Reviewer: Emmy   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2009 11:03 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: The Prelude

Great story so far. Made me laugh when I heard that InuYasha's dad's name is Toga. Keep up the good work; I support this story fully; I'll be here the whole time. Ciao.

Author's Response: Thanks for the support! ^_^ I like pushing the envelope, and thus far, it's been a win. A new chap should post before too long -and thanks, again, for showing KoR story some luv!

Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2009 9:47 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: The Heart of Everything

PLEASE update soon! i am DIEING to find out what happens next. i check up on you page like eery 2 weeks just to see if you updated yet! i can wait! im so excited to find out what happens.

Author's Response: Sorry the wait for chaps are a little long -it's because I have so many! >.< I have the outline for the next one written out, so it's just a matter of fattening it up. Hopefully, it won't be too long. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Wtashita   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2009 8:01 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: The Heart of Everything

Holy cra, I'm so scared for them. I really hope it turns out okay, lol. But yeah, in the lemon scenes, i like how you use sibling, brother and sister to describe them, reminding us of the sin they're committing. It's great, please update soon.

Author's Response: Welcome to Absolution!

Now you know my secret! I always update here first, then go a few weeks before I update at ff.net. :D

And yep, I do that on purpose. I like driving the point that they're brother and sister; I don't want you guys to forget that. Eva! :P I hope to update this in a couple of weeks (maybe sooner). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2009 5:31 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Live Through the Loss

Rawr! I'm with Kagome! If she wants to claw Kikyo's eyes out, I'll be there to help. I'm so violent, but Kikyo needs to go bye bye! Bye bye means hell. I love this chapter! I love this entire story and I can't stop reading it!

Author's Response: Spoken like a true Kikyou hater! :D Thanks for all the great reviews. I'm totally squeeing that you like it soo much!

Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2009 4:42 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Cut.

*cries* This chapter made me so sad. Don't go Kagome! Stay with Inuyasha! Ah! Confess confess confess! I'm scared Inuyasha's going to go to Kikyo. I hope he doesn't (cross my fingers).

Anyways, this is amazing! Lol I think I've said that in every review, but it's so true! You're such a great writer and I just have to keep on reading! ^_^

Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2009 4:08 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: I'm Burning Out...

Poor Inuyasha. He has no one he can turn to. Hmm, Kikyo. I hope nothing will happen between her and Inuyasha.

Toga and Izayoi's meeting was so funny! I can totally imagine chewing him out and then Bam! her heel breaks. Ahh this is another great chapter! Chapter 4 here I come!

Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2009 2:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Bleed it Out.

This is intense!! I love it! Wowowow my heart is literally pounding. Time for the next chapter!

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Date: July 11, 2009 10:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
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Date: June 21, 2009 10:20 PM
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Reviewer: kagom313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 9:17 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: The Heart of Everything

ur awesome!!! o.o

i was happ i had 3 chps to read but now i feel like i've finished them waaaay to soon xD.

I felt like i was right in the bathroom with inu n kags! I looove inu's domineering was dammit! goshies... he knows how to make a woman open up in less than a second! why the hell isnt he real?! l0l

I hate his mood swings tho... poor kags getting the blow of them, but its also nice that they make up, n inu knows how to treat his woman.. sadly its not me. Kags cracked me up... her being naive but so damn sexy at the same time - its like an innocence turned into the deadliest wepean! I cannot stop thinking bout this fic - its so... not bad for me to like it eh? dayum. The bro relationships r gross seeing has i have siblings.... for cousins tho (lol)

I've even been reading more incest manga than usually. Cuz all i've eva read were 2 manga, n watched a jap movie... but now.. i hunt for them.. literally hunt! lmao... fk me eh (inuyasha!..) haha

Well... all i can do is *gets down on knees* plz update soon!.. dont walk off!! *clings to your ankles* they need to have wild sinful sex... l0l onegai!!! *lets u drag me as u walk off* >.>

Sango is getting too snoopy btw... n i fear that sumn might happen since kikyou said she n inu kissed (even if its to help inu n kags) .. Like maybe sango might spill it n kags get jealous or sumn.... but heck - then they could fool around more x]

I hope they get together - not for one to die, or move away to stop the relationship for gud. Jus be like the twins! - which i jus realize... they're kid is roun inu n kags age. I guess incest runs in da family x]...

toga is yum! *licks lips*

Reviewer: Smurfette   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2009 1:42 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: The Heart of Everything

Hi, just dropping in seeing on how you're doing. I read you're last 'author's note' and sorry to hear that. Hope you're doing ok though. Gives you big *huggles*!

And, thanks again for wanting to visit my blog. Here's the link: http://squishysmufsworldofdreams.blogspot.com/

Yes it's a long link, lol. I know for some reason you'll enjoy some of my pics in there...(Wink!). Lemme know what you think!

Till then, take care

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Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2009 10:28 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Find in Me the Room to Breathe.

*sneaks in quietly*

*looks about and GLOMPS Da Grrrl!!*

Another seriously exquisite chapter, Goddess!! I am completely purring in happiness!

Oh! We have now an slight look into Toga's background of his childhood! And that is a big hint isn' it? The line that they are cursed. And it's gonna have a big impact later? Foreshadowing? 

I do love how the emotions and realism all run high and powerful! *beams* 

Why do I get the feeling that Izayoi and Toga are headed for a crash and burn if and when they find out about their children? And why do I feel that Toga is needing to learn somethign as well? Or it's me being a Shrink for the moment? *giggles* It's going to be one Heck of a ride to the end! And I'm looking forward to each twist and turn, the upside down and the plunging depths moments! 

I giggled at Izayoi's pet name for InuYasha and the hair tusseling! And she cooked his favourite breakfast! So cute! *ebil Nikkie steps in* The calm before the storm? *ebil Nikkie scampers away* I also liked the way InuYasha called it having strong personalities. *chuckles*

I loved the way everyone was playful during breakfast! And the way Inu and Kag silently told the other 'I love you' was also very touching!

Ohhhh! The idea of three days alone (for as much as they can be) with his sister! It's going to be Heaven and Hell for InuYasha! Temptation and not being able to act upon them! I do wonder if they will use this 'weekend' to talk more about the negative side of their relationship? So that Kagome is very much aware of what it all means with no misunderstandings and she is doing this all of her own free will and because she loves him.

I loved the way InuYasha was so easily 'bribed' with driving the LandRover! *chuckles* 

I was giggling over what images my mind called up for the 'incident' with Izayoi making it well understood to stay away from her husband. *beams* Perfection!!

*shakes head* I guess the foot thing is something that has to be experienced to understand... 'cause right now.... it's making me giggle up a storm! 

Smooth how Sango neatly avoided hearing about Miroku and the subject of his past. Doesn't want her bubble image of him to be changed, does she? Sango has got quite the hackles raised for InuYasha.I do understand she's being a good friend only she doesn'tknow of the full story and is only going by what she's seen.

I love the way you make this into such a realistic subject! Not a rose coloure, let's go skipping through the fields of flowers and later all hold hands while singing out Shiny Happy People and the Barney theme. No, this is a down to Earth, there are negative aspects to this love that leaves soul deep bleeding wounds in its wake. 

Sango made me laugh when that bit about him being hot was read! And now that Kikyou has done what she did to throw Sango of the scent it's going to backfire in the future. Sango will bring it up and use agaisnt Kagome won't she? I do hope that Kikyou's attempts to help the siblings in her own way will be of good. 

Kikyou is an amazing character in this tale! I love the way you have portrayed her! 

And the ending! OH MY WORD!!! So angsty de-lick-ous!!  Simply cannot say enough on how wonderful, how vivid, howgut wrenching this chapter is! And how much I'm craving more!!

*beams* I after the next chapter Goddess!!