Date: February 07, 2012 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.
Can't wait for the next chap!
Date: February 07, 2012 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.
"Besides, I'm quite fond of those puppy ears."... Seriously, who wouldn't love those ears? ^-^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 07, 2012 9:55 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.
Awe, I'm so glad I stumbled across this story its so adorable. Inuyasha's all running by instinct, courting Kagome. She doesn't even know that she accepted him by taking the food and giving him some as well. I want to also thank Zach and Midi because this story is awesome, and if it wasn't for them you wouldn't be continuing it. Well now for the long wait for the next chapter. Can't wait. ~
Date: February 07, 2012 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
First I want to say that I think this story is fantastic. It is amazingly well written and worded; very beautifully. I also love the way you've captured Inuyasha and Kagome respectively. They are both truly believable and breathing characters and I've enjoyed immensely reading them as you're portrayed them. I am very eager to read more chapters.
On a second note, I feel that I should tell you that I believe your story has been plagiarized to a degree. Actually, precisely before reading this story, I stumbled upon another story called 'Until Forever Ends', by xXMidnightWingsXx on this site. I read through it and rather liked the concept. Then, not a day later, I found your story and read through it also; there are more than several exact phrases, word for word, in common between the two stories, aside from carrying a highly similar plot. Even if your story had not been published years before theirs, I still would have pegged you as the original author; your story flows much more fluidly, and the select passages shared between both of your stories are followed continuously through yours. While it differs enough that I would not outright say they have copied everything of yours, I still figured that I ought to bring it to your attention because if I were in the same scenario I would at least like to be aware.
Thank you for writing such a highly polished story and again, I am looking quite forward to more.
-Tem
Date: February 07, 2012 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
Those are some fantastic pictures to accompany the story.
As far as this chapter goes, I thought it was quite delightful. Very sweet, fluffy, and all the other positive words I can't think of a 5:14AM. xD Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Date: February 07, 2012 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
I just can't believe how good of a story this is.
This chapter was so sweet, every single moment with those two together end up being adorable.
I hope to read another chapter soon. (:
Date: February 07, 2012 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
Kya! I loved this! So great! I wonder if there's more to those scenes on your site, maybe I'll check lol. Please update soon, I love this so much
Date: February 07, 2012 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
great update... nice that kagome is slowly teaching inuyasha... and they're getting closer too... sweet that inuyasha told kagome about his feelings... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
Date: February 07, 2012 9:35 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
Thanks for the update; it's nice to get inside Inuyasha's head since he can't communicate that well. The end was wonderful though; he communicated the most important part!
Date: February 07, 2012 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
this is such a cute story ^^. I just adore it!
Update soon please
-jess
Date: February 07, 2012 9:33 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
This chapter was fantastic :) I can't wait to see what happens next a32;This chapter was fantastic :) I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: February 07, 2012 9:32 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
OMFG YOUR FANFIC IS FUCKING AMAZING! AH! post up soon! i have been glued to my computer fer the past hour @_@
Date: February 07, 2012 9:32 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
Wow. This story is just, so full of emotion. At first I was a little drawn back by how foriegn things were, but for some reason I kept on reading. And it's one of those truly beautiful things that just makes our heart want to jump. At first I didn't think Kagome would be so...willing. But you made Inuyasha seem so...mysterious and wanting. xDD;;
I love your sense of writing, I can tell you took a lot of time writing it. I'm hoping to see another chapter~
Date: February 07, 2012 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
So Adorable. I loved it! I wasn't at all expecting him to tell her he loved her, I almost cried for him when Kagome didn't understand what he was trying to say! I'm glad she realized it though in the end. And that was some kiss I might add. Wow. Inuyasha is so cute and romantic without even knowing it. God, I completely love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I was glad that I didn't have to wait very long for this one. Maybe History will repeats itself? lol. I'm kidding. I really liked Ayamegusa's gallery. The pictures were so cute. Thanks for everything. -Lakodasmoon~
Date: February 07, 2012 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
MUAHAHHAHAHAHA
sry feel so fiddy ;D
omfG! finally some fluff and ... intimate moments ;D
lol LOVE this chapter! hope u update soon!
kimiko
Date: February 07, 2012 9:30 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
awe what a chapter he kiss her sniff. I found out that I never review after reading each chapter you have posted. and I find that super weird see how you took up my challenge and I haven't been review at all. that's a bit naughty for me gomen for that I have been reading and have my friends read this too. sorry for not review so far I have been reading and enjoying every chapter
Date: February 07, 2012 9:29 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
Awesome Fic, Keep the chapters coming.
Date: February 07, 2012 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
NEXT CHAPIE..^_^ PLZ PLZ
U KNW I THINK THIS IS MY 2ND TIME REVIEWING.. HAHA CAN'T WAIT..
Date: February 07, 2012 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
So cute!
Oh, and the art from the link is amazing. Great job to whoever created those pictures.
Date: February 07, 2012 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
I've really enjoyed reading this story but I can't wait until we get some angsty goodness going. My only request is please don't kill the wolf! I have a bad feeling he's going to die saving Kagome from some horrible death she stumbles into. I may be way off with that theory though. I really get a kick out of how feral Inuyasha is here, but still has those principles from his childhood. Can't wait for an update!
Date: February 07, 2012 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
absolutely beautiful with such detailed patience and love. Please continue soon
Date: February 07, 2012 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
You know, I am almost 28 years old. I have been around the block in the Inuyasha fandom, having been around since 2001 or so. And really, being that old and having read as many fnafictions as I have starring my favorite couple of all time, I should be jaded by now and beyond the urge to squeal like a fan-girl on crack! This story nearly got me! I barely resisted the urge, lol...this really is a wonderful little story and you have me pathetically addicted to it. I do hope you choose to continue it sometime soon. I just love everything about their little situation. They are being so cute! Especially Inuyasha. Even though I love his gruff, full of attitude, nasty-tempered self, this is a fun change and easy to believe considering the circumstances. Oh, I really do hope you write more! I know you seem to have a lot of other stories, but if you get a change sometime soon, please dust this one off. You might get me to squeal like a fangirl yet! Thanks for the wonderful reading! :-)
Date: February 07, 2012 9:25 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
Please! Please! Update this story.
Date: February 07, 2012 9:25 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.
please please! update this story soon! XD
Date: February 07, 2012 9:17 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined
inu's absolutely adorable.
nice cliffy you got us there in the end D8
hope u update soon!
kimiko