Date: February 07, 2012 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
Man,I loved this chapter! I was like glued to my screen, eyes wide and mouth open...
I've got to say again that you're an awsome writer! :)
Can't wait for the next update...
Till then,
*Winks*
Smurf ;)
Date: February 07, 2012 5:11 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Canned Heat
Hello again. I just want to thank you for updating another awesome chapter. I just want to say that you rock. I love this story and the way you write... you must think I'm a creep! Lmao. When you write I feel like I'm watching a movie; you really do know how to paint a picture. And I admire you for that. This chappy was really good and I was with my my eyes glued to the monitor, screaming "OH GOD! THERE GONNA DO IT! THEY'LL FINALLY BE TOGETHER!" && i start giggling like a little school girl and my husband says I'm crazy and I yell at him "NO IM NOT! YOU'VE JUST NEVER READ A GREAT STORY WRITTEN BY A GREAT AUTHOR! SO HA!". oh kami...im so weird... but anyways, I just want to say that you've really outdone yourself yet again. I just have one question for you...are Kagome and Inuyasha going to end up together or are they gonna fall for other people? hmph. This chapter was such a cliff hanger! I love that and hate that at the same time! It has me thinking what is Kagome going to do?and what about Kikyou? That's what I love about your fics, they really get me excited for the next one and thats all I think about until the next update. And I feel that a really good song that matches this story is "Forever" by Papa Roach. Well the chorus kinda matched. It goes like this:
Because days come and go
But my feelings for you are forever
Well enough of my rambling and my babbling of nonsense. The crux of the matter is that this chapter is phenomenal and I just can't wait for another remarkable chapter by a breathtakingly awesome storyteller. Please Update! dont leave me hanging! It's that this story is so good that I actually feel glum when the chapter ends! THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOUR HARD WORK AND YOUR GREAT WRITTING!
till next time,
Scarlett. :]
Date: February 07, 2012 5:04 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
nice story:D I love that the chapters are so involved too:D
Date: February 07, 2012 5:03 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
You know, I was just thinking about this story earlier today, thinking, "Hey. I wonder when that story is going to be updated." I always look forward to reading this story. I think of it as the only story I know to break the mold. I mean truly, truly break it. I've never read any story line like this. I hope you update soon, cause I'm really impatient... No I'm just kidding... but seriously...
mew...
Date: February 07, 2012 5:03 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
great update... seems that decisions have to be made... what will kagome decide?... what will inuyasha do?... what will happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
Date: February 07, 2012 5:02 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
aie, kikyo's catching on! is that a good thing or bad? but this kikyo is very nice and kind so she'll understand and not do anything evil...right? anyways, my heart skipped a beat when i saw that new chapter alert in my inbox. update soon!x3
kimiko
Date: February 07, 2012 4:57 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
Ha! It reminded me of the times I used salt instead of sugar. Ah...Good times. (Well, not for the people who tried my creations!) ^-^
Date: February 07, 2012 4:56 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
heavy stuff dude GOOD CHAPTER THOUGH
HEARTS DEMONICA
DaniMarie
Date: February 07, 2012 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
Man this story gets harder and harder to read each day...i mean i just couldn't do it...it seems to heartbreaking ya know?
EEsh and i seriously don't want to see how this will end for them...soneone is going to get hurt
Date: February 07, 2012 4:54 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
uhh the hardcore angst is coming
Date: February 07, 2012 4:38 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude
very very very very very good story so far can5t wait till the next chapter
Date: February 07, 2012 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
yay an update! (^^)
oh dear, the cliffy is KILLING ME! (.
Date: February 07, 2012 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Oh, my gosh. That chapter was really powerful. It was really funny in the beginning and the ending... it just keeps me wanting more. ^-^
Date: February 07, 2012 4:33 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
I absolutely love this story.
So, the secret is finally out, huh? Well, not completely, but the cat is peeking over the rim of the bag. I love it. This story had me sold from the beginning.
Keep being the unique writer you are. I just wish that these entries were so few and far between...
mew...
Date: February 07, 2012 4:33 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
nice chapter:D
Date: February 07, 2012 4:33 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
oh snapp! somebody knows! omg . im freeking out, whats will happen!
Date: February 07, 2012 4:32 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
dun dun dun. very interesting turn
Date: February 07, 2012 4:32 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
great update... seems that kikyo being very curious got inuyasha to talk about him and his love for kagome... and now she knows the truth... what will happen now... will it still be inuyash & kagome pairing in the end?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
Date: February 07, 2012 4:30 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
is there way that kagome and inuyasha could NOT be related? like maybe one of them was switched with another baby at birth? i just want them to be together so bad; i know, i know. that would be just too easy right? i am glad that he told someone, even if it was kikyou. i am not a fan of kikyou usually but i really hope she is character in your story that i can grow to like.
HEARTS DEMONICA
DaniMarie
Date: February 07, 2012 4:10 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
omg this story is getting better and better
Date: February 07, 2012 4:08 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
(sobs) I've been thinking about this story for the longest time! And now I stumble back across it and I'm still crying, even though I've read it OVER! I don't know whether or not it's on my lists, but if not, it's about to be! (cries hysterically at the angst)
Date: February 07, 2012 4:06 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
The story really is sad yet it captivates me. I've always liked stories about incest because it's another form of emotional struggle with love. Although, I don't wish to any brother &sister to live that kind of love...
The way you portrayed Inuyasha's character is original, I love it! He inspires a lot of compassion since he wants to protect his sister as a brother would but he also loves her as a woman and not only a sister. Kikyo's character is also nice I think and hopefully she's there because Miroku &Sango don't seem to be the comprehensive friends for now.
I feel sorry for Toga &Izayoi, however, let's see if they'll manage to accept this sinful love. After all, they're the type of kind parents so... but their reaction could still be harsh.
Keep on writing :).
Date: February 07, 2012 4:03 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Wow...very powerful...love is super powerful and if i were in Inuyasha's shoes i would probably have ran away...because it is wrong to love someone that's rlated to you in such a way i mean cousins..yeah maybe we can let that slide, uncle nd neice...ppossibly but blood related sister and brother...that's the true definition of being stuck between a rock and a hard place...truthfully i'd probably kill myse;f just so that maybe our souls would wind up together in the bext life and you know pray that we aren't related
That would be my option...
Great story it makes you think ya know and its very very angsty if you get what i'm saying...and wellsometimes it takes one person to die for the other to find out what they've looking for...
Ja ne
Date: February 07, 2012 4:01 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
GOOD LAWD! That has to be the best kiss scene I hav ever read! EVER! I almost died!
This story has been extremely interesting so far. I just recently stumbled onto it, and had planned to review at the end, but I HAD to review this chapter! It was absoulutely spellbinding! Fabulous work!
Date: February 07, 2012 4:01 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Another amazing chapter! OMG, the emotions here are expressed so vividly! This story is truly captivating! I never would have thought I would be interested in an incest story, but It is so wonderfully written that I find myself fully ensnared! Fabulous job once again!