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Reviewer: riya   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2011 5:35 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

finally you have updated and it was great...waiting to read more soon.



Reviewer: Joceyln   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2011 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

The drama!! I love it!!



Reviewer: Toasty   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2011 12:48 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.

Oh and Im soo glad you posted sight back up again! I was seriously hurt when I saw that! I was like I need my InuGrrl fix's! lol and then you came back and I was truly overjoyed AND with new chapters added to some story's? HECK YEAH! haha. But anyways love your writing it's amazing! especialy this one :) actually now that I thought of it I JUST read a manga that was just like this story except the ending plot was diffrent but the beginning was pretty much the same lol, it was called Flowers of Evil! Beutiful and very sad manga. I suggest a read if you havn't! there was some other's that were in my head but now I forgot lol, anyways Ill be checking back for more updates!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you for all the love, doll. <3 I appreciate it and I'm happy you're enjoying KoR. It's one of my faves, too, so I'm going to treat it right and stop neglecting it so much. It will end in a handful of chaps, anyway. I may mess with this genre again, though. I love incest manga -lots of fun. I read Flowers of Evil in 2010 sometime (that's when I really got into manga and manwha). I don't think these stories are a like at all except the sibling factor.

In FoE, the sister was obsessed with her twin and always wanted to kiss him and be close to him, but we were under the impression that he wasn't interested, etc. In my story, InuYasha is killing himself to stay away from Kagome and she has no idea it's happening, so completely different dynamics, but FoE was pretty damn fantastic. I loved the angst. Hopefully, I'll have more KoR soon. :)



Reviewer: Toasty   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2011 12:41 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

LOVED IT!! I can't wait for more! This is my 1 favorite EVER story you Inugrrrl :) Lol I can't wait to see how Kag will react with the other female in the room! Lol and they got recorded? Oh yes! update soon darlin!

Da Grrrl Says: Happy to hear you liked it and I'll be working on the next chap as soon as I can. I'm trying to tie up a short story and address a few neglected stories first. But more is definitely coming. Thanks for the luv!!



Reviewer: Kagatob   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2011 1:51 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Glad to see the site back up, and with updates updates updates!

 This story in particular is what keeps me checking this site at least 5 times a week and once again you have delivered.

So many death flags on the Inu/Kag relationship here, I'm itching to read the climax of this story.  I've been reading lots of Korean Manwha lately some with a very similar setting to this story and I've yet to see a happy ending after all the shit hits the fan.  I'm still rooting for them till the end though!  Keep up the great work Grrrl!

~Kag



Da Grrrl Says: My boy!!! *glomps*

Nice to see you visiting! I was wondering if you still read this one. I've taken SO long to update that I know many thing it's abandoned. But it alive and kicking and not that far from completion now. And you, too?! I LOVE KOREAN MANWHA!!! I read it ALL the time, which is a big reason why I wasn't writing very much. I haven't read in the last few weeks, though, because I want to concentrate on finishing my stories. But yeesh -I'm dying to read some.

And yes, I've read the incest theme a LOT. Horribly, I love that genre because it's so angsty and I have a few faves, too. *waggles brows* But anyway, KoR feels so much longer than the amount of posted chaps, but that's because it's been around so long. No hints on the ending, but there's just a handful of chapters left, so you'll get the outcome soon. :P

Thanks for the review luv and I'm glad you still like the wares! ^_^



Reviewer: Smurfette   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2011 10:54 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

First off, I forgot to metntion Happy anniversary in my last review...sorry.

One thing's for sure though, when you say that Miroku was broke at the fair till he got Sango the bear she wanted kinda reminds me of me, even with the bumper cars too, Lol. 

Can't wait to read what will happen after Inu and Kags meet the young lady Toga invited. The part where Sango was researching sibling incest, and what Bankotsu will do with the little tape he made... 

Thanks for the update, the many updates I may say on all the chappies you wrote. Hope your hands are doing alright. And hope that you're doing good too! 

And yes, I have my pc back so I can review and read better now!!! Take care till the next review. Don't know which fic I should read next? lol    



Da Grrrl Says: Thanks Miss Smurfy^^

The Sango/Miro scene was straight out of my life, lol. I used to get my ass handed to me at Coney Island bumper cars and I thought it would be funny to let Sango feel my pain. :P

As you can probably guess, this story is coming to and end as all the pieces are slowly tying together. I'll try to make it a memorable ending, though!

Thanks for the review luv and for sticking around these years. It means a lot. <3



Reviewer: Iammmandylove   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2011 3:31 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

WOW I LOVE this story ( by the way left a message on FFNet)
I hope you don't give up on this story!
Anyway just wanted to say that you are my favorite Inuyasha author and I love how you don't give a damn if someone is offened by the incest!
Love ya!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! ^_^

I'm happy you like KoR. It's one of my faves, and nope, I'm always going to write what I consider fun -even if it squicks people, so it's great to hear that the work is being enjoyed! ^_^



Reviewer: Theresa   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2011 1:10 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

I'm glad to see that you finally updated this!! It feels like ive been waiting ages to see more of this one! lol

Da Grrrl Says: That's because you have! lol. I love this story, so I'm trying to get back to giving it the attention it deserves. No more forever and a day waits for updates!



Reviewer: Tatiara   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2011 12:28 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Delay the Wait

I'm soooo happy that I finally had enough of a break from school to just sit and catch up on my reading! I'm kinda nervous as to what will happen next, lol. Thank you so much for the update!!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the luv, babes! :D

This story IS harrowing because you;re just waiting for the big kaboom. It's coming, but I must make y'all suffer first! *evil cackle* xD

But really, there's just a few more chapters left to this one, I think. It depends on if I want to introduce any more characters. ^^



Reviewer: Bleedingclaw   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

First off the lemon...had me drooling, like, no joke!

Secondly, I'm sooo nervous for the conclusion and I want things to end happily for Inuyasha and Kagome...but I'm not sure how that'll be possible...well, even if it doesn't I'm sure it'll be exciting! You're one of the best authors ever!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much!! I was >.> nervous about this lemon (technically a lime) because I haven't written sex in SO LONG (at least it feels that way to me! xD) So I wanted to come up with something decent to make up for the long absence of smut lately.

No hints on the ending, but I'll try to make it memorable! (There's not many chapters left, either)



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 9:58 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Good chapter, girl. But man have Inuyasha and Kagome *hit and stepped in it, as the old folks would say. :-). Sango suspects the truth about their relationship, Yash's dad is fixing him up with other girls, and worst of all, Bankotsu recorded their freaky boat interlude. Damn, it's about to hit the fan. We'll just have to see who and what gets sprayed. I look forward to it.

Which brings me to this next part....thanks girl for all your hard work over the years. I'm terrible about e-mailing and stuff like that; just ask my family. But if you were ever under the impression that your hard work didn't mean anything to a lot of us, you're wrong. I can remember many days of mine that have been crappy, and one of your updates made it better. And I'm sure I'm not the first to tell you that. So, I want you to know, from me at least, that you are appreciated, and I for one will miss you when you finally hang it up. And feel no guilt about doing what's best for YOU. You have done more than your share of bringing happiness to others with your writing. But when it's no longer fun for YOU, that's the time. So, enjoy the time you've allotted yourself, and then let it go with no regrets. And THANK YOU for all your work over the years.

Da Grrrl Says: LOL Are they getting it from all sides, or what? Even I'm starting to feel sorry for them! But what can they expect being in that kind of relationship on top of being two gorgeous monkeys that attract too much attention? They did it to themselves!:P

And thanks so much for the encouragement. I appreciate it. I admit, I was annoyed for a while there (not with you, but fandom/writing in general) and was questioning the point of updating anymore. If you only knew how NOT updating bugs me and how block makes me crazy. I always feel like I'm letting y'all down, so when I kill myself -and my hands- to get chapters out and they're read but never a word as to whether anyone even liked it, well, Kiki wasn't a happy camper.

No one with carpal wants to invest hours and hours into a chapter and not hear a word, or a handful out of hundreds. It makes a person feel like they're just wasting their time. So I was like, I'm not updating. Fuck it.

But as my anniversary approached, I realized -again- that I started writing because I loved InuYasha and wanted to share my crazy shit. Reviews are a great bonus, but it was supposed to be about him, you know? So I've been trying to keep positive and keep writing. The fact that people are reviewing is, again, just a bonus. But I really, REALLY appreciate you taking a minute to say exactly what I needed to hear. Your awesomeness will never be forgotten, even if I do eventually call it a career. *hugs*



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 11:26 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Wow... I don't know what to say I'm drawn in and yet uncomfortable! That's pretty impressive I mean not many people can take a subject like this one and make it not only believable but sympathetic.  I'm on the edge of my proverbial seat waiting to find out how this one is going to play out! I hope that you are feeling well and didn't strain yourself too much with updates!

PS Sorry it's been so long since reviews I still love your work and think you are possibly one of the most talented writers in the fanfiction 'verse!



Da Grrrl Says: Jenn!!

Long time no see, chickie. ^^

I think you said that before about this story, lol. I love the angst. I admit it. I love seeing them pull their hair out thinking of ways to be together and then putting perilous stuff in their path >.> tortures the readers a little, too! And I did bang my hands up a little, but I wore braces, so it wasn't nearly as bad as it could have been. I just hate using them -they're bulky and make me typo to death. But they do serve a purpose and it was worth it to me to be able to toss a slew of work out there after a long drought. But thanks for asking and thanks for the review! Hope you're well!



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 9:54 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Thank you for this update!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2011 12:52 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

I really feel for Sango >.> That's happened to me so many times at the "Bump Your Ass Off" cars at Coney Island. The second I get stuck against a wall everyone decides its time to kill me, lmao. But SO cute how she paid Miroku back (and LOL @ the old couple who hit her), even if their convo at the end did take a turn for the darker. I wonder if she'll be straight with him about her suspicions or play it off - because in this case >.> the truth seems like it might sound a little less freaky than if she tries to lie about why she was researching sibling incest.

And ew @ Bankotsu. What a creeper!

Touga/Izayoi are so precious, though. Even though he's dealing with some demons on the low, they seem so cute and in love with each other and their kids, and even though parents and blind dates are such a bad idea, its easy to tell that they want the best for I/K. Interested to see how Kagome and InuYasha will react to Lila, and Touga's idea about moving to L.A. if/when they get a chance to bring it up to him.

Good stuff, Kiki. I'm loving all these updates!

~Am :D



Reviewer: MalevolentHuntress   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2011 3:57 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

First time reading this story but it will not be my last. (Busy reading all your other amazing creations XD Working my way through them all) I plan on rereading it as soon as I post this hehe.

In the beginning, I had to keep tissues next to me because I felt so bad for poor Inu and started crying. (Which cause you get weird looks from your family members when you bawl out crying over a story. But, after reading Death Be Not Proud, I can’t not cry when something emotional happens.)

Then, that moment came where they realized they both love each other the same and I had to make a funny high-pitched sound of excitement/ happiness.

And those cute little moments between Inuyasha and Kagome, omg!!

You are a genius with words, I cannot stress that enough!!!! I can't wait to see what the future brings!!! So many twists and problems to reveal! I'm already excited!

To be honest, I’m also a little nervous about the ending. I’m always up for the happy ending when it comes to my favorite couple, probably because real life sucks and rarely gives happy endings. With so many secrets and obstacles in the way, I hope they can make it through together.

Fantastic story once again! :D



Reviewer: leadranach   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 11:26 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Hoooly crap.....!  The sheets about to hit the fan!  Very intense -- thank you for the update!  ^_^

Take care,

Rana  ;)



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 8:39 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Oh my god. You are a saint. I nearly had a mini seizure when I saw ALL those updates. You're amazing - really you are. I was afraid you decided to close down Absolution for good. I always get super emotional when my favorite IY writers decide to retire, so teary eyes from me will definitely be guaranteed.

*cough* Earlier, I clicked the link to read the update for this story, and my mom was in the room with me right? So, I'm reading this update, and it gets to the smut (that's also when my little brother decides to make an appearance). Well, I'm over here attempting to read the smut and look perfectly normal, but I'm paranoid that everytime my mom glances at my spot on the couch that she is aware that her daughter is reading smut. LOL. Finally, I couldn't take it anymore and I HAD to move my reading elsewhere. Seriously though - it was so ridiculous, it got to the point where I was telling myself not to read too loud IN MY HEAD. LMFAO. WTF?

I cannot wait to read Inuyasha's and Kagome's reactions to Lila. I'm readying myself for all the drama with Bankotsu, Miroku, and Sango. Thank you again for an amazing update!



Reviewer: Sayuriko   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 8:38 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Aw, babes, thanks for the dedication *Squeezes Ya!!* I was SO excited to see that you updated 2 of my faves - I didn't know which one to read first! LOL. Happy Anniversary, again, Ki!!! I can't believe you wrote 5 chapters in as many days!

Okay, on with the review.... I loved how you covered all 3 couples in this chapter! Toga and Izayoi are so cute together. They both feel that they have the perfect family and I hate to see that illusion ruined for them. Yet at the same time, I so love Yasha and Kagome together. It's so bittersweet. And that boat scene was steamy hot, seriously hot... for siblings. LOL. And Bank... what a creep. I'm curious to see where that tape ends up and who will see it... There's definitely stormy weather ahead for the love birds, on all fronts. It seems like everything is coming to a head and their secret will be exposed soon. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts (especially Toga given his history) and what the outcome will be. I love this story and it gets better with each chapter!

Okay, onto the next story! :D <333333



Reviewer: Lindsay   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

OH CRAP! They got caught on film! And Sango is suspicious! Sounds like things are going to start unraveling soon! Although, I'm a little shocked that their parents haven't noticed anything. I guess they're just looking and hoping for things to be all right and everyone to be happy, but many I wonder if the truth would kill them.

Anyway, another great chapter! Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: Kau   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 2:45 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Asleep on the Frontlines

Miroku and Sango are too cute. I love the bumper car scene thou <.< I have never been in that situation.  OMG what the hell with Banksotu!?!   >.> And omg heffie you really went there. o.o* I feel so dirty after reading that but in a good way. (* ^) Please continue to make me feel dirty.



Reviewer: riya   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 12:09 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Delay the Wait

please update soon its been so long im waiting for your next update



Reviewer: Mare   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2011 11:14 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Delay the Wait

This is one of my favorite stories. I didn't like it at first, but now I REALLY want to know what happens next.



Reviewer: Lilly   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2011 9:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.

I loves it ;)

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! ^^



Reviewer: Shina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2010 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Delay the Wait

Oh, Bank's gonna cause trouble! I'm more suprised that its not Kouga though! I'm loving the Miro/Sango in this one, and Kikyou's attitude.

 Just wondering, are you playing off the "incest is a genetic disorder" thing, or did you just throw in Rin and Sess for Toga to have a heavy opinion against it? 



Reviewer: Shina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2010 8:38 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Postcards From Paradise

Aww. That last line was so sweet! It amazes me how you go from one extreme to the other..(or maybe it's just the way I'm reading it--the Neighbor to this! lol). And that bathroom scene was super steamy. ^.^



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