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Reviewer: TLH   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 12:50 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

"Ciao Bella", "Mon Chere". Is Sesshy fluent in Italian, French, Japanese, Spanish, English? LOL! That would be really cool. I like the interaction you have between Sesshy and Kagura. It's very very well done. Suga is going to go apologize to Inuyasha? Oooh, excitement! I'm hopping up and down over here so hurry and update! ^_^ It's going to be so good!

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Tina, I swear, for a moment I had NO idea who you were, lmao. TLH!!! HAHAHAHA!!!! Yesh, Kags is gonna apologize and I swear I'm already working on the next chappie :P



Reviewer: cwillia   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 2:19 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Love this story as I said before. Inu is in sooo much pain I feel sorry for him. I HOPE that soon the healing will begin for him, he needs Kagome. Will Rin ever clean up? She also needs some deep healing but will it be Sesshomaru to do the healing. I still can't tell which way the path will lead in the Kagura, Sess, Rin triangle because I do see a problem with those three arising. Can't wait for the next chapter, Read ya later.



Reviewer: Inusbabe   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 2:22 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Ahhh rats I was hoping for an update on FMA2. When you first posted this story and sent the summary it didn't sound like something I would like, but with the lack of other sites updating I decided to read this and I am enjoying it. I am wondering how will they meet again.



Reviewer: bigfanofiykag   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 1:49 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Hi Grrrl,

Poor InuYasha. Poor Kagome. Both feel like crap after that first kiss, yet both could not get enough. Man, this is like one of my favorites and I can tell that a lot more is in store for our favorite couple. Please update soon. Take care.



Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 12:14 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

great update, i really didnt expect kags to get it so harsh, but i guess thats what happens...



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 2:45 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Another good chapter. Inuyasha's mental torure is really hard to read...poor guy. Even while he's castigating himself, he is still attracted to Kagome...which makes it even worse in his eyes. It's going to be really hard for him to let go of the past.....but angst is definitely your niche. So, even though I'll probably blubber more than once before this one's over (darn it!!!!), I still look forward to reading it, LOL.



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 9:07 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Great chapter InuGrrrl, I feel so bad for "our" pork chop. But I think he will come around (lol) can't wait for Sesshomaru and Kagura get together. Till next update "Ciao Bella"



Reviewer: IK Obsession   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

I love it!! This story is amazing, and I can't wait to see what happens when IY and Kag meet again!!
Love, IK



Reviewer: Nat   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 3:04 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Nooooo... don't stop at such a good part. I'm so hooked. *Sighs.* I'll have to wait for the next one. I hope it's soon though! lol.



Reviewer: Mariapalitos68   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 1:58 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

wiii!! Kiki-neechan!! maybe is not for too long but.. SEXXHIE x KAGURA!!! I´m so excited!!! XDDD
hehehehe love the way all things r going!!! u made my day! hugs!

Author's Response: Maria-neechan!!! I'm glad you liked this installment. I haven't updated it on so long >.< But I know what I want for the next and as soonas I finish the KOR update I'm going to work on it.



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 8:03 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

dang! am the 100th AGAIN!!!

Author's Response: I oughta re-name you Kagome100! ^_^



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 8:01 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Well, well, well!! Inu, inu, inu!! I love your writing style girl!! I feel sorry for inu... it mus b real hard on him, n even more so that one onna can make him forget so easily! Iif kagome do go n appologize, i'm wondering what'll happed...well inu throw a tantrum, or will more go on...dum dum dum dum!!! lol. Miroku is whipped n he aint kno it!! I'm still wondering this sesshy part. Is it a sesshy/rin or kagura?? too much signals kiki...but you arent gonna tell me who, ne?

Well then...amma leave you with a big thank you and head out^_~ Ja

Author's Response: Nope, I'm not gonna tell you what happens with Sessie. But I'll say this, he has a hard time up ahead, lol. Thanks for the review, girly. I'm happy that you liked it.



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 7:15 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Oh yea... you better believe it, lol. Oh Sessy, what you gettin yourself into now? Miroku off to see bout gettin him some trim, lol...and poor Inu-Fucking-Yasha is rather beside himself.

Now... what was it Kagome was gonna say to Yash? hehehe....

Great update Onna... Hugzzz...

Author's Response: LMAOOOOOO! Trim?! OMG, it's been years since I've heard that expression, lmao. Thanks for the review, Maru! We're chuggin' along, ne?



Reviewer: Jen   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 5:59 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

Interesting... Poor Inuyasha. He's just so heartbroken. We've definitely got some plot thickening going on with Miroku attending the anti-drug rally to get close to Sango, Sesshomaru going on a date with Kagura, and Kagome about to try to get in touch with Inuyasha...it's getting interesting (not that it wasn't before....)

Author's Response: Yeah, the lines are getting drawn now and the next chap will explore the relationships a bit more (but of course we're gonna touch on the dark side). I need to update this more because I have a lot of bases to cover for each character, but hopefully it will be a fun ride! ^^



Reviewer: axel720   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 3:27 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Bleach the Shame

*snatches first review* Yeah, i'm reading this one, too -.- You pulled me in. *holds up hands in surrender* I LOVED the scene at the beginning with InuYasha. Awesome. Powerful. I could smell the ashes.

Author's Response: Tee hee! Thanks, Ax ^^ I'm glad you liked it. I think I liked Inu's part the best too. The next chap has a lot of bases to cover so I wanted to take it easy with this one. But I'm chuggin' along >.<



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

ok...i jus re-read this...i forgot about this...O.O Am ashamed...*hits ma self* bad, bad bubbles!! -_- Plz update...have u started the next chap? *groans* Ish ok if that's a no no cuz you have been sick, ne? So...*hugs* Get all better n better n BETTER!!



