[Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 8:43 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Way That You Use It
.....You know I kind of always wondered what an african american/asian child would look like... Hmm interesting! This chapter was awesome! Blah I'm so excited for InuKag to meet! Its going to be explosive I hope....course I don't think you'd be nice enough to make Inu fall head over heels for Kags at first sight would you? haha. That'd be too easy I guess, but you'd have one happy reader! Anywho wonderful job yet again! Updates soon my dear!
[Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 7:57 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Way That You Use It
Good chapter. And , MAN, you're right. This is a dark one, but I am definitely enjoying it. However, I see some trouble coming for Inu and Kags already. Kagome will surely have a problem with Inuyasha's "occupation" considering what caused her parents' deaths. A woman who lost both her parents to drug addiction will probably have a bit of a problem falling in love with a DRUG DEALER, especially since she watched a dealer kill her mother. Man, these two have potentially relationship-ending problems before they even meet, lol. This is going to be SO good.
[Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 7:53 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Way That You Use It
Yay, you updated!!!!! I liked how you introduced the girls in this chap. I especially like Sango's story. When's Rin going to come in?
[Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Okay, here I go again, trying to review! :D Well, my favourite line had to do with Miroku and the STDs! That was sooooo funny! And so Miroku. I'm liking the way that you are portraying Inu! I think that it's realistic considering what happened. But then again, he's yours so you can portray him any way that you want! :P
Happy Writing!
[Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 1:14 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Yo Grrrl,
Lovin' every minute of it. Please update soon. Can't wait for Kagome to pop up. Take Care.
bigfanofiykag
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 9:58 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Good chapter. Inuyasha's life sounds quite crappy, though. It is so sad what he's become because of losing Tanisha. He definitely needs something (or someone) to shake him out of the self-destructive pattern he's in. Looking forward to next time.......
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 8:33 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
newports, Maury, Corona's, Hunts Point: I like the way this story is heading. I can tell it's gonna be so gritty and raw. It's so state properity-ish. I love the use of NY areas and funny and witty little lines even though it's a dark fic. Anybody can write a fic set in NY because everybody's mostly familiar with it, but a native writing it seems so much cooler. I might write a Detroit story, but then again after the Motown died, it's all over now.
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 6:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Yay! Update! I'm really getting into this story, it's really good so far.
Keep it up, and I hope to see an update soon.
~CA
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 6:04 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
haha yay! another update! Yea I know in your a/n that you said it was canon.... but I'm also making a guess that it'll be a truely rocky road when the two attempt to get together with Inuyasha already proclaiming a lifemate and all! This is awesome! I always loved this type of plot for stories that are actually written well, and my dear you're doing and fab. job of it! updates soon!!! cheers!
Author's Response: Thankies!!!!! I'm happy that you like it. The response so far has been awesome and it really has inspired me to get another chap out A-Sap! ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 5:38 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
i am thrilled that you've re-posted this and will finish it. it is so sad about yash's mate and pup, but i know you have something planned for him. woohoo
Author's Response: My rawkin beta!! Now that I have your schedule, I know when to send. I told you I'd bring it back one day. Hopefully this time, we'll get it done, ne? 0.~
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 3:33 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Loved it as always. A few things I liked in particular:
His sensitive nose twitched and he made a face; the whole place smelled like ass- I laughed at that.
The STD thing was hilarious!!!!
Often, Sesshomaru wanted to tell him to 'buck up' and take it on the chin, but how could he? The demon had never been mated; therefore, he really couldn't understand what the hanyou was going through. Could he survive such a crushing thing? He never wanted to know.- Forshadowing? I certainly hope not.
And I still can't get over Tanisha. I hope this won't be the last time you include the sistas!
Great as always.
Author's Response: Thanks, Raven! ^_^
I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's a lot more "streety" than I normally write them, but I'm having fun with it. Forshadowing? Hmm.... 0.~
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 2:35 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Oh, gotta love ya Onna, lol. That was great. Shows more into Inus life. Sessh, Miroku and was wondering about where Dante and him stood too. Great chapter Onna, just wish it didn't end that early is all, lol. Update when ya can.
Author's Response: Onna!
I'm glad you like it. It's not as hard to write the second time around. ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 10:38 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Great update! I love it! I can't wait until the next chapter. Take care of you.
Author's Response: Christal!
How are you? It's been awhile.
I hope all is well the family :-D
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 7:08 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
This fic really is interesting! I luv watching the Maury shows.^^
The kind of talks they talk are awesome. I wont be surprise if this becomes my new best fic. this fic is full of purly darkness, n I luv it to death. I'm still wondering how he's gonna meet kags, I'm sure it might be a twist or something, but i'll luv it.
Update soon, i'll be waiting^__^
Author's Response: Oi, girl!
This is definitely a dark story, but I hope it will still be enjoyable. I'm just wetting my feet for the REALLY dark stories I have coming up <.<
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 1:16 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
I really liked this chapter too! But I can't wait for Kagome to enter the picture.... it's always more fun with her around! Hope you get a chance to update soon.
Author's Response: Soon, very soon! ^_^
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 12:35 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
I'm so excited that you updated this quickly. I already want more of this story. I feel so bad for Inuyasha yet at the same time I wonder how he's going to meet Kagome and how everything is going to go down. I like the AU setting and the darker tone to the story. Keep it up, girl (because you know that whatever you throw at us we'll devour).
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 12:03 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
Again really really great chapter. I like the intro. of Miroku and Sesshomaru into the second chapter that was great.I like the fact that Sesshomaru saved Inuyasha 6 times after Tanisha's death. Can't wait till the next chapter (thanks for the quick up date)
Author's Response: D-Gurl!
Thanks for the great reviews and I'm happy to hear that you like it so far. I'm already working on the next update!
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 12:01 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Aftermath
oh, we're getting more of the crew in here. see now miroku should be grateful for inuyasha's nose, man he would hate it if that part fell off. i have a felling this one is going to be totally different from anything you've ever written...and i can't wait.
[Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
This is really good. I like that you paired inuyasha with a sista. That's hot. You're probably the only author to do that. I knew that she was gonna go soon, but I hated that she had to die. I love interracial relationships. I hope you update this one!
[Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 10:14 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
I luv this new dark fic!!! The first chappy with a lemon, but also the death of tanisha. I really luv this fic. There are so many questions with few answers. I wonder how he's gonna meet kags n he called sesshy!! In the fic at the top said they dont get along, so i'm waiting patiently to see how he n sesshy are gonna tlk n all^^ This is such a wonderful fic!!!keep it up^__^
[Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 12:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
Interesting. I like it so far. It's definitely different (in a good way, of course). Can't wait to read the next chapter (once again more fiction to read).
[Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
OMG that is the best! Please update!! I love it! ~*Dark*~
[Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 9:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
Great start. I really liked the whole interracial twist you put on this story. And it is truly messed up how Tanisha died (and their baby, of course), BUT you did warn us that the pairings would be canon ones. So, I knew the sista would die soon, lol. And Inuyasha did promptly (and gruesomely) get his revenge, and it couldn't have happened to more deserving bastards. Now, I just wonder what he's going to do to the ones who sent them in the first place....I can't wait to see the fallout next chapter. Have I mentioned how much I love your stories?!
[Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 9:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
Hm...interesting start. Inuyasha NOT paired with either Kagome or Kikyo is odd for you, but it's okay. Poor Tanisha...I wonder who those guys were. I'll bet one of them was probably Naraku though, the jackass...
[Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 8:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
Wow...what an action-packed first chapter...wow...but, but, TANISHA IS GONE!!! NOOOO!!!! When I first read her name, I thought that she was going to be another Kaila or a Kikyou figure but she was a nice character. :( I'm so sad now...where are you going to go with this? I want to know!
Happy Writing,
Christina