Date: February 07, 2012 4:00 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Although I find the nature of the siblings relationship morally wrong, I cannot help but to resent Kikyou for her role in this story, and I am not a Kikyou hater! I don't really like to see her paired together with Inuyasha, but I don't hate her.
I cannot put into words how captivating this story has been! I can't wait to see how it plays out!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:56 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
This story has been fabulous so far! I can't wait to see how it will all play out! I am so anxious for your next update!
So, as the fangirls say: Please update soon!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:51 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
W-O-W
that's all i can say out-loud right now.
just:
Wow.
and not because i'm all disgusted because they're brother
and sister and obviously love like that isn't natural to the
'normal world,' but i guess it does happen.
that is one thing i would never wish on anyone.
no, i can only say 'wow' because of the pain and obvious
agony that seem to pour from every word of this story,
letting the reader know of Inuyasha's pain,
of the truth and self-sacrificing he has to do in oder to be
happy with the girl he LOVES.
i am in debate over this little situation myself.
they are siblings, and yet the love they share for each other
is so pure that it would seem right if it were anyone
else - non related, that is.
but why then, is it considered impure?
well, we cannot be the judges of that. i just hope you
have a happy ending for them.
congratulations on first place for Best Romance Fiction. you really
earned it. a brilliant piece, no doubt.
i am going on to your other stories and so don't be too surprised
if i add a few to my Alerts! ;]
until next time!
love bumble,
Date: February 07, 2012 3:49 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
im really glad kikyo's really understanding in this one...i love kikyo in this story!
as for the second half of this chapter; nice (LOL im such a perv) buh it was intense and sweet at the same time. hope u update soon!
kimiko
Date: February 07, 2012 3:48 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Absoulty awesome! I loved it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Date: February 07, 2012 3:47 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
If they get caught one day...
Things aren't really easy for them! Except Kikyo, everybody seems to be against their relationship (which is more than comprehensive) so I wonder how it will be once the truth will be out... Anyway, good chapter! Thank you so much for the update!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:45 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
great update... seems that inuyasha had an interesting talk with kikyo - he told her about kagome... glad that kikyo's part is just a friend cause they'll need someone to understand since their friends miroku & sango might not... looks like kagome & inuyasha have gotten closer - like inu/kag pairings whatever kind of story... wonder how things will turn out... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:45 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Absolutely loved it. My favorite so far. Beautifully written and edited. Incredibly smooth, intense, and spicy. I loved the scene with Sango and Miroku as well, their emotions are so wonderfully depicted that I can't help but want to read their scenes as much as Inuyasha and Kagome's. And that's never the case. Lol.
Although, any outcome, at this point seems worth sitting on the edge of your chair for.
Keep up the good work, doll.
I'm totally loving this shit. xD
Date: February 07, 2012 3:42 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
I still can't get over how perfect the song was for that chapter! Anyway, why are people still convinced that they are not blood siblings? Seriously! You said that from the beginning. *Sigh* Oh well. Maybe one day people will learn...
Date: February 07, 2012 3:42 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
First of all, I was kinda hoping for the "cop-out" thing too. *sheepish smile*
Even still, I enjoy this story a great deal. Reading the intimate times between them is the strangest thing... It's like I want it to go further, but at the same time I want them NOT to do it. It's hard to explain. I guess It's kinda like watching a car crash. You know it's bad, but you don't dare look away! It's rather amazing how excellent writing can draw one in so completely, even to something they normally would not be interested in.
Well done!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:40 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
I decided to give it a whirl, and I am happy with all of the thoughts and emotions that are going into this story, especially in the beginning of chapter 2 with Kagome's feelings on the matter. The only thing that I dislike about it is the same thing that I like: the thoughts. There is too much thoughts and not enough action in the story. While I agree with the need for setup, I just skimmed through this chapter and I'm assuming not more than 1/4th of the day has passed and over the long chapter (three) Inuyasha has managed to drive around a few hours before meeting with Miroku. What I don't like about it is that the last two chapters were dedicated to the same thoughts of how he is a hell spawn. I will continue reading from here, but about halfway through I got too fed up with the pacing.
Date: February 07, 2012 3:39 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
In case anybody is wondering, I do not condone incest. That being said: Yay! better pacing, I am happy with how things are actually happening now. As for what is happening, I am finding it interesting how this relationship is going. Inuyasha's angst at seeing Kagome depressed and down was almost tangible to me, and when he finally gave in, you could almost feel the pressure let up. I think the poem was well written (you made it yourself?) and I enjoyed the conflicting emotions in the characters, and how they reacted to the kiss. I am surprised that Kagome sees it as her fault, even though it seems to be largely Inuyasha dominated, however. As a final thought, my masochist muse (that helped me win the nightmare award in ED) wanted to see Inuyasha walk off again or, better yet, Kagome to show no signs of interest and repel him, but it gets darker from there... At any rate, I am enjoying the complexities in what is happening so far, and I hope the pace keeps up!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:36 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Okay, quick review: loved it! This is what I was hoping for, as far as churning emotions and the constant uncertainty as well as the pain and angst... Having the omnicient perspective that says they think it's their own faults is even better... I look forward to reading the next few chapters!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:34 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
So far, this is an amazing story. I absolutely love the torrent of emotions, desires and morals as they go through this all. I like how they both come to terms that even though society rejects them, they still wish to be together. This is a value that could be applied to numerous settings and it plays a large part in this fiction. I am interested in finding out how the others would actually react to this information. As of right now, Miroku only dealt with the topic in hypotheticals, believing he was discussing it with a "normal" friend. I would like to see what Miroku would say if he knew that what Inuyasha said as a hypothetical was actually normal for him. Even more so, his parent's reactions should they catch the two together, whether in the middle of an act or afterwards, like their first time. Finally, I think Kikyo as an interesting character, as far as not completely rejecting him, even though she knows he kissed her. On that note, I wonder if she would be as neutral if she knew how far Inuyasha has taken his sister, and now, how far she has reciprocated that attention. I loved this story and I look forward to the next chapter! Any story suggestions for my next read? ^_^
Date: February 07, 2012 3:32 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
*sighs in longing*
I desperately want to read all the chps/stories u put up n i havent read
School really bitched me this yr! I have to time for myself (on a side note.. my mom put baq on the net!) lol.. but its only to research during my studies for those exams... tho i tend to go adrift *shifty eyes*
Any ways... lately u've been invading my mind.. so to get the nag off of my shoulder's i looked up up! =D Though i spotted your stories (this one in particular that i love! Forbidden love is so bittersweet *sigh*) ... And i jus wanna read soo bad but all i can read really are my notes from school =/ . Heh.. i tend to bitch alot but it's not helping... tho i am glad that i'm finally leaving HS (cant wait for prom!) lol
Amma stop rammble *cough*
How have u been lately? Yh, we havent really 'tlked' in a long time... but blah. I hope all is well with u and all =)
Date: February 07, 2012 3:32 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Wow. To be honest I really like your writing style and believe you can make something beautiful out of what people fear and find morally wrong...Incest.
Date: February 07, 2012 3:31 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Wow... All I can say is that I'm in awe. I usually avoid stuff like this like the plague, but I was reading another fanfic where the author recommended it. And because I saw that your the author I decided to take a chance, simply because I've never been disappointed by your fanfics.
Anyway, I won't pretend I was hesitant to read, but once I did, I couldn't stop, this was just too great of a fanfic.
It crosses the lines of what is socially acceptable, but it's done with taste (well as much taste a subject of this nature can be given). Also it's done in a way that turns the focus to the individuals, so you don't just see the "moral crime", but the personal suffering and internal conflict.
Awesome job, can't wait for the next chapter
Date: February 07, 2012 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
Excellent. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hate it when a story I love gets forgotten and I feel I have done that with this one. I'm glad you updated and I hope you update soon.
mew...
Date: February 07, 2012 3:26 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
yikes, i have a feeling that kikyo's little 'kiss' lie will result in something big...:S
buhh just a feeling. :]
anyways, awesome chapter. the ending is so fluffed up and cute yet bittersweet in a way. i wonder if they're going to keep the promise of trusting each other no matter what happens and waiting and loving each other. i sure hope so.
anyways, update soon!
kimiko
Date: February 07, 2012 3:22 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
awesome job as always XD
Date: February 07, 2012 3:22 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
-Claps- To say I like this story, I would be lying. Because I'm so ADDICTED to this story, it hurts. I'm addicted to this story like Inuyasha's addicted to Kagome. This story is so amazing, every feeling, every emotion, just plain everything that is written is so well portrayed. You write with so much emotion I swear I feel like I'm in the story. As I told a friend of mine who's in love with your writing as well, you're an amazing writer because you're writing about something so unbelievably wrong, yet you're making it so unbelievably right. -Rummages through stuff and pulls out her foam fingers- I give this story 2 foam fingers =] I'd give it more, but sadly I was only born with two hands. =[ Continue to write, and ignore all those people who think this is so wrong and chide you for writing this. You're doing a fantastic job.
Date: February 07, 2012 3:21 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
I am in love with your story, seriously. I loved their little wordplay in front of their parents... but honestly, Inuyasha should know better than that. Undesirable things DO happen :D Next time they might not be that lucky.
Anyway, I love your writing skills; you really are talented. Whenever you want to instill a feeling, you just do it.
This last chapter was amazing. And amazingly dirty :D Amazing job :)
Date: February 07, 2012 3:21 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome's trip has started... what'll happen on their vacation... looks like sango and miroku are spending some time together... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
Date: February 07, 2012 3:20 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
well,let me think...if i say 10 times i love this story it will be enough, cause i wanna say 10
times i love this story
xoxxo plz review soon .kiss you
Date: February 07, 2012 3:20 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Break Yourself Against the Tide
aww the last sentence is so cute. "precious cargo"...GO YASH 3
lol anyways, awesome chapter. good to see some inukag/sanmir action. ;D LOL i'm such a perv (T_T)
update soon!
kimiko