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Reviewer: Smurfette   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2011 9:58 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Excellent Chapter!!! Love the artwork too. Nicely done! I can't wait to read more chappies on this lovely story. Another one of my faves :) Thanks again for updating!

Hope you're doing good and well, Grrrl,

Till then, back to read more and review!!!  



Reviewer: starredvans   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2011 2:07 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

so i've been reading you stories for about a year now (maybe a little more) but i have to say that i LOVE your stories! your writing style is definitely different from a lot of other authors and im glad to see that it seems like some of your older stories are going to be finished! anyways thats it for now!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2011 2:56 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

They are SO fricken' cute. It always makes me grin so hard picturing how InuYasha sounds talking the way he does and all those *squish* moments between him and Kagome. The best had to be when he came out with "Tomorrow and tomorrow, and tomorrow..." xD The excitement there is adorable...and awww at her accepting his proposal!

Though Kouga coming can't be too good. He seems well-intentioned, but like Doc Hiro...and especially because he's in business with his Dad...I can't see him reacting well if he were to find out about InuYasha. The Dad sounds sketchy, too. I wonder if he meant what I think he did when he mentioned his Dad being "too rough" and how he got that cough.

 SUCH a sweet update, though. The art to go along with it is so pretty and eye-popping, too!

~Am :D



Reviewer: wintercrow   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2011 10:27 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

i love your stories i was soo happy you updated on ff.net i been reading from chaper 1 so please dont stop my email is j.wintercrow@yahoo.com send me emails of it if you dont want to post i just want to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love alot of your stories i was sad when i saw you post that you might not post again :-:



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2011 9:51 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Okay, now that I've remembered what's going on. :P That was so adorable.

I like their blossoming relationship, a lot. I interested in what is going to happen with Kouga and stuff too. Hmmm Very interested in the entire plot. :P Keep up the good work.



Reviewer: Lakdoasmoon   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2011 7:27 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Wonderful chapter. I let out a small squeal when I had saw that it was updated! Favorite story by far. I love the way you make Inuyasha. Hes so insecure and adorable. Keep it up. Im sorry that you were plagiarized again. It's not right to take something that is not yours AND get credit for it. Don't let it get you down. You're doing awesome with this story can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Lakodasmoon~



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2011 5:49 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Okay. I need to go back and re-read this one, as I totally forget wtf is going on. I'll come back and give a proper review once I have done so. I just want to let you know that I am reading. :)



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 11:50 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

*Squeals*
I. can't. believe. it.

All my old favorites are just being picked up again, it's so exciting. I know (from your blog) that this isn't on your list of top favorites because it's so ... sweet, but I love this story. I love nearly everything you write, so it's no surprise.

Thank you for this update, it really my day - everytime you update, my day is made so... *cough* that's no surprise... again.



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Awesome chapter. I have always loved this sweet story, and Inuyasha's proposal and Kagome's acceptance fit right into that. However, trouble (albeit well intentioned trouble) is coming fast to shake them up. Between Kouga and the doctor, Kagome and Inuyasha's little happiness bubble is about to burst. They're adorable...but bring on the angst. :-)



Reviewer: soliea0death   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 5:22 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Oh, I'm so glad I got to see what happened next. Heck, I read over the chapter a couple of times cause I liked it so much. Now things are getting more interesting. I knew that guy was Kouga, now he's gonna come by with the doc to see Kagome. That part's inevitable, but the real question it how will he react? Since Inu saw him with the other hunters, he may think Kags is in danger. Well anyway, I liked how you ended it with her answer, it was just so sweet. I wasn't expecting him to be human on the new moon, it didn't seem like you were gonna include that detail for the longest time. Oh well, I still loved it, and I hope that you update this one soon.



Reviewer: Dare9179   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 1:27 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

LOVE IT!!!!!!! Hope u can update soon

 



Reviewer: ZachtheHurricane   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 1:21 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

Thanks for the late birthday present in the form of this update. A wonderful chapter, I just hope I don't have to wait quite as long for the next one. Sorry to hear you got plagarized and I hope the person who did it gets run over by a large 18-wheeler.

Hope you are doing well!

Zach



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 11:00 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

btw am sorry to hear about u being plagiarized - that just sucks



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 10:57 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

The scroll bar reached the end =/

But yo - i LOVE this!!! I can't begin to express how much i love it!!!

First off, you gave us nothing but sweetness, but lawd u wouldnt b da grrrl if u didnt throw in a lil hindrance in the pot. I knew it was Kouga! - But with him coming in the picture and wanting to see Kagome - i fear for the worst. He's so dominating and am sure he'll b overbearing on his demands to make her his.

Further more, I love how both Inuyasha and Kagome are so innocent in everything... and how they're just finding out things bit by bit and just acting on pure instinct. I'm curious to know how Inu would reveal his other nature and the story behind that. Also I love Inu's mama - she was truly an amazing woman who taught her son all the necessary things he didn't yet understand but now with growth he's grasping a little of everything. Your story is well thought out and everything jus fits perfectly when the time comes.

It's funny how both of them has their own type of insecurities welling up in them - I just can't wait for Inuyasha's communication skill to strengthen to bridge his lack of complete understand =)

Ps... Kouga being older than Inu is so cool! lol, idk y but i love when some1 who's strong/domineering is younger than some1 who isn't on the same level of them.

