had to get a few plans out there and whatnot. We'll get a lot more I/K action with the next and we'll revisit Rin, so that should be interesting. Sooo glad it didn't suck :P
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
*silly grin!!!!!!!!!* Oi! I love this so much! Glad u updated and am even happier that is was THIS fic! Once again, Inu made me feel sorry for kags but i aint mad at him, i jus fell harder for him!! If it's not over by a long shot! Ii'm guessing he's gonna seek her out, n kami i hope its now---when kags alone at the bedtime story. This chappter gave out alot of my questions i had... and am grateful for that...I hope the writers block would stay away from you!!!! *Slaps writer's block!* lol.
Oi, guess what!! I'm writing my first oneshot!!! *squee* Yes, oneshot since exams is next month, i wanna leave a lil parting fic for the readers...I hope you check it out when i upload it^_^
Author's Response: Oi Girl!! A oneshot?? I better see it posted at ED! And thanks for the review. The block has finally let up and I'm going to try to get as much done as possible! <33
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 4:13 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
miroku is in over his head, for sure... so is yash. they have no idea about those two ladies. ^_^ as for sess, we'll see if his plan works and he can keep his feelings out of the 'equation'. i'm glad you're back, kiki, and i can honestly say that this didn't seem like a chap fresh from a writers block at all. i enjoyed it and i'm looking forward to the nest update. hope you're doing well!!! t.c.
Author's Response: Court!! <333 I've had such bad block and I'm only now getting it back. I must e-mail you later and abuse you with bad chappies :P
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 1:38 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
I still lmao bout the 'shrooms', I love em, and you hate em, lol. *can see onna making icky face now...* Lol.. Huggzzzz
Author's Response: LMAO!!!! And I still won't eat 'em!
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 12:30 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
wow! thats one explosive ending. poor kagome, that would suck. i love sango being a community leader! that fits her so well.
Author's Response: I felt bad for Kagome too, but look at him! He's so worth it, lmao!
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 9:13 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Good chapter....and good to see you back. The plot of this story is terrific. You have so much going on, and I can't wait to see how it all plays out. Oh, MAN, Kagome has her work cut out for her. Inuyasha was HORRIBLE to her at the end of this chapter. But, Kagome didn't back down. I'm glad that she has a backbone, because she is going to need it dealing with him, lol. I also liked the excuse Inuyasha gave himself for seeking her out again at the end. All he needed was a reason....and Kagome gave his pride just enough to do that when she hung up on him. This is going to be fun, sexy,......and angsty (if that's a word, lol). I look forward to reading it.
Author's Response: Ms. Goddess! Glad to hear from you. I always look forward to your reviews -you always seem to catch the little things! You're absolutely right! InuYasha needed an excuse to seek her out and Kagome's tweak at his ego was the perfect reason.
I love that you caught that :P There is a lot going on with this plot and I have my work cut out for me, but I hope to make it a bumpy ride! ^_^
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 5:11 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Are you going to make sesshy and kagura a couple in this fic?
Nooo!!!
In fact, I kinda miss your sesshy/rin fic.
Lately, you never make any sesshy/rin fic anymore T_T
Come on! Give some love to this fandom please...
Author's Response: Hmm, since no one knows who will end up with Sessie, I shant spoil it ^^ But on a sess/rin note, I really only have one fic and a oneshot on them. I don't really write Sessie stories (sowwy) but I do try to include them in my Inu/Kags fics. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 2:13 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Well, I think this is an awesome update! I loved the ending because of how you had made Kagome a strong person. I can't wait to read more of this story. Take care of you!
Author's Response: Christal! Thank you for the review. I'm happy that you like it! <3
[Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 12:49 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Kikiiii-neechan!!!!!!
Sesshie x Kagura!!!!! -->for now at least *_* I LUUUUV THEEM TOGETHERR!!! thanks for write some "thing" between them!! XD and OMG!!! all the plot is getting so complicated!!! and 10 points to Kaggie´s call!! jajjaa Inu needs to learn a lesson and think about the "future" --if there´s wny for them in this story! ajajaja I luv it!!! glad u came from the "block"
hugsss!!!
Author's Response: Marrrrria-neechan! Yesh, block is finally clearing up and I have a chap coming that you guys won't believe, lol. But that's all I'm gonna say! Glad you liked this one <33
[Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Wow!! Fast happenings! They hate each other already ^_^ This is progressing awesomely, I totally love it! Can't wait for the next!!
Author's Response: Thanks, girly! I'm glad you liked it. That first chap after such long block is always the hardest!
[Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 9:21 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Hey! You were really starting to worry me InuGrrrl, lol I was getting depressed with the no updates, but it was very good 4 u to take a breather. Everyone needs one now and then.
In any case, wonderful chapter. You know, I know you like the Rin Sess pairing, but for once, I really really hope Kagura and Sess get together, not that my opinions have any say but, *wink* you know.
heh, well anyway, I'm glad that you took a break because sometimes it worries me the way you can write non-stop. Loved this, and thank you so much for updating.
Trust me, your stories are simply amazing.
toodles!
Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks for such an encouraging review! I was starting to worry myself too. I've never had block this bad or this long and it was really bothering me. But I think we're getting back on track 0.~ I'll let you in on a secret *looks around* I'm not that much of a sess/rin fan, lol. >.> But don't tell anyone! More updates are on the way!
[Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Damn, I sure as hell hope it haint over by any shot, lol. That was awesome My Onna... I love the characterization ya have goin with them all. Everyone is right on, its great. Wonder what Yash is gonna do now. He was pissed. And loved the bit bout the sword, and especially the 'shrooms', I lmao. Then Bank and Koga. He haint be trusting Bank much, especially with how it went down with Suko. And I really like Bank as a character, I like his attitude. Too bad hes a bad guy, lol. Awesome chap, Onna. Huggzz...
Author's Response: My Onna!! I used your "shrooms" lmao. We've had that same conversation so much, I just had to honor it! :P I'm very happy that you liked the chap and Bank is <.< a bad man, lol.
[Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 8:41 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
Well, let's count off the ironies...
Inu needs to be kept away from guns before he keeps his word and shoots himself :P
Sesshomaru wants to keep things platonic with Kagura, enough said.
And Sango thinks Miroku is good and wholesom...
People can be pretty stupid sometimes. Heh, great chapter, I laughed.
Author's Response: True irony is that all of these people are connected to each other and don't know it. :P Oi, who says Sessie wants to be platonic! 0.~
[Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Starts With One
The plot thickens =X I'm loving Miroku in this! He's gonna get bitch slapped when Sango finds out about him ._. Big time. I'm liking Bankotsu, too. Ain't he too cool for school =p The last scene was great! I can't wait to see them argue more! XD!! I love the whole tone you set with this fic and the dodgy way each main man is looking at their respective gals. Sesshoumadude is using Kagura for money, Miroku is using Sango for a good screw. InuYasha is just being a self-pitying bitch =P All I can say is I can't wait to see how all the shit goes down once the cat comes out of the bag >=) Inu and Kagome are really interesting in this one! It's going to be fun to see how their relationship develops. Writing block, my ass! Great chapter. Damn, wench, you got me hooked on this story too ; ;
Author's Response: LOL, only you. Give InuYasha a break. Wouldn't you be jacked up after watching your mate, the mama of your baby, killed right before your eyes and you couldn't stop it? That's devastating for anyone and it's not a hurt you can shake so easily. Now aside for defending my Yasha <.< Miroku is so much fun. I usually ignore him >.< but I really like him in this -lil' perv and I love Bank too <33 I'm happy this one grabs ya, and more is coming (finally). Now point ^_^