Date: June 16, 2011 4:22 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition
I hope this is going where I think it is. ;)
Date: June 16, 2011 4:00 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl
I don't know whether to swoon from the scene or groan because of Kagome.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2011 10:10 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Fuck me O__O
Ok ok, so Kouga is one bad mawfawka! When it said the gun touched Bankoutsu's forehead, i was asking ma self why the idiot didn't push it away or sumn - that would have been a perfect way to get out - fight or sumn!! But for him to piss his ass so easily - again - Kouga has to be one bad mawfawka!
I hate how things are in Kouga's favor at da moment - he's the con king her, he's a master puppet dammit, and Ayame is jus shittin me - she's so stupid! I hope she and Kagome become friends so she can tell Ayame what she went thru n how there's a light for her (even if kags doesnt kno Kouga is Ayame's asshole - at least Ayame would kno who kags would b tlkin to.)
I loooooove Kagome's personality!!! The whole "innocent kags" is so overrated. This demanding bitch knows how to work her authority. She dealt with the Jeeves guy good lol, had me crackin up at her brazen ways. She's a wonderful chara in her - jus love to love her hated and annoyin ways xD
Then Inu dug himself even deeper! I mean, I understand how he had to lie and it's so funny how you just KNOW that some serious shit would hit a fan, and EVERYONE would get fucked in some way. Just wow! I'm glad that they made up tho =)
And reading this just reminded me why u're my #1 fav author! You make my emotions feel like a light switch - when am reading ur stuff - u have complete control over my emotions lol... Inu's raw manliness is so sexii - i got weak in da knees when he said not to question his manhood - n am not even standing! lol
The whole events in this chp or story in general - the lies, the abuse... the irony in it all... smh. It's captivating and one can relate to something in some way.
So glad i wasnt busy today! It's been FOREVER since i read something of yours and I love it!
Keep doing your thing grrl - There's no way i can hate it Dx
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 4:13 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Damn, thought I reviewed and I didnt *facepalm* Was rereading it, and totaly love how it played out. They both have their little lies that'll be catchin up with em, but now Kags has blood on her side. Tho when think bout it so do Yash cuz his brother caused it. Man, what a web they weave.
Got to love the 'I love you's' tho, w00t! yea, am hapless romatic, me! :P
Hugzz
[Report This]Date: March 24, 2011 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
*sighs in contentment*, this is quality fiction. Excellent as always.
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the kind words. :)
Date: March 21, 2011 8:25 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
You are the most AMAZINGGG writer ever I loved this story to the very core so detailed and kept me going I literally sat here for hours reading your story with the need to finish it burning inside me. PLEASEEEEEEE WRITE MORE AND CONTINUEE:)
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! I fell FAR behind with updates for this, but it's not dead and I plan to update again very soon. :)
Date: March 14, 2011 11:32 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I remembered reading this fic a while ago and since you've updated, I re-read the story so i wouldn't get lost and confused, lol.
Ooooo, we're getting at the good parts... Inuyasha owning Kagura's firm; can't wait to see what Sesshomaru will say about that and what Kagome's father will do. Then Inu telling Kags that he loves her(a little hint from Kags part too). Hope that she'll take it well when she hears who Inuyasha really is.
I'm also liking Rin in this story. She's cool. :) I pity Ayame though. I hope she'll get rid of the obstacle(meaning Koga) since she's very smart.
Thus far, I'm intrigued on wha't s going to happen. Wonder if Kagome will arrive to find Bankotsu there, dead or no where to be found and or even evidence of blood? Or will Koga make a surprise appearance on her?....
Yes, I'm glad to say that I'm still on the edge of my seat. You know how to throw cliffies and keep me guessing on what's going to happen next. lol
Anywho, till the next review. I hope you're doing good and had a good B-day!!! Take care!!! :D
P.S. Love the new pic on Abi too!!! Saweeeeettt!!!!!!
Date: March 12, 2011 11:33 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I'm really glad that you've updated this! Well, all of your stories are amazing and keeps me on the hook:) Finally the two has some emotional connection. Though I hope Kagome wont get hurt by Kouga...or even worse! Hope you update soon!!
Date: February 28, 2011 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
And it just got good!!! Thanks I was so excited when saw this updated I really wanted to know how Inuyasha was going to explain himself to Kagome. Yet at the sametime I am ever curious over her past with kouga but I have some assumptions due to ur clues but yeah....
Thanks for the update......alot of good arthors in the IK fandom are just dropping out of scene. Glad to see you still updating. ^.^
[Report This]Date: February 27, 2011 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Oh, and one thing I forgot to mention (sorry about the spam xD):
The skin is ADORABLE. Love the art and the header is gorg. Purple is my favorite color, so I'm slightly biased, but the brushwork is cuuuuute and it all looks so pretty!
