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Reviewer: LittleMissInuKag   Signed   [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2014 1:47 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Oh, that's so sweet! Inu gave her a flower. Yay! Got me imagining him presenting her a piece of Sakura Blossom or branch full of 'em! *lol*

Vanilla cake, oishii desu! But, can I have a black forest ice cream cake, please? *lol* Gotta love this chapter! y^o^y

DaGrrrl says: Black forest?? XD I'm not a chocolate lover (I knooow!). Vanilla is my thing, but I'm curious about having that as an ice cream cake now (as long s that part is vanilla). They're not in Japan, really, so no Sakura, but I'm sure the flower was pretty. :P



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2014 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

I've never heard of a hug as 'cocooned' before. Makes so much sense though. Love the imagery.
"He had come there fully expecting it to be the last time he ever saw her, but once again, Kagome had given him a new reason to love her." Aww, I just LOVE that line! InuYasha is such a sweet individual. Although he's struggling with some doubts, I love that he is open to receiving love and noticing Kagome's affections. Her love reaches through those walls.
"even he understood that a male was supposed to show his appreciation for the sustenance his mate provided" lol how true! No matter how bad the dinner turns out. InuYasha is lucky that Kagome is a decent cook though.
Oh Maikeru, your wife can see through your shenanigans. Just give up now. But choking on the eggs was a perfect way to end that scene =)
Oooohhhhh, Sesshomaru is entering the story. I wonder how this will work out. Does he know his brother has been living alone in a forest? It's been awhile since I've read this, but I don't remember InuYasha mentioning having a brother - maybe they aren't aware of each others existence.
Can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: Spookfox   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2014 1:31 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

I can't help but squeal with Kagome here! Such a cute courtship, and again, I love the way you blend the modern world with the ancient one! I haven't read a fic so compelling since Turnabout is Fair Play!

DaGrrrl says: Thank you for all of the awesome reviews! I appreciate it and LOVE to hear when someone is really enjoying the work! This InuYasha is probably the sweetest one I've ever written. He's full of innocence and doubt, but he's genuinely ready to love someone and Kagome is just the kind of person he needs in his life. It's actually fun writing them together here. :)



Reviewer: Spookfox   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2014 7:25 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Hollow Through the Struggle

I've been having a stupidly terrible time lately and I have to say that this chapter helped lift my mood! It has such a strong, determined, but nervous message of hope



Reviewer: Spookfox   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2014 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

aaa, what interesting characters you've made here! I love your use of animal instincts and cultural norms compacted into this little world! You make them integrate so naturally, especially with the weather as an additional hurdle



Reviewer: Spookfox   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2014 1:47 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

This is an extremely compelling first chapter! The introduction was not only well-written, but heart-wrenching, coming back in little pangs with the character's memories



Reviewer: Mare   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2013 1:16 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

There's a twist coming, I know it, just know it. It won't be simple and straightforward...I LOVE that!! Can't wait for more chapters!



Reviewer: PawPrint   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2013 7:36 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Kiki!!! I'm sorry I've been out of the loop for so long. To be honest I saw your warning and I was like...oh shit, I need to get my lazy ass reviewing again. You know I'll always love your stories the best, and this one is no exception. I also keep the policy you made long ago, and I only decide to review on the particular stories I follow that you write. In any case, I love this chappy, and I love this couple the most. Your progression in their romance is astounding, and I've always been admiring that about your writing. Thank you for updating, and thanks for staying true to you.

As for updates with me, I'm interviewing for medical school right now!!! My undergrad and MCAT wasn't the most fantastic,so I've been looking at Caribbean U.S. accredited schools. My top choice is St. George's University in Greneda. It may sound sketchy, but trust me it's not. It's fully supported and accredited by the US government as a medical school. I've done my research and all the clinical rotations are in the US (and of course residency is in the US). Anyway, I just wanted to update you with my life, keep your fingers crossed for my acceptance to some medical school (uughhh plllleeeaassseee let me in!!!) but it's my dream and passion, and I just have to follow that. Believe it or not, I sort of learned that from following your writing all these years. Thank you so much, and of course I'll still be actively supporting as much as time permits.Hope you are doing well Kiki, I hope to hear about your life too!



