Date: November 08, 2011 7:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Oh man I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: November 08, 2011 7:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I'm happy that u're continuing ;)
Date: November 08, 2011 7:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
MMMMMmmmm this isn't the useal type of Inuyasha fanfic that I would normally read, I have to admit that. However I do want to give this a chance because I am not judgemental or "omg this is soo wrong" or anything. So I am going to give this story a chance and even if I don't like it...its not the end of the world because everyone has differant tastes and I might like another story you have written so yay. Anyway I'm off to read chapter two. Also sorry for reading your stories late, I have had some personal drama and I didn't have any time to read anything so now that its over I could finally read your stuff! OwO
Date: November 08, 2011 7:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
How dare he hurt her! XD hehehe Next chapter OwO
Date: November 08, 2011 7:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
OMG intense sibbling kiss! O_O so here is the big question...why am I so happy about this? XD OwO. Next chapter!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
So people wanted you to sugercoat this story and make then find out that they are not related? Well I mean...that's not the what you intended plus those readers should pay attention to your author's notes. I mean you said it right there! Sometimes I wonder if readers have TBD = Too busy disese! They must rush into the story without reading the warning labels. Geez. XD this is getting interesting...Next chapter! OwO
Date: November 08, 2011 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
NOOO not Kiky-ho! She's evil I tellz ya...evil! ...wait...I forgot...Kagome and Inuyasha are blood sibblings here...I still say Kikyou is evil XD
Date: November 08, 2011 7:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
..Wait...I am totally liking this story aren't I? Damn.XD this is a good story tho...good job IG
Date: November 08, 2011 7:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
O_O. Wow...that's intense...ON TO CHAPTER 10 OwO
Date: November 08, 2011 7:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
What kind of plushie would you give me? XD I want a Inuyasha Plushie with the works XD like always. Awesome chapter!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Hmmm I realise that these reviews I post are not really good ones since I just say a few things. So let me at least take my time with this one and write about your story/writing etc. As I pointed out from the begining that stories like this isn't normally something I consider reading. However I am a very open minded person and I like giving things a try because who knows, I might end up loving it. I can see you put a lot of work into this story, you pick up on a lot of emotions and you feel what the character feels. You also sense the danger in the scene where Inuyasha was telling Kagome to go to her room and think about this carefully. As a reader I am left with wondering when will the parents find out and of course you feel badly for them because you know they will find out somehow and a part of you thinks "omg how would they react?" So you win cookie points for all that's above. I also love how you decribe the mood and the feeling to the characters. Something I try to do while writing my hey arnold fanfics but I can't be as good as you. I also believe that this is by far a good read! I mean I'm impressed because again...I didn't think I would like a story like this as much as I do. Great work on it and again sorry for my short lame reviews, sometimes I don't know what to write in every single chapter so I pretty much make them short. -shrugs-
Date: November 08, 2011 7:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
"How long have you loved Kagome?" she asked, almost fearing his response. O_O my heart dropped! XD
Date: November 08, 2011 7:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
-blushes extremely hard- Oh my...and about Kick-you...okay so she isn't so bad here...I still don't like her XD
Date: November 08, 2011 7:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Why did your author's note remind of that one dude on that one movie that says "ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED?" XD I love doing that..."You remember the guy who said to the other guy in that one movie that acted in another movie "are you for ceral". Note to self...never drink and review XD
Date: November 08, 2011 7:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Borders is a bookstore and its bankrupt. O_O they are closing down those stores now...I heard about it this week. Yeah that sucks XD. Anyway omg BJ in the men's room XD~ -wipes mouth- Oh my...what was I saying? Oh yes...this is soo wrong and aweful, its soo sick for brother and sister to...Sexy brother...NOOOO NOOO its wrong damnit its wrong...XD ^w~ next chapter!
Date: November 08, 2011 7:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Mia holds up her empty bowl- please sir...I want some more! -taps spoon against the bowl, chestnut brown eyes are big, lip pouting- XD.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I don't know if you're read this review seeing as you haven't updated this story for a while, but just wanted to tell you that this fic is AWESOME!
This is probably the best romance fic I've ever read and I don't care if this is incest. Seriously, I think that this fic is severely UNDERREVIEWED. In my eyes, this fic should have easily crossed 2K+ or 3K+ and I'm damn serious about it. The way you've described Inuyasha & Kagome's feelings is just on a whole other level, and this story has crossed the boundaries of being just a fiction, it really is believable if it happens in real life to someone.
I don't know if you'll update this fic, but hear it as a request that pleeaaaase update, this a great story! If you can't, well it's still okay but know that this fic is legendary in my eyes. I salute you as a fellow author.
Date: November 08, 2011 7:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
Awesome story I love the plotline. I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: November 08, 2011 7:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
OMG I didn't know you had a FFNet account!
I read this whole story in like two days!
Anyway, love the story (though it does scare me that Yasha never thinks about using a condom- does he want to impregnate his sister-poor Kagome) also, totaly praise you for not caring that many don't want those two to be siblings. Great work, please update!