Reviewer: Teh weeeeebie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 2:52 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

aaaaah that was hot. :P i loooooved it!!! squee. i'm loving all the different characters and personas. it's sooo good nee-chan! moremore!! ^-^

Author's Response: Weeeeebie! *cheekies* Thanks for the review. I forgot you "adopted" this one, lol.



Reviewer: 'Tina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 1:05 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

*giggles* Rin is so funny. Absolutely...not. :P Way to fight for your man! Or Kagura's man! Or...whatever. I'm confused who is going to end up with Sesshoumaru. Don't like being confused!!!

And that InuKag interaction was hot as hell. I loved it! It was everything I expected and so much more! B-E-A-utiful! And the kiss was soooo spicy. *licks lips*

Ooooh, Kaggie is in TROUBLE! *laughs* I am interested in how Inu and Kag are going to meet again...

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Tina! Happy you liked it but nope.... not gonna tell ya who sessie ends up with ^_^ You shall be confoolzed for awhile lonegr! 0.~



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 3:37 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Oh that was great. Loved the final piece Onna: stunning!

Inu's got it bad, and don't even realize it yet, or rather he does, and not want to accept it...He should remember, The Nile is a river you know where, lol.

Now what all kindsa hell is Kagome gonna catch for little diddy? Damn...All in all, it was a very eventful night, Ne?

Great chap My Onna... again: Stunning... Huggzz :P

Author's Response: Onnamaru!!! Glad you liked it and thanks so much for always being my voice of reason. If it weren't for you, I would have trashed this chappie. You rawk! <3 Huggzzzz



Reviewer: Raven   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 11:41 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Daaaaaaaayuuuuummmmm, grrrl!!!!! That was hot. I was listenting to the song while I was reading this. OMG I loved it. Jeez, you captured Inuyasha's feelings during and after the kiss really well. The song just set everything off. Ahh, I wonder what happened to envogue. They were great. I can only imagine what song you're going do to go with their lemon. Please pick a good one. It's kind of redundant to say that since you always do!!! Great chap!

Author's Response: Raven ^_^ Thanks for the review! I'm happy you liked the song. I almost changed it at the last minute, but I stuck it out. I'll definitely try to find good music for the lemon. *digs in my R&B playlist* On a side note, I have no idea what happened to that group. One of them left, then everything fell apart =\



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

*jumps around happily* I am so glad you updated on this!!

I mean...My god!! Kagome did that?! Aww, her first kiss. I feel sorry for how inu went on after the kiss. I'd be so embarrased and wanna crawl into a hole n never return.

Imagine if kagura didnt interrup them, or if they were in a bedroom! Fire works would of ignite for sure!!

lUV THE UPDATE KIKI...and....I'll be waiting for ALOT more from you! =)

Author's Response: Hey Miss Thang! ^^ I'm happy you liked it. Makes me feel a lot better because I wasn't that happy with it. maybe I should just relax and go with the flow, lol. You should get another update this week.



Reviewer: Nat   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 4:07 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

That was so unexpected, gosh Kagome just went for the kill! Great chapter Kiki! Especially the ending with Rin. It seems like she's got something up her sleeve in the next chapter. Hopefully Kagura goes easy on Kagome. 10/10

Author's Response: Nat! Glad you liked it. I know the kiss was sudden and <.< kinda fast, but sometimes you just *know* lol.



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 2:50 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Oooh, Hot. Hot. Hot. Throwing in some En Vogue. I know this song was on an old movie. I think it was called Glamour or Sparkle. It was three light skinned chicks trying to be the supremes. Anyways, genius way to hook Yasha and Kags up. Too bad he hoed her at the end, but it was hot while it lasted. I really hope they will get together and I hope Rin will get off the dope and not let Kagura still Sess away from her. Plus, I keep having this feeling that somebody's going to die or something. I don't know maybe I'm crazy. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.

Author's Response: Sexy C!! Thanks for the review. The movie was actually "Sparkle" I saw it a few years back and was like -that's where they got that song from! Oh and those instincts? You should always listen to them, lol.



Reviewer: Boop   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 11:31 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

you just makin' the shit hit the fan for everybody, huh???? i freakin love that song and was singing the words right along with it. lol, keep updating PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
-love ya,
Boop

Author's Response: Booooop! Where you been girl? Glad you liked it. That song had Kagome written all over it :P I'll try to update again soon!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 10:50 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel

Good chapter. Inuyasha is so sad that it makes you want to cry and shake him at the same time. His mate died, but he didn't. He shouldn't feel so darned guilty just for being alive, and, shocker of shockers, feeling an attraction for someone else and moving on with his life. And Kagome was great this chapter, but she took a bad hit from Yash on their initial encounter; as messed up in the head as he is, she'll probably take a lot more of them as time goes on, until he excorcises that survivior's guilt demon of his.
As for Rin, she seems like she has a very sad story, but I don't really sympathize with her yet. She's truly is a druggie whore, so much to the point that she basically spits on any man who tries to show her kindness (poor Kohaku). I know that I'll feel awful later fpr saying this, becasue I know her back-story is going to be horrible, but I just don't like Rin yet here.
And I really want Kagura to have her chance with Sesshomaru. There are not enough Kagura/Sess stories, and she was really a good match for him. That's just my two cents *ducking as you throw it back*. LOL. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Hey girl! Noooo I shall keep your two cents and tell you that I like Kagura a lot. The day she kicked Kouga's ass she was on my faves list, lol. You're right about Rin too -she isn't supposed to be liked. She's very jaded and self-centered. And Yesh, InuYasha has that "surviving mate's" syndrome and wanting anyone else makes him feel guilty -poor thing. Thanks for the awesome review! I love the way you really dig in. ^_^



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