Reviewer: Boop   Signed   [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2013 9:46 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Inuyasha is so terribly adorable in this story!! Don't let those blocks stop you, grrrly!!!
love ya,
Boop!

DaGrrrl says: Shankies, Boop! <33



Reviewer: lenilove89   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2013 3:35 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Great Chapter, worth the wait!!!!!!!!!!!

DaGrrrl says: Thank you! ^^



Reviewer: Lovely Inu   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2013 2:00 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Oooooh, cliff hanger involving Sess, I can't wait to find out what's next! I just love, love, love this story! Thanks Grrrl



Reviewer: Dariana   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2013 2:19 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

I just had to re-read this chapter lol. Inuyasha is so adorable! I'm really excited over the first mention of Sesshoumaru.



Reviewer: StoneCold   Signed   [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2013 1:16 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Yay Sesshomaru! I can't wait to see all that he is going to do in this story. Update soon :)



Reviewer: trinity71307   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2013 10:23 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Sorry I havent be on in a while its been so hard with work and kids I havent really been able to go on and read and review as much as I would like but I really do love your work you do such and absolute job on your writing style its like when I read your stories I can imagine them such great work I love how this story is going, keep up the good work :)

DaGrrrl says: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter. :) And no worries; I totally understand. Fanfic is leisure and we need to deal with the important stuff first. As long as I know that you're around and really want to maintain your account, it will be there. :)



Reviewer: StarsOnMars   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2013 3:32 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

I was wondering if Shessomaru was going to make an appearance in this fic. I'm interested to see how it goes. I got lost a little bit during the talk of getting rid of Shikon forest, but I think I go it after the second read. I'm sure InuYasha will have something to say...er- do about that.



Reviewer: Kat   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2013 3:36 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

AHA, I finally got to read something! So...Seshy is into all this now. You know, I totally forgot about him -_- Good call bringing him in now though, I can't wait to see what happens! I'm so glad that the IK are together again!



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2013 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

I just did a whole excited clapping thing and a huge "A DONE KNOW!!!" (Hey, am dialect speaking girl lol).

Woot. So...PLEASE TELL ME INU IS RELATED TO SHESSHY...The full breed right? Meaning he's VERY OLD... and... *gets all giddy* I wanna shit my theories dammit!! This just got so much more interesting... But... I gotta know Sesshy before I can make it full circle. *___*

I swear when Kouga said Sesshy's full name, it was so powerful *presses my hand against my chest* Be still my erratic heart... Be still *sighs*

I love Inu and Kags... damn are they cute or what? And why did i drool like a damn baby when Inuyash'a naked glory was expressed???

And the first scene - Kags kneeling, praying, hair blowing? I swear if i could draw... well had the patience to draw it - I SO WOULD. That imagery is so beautiful, I was hypnotized!

I hate Logan...but then, damn... why u have to make me feel a little compassion for him by revealing his past? Shit dammit... Now I gotta just focus on his douchey ass to keep adamant in my feelings.

I love Kouga's visionary aspect. He's the future and his dad needs to see that and accept it wholly. He needs to understand the world is changing, according to Kouga and with Kouga's schooling and 'away' experience - that shit is lucrative in it's own right!

But.. SHESSSSSYYY!!! *glomps*

Now I gotta wait o.o
This hoe go be waiting for her fix with growing impatience that'll turn into insanity... Just saying :)

You're struggle doesn't show btw, nor does this update bleed rusty so rest assured woman! :D

And stay rocking *spazzes over Taisho, Taisho Sesshomaru* lol

DaGrrrl says: LOL. You crazy, girl. <333 Thanks for all the great reviews! I appreciate it. :D I haven't been writing such, but nice comments inspire me! And lol @ Sess spazzing. A lot of people were excited when they saw his name. I still don't know how much of a factor he's going to be i this story yet, but we'll see. ^____^



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2013 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope is Found With Time.

This is beautiful. Omg I can't stop singing the same tune, but dammit woman... My heart is consumed with a dull ache!

I gasp and got all teary eyes when Inuyasha said he'll be ready to join his mother.

Like... WHY???

I love how your story - how THIS draws me in and make the real world seem like imagination and this world real.

Then Kouga... I'm pretty sure I'm suppose to fucking hate him. I'm so confused there.

It just hit me that if the forest is destroyed, Inuyasha's home is gone... Kagome can adapt easily, but Inuyasha's been in the forest all his life... Damn...Damn damn damn...

I love how aware Kagome was and is. She accepted her fault, acknowledge her feelings - both fear, regret and hurt - and stressed over Inuyasha.

Such love, I swear it's tangible!! *___*



Reviewer: Kagome313   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2013 6:56 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Caged by Fragile Bars

Omg...Did you...did u hear that loud thundering noise just now?

It was my heart breaking to pieces. :O

I felt mellowed, sad and just...warm reading this. It set me at peace but it distressed me all the same. The emotions I'm experiencing keeps fluctuating and I'm getting delirious just trying to comprehend the feel of what this is making me experience.

My heart goes out for Inuyasha. His insecurities, his frustration - it's painful and I can't help but hurt for him each time I think back to his past.

And then the love Kagome have for him. The complete love and acceptance hurts in a good way, but hurts all the same.

I love how endearing they are - but then the ending? ((rubs my chest))... I complete understand her fear, but the way she dismissed him... even though she doesn't know it - that rejected went skin deep - soul fucking deep... and

*sighs loudly*

My heart is in pain... You need to do something because I gave it to you in a nicely wrapped box and...*shakes fist at u* I love u! See the control you have over me? I'm like an amped up whore lined up for her fix even though it may or may not be bad for her, lol. :D

Also...why do I like kouga and hate his dad in this? I mean...I'm suppose to hate Kouga right...? o.O

......RIGHT??? :O



Reviewer: Inufan82   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2013 1:56 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Another excellent story, I have to say that I love how Koga doesn't seem to take after his father in the slightest, though I do fear what will happen if the elder of the two eventually has his way! Not only would his plan spell major trouble for Inuyasha and Kagome, but the entire forest and all the wildlife who reside in and nearby it as well. Knowing that Koga will ultimately be in control of the business does leave me somewhat hopeful, it's just a question of how soon he might or might not be taking the reigns that's troublesome.

I had a feeling that Sesshomaru would be making an appearance soon after Koga began describing his Japanese supplier, and it's nice to see him officially mentioned! Whether the daiyouka knows about Inuyasha at all may be still unknown, but it would certainly be interesting to see the reaction from both sides should Sesshy eventually come to Shikon and cross paths with the forests resident hanyou.

As for Maikeru and Aiko, I'm absolutely loving the elder couple! In some ways their interactions with each other almost remind me of an older version of Sango and Miroku. I also admire there willingness to help Kagome out so much, though at the same time I also can't help but hate how Maikeru want's Kagome to move in with them. I realize that he wants her to be safe and that his only knowledge of Inuyasha comes from the brief glimpse he got of the hanyou back when the two were younger, but I can't help but hate the guy at bit every time he makes known his desire to take Kags away from the forest and, by extension, Inuyasha.

On that subject, I also love Aiko more and more each time she shoots down her husbands plans! Not only does she actually get how disastrous it can be to try forcibly uprooting Kagome from her childhood home, Inuyasha or not, but she's also, unknowingly, allowing Inu and Kags to spend more time getting to know each other better, which I love. Aiko's belief that matchmaking is best left out of mortal hands was yet another relief! It's nice to know that Doc Hiro probably won't be receiving any support from her over his idea of playing cupid for Koga and Kagome! Besides, knowing Koga's character from the anime/manga it's entirely possibly that he'll eventually, and possibly unknowingly, try to start up a love triangle with Kagome on his own, without any needed help from the Doc.