[Report This]Date: October 06, 2011 8:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
I think I may have reviewed this before but I can't be sure. I know that I'm still struck by how strong his feelings are. I mean rather than risk his sister he's going to run, and live in misery, all alone. He really is putting her before himself, and not many people will do that, especially for someone they aren't even in a relationship with.
[Report This]Date: October 02, 2011 10:13 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines
OOOOO toga. lol I wouldnt set up my son with a girl that looked like his sister. hahaha. Its like he secretly knows
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2011 10:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.
if memory serves - i think i was ur 100th reviewer for this story... and now I b ur 500th!
AWESOME!!!
Sorry - am weird like that... i tend to remember odd things *cough*
Can't wait for a update - of any kind !!!
Da Grrrl Says: Oh, wow. I don't remember if you were the 100th, but you're definitely the 500th. Thanks so much! :D
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2011 10:32 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines
Ok, so i've been playing catch up - i've caught up for a while now for most of ur stories and not reviewing right after might put my thoughts in a jumbled bunch xD
Buuuut I LOVE WHAT I READ FOR THIS!!! OMG OMG OMG.... Could you imagine how my mouth was hanging open for the boat scene - or even the bedroom scene?!?! It's like EVERYTHING seems to fuck up their union - a union am DYING to read about!!!!
Then i love how Kouga wasn't the one to get jealous or anything - and that he wasnt the one who taped them.. .damn could you imagine how a parent would feel seeing their child doin the nookie on the net, cam or on any technical devices? OR - how one would feel knowing the partner is their OTHER KID?!?! FUCK ME!!! Lmao... I mean i've had a close friend whose sex tape got out a while baq and she was a mess from the scrutiny so... I'm just... EAGER to see how it plays out.
I love how u delved into Toga's past with his siblings - it was mind blowing. Damn i just love how realistic your stories are, and the vividness from each sentence is so magnetic. I wonder if they'll meet up and if the situation with Toga's kid coming to light would force him to accept his siblings (if he chooses not to cut of his own kids). I'm really eager to see if Kags would flip out with jealousy when Toga brings the waitress for an introductory to his son.
Oi not forget Miro and Sango - I LOVE THEM!!! They're both too perceptive for their own good though lol. I enjoy reading, knowing that they both have a hunch about what's goin down with their besties but afraid to really come right out n say it. I love the romantic in Miro and how awesome Kikyou is, especially with how caged Sango is - gah... i feel for that girl, but looking from her parents point of view i can (reluctantly) understand them lol.
Whelp... Hope to read this whenever and amma shut up now becuz am just gonna be rambling since slowly things are coming baq to me lol
LIKE THE BEDROOM SCENE!!! OH MY FUCKING GOSH!!!! That. Was. AMAZING. I just become a puddle for Inuyasha and his raw sexy ways!!! .........
.............. A puddle.........A fucking puddle...
O__O
Am ... shutting =X
[Report This]Date: July 23, 2011 9:17 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines
Here I am, Grrrl!! Sorry it took me so long to read and review, but there's some twisted shit going on over here, but I'm semi-okay now. I'm determined to keep my head up and forget my fucking haters...even though most of my haters are family members :(
Anywho, I loved the Miro/San bonding! Gosh, bumper cars?! Not my thing....I be ready to knock a heifer out! I swear people hit me from all angles...and it's like they're all after ME! Fuck that lol.
Oh. Shit. Sango is digging around! I wonder what Miroku's gonna say about it! Aaaah the suspense! I'm no the edge of my seat, Grrrl!!
I especially love the Izayoi/Toga snippets. They are like the ideal couple, but I don't think Yashie will be too happy about his parents trying to hook him up with Lila :/
OM-fucking-G! That was HAWT with a side of DAMN! Heehee, but seriously your lemon/lime skillz are so on point. I just can't believe that Bank watched the whole thing....flippin' perv!
Well, onto the next review, chica! Thanks for the update on this. I seriously love this story...hell, I love them all!!
[Report This]Date: July 17, 2011 4:27 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines
I had to read this again, not just beacuse it's such a beautiful piece but mainly for the emotional attachment I feel for these characters. In earlier chapters when InuYasha is close in penetrating his sister, it crossed my mind that the two would end up sharing the same fate as thier aunt and uncle. Kagome with child... OMG, I'm like afraid for her beacuse a 'happily ever after' ending seems almost hard for this tragic love story. And then theres Toga thier father, who even after 20 years has not spoken to his siblings beacuse of the same crime his own children are commiting. And also the idea that maybe it wasen't through the gene pool tha brother and sister are involved incest but life wanted to bite Toga in the rear end for turning his back on Sesshoumaru and Rin? (something a friend and I thought up) Bankotsu too! OMG, hope those two aren't blackmailed or worse...exposed! That would suck big time. I wonder if he heard them refer to eachother as brother and sister or just thought tgey were playing a role...?
Anyway, you probably get this a lor but; Awesome Job IG!!! Your the best and please keep this story going strong!
P.S. REALLY worried for Kagome and Yasha!