You keep ma heart warm with this and am just exploding with sweet-filled emotions.

Can't wait to read more - and am thoroughly happy to be back into your stories - lawd knows i've fallen back alot



Reviewer: Lindsay   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 10:48 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

::LOUD, LONG SQUEEL!!!:: You have NO idea how excited I was to wake up this morning to see that you'd updated this fic!!!!!!!!! Thank you grrrl!!!! I loved it! And I know I'll be waiting awhile but I still can't help but say that I can't wait til you update it again!

(On a more somber note, that sucks about being plagiarized...again! Don't people have any original ideas of their own? I feel ya though, I've been in a "I'm sick of people" mode myself, but don't let those brainless, losers get you down!)

LOVED THE CHAPPIE! THANX FOR THE UPDATE!!



Reviewer: YES!!!!!!!!   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 10:35 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: All My Life Starts Now...

I got so excited when I saw this was updated! Oooh, I loved it all so much! I can't wait to see more of it, cause now we can expect conflict when Kouga comes in to meet her. The question is what will be Inuyasha's reaction. I mean, he's gonna recognize him from the hunters, so there's no telling what he's going to think. I didn't think you were gonna use the moonless night thing, but I think it's always a nice thing to add. I hope I get to read more of this soon.



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 10:05 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

I have a feeling that dude is Kouga. And when he comes baq and sees Kagome he'll want to wed her, causing conflict between Kags n Inu...

I especially love the raw cuteness u produced - Am over here blushing when they blush!! lol. It was real sweet when Kags came to term with her love...

You're amazing grrrl - fo rl



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2011 9:31 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: What Words Cannot Say.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!

Inuyasha is so damn cute!!!

I LOVE THIS FIC!!!! It's so damn sweet - i swear it gives me Diabetes!! lol



Reviewer: Lakodasmoon   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:35 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

Just got finishing reading this one again. I swear it never gets old. It's actually my favorite story of yours. (Though I love everything you write.) It's amazing how many different characters you can make. I don't understand why people want characters to be the same in everysingle story. It's crazy what the human mind can come up with. You are so creative and I am glad you share it. It's great that you stand for what you believe. People can't knock the creative side out of you. You don't let people get you down and continue to write for those who love your work. If you changed because of what people said it would be tragic. Glad you don't. Just wanted to tell you how much I appriecate your writing and hopefully you continue this story soon. If not you have many others I can read. -Wiggles brows.-

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you for such a thoughtful review. Seriously. You wouldn't believe it, but as my friend and I added some of my old reviews to the site tonight (so I can have most of everything in the same place as an archive), we were talking about all the mess I've dealt with in this fandom and I was telling her that back then I was always ready to throw my hands up for a fight, but that I probably would have dumped this fandom if I had really known what I was setting myself up for. lol.

You're right; people I've never met have said a lot of vicious, and almost always, untrue things about me for no apparent reason. Someone told me this was the "nasty side of fame", but I think I'm just dealing with a lot of stupid, green people. They don't feel I deserve whatever "so called" recognition I have so they spend a lot of time bashing me. You'd think that 6 years later they'd finally see that it's not ever going to work, but what can you do? Can't teach dummies to count their failures, eh?

But aside from the crap, having so many people enjoy the fiction and leave comments like this one has always gone a long way in keeping my pen moving. I write for you guys, really, so it genuinely makes my day to see a comment like this. Thank you.

P.S. I'm actually writing this chapter right now. ^^



Reviewer: Kimberly   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2010 9:32 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

I love what you have done with your story so far. Are you going to be writing any more chapters any time soon?



Reviewer: Kim   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2010 9:24 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

When are you going to write another chapter?

Da Grrrl Says: I'm actually working on this one, so it should be soon.



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2010 7:01 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

Well you may not have been in a writing mood but this is beautiful as per usual!  He's so sweet and wonderful and you've really captured the difficulty of language and culture barriers!



Reviewer: AnimeLadyPIMP aka Selina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2010 11:58 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

Awwww. InuYasha's soo cute. Im glad him and Kagome are finally getting more intimate.



Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2010 9:48 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

This is still one of my top faves, Grrrl.  You know that while I love me some XXX smuttage, deep down I'm a HUGE sucker for a good WAFF romance.  You never cease to deliver.  I don't know why, but this one brings to mind "All The Things You Never Said" (I think that's what I was called, right?  >.>) with it's tone, and you know how much I loved that one, too.  Great update, girl.  I sense that maybe things are about to get a bit more "intimate?"  I'm also wondering what the deal with these hunters is.  Was the one dude (the "son") supposed to be a human version of Koga?  Doesn't "lupine" translate into something to do with dogs or wolves or something?  I'm guessing since that's what Harry Potter's teacher's name was in one of those movies, and he was a werewolf.  >.>  (Yes, I gain my knowledge via Harry Potter movies.  Explains a lot, eh?  LMAO).  Okay, I'm gonna shut up now.  I loved it.  More.  More.  More.  :P



Reviewer: Kit   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2010 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Hearts Entwined

HUZZAH! I thought you'd never update! I'm SO glad you continued this.^_^ I can't wait for the next one~^_^~

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! Happy you enjoyed. :D



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