Date: February 03, 2012 1:09 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines
Oh Man. This has got 'disaster in waiting' written all over it! This is such an amazing story but im sooo scared for them i just keep thinking that someone is about to find out about them.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the comment luv -I really appreciate it.
I'm always giddy when my readers enjoy one of my personal faves. I can't give away too much since KoR doesn't have long to go before the end, but I will say that the ride will get bumpy! I should have finished this ages ago, but it's a love-hate thing. It's a hard story to pen, yet I love it to death so I'll be really sad when it's over. I think that plays on me and causes me to delay in writing it. But I do adore this story (cause it's so taboo!), so it will definitely be completed -hopefully in the next couple of months- because there's only a handful of chapters left.
Date: February 03, 2012 12:49 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: The Heart of Everything
Oh Shit!!! Plzz dont tell me their dad finds out that is gonna be some serious drama, and how will their mom react!!! But then again im eager to read even if they find out. Also I no Sango is her friend and all but let me just say...SHE IS NOSEY AS HELL LOL
Date: February 03, 2012 12:39 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Wow he is really crazy for her its so sad but im sure everything will be ok in the end...wont it? Anyways great story im sure its going to be great but can i ask why you made them bro and sis or is that too personal im just curious to no?
Date: December 30, 2011 2:43 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines
hey its gonna be a new year...think you can put up an update as a celebration....please it would be wonderful...n hope you have a wonderful new year...
Date: November 08, 2011 9:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
This is getting more and more interesting! That's a nice chapter you've posted! And it seems like Inuyasha and Kagome will finally spend some "precious" time together, even if it cannot last long. I mean, he'll soon be off to UCLA and even though he's adorable with his sibling, he acts like a psycho sometimes (-refers to the last paragraph especially lol-).
Anyhow, looks like Sango and Miroku are in for a relationship too.
You're welcome by the way! It's hard to find well-written stories and this one is really one of my favorites. (Go taboo? Bah!) Keep up the good work!
Date: November 08, 2011 9:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Great chapter! there were alot of things i liked in this one, especially the way Sango winged her way with Miroku on the phone. I think it's always easier for girls to wing at stuff like that. Inuyasha's boost to his dad was something that made me crack up to. I hope Sango get's the courage to talk to Kagome again. That would be nice. Can't wait for your next update :D
Date: November 08, 2011 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Ouch. Kikyo's lie is going to cause trouble later ~...
Another wonderful chapter. Thanks for updating! Toga and Izayoi are really adorable as parents; I can see why it's so difficult for Inuyasha and Kagome to be together :/ They really cannot be selfish...
I'll be looking forward their small trip :D
Date: November 08, 2011 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Man, I haven't been in the game NEARLY that long. You're truly a seasoned veteran! ^^
And this story...this is one of the three stories I still have on alert since I left the site. You work such a taboo subject with finesse and class, something few fanfictionists or even WRITERS can successfully accomplish. I know I couldn't tackle this kind of thing ^^; so kudos to you, and happy writing, darling! :D
Date: November 08, 2011 9:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Wow! 4 years! That's awesome! Like seriously, you have composed so many wonderful stories and you are a fantastic writer. Once again, great chapter. I wonder if Sango is going to tell Kagome that Kikyou said she kissed InuYasha... Hm...
Date: November 08, 2011 9:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I found this story by chance while looking for a good Kagome and Inuyasha Fanfic, and I must say, regardless of the controversial topic I can't stop myself from reading it. I love the way you explore the feelings of the characters, and I have to say I also was hoping for a Cop out lol but you've already stated that that won't happen. However, I can't wait til the next installment!
Date: November 08, 2011 8:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Hmm, I wonder how their going to hold out while on that family trip, and if Kagome will resolve things with Sango without her actually finding out anything...
Date: November 08, 2011 8:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome's situation is inherited... looks like their father's brother & sister were in the same situation they are in now... wonder when they'll find out about their uncle & auntie... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you
Date: November 08, 2011 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
OK! im not gonna say your fic doesn't make me uncomfortable.
(cuz it does)
BUT its very well written and your an amazing writer.
i cant stop reading :$
am i sinning?
hahahahah ;)
Date: November 08, 2011 8:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
OMG! I just started reading this like yesterday and I don't think I have ever read something so tantalizing, awsome,and uncontrolably sexy! lol Good story all in all love the plot and can't wait to see what happens with them Update soon! :D
Date: November 08, 2011 8:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I absolutely love what you've done with all the characters! You are a fantastic writer! Please keep updating
Date: November 08, 2011 8:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
oh god please update this soon i really love this story.
Date: November 08, 2011 8:47 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Once again, loved the chapter and the final line was really sweet. But, I was wondering what the *'s were for. For instance, "Borders*"... Was there supposed to be a note on that or something?
Date: November 08, 2011 8:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
My God I love this story. It's amazing, and as I've said before, your talent is awesome. But I've always hated suspense, and it's killing me, all this foreboding T_T I love this though
Date: November 08, 2011 8:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I am so late in reviewing! Anyway, another intense chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Fortunately for me, I still have another chapter left to go! This is a really fascinating story, and I can't wait to see how it all works out in the end. Keep up the fantastic work!
Date: November 08, 2011 8:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Ah I love this story so much! Your scenes are just awesome! Please update soon, I beg of you lol.
Date: November 08, 2011 8:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
This chapter was fantastic. I also picked up the hint about Toga's siblings! DRAMA! I don't want to assume anything, but it seems that Toga's own siblings may have had a similar issue to the one Inuyasha and Kagome are going through. Man! Interesting stuff indeed! I am very interested to see how Inu and Kags will make out ( no pun intended) with the shared suit a whole floor away from their parents, but I am also afraid that they will get caught soon!
I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter m'darlin!
~Sianna
Date: November 08, 2011 8:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Okay, this first chapter. AMAZING. Absolutely amazing. The feelings, oh my god, the feelings, they come across so strong and awesome. You're an amazing writer, just phenomenal. I have a question though, and hopefully you'll answer it soon, lol. Will there be lemon? Because I'll love this even more if there is. I know that would just make the sin worse, but like...I'd love it. So sinful, yet...my gosh, I can't explain it. But yeah. This is great, and it's only the first chapter lol.
Date: November 08, 2011 8:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Last line is adorable. Poor Kagome. Inuyasha will leave for UCLA soon. They have to spend their time well. Great chapter!
Date: November 08, 2011 8:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I just re-read this chapter now and I must say it's no different than the first time I've read it. The same powerful, all-consuming emotions that you invoked. It never wears off.
I'm speechless every time I realize just how much feeling you probably put into this, because it turned out amazing!
You're the best :)
Date: November 08, 2011 8:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Your writing continues to amaze me with every chapter. I admit that at first I was a little bit hesitant on reading into this subject. The more I thought about it however, the more I realized that it isn't really that bad. The way I see it, is that it's much worse for a siblings to murder one another than to love them a little more than society deems fit. Basically, much worse could happen and -unfortunately- does happen.
Almost all of the of stories I've read are full of violence, hatred, death, suicide, rape and other much more worse actions. When I see your story, its all about love. It doesn't matter where it derives or why it's there. The facts are that it is indeed there and it should be cherished. More simply put, love is love and there's no way stopping it.
You are truly a gifted and talented writer. From my perspective your writing is danm near flawless. There's so much emotion and creativity. Every sentence holds the same amount of passion as the last, and it blows me away. I certainly look forward to reading more of this. Keep up the excellent work!