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Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 4:55 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

he he ,and the jelosy begun...i love it !good job grrrl!



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 4:37 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Hollow Through the Struggle

I can't wait until Kagome gets to wear the dress! Inuyasha is going to be so happy when she does ^.^ And I loved how cute the wolf is! I hope he loves Kagome just as much and they become one happy family of three.



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 3:59 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

Loved the chapter! You can make boring chores like cooking and cleaning seem more fun than they actually are. And I never expected the twist of the doctor adopting Kagome...what will the well-bred and high society couple do when they find out about her wild and untamed hanyou? Lol.
And btw, I'm listening to U-KISS while I'm writing this ^^ Yay for K-pop!



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 1:39 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

ehhee, if he would apear at my window,every time i'm tinking of him,i'll be happy too!



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 11:53 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

awww....



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 8:54 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

That's my Inu!Always good and carry guy!I'm glad that you continued the story and not let it one shot!



Reviewer: DGirl17   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 7:36 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

NO NO NO, PLEASE DONT LET KOUGA RUIN EVERYTHING. GREAT CHAP. IM LOV'N THIS EVERY TIME I READ IT



Reviewer: DGirl17   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2012 3:30 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

kagome has no idea what she is getting herself into, this is a great story im glad i took the time to read it ;D



Reviewer: Hobbesthetiger   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2012 7:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

Brrr, I could almost feel the cold winter as I read that chapter. Poor Kagome! Good thing she's got a guardian angel with golden eyes =) I can't wait until they meet each other.



Reviewer: J Wintercrow   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2012 11:54 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

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* up date please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*gives your the big kitty eye look* pretty please with inuyasha tied up on top please !!!



Reviewer: nothingreally   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2012 1:15 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

I love how this story is going; it seems like now that the 'honeymoon' is over and they feel secure(mostly) with eachother, they have to deal with what that exactly means for the future. I'm excited to see what happens next, and especially how other motives The Doc and Kouga have for Kagome are going to fit! it's worth the wait. :)



Reviewer: Megan2007   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2012 12:24 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Just want to say this is one of my favorite stories. Please continue the great work! You have such an awesome talent.

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! ^^



Reviewer: InuHanyouNikkie   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2012 11:05 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

I'm on the edge of my chair with this chapter ending!! OMGosh!!!

I wonder what is going to happen with Maikeru and Aiko. I love the way they've taken to her so much and consider her to be their child but know that sometimes meaning well and trying to do something good can backfire sometimes.

I was super thrilled with the realism you had with InuYasha using animal behaviourism to put his wolf companion back in place and remember his rank. Excellent!!! Most Excellent! The biologist in me was squeaking happily.

And the cake scene... Was this some more cuteness? Some fluff? XD

KUDOS!!!!

Can't wait for more!



Reviewer: InuHanyouNikkie   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2012 10:59 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

A very beautiful chapter that I thoroughly enjoyed very much. I enjoyed the fresh take you had with Kagome touching Inuyasha's ears for the first time.

The scene with the scarf had me squeeing with the cuteness of it all.

All in all I would give this ten pairs of thumbs WAAAAYYYY UP!!

Kudos and thank you so much for this chapter treat!



Reviewer: J Wintercrow   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2012 5:41 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

it took me forever to find the review button sorry InuGrrrl *holds out a big cookie* this is one of my favs of yours and i am wonder how kagome will act when she finds out what the good doctor has planed for her..... or will kouga spill the beans first..... *glomps and trys to read your mind* i cant wait 5 yrs to know

8- because i want to know ;-;



Reviewer: Dariana   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2012 1:13 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

i had to re-read this story, it's one of my favorites. I would like to see more interaction between kagome and koga or with other people. I love having inuyasha jealous over kagome.



Reviewer: TaroBoBo95   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2012 4:53 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

I love this story. :)
It seems really familiar, and I think xXMidnightWingsxX or something like that wrote one that was called Until Forever Ends. I totally see where she took your stuff, and why she took the story off of Fanfiction. Anyways, I hope you update soon.

Da Grrrl Says: Yes, that's the girl who plagiarized me. She, and others like her who stole my work, are the reason why I emptied my FFN account. To her credit, when confronted with the evidence, she didn't try to bullshit me. She apologized and said she would not do anything like that again. I don't know if she kept her word, but I let it go at that. I think what bugged me the most is that she had me and my story under her favorites for author and fiction. It boggles the mind why she'd steal from someone she admired. I'm the kind of person who will give opinion/advice/critique if personally asked. If she wanted help with her story, she could have asked. I'm good that way. But she went another route entirely. My guess is that she may have removed it after I outted her on my profile, as I do with most of the thieves I catch. But if she didn't want her name on that list, she shouldn't have stolen my work.

Anyway, I'm glad you like the story. ^_____^



Reviewer: Freeman Pwns All   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2012 7:30 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

...and now I feel the need to go and watch Tarzan. I love how different this is.



Reviewer: Rickosokay   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2012 7:42 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

Can't wait for another Chapter!!! Hope It's put up soon!



Reviewer: Eris of Chaos   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2012 1:43 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

This one is also one of my favs. I would love to see another chapter, but it's worth the wait!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much! I'm trying to get updates out on stories that haven't gotten any love in a while, but I'll be back on this one soon. :D



Reviewer: DeadMaster02   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2012 4:44 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

Holy choco-bunnies. @//@ Hopefully Inu can put some of his language skills to tell Kags that Kouga was with the Hunters! This is getting gooooood!!!!!



Reviewer: Shurokami   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 6:37 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

Excellent chapter! It's great to see Kouga finally coming into the picture and adding a bit of his drama!



Reviewer: Frosta   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2012 12:49 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Wolves at the Gate

I still really do love this story! This was one of the first ones that I read of yours. Well the rest is now history as I slowly read your other works as well.



Reviewer: InuHanyouNikkie   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2012 6:44 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Beautiful!

So beautiful! I so very enjoyed the way you included the behavioural mannerisms of canid hierarchy. The biologist in me was purring with much pleasure at the delightful realisms!! KUDOS!!

I do like the way Aiko and Maikeru both have parental adoration with Kagome and think of her as something of a daughter. I am rather liking their characters but I do ponder if in their desire to take of care of Kagome if they may overdo or overstep with what power they have.

The ending was also sooooo very adorable! The joys of being tempted by the Dark Side - they have cake!!

All in all I Loved this chapter!! Thank you for this wonderful story - and so full of Squish and Fluff!! *winks*

BRAVO!!!



Reviewer: InuHanyouNikkie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2012 9:09 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

I am loving this chapter so much!

I got a kick out of the way Inu's wolf was making sure Kagome wasn't going anywhere while his master 'slept'. The realism in which you write is positively A-MAZ-ING! The way you described InuYasha after the bear attack and his injuries - awesome!!

I don't think I have ever read in a fanfic where InuYasha had an instinctive reaction to protect himself when Kagome started touching his ears as he slept. BRILLIANT!!

I think I am really enjoying the refreshing way you portrayed InuYasha in this fic with his mannerisms and speech. It's brilliant as well!!!

Oh yes, this was a beautiful chapter indeed!!

LOVE IT!!

And tomorrow - if plans go well - another chapter!



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