~ Am
[Report This]Date: February 27, 2011 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I must've re-read this fic about 3 times and EVERY time you update I always wanna start from the beginning again. Love this fic <3 Loved this chapter, too because - YAY! They made up! I was thinking something awful would have to happen to Kagome first, possibly at the meeting with Bank, but now that Kouga blew his brains out >.> ....well, maybe something might happen. She won't be walking into one of the prettiest scenes and if that psycho sticks around and sees her/decides to get his revenge earlier than planned...
Mannnn, IK had such a cute moment. Still not over that. I hope she makes it home "to the one who loves her" (*squee*), sans a meeting with Kouga and the emotional (and hopefully not physical) damage that might cause. Interesting hints we got about her relationship. Turns out she did get a taste of what Ayame's getting now, but I wonder if the physical/emotional abuse was the only thing that left scars and how she managed to turn the tables and get rid of Kouga.
I wonder (and so does Sango, apparently) if she'll be going back to work anytime soon. Even better, if she'll notice anything about how Ayame connects back to InuYasha.
Loved it. Can't wait to see what's in store for this one next! Its always nice to see an oldie but a goodie updated.
~ Am ;)
Date: February 27, 2011 2:17 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Oh snap! Got me addicted again like it was nothing lol. You have to update soon so I can get my crack fix off of your story ^.-
[Report This]Date: February 27, 2011 4:34 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Good grief!! Kouga is straight ruthless!! No wonder Ayame's scared out of her mind. Damn!
And oh my gosh, I thought for sure that Inu would come completely clean! More lies! How is he gonna reveal the truth to Kagome? I sure hope he tells her the real deal before she finds out. Oh, I can just see how that would go down if she found at first! lol
Whoo! Inu closed that deal flawlessly! Yeaaaah boy!! Sorry; Flava-Flav moment. Anywho, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'd like to see Sess and Rin's next encounter because on the last one, Sess got served! lol Thanks for the update! I really appreciate it, Grrrl!
I'm not sure if you get sick of hearing me say this...because I say it a lot lol, but I LOVE your writing style! The descriptions, the word choice, the tone, the characters and the drama of it all! This creative writing course I'm taking just makes me grateful for all that you do to ensure a bombtastic read!
P.S. Sorry for my sporadic appearances. The quarter's coming to a close so I don't have a lot of time, but I try to keep up with exoneration updates ;) Until next time, grrrl!
Oh and what a lovely skin!! Total hotness! By the way, could you tell me what shade of purple that's on the links? Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: February 27, 2011 1:36 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
SQUEEE!!
She said, then he said.. woohoo.. but then he lied (awww). Sess am a bigger prick, and now Banks a Daisey pusher! Makes one wonder just WTH Yash am gonna do when he finds out. Damn, the smut, the drama, the angst - I love it! And somehow I missed a chap *scratches head* but am soo glad you not dropped this - am oh so good!
Hugzzz
[Report This]Date: February 26, 2011 10:18 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I'm so happy that you updated this story, I really liked it form the first time I read it. I hope that you update again and finish this story, I would love to know how all of this ends
[Report This]Date: February 26, 2011 9:55 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Another Kiki-style cliffy. ^o^ Ive loved this story from the start. One of those anxiety types where I *know* the shit will hit the fan, it's just a matter of when and how messy. I hope that you continue to be inspired by this one and want to finish it. (cuz shit girl, it's effin hawt!) Plus, I'm still holding out for a happy ending especially when both characters truly deserve it. They both have the best intentions and even better love for each other! Glad you decided to update it for sure. : ) and re: your reviewer response from last time... I know!! It's been nearly 5 years since you joined the fandom and we 'met' and it's been a blast. I love your fics like crazy and hope someday you decide to go the "original fiction" route. You'd be amazing and gain an even broader fan base. *insert mushy fan luv* You've been one of my faves for years and continue to impress and entertain like a mutha! Your talent is too great to limit it to here... Not that I don't love fanfiction. Lol I DO. (secretly still reads gundam wing f.f >__>; ) Oh yeah, re: Japan trip, the girls will stay with my mom and pops at our casa while we're gone. I'm afraid to venture so far away with them without going first ourselves. But we promised to Skype them so they're satisfied. I'll e-mail pics to ya when we're back! You'll see a huge cheesy grin on my face in them all. : D
Take care, girl! I hope all is well with you and life is treating you right.
p.s, I'm up for beta anytime! ^_^ *hugs*
Date: February 26, 2011 7:55 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
WOW! Girl, I couldn't even believe it when I saw that GFE had been updated! This is one of my absolute faves, so I am thrilled that you are going to finish it. You made my day, chic. :-D. And since I've been feeling like Kentucky Fried crap with this cold I can't get rid of, that's quite a feat, lol.
As for the chap itself, great as always. I loved your characterization of both Inuyasha and Kagome in this one, and that hasnt changed. They are both just the perfect blend of toughness and vulnerability. And I'm glad that Inuyasha was able to smooth things over with Kagome...because she is definitely gonna need him. She has an extremely dangerous enemy in Kouga. When he just cold bloodedly blew Bankotsu's brains out, I was shocked. I knew Kouga was a nasty piece of work...but I had no idea how bad he was. I can't wait to see what's next!
[Report This]Date: February 26, 2011 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
OMG I've missed this story so much!! I still can't stand that Inu just won't tell her about his self & she's kind of slow. Ahhh I got the feeling she's not going to take it well then Inu's going to have to say sorry & feel like shit....I want her to know already!! Kouga is such an ass, Can Inu get the chance to beat the shit out of him pleaseeeee big sis.
"I need you," he groaned, scorching her throat with fiery licks. "I need to be in you..." Managing to get his hand beyond her panties, his finger burrowed past her slick lips to teasingly stroke her clit. "I want to french you right here." I want to pass out at that part...who she even breathe let alone glimpse or remember ANYTHING lol. He's too sexy for his own good.
Oh and Bankotsu pissing his self is so hard to see. What's going to happen now I mean she already knows Kouga's up to know good shoulsn't this just give it away more?? I will she go running to Inu so he can save the day? (i really want that to happen lol) I'm hooked so don't leave me hanging to long sis!!!!
Date: February 26, 2011 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
InuGrrrl,
You have NO IDEA how happy reading this chapter made me. I have been obsessed with this story since day one and I continue to check for updates everyday.
The way that you have created the characters and the plot for this are amazing and this morning when I woke up after a night out and saw the email about the update blinking on my phone I practically sprinted to my computer to read it. You have no idea how much I enjoy your writing and this story in particular.
Please keep up the great work and know that there are fans out there that have been with you for years! I seriously cannot wait until another update on G.F.E and I hope that life is wonderful for you!
Much love and thanks!
Your loyal reader,
Jenn (00161mutation)
Date: February 26, 2011 4:07 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
DAAAAAAAMMMMMMMNNNN!!!!! You didn't!!! Girl!!! You make cliffhangers nail bitting!! I got more adrenaline in me than a 5 year old on halloween night candy!!
That was AMAZING!!! What an update!!! DAAAAMMMMMNNNNN!!! Please, PLEASE!! You have to update this again!!! I'm having kittens here for god's sakes!!!
I swear, you always make your stories so damn good!! (AND HOT!)
I had to re-read the whole story because it had been a while, but DAMN!! I swear!! At points you got me panting, at others you had me screaming, and then others you had me jumping all over the place!!
Not only that, but earlier today while in bed with hunny, I was in the middle of one of your lemons (GIRL, You make it soooooo good!) and was moaning and squeezing my legs without even knowing and hunny turns to me laughing and says "Good story?" but he starts laughing so I was like WTF? And then he told me that he was watching me squeeze my legs and moan and I was mortified!! DAMN! Yes, your lemons are THE BEST! After what... 6 or 7 years of fanfiction and HUNDREDS of stories, you still remain the undisputed queen of citrus! Other writers may try, and some are quite capable of raising the blood preassure, but NO ONE does it like you!! You make cold showers in the middle of a snow storm a Necessity! I swear!! I had to shower twice today because of you!! There is no way I was going all day long squishy squishy!(Kill me now, I even get to admit to this!). You are sinful! But oh!, so Addictive!! I love you!! May the Grrrl live long and prosper!!!
Date: February 26, 2011 2:12 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
This was a story that I really DIDN'T expect to hear from anytime soon. SO... GAAAH! Oh my fuck..
Wow. Just wow. I'm in mild shock, and I'm so happy. Today's been such a great day (even though it JUST started for 'lil ol' me) but starting my day with little treats like this among other things.. well - I just feel like I'm going to have one hell of a day, and this was one hell of an update.
I have my fingers crossed that Inuyasha will tell Kagome the truth - eventually. For now, I'm enjoying all the drama. Thanks so much for this update! :D
Date: February 26, 2011 8:17 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Glad to see a chapter of this! It was on of my Favorites!
Date: February 26, 2011 6:29 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
So glad this story has been touched by your talented hands!
[Report This]Date: November 27, 2010 9:18 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Make the Choice
The modern-day Apollo smirked. "The one and only."
I am the one and only
Nobody I'd rather be
I am the one and only
You can't take that away from me
Yea, am story jumping, hehe. :D And that came to mind just now when I reread it, lol. :P
Date: August 28, 2010 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
I'm wondering if this story would ever be updated again, hopefully it will. I really enjoyed reading it, and even if it doesn't ever get updated thank you for sharing it with us readers. (: