Date: November 08, 2011 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
The insight in this chapter was very compelling. I was wondering what had happened to Toga's siblings. It was very interesting to read that side of the story. I am still eagerly waiting to see how this will all play out. Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next.
Date: November 08, 2011 8:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome were having some issues but looks like they settled them... so it was sesshoumaru and rin who are toga's brother and sister... will they cross paths?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
Date: November 08, 2011 8:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Aww, hes going to be so upset lol, great chapter, cant wait to see what happens next
Date: November 08, 2011 8:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Oh, d a m n! This story is so wonderfully immoral, that I can't even begin to explain what it makes me feel :) It's more than majestic! The thing with Rin and Sess... does that run in their family or what? Hehe. So now we know for sure what Toga's reaction would be; thanks for clearing that out. You're really slick, you! Anyway, I can imagine the pressure on both Inuyasha and Kagome; everything's still new to them.
Great chapter :) Make sure to update asap.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
oh this chapter is definetly hot..but the fun part is that even sang read eternal destany^-^
Date: November 08, 2011 7:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Holy shit! Toga's going to have a heart-attack when he discovers that his children are just the same as his brother and sister were!
I especially like the Miroku and Sango relationship in this story! I wonder when Miroku will have figured everything out... and whether Sess and Rin will show up or not. They could answer a lot of Inuyasha and Kagome's questions.
Thank you for updating :)
Date: November 08, 2011 7:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Thank goodness you updated... I have a nasty cold, so I needed something to cheer me up.
"Does anyone really need both? Eternal Destiny... Pirate's Bay... You use torrents? Naughty girl." Hm... I wonder if anyone else noticed the Eternal Destiny part. ^-^
Anyway... Can't wait to see how Toga reacts to his childrens' love!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Although I've been reading since the first chapter, I have yet to leave a review due to conflicting schedules and a busy lifestyle. Most of the time I have to read your chapters in multiple sittings, but I get through them nonetheless. Having a few moments on hand, I just wanted to leave a small review, letting you know how much I've enjoyed what you've done with this story.
Not only do you have a very original story plot (Kagome and InuYasha being BLOOD siblings instead of step/adopted) but you have written it very well. Each chapter is a new experience and you really pull the readers into the story with which boundaries can not be crossed, which ones can, and which ones haven't. I truly admire this story for that.
Personally, I've never really thought much about incest before this story and thinking about it now, I wouldn't be able to say I'm a fan of it. But reading what you've written, seeing the emotional struggles and mental breakdowns InuYasha and Kagome go through, its put the whole ordeal into real perspective for me. Although I hope everyone I know finds someone to love outside their family, I don't think I'd be able to shun them for following their heart.
Anyways, as for this latest chapter, I suspected that Toga's past consisted of something very similar to the real truth. If Kagome and InuYasha end up revealing the truth in some way and decide to stay together, I hope that Toga is able to see his brother and sister again. If not, I can understand. But would he be able to deny his children his love and affection the same way he had denied his siblings? And what of Miroku, Sango, and Kikyo? How would they react to such a predictament?
Bottom line is that this story has so many twists and turns and has a very mysterious future ahead. I hope that you continue writing and updating as frequent as possible, for this story is absolutely amazing (for lack of a better word).
Always reading,
Sassybratt
Date: November 08, 2011 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
It's really heartbreaking yet breathtaking how inuyasha and kagome go so far to be together, even though in the end, the chance of their forever acceptable relationship is so slim. really gives us hope that "love can overcome anything" sense. great chapter, im sure toga will be devastated when he finds out. when, not if..right? cuz somehow, the kids will hafta tell their parents xP.
anyhows, update soon!
kimiko
Date: November 08, 2011 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Woah! wait till toga finds out...
Date: November 08, 2011 7:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I'm sure you know that the topic that you are writing about disturbs most people.
Usually, I'm one of those people, but this story has somehow wormed its way into my heart.
It's excruciatingly realistic, and leaves nothing to the imagination, which in this case is fantastic.
We are able to witness InuYasha's anguish more so through his actions, rather than you telling us about it.
Your use of metaphors and similies provides us with excellent imagery, and sometimes it even feels as if
we are Inuyasha's eyes, seeing the world how he does.
You are now the first and only author added to my favorites list, and trust me, you deserve it.
:)
Date: November 08, 2011 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
WOW A REALLY POWERFUL STORY. I LOVED IT! AS ALWAYS LOVED THE CHAPTER,LOVING THE STORY. KUDOS!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Amazing potential, extremely differet plot keeping in view the practicality as well.
This piece is a diamond.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! oh and did i mention to UPDATE!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
ok so im not really into this type of story but it shows what its really like to love you sis/bro the way you shouldnt i know this for a fact cause i have a friend who loves her bro this way i wont mention any namez but he loves her the same of course i dont think what their doing is right but their my friends and i wont judge them. you cant help who you love, if you believe in god then he made them that way sence we are gods creation he made us the way we are, i dont believe that the devil tempted them so i dont want that mentioned but anyways great story keep up the good work you really show what its really like
Date: November 08, 2011 7:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Holy shit. At first, I wasn't going to read it. But when you clearly stated in the A/N that you expected people to turn away, I became very defiant and read it anyway. I'm glad I did, it was great and so damn original. I'm so scared for Inuyasha and kags... their father when he finds out... gah! Is this hard for you to write? Are we ever going to find out what happens to Rin and Sess? What if Rin and Sess's kid meets Inuy and kags lol.
Write more soon!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I'm so happy to see another new chapter to this wonderful story. Thank you for writing. :)
This chapter brought alot of worries to me since Inuyashas going away to America to the same school as Kikyou, and then Bank is now interested in Kags. And wats he gonna do with the camcord? Hopefully not something that will sabotage Kag/Inu's relationship in terms of exposing them to public or patents...
speaking of them, Toga is hilarious! I love how you dint leave out the minor characters, as they still had their own personality. :)
I also hope Sango and Kagome make up...those two ARE best friends and perhaps...Kags should come clean? Then again, would Sango understand? :/
So many questions an possibilities for this story. I really do hope you update the next chapter soon!
Kimiko
Date: November 08, 2011 7:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I haven't ever read this story yet! :O *reads*!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
IT runs in the blood! :)
Date: November 08, 2011 7:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
yay! ive been waiting for a VERY LONG TIME for this to come out! i thought i was not going to get finished! ill be waiting 4 the next chapter.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
i must admit i was a bit apprehensive about reading this at first but im glad i read it. the story is great and i hope you update soon.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
hey there please update soon
Date: November 08, 2011 7:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Damn Bankostu better not ruin this!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
By far one of the best InuYasha/Kagome fictions I have read thus far. I love when authors touch subjects that are considered risque. I hope you keep this story going, it would suck horribly if you stopped.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome are enjoying spending time together... their parents don't suspect a thing yet... will sesshoumaru & rin make any appearances?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!