As for the two misfits themselves, it was extremely sad to learn about their stories. I can't imagine what it's like to lose a parent, or worse yet both of them at such young ages, especially in Inuyasha's case! I know his background, in many ways, seems extremely similar to that of his canon counterpart, but at least that Yash knew what he was and that he still had some family left. Sure Sesshy was likely cold, violent, and distant towards him, but Inuyasha still knew that the ice king existed. This version doesn't even know that his parents were from Japan, nor does he realize that he's a half demon, something that his cannon counter part at least had the privilege of knowing. I realize that such knowledge obviously doesn't help ease loneliness, but at least he'd know that he's definitely not a monster. Well, at least he has Kagome now and visa versa so neither one of them are completely alone any more. That's always a good thing!

Well, guess that's about it for now, excellent work so far! I look forward to seeing how things will progress from here!

DaGrrrl says:

What a lovely, meaty review! It was wonderful to read, thank you! <33

You've really delved into tis one, which is always a joy for a writer. There are some twists and turns but I can't reveal anything just yet. Everyone who reads this has only tasted the mild (super mild) angst of seeing InuYasha and Kagome feel their way around their budding relationship, but the ridges will come soon enough as other characters enter the picture.

I haven't decided how much of a role Sesshomaru will play in this, but he alway adds something interesting when he shows up. As for Kouga and his dad.. His father isn't really a 'terrible' person, just determined and unable to let go of a harsh upbringing. And Koga, well, he's more complex than he looks. (No more hints!)

There are still quite a few chapters to go before this one is over, so there's more IK cuteness to come, along with some drama… I just wish I could get the motivation to get it going already! Urgh.

Thanks again for the awesome review!!



Reviewer: nothingreally   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2013 3:18 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

I love this! Kagome and Inuyasha making up was adorable and it reminds me very much of Beauty and the Beast(favorite Disney movie personally). The history behind the Lupines keeps on getting more and more interesting, and as much as I want to dislike Logan, that flashback just broke through all of it. I'm still rooting for Kouga though, which is something I do not typically say :P I also got ridiculously excited about the mention of Sesshomaru. So looking forward to the next chapter!



Reviewer: enumikie   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2013 6:57 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Finally finished all the published chapters. It should have taken a lot less time to read if I wasn't so busy lately. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I really can't wait for more. I think what I like so much about it is purity of the romance between kagome and Inuyasha. It is almost childlike yet profound. It's not the kind of thing ine sees these days and I like that they aren't jaded. The sweetness of it all almost makes me forget that Inu is some kind of hybrid so I can sort of relate to his character. I can't wait to read more about him and his origin.I like that he is a different kind of hybrid than we would normally see in books. It makes it all the more exciting. All in all this has been a great read. Awesome job! Can't wait to read more.



Reviewer: Smurfette   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2013 8:24 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

Hey Grrrl, Happy 8th Anniversary!!! :)
And of course, is ignoring typos ;)

Love the Chapt. especially the ending...
Can't wait to read more this is getting imteresting hmmmm... my brain is wracking with what's going on. lol

Till then, take care and will review :D



Reviewer: enumikie   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2013 1:08 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Hollow Through the Struggle

I like that more and more of the characters' background is revealed in this chapter. I especially like the little flashbacks (for lack of a better word) that kinda describe the male character both physically and mentally. Like, how he looks, how he thinks, past experiences and all that. nicely done.

DaGrrrl says: Thanks! ^^ Glad to know that you're enjoying it so far. And you're correct to call them flashbacks -that's what they are. I tend to do that when i want to explain history without writing it in the present tense. It's a bit of a 'fanfic' thing, I'm afraid. :)



Reviewer: Amane321   Signed   [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2013 6:56 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: The Winds of Change

I LOVE is type of Inuyasha! His feelings just make me feel all warm inside. Whenever you create a character for Inuyasha, you always keep him in character while also keeping the essence of Inuyasha (If that makes any sense) and I love it!

DaGrrrl says: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like him! This version of Yasha seems to strike a chord with a lot of people. He's ultra fluffy and innocent (definitely not my norm), so I think that's why people love him -they never expected him to come from me. lol. Very happy you like it!



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