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Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Hollow Through the Struggle

Inuyasha was an adorable child! I'm angry at the villigers! I'm so glad he has his wolf. ^_^ Yes! Go get Kagome Inuyasha!



Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 11:09 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

I hope they meet before the doctor goes to her. Inuyasha's so sweet! I feel like he knows so much, but he's so innocent at the same time. It's perfect! Amazing chapter!



Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 11:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

The beginning made my heart break when Kagome's mother died. And how Inuyasha had to grow up so quickly. But the end made me so happy! I can't wait until they meet.



Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Me again! I love this story! I read this on fanfic and now I'm here. ^_^ This chapter is adorable! Inuyasha and his wolf's interaction is perfect. And the couple are so nice to Kagome. I just hope they don't get in the way of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship. I'm like Inuyasha's broken speech. Makes him so incredibly cute! You make me so jealous of Kagome in all your stories. She's so lucky! :D Amazing chapter! Update soon please!



Author's Response: Mika!

Thank you for so many nice reviews. I really appreciate your taking the time tod o so! I also love that you're into the fic -woot! I'm neglectful of this story, but it's nice to know that some appreciate the effort when I'm able to update. I'm writing the next chapter now wwhile I'm feeling it. Hope ya like it. :D



Reviewer: eatthetrees   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 1:53 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Fuck yeah, InuGrrrl!!!

I would like some vanilla cake and Inuyasha, please. Kagome, that lucky bitch. I'm really, really, really (times infinity) looking forward to the next chapter.

InuKag? Naked? Friction?

Please? :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review luv, babe! I don't know about friction.... YET, but eventually, yeah, friction. Lots. *nods all hentai-like*

And I know I've told you this before, but I LOVE your penname! It's fucking neat! xD



Reviewer: Inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2009 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Updates! ya know I love em! Wondered when the good Dr. was gonna make a showing, so should be intereting when he gets a load of InuYasha. Sweet update.  Hugzz..

Author's Response: Hey Maru! Thanks for the review lub. I've been sticking in a little writing in between work times, so it's been >.> an adventure. Glad ya liked the wares, tho! *hugs*



Reviewer: Selina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2009 10:00 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

This story is absolutely adorable; I just fell in complete love with it!  I love InuYasha and his wolf, and their interactions are perfect.  I'm hoping Maikero and Aiko won't prove to be too big of an obstacle for InuYasha and Kagome to grow closer, but my instincts are saying yes (but good intentions on their part of course, but still...). 

And now I'm hooked on another story!  :D  Very, very cute, girlie, and congrats on the writing, especially for a story you haven't touched in a while!  Looking forward to more, when you're up to it (and not a moment sooner!)  *hugs*



Author's Response: LINA!!!!!!

(You know I have to do that.)

I'm squeeing that you like this. It gives my fluff a confidence boost. This fiction is so... cottony! It's hard to not have them curse or say something >.> AU-like, but I'm getting there! I'm working on the next chap this very minute, and with some luck, it will post asap. I would have been done today, but I had a lot of stuff to do (more in mail). Thanks for the lovely review lub! *hugs*



Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2009 8:53 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Okay, I must be PMSing or this was just that damned good.  My eyeballs are leaking.  *cries*  So many warm and fuzzies fluttering in my belly.  I love this fic.  Then again, I love all your fics.  But I have a tender spot for this particular InuYasha. 

bosom ... mine ... head ... Inu ... NOW!  :P



Author's Response: BWAHAHAHAHA!

You have NO idea how much I laugh when you