Date: February 07, 2012 6:00 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Self-Destructive Patterns
O- it's getting better and better...I really want to know what will happen next.
*Winks*
Smurf ;)
Date: February 07, 2012 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Live Through the Loss
Wow, this is good and I have not even caught up yet! Yep you have certainly hit a spot that has the familiar uncomfortbliness! i have read inuyasha and kagome incest fics before most not good. but some are really good, this is really good cause you really get a sense of inuyasha's and kagomes torment. i think its awesome!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:48 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: What the Heart Craves
So sad...loved it! UPDATE SOON
Date: February 07, 2012 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: What the Heart Craves
YAY! This story is getting better and better! Please update soon... Really wants to know what's going to happen next...
Smurf
Date: February 07, 2012 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: What the Heart Craves
Omg i love this story even if it is ..wierd...seriously wierd...
but mayb im jus attracted to wierd stories lol
however i understand your decision to keep them as siblings and i dont want you to change it, its kind of heart wrenching and painful to know that you want someone that it is completely sick and a sin to have. So i ask you not to change the fact that they are siblings but to continue this story as soon as ppossible.. i rally love it and all the feelings you put into it makes my heart ache bcuz i know they could never trully be unless they meet in the next life- but whose to say that they would even know each other let alone feel the feelings that they r feeling then huh? Your story makes me want to cry and there hasnt ben a story like that so far that i can remeber so i thank you for all the angst and cruelness of reality that we have bestowed upon as the humans we are.
No one can control the uncontrolable and falling in love with your sibling is also uncontrolable, before this story i thought it was sick so when i looked at it i jus wanted to stop reading...but somethin made me go on and im glad i did bcuz this was a story that made me realize how crazy love is and how much pain and hurt you go thro jus 2 b luved, and again i thank u i cant deny that i dont feel sorry for them both bcuz i do i really do and i wish nothing but happiness for them bot but in the words of 2pac Shaur
"That's jus the way it is"
NekoKags1292
Ps. I really hope you update soon i really love this story its differnt and very good
Date: February 07, 2012 5:35 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: What the Heart Craves
I absolutely love this story. You have such a creative mind and everytime I read I get so engrossed. You should definetly finish it...Please
oh please do! I won"t able to sleep! Please don't
stop writing this story, you're ever so talented and you write about the most interesting topics. I adore your style of writing and this story so please update soon! In my own humble opinion you and Quickening are the BEST writers in this site and my heart breaks when an awesome story is left unfinished. So pretty please update!
I love all your other stories as well, but this one
is the one I love best. And I rarely give any reviews. For me to do so it would have to be an extraordinary story and this story is just that!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:34 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: What the Heart Craves
I'm speechless.
I don't have much to say except for one word; perfect.
(:
Date: February 07, 2012 5:30 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
Loved it. I can't wait for more.
Date: February 07, 2012 5:30 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
whoo! that was hot and intense. But most of all, I'm glad that they finally know each other's feelings. LOL the 'cum for ur brother' was...XD sry...being really hentai here. xP
anyways, not that PART of the angst (seeing them torchuring themselves) is over, cant wait to find out wat other events will happen. update soon
Date: February 07, 2012 5:29 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome finalyl confessed... are they really brother & sister?... what will happen now... they'll have to keep their love secret... update when you can... please and thank you...
Date: February 07, 2012 5:29 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
:O OMG I WONDER IF KAGOME IS ACTUALLY ADOPTED? Then it would totally work out for them and it wouldn't be so bad
Date: February 07, 2012 5:29 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
As crazy as this may seem i am truly happy for then both to finally admit their love to one another and i know som people have a problem reading this bcux they r siblings but i lovee it...shoot i just picture them as a long very long term best friends or something..works for me
aneWay i love this story
so update Soon!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
Loved this chapter till the end! Very well writen.
Can't wait for the next update...
*Winks*
Smurf
Date: February 07, 2012 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
wow... very powerful!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:27 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
I love this beautiful new addition to a beautiful story. I reviewed this story not too long ago saying that the thought of being in love with my older brother is appalling to me, but this story I find beautiful and tragic. The same feeling still applies and I'm ecstatic that you've finally updated. Thank you for the experience.
mew...
Date: February 07, 2012 5:23 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: ...And With This Kiss, I Surrender
They are finally together! Yay!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
i am so wierded out rite now...funny how the craziest stories attract my attention...seriously i seriously would have been tramatized if they actually did...it
glad they didn.t yet
i tink it was a bit too early.
you know there is sumthin i learned from this however and correct if i m wrong
'Sometimes the things that you want the most are the things you can never have'
and
'Fate works in sadistic ways'
Seriously i would be mad as hell if i fel in love with my brother like that..i would have left the family years before it got out of hand...
in other wirds i feel fir Inu and Kags..this is a very unpromising predicament meaning someone is going get hurt...badly
Update Soon!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:20 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
sweet chapter.
Date: February 07, 2012 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
love it
Date: February 07, 2012 5:19 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
gaah! a new chapter! (.
Date: February 07, 2012 5:18 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
great update... seems that inuyasha wants kagome to think about their situation... and it was a close call for them too - their parents came home... wonder how inuyasha's movie date with kikyo will be... what will kagome do?... update when you can... please and thank you...
Date: February 07, 2012 5:18 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
i'm surprised you're not having koga in the story.
i thought since inuyasha had somebody to make kagome jealous, kagome could have somebody to make inuyasha jealous. it's hot when inuyasha gets downright possessive;)
Date: February 07, 2012 5:17 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
omg i lurve this story... i started to hyperventilate when i saw that i got an alert in my inbox for this story XD
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Date: February 07, 2012 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
aww they're so cute
Date: February 07, 2012 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
Hm... I'm really wondering what's going to happen. Like, are their parents going to catch them like they almost did? Gah! I have to know! Lol, update soon please. Oh, happy (almost) Thanksgiving!