heredity and genetics...someone has been writing with her lab coat on.  will we get to meet rin and sess's child? at least  yash and kags would have somewhere to go to even if they wouldn't necessrily get their happy ending. though i wonder what would happen to toga when he finds out that history is repeating itself with his kids. though it could be a good think, it could give his family a chance to heal. though somethings are beyond people's understanding.

Author's Response: A lab coat? me?? Naw, I like flying by the seat of my pants. :D

This is ending soon, I think, and I still don't know if I'm going to show any more sess/rin stuff. Maybe. We'll see, but I did want to show why Toga is the way he is. No hints on how this plays out. *walks away snickering*

I see that you started inserting ads into the chapters. Good thinking! Sneaky Grrrl!

This was a great chapter as always. The siblings' little escapade in the hotel room was definitely hot. And, hey! We finally learned Toga's painful history. The twins not only engaged in incest, but also were about to be teenage parents. Could it get any worse? I wonder what happened to 'the devil's spawn.' Is there even the smallest chance that it could turn out to be a healthy baby? I guess not.

Poor Toga and Izayoi... poor Sess and Rin... poor Inuyasha and Kagome...Argh! My head hurts! I can't pick which pair to pity more!

Toga's past is painful, isn't it? I feel sorry for his character most of all because he's so innocent. Izayoi, too.rnI haven't decided if the devil's spawn will come into play, but there is a small chance, particularly when you have someone like Kikyou involved. But we'll see; it depends on how much I want to draw this fiction out. I always had it slated for 20 chapters and I don't know if I want to go beyond that. >.< Thanks for a great review! :D

'eyes popped out of my head and dead on the ground'

.....

That was a dirty move kik, a very dirty move and you know it!!!

IT IS BEYOND IRONIC that inu and kag's dad's siblings were lovers as well!!!  So now he is goin to react even more violently when he finds out his own children are too!!!

AND YOU TRICKED ME!!! They never made love 'starts crying in agony' hahhaha I love you and the emotions you bring out in me.

But seriously, I feel the anguish that Inu feels about doing this and how a part of him just can't resist her even though he feels what they are doing is wrong.  Shame on him for also putting Kagome through the same trauma!  However it is justifiable on his part.  'sigh' god, life would be so much easier if people would just accept people different from them.  

Honestly I'm frightened and excited of how this fic is going to turn out.  I just want them to love freely you know?

In other news,

how are you lovely?  How was easter (I don't celebrate it, not catholic, 100% Indian)?  Did you do anything exciting that did not include slaving away at the computer hmmmm?  I went to the Olive Garden for the first time...mhmmm white chocolate rasberry cheesecake was heaven!!! I'll talk to you soon!

Easter was... Easter, lol. I stayed home and wrote and such. (I'm Christian, but I don't seriously practice). I've never been to the Olive Garden. It's been on my 'to do' list for a while, though. Glad you had fun and I'll take that as a rec to try it out! Hope all is well with you, doll. And I didn't know you were Indian! Awesome! I love having friends from every culture -makes me a richer person. <3333

Sango reads Inuyasha fanfiction go figure

Author's Response: Definitely. It's her favorite pastime.

Awsome chappie, as always! My eyes were glued to the screen when reading what happen with Toga's past. I think I knew somewhat, from the previous chap., that his siblings were together; just a hunch. And with the Janey Juggs, omg I laughed. That was good! 

On another note, how have you been? Hope your hands are doing better? And thanks for commenting on my poem. Glad you liked it! :D I knew somehow it perked you up with the 'knife part' lol. 

I do have a blog though, lemme know if you want the site add. so you can have a look. And at the same time your 'Lovelies' on this site too can view it too!

Till then take care and *huggles*

*Winks* ;)     

*huggles* Stay cool, babe! ^_^

caught the promo! lol. of course sango visits e.d.! i guess things will be getting even more complicated. i had no idea about toga's past. so, damn, it runs in the family? this makes everything 100 times worse. i thought i understood yash's paranoia and anxieties before... but for some reason after eading this chap, it's a miracle he hasn't imploded on himself. he really thinks things through more than most. poor poor guy. i don't think kagome truly understands all the implications. that's just me. i hope all that made sense, but at this point, i have no idea what to think/expect! i guess i'll have to sit back and see what happens. ooooh, the angst. this whole story has been like being stuck on a high wire without a net the entire time. no rest or relief. in a good way. the proof of an amazing writer. you make us FEEL! ttys! *hugs*

Author's Response: Court!! You know, as usual, I totally forgot to send it to you first. Ungh. I'm so used to straight posting now that it doesn't even occur. Well, less work for you? lol.

Shankies for such a good review! I'm glad you like the how it's developing. If i stick to my plan, there are only a few chapters left, but it depends on if I let the plot bunnies lie. I don't want to take this in 50 directions, but by delving into Toga's past, I may have done just that! Ack. We'll see.

Yasha doesn't know about his aunt and uncle, so if it comes out, that will be a shock for him. You've nailed kags, too. She's closer, but she's still not there yet. She doesn't really see this for what it is. She's very "love will conquer all" and it's not that cut and dry. Should be interesting! xD *HUGS* New chappies for you soon, my awesome beta!!

Sango visits Eternal Destiny, too?!?! No way! xD

Oh my damn, though! This chapter...COMPLETELY blew me away. With the intense scene on the balcony between Yash/Kag, and then Touga thinking about his past--WOW, that was an amazing backstory. You're really putting this family through the ringer! What with Sessh/Rin getting pregnant (so now Yash/Kag have a cousin, maybe) and Toga calling Rin "trash" and beating Sesshomaru up. I'm almost scared to see what he'll do when he has to go through all that a second time. Even moreso, what the friends are planning to do. Sango's already sniffing around and it looks like Miroku is starting to put two and two together.

I think I feel the worst for Izayoi, though! She's probably the only one who has NO idea whats coming!

I love how bittersweet this is turning out to be, its such an exciting read! :)

~Am

Toga's anger is... wow. I didn't go into grave details, but if you let your imagination go, you can imagine how bloodied Sess was. "Trash" and "Filth" just had such a nice ring to it! xD As for the "kids" well, all 4 of them are a hot mess, lol. I feel sorry for Yasha the most of everyone, though, because he's so tragic. Poor thing. *sticks it to him some more* Kidding! lol. Izayoi is a victim, too. She doesn't know what's going on around her because everyone is trying to protect everyone else. I love how tangled the web is. *shudders from angst-lust* Thanks for another fabulous review, doll! <3

Omg this chapter was really good. When from hot n steamy to suspense n revelation.
This chapter in my opinion made this awesome story even awesomer (is that a word? Awesomer?)!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL. Jenn, you're nuts! Thanks for jumping into the fray, and I'm glad the chap was worth the time it took to read it. I didn't intend to make it so long, but it just flowed. O.O I'll be working on the next one soon, but I want to get another chapter of something else up, too, so that will probably come first. Huzzah! xD Thanks for the review! <33

Oh, I caught the plug, you shameless hussie! 

OMG, I got grounded FOR REAL by this chapter.  All my little wishes of I/K love were shot straight to hell with Toga's memory.  It was what I had expected a few chapters ago, but...damn.  It's different when it's quite literally spelled out like that.  Now I'm anxious again about what they could do to the family...

...even though that lime was super-hot.  

Still, I'm feeling for Toga now, as well as Izayoi.  I don't know whom to root for anymore!  I want Inu and Kagome to be happy together, and yet...I don't know.  You got my conscience working up again!  What did you have to and do all that fer??

Great update, Chiquita!  I'm ruining my nails, once again, in anticipation for the next chapter.  You did receive my last manicure bill, right?  >.>

*Drops manicure bill in the shredder* Bill? Nope, I never got any bill... :D

Wait... if Sango is reading the works on ED... then she knows what's going on!  The secret's out!

On a more serious note of course, hmm so Sango has been doing a shitton of research, but she's been looking at some racey sites about the topic, that could be.... interesting, and with Miroku having found out it's only a matter of time before that or rather, those confrentations happen.

I was astounded by the way you placed the Taisho siblings into the story but at the same time I'm so pissed at Sesshomaru and Riin, I mean they were poor right?  Siblings or not, wouldn't that be huge incentive to not get her knocked up?  Gah I would have punched him in the face too!

  And thewhole InuYasha still flaking out thing... I'll just say, you tease, and leave it at that.  I really thought something was going to happen that night.  As usual still on the edge of my seat.  Glad to see the ideas are still flowing. ^.^

Sango isn't a pervert! I swear! That is all. >.>

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh................shit. That backstory throws the entire story in a whole new direction, wow.

And yes, the shameless plug was caught.

Shameless plugs rock!

I'm sorry.  I haven't been able to make it past this line yet without commenting ...

"Yeah, you drippy bastards. Get the hell on!" Toga joined in, coaxing laughter from his wife. "I swear, this better not go on the entire weekend, or I'm going to find that weather chick and pop her implants." 

ROFLMFAO!!!

Best line ever!  Buwahahahaha

Okay, moving on :P

In the words of Schwarznegger (sp?) ... I'll be back :P

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Soooo much fucking hotness in this chapter.  The dry-hump triumphs again! o/  I'm loving, loving, loving this.  

*curls up and waits for next chap*

I had to do it again because you make me laugh. xD MAKE MOAR UTTERANCES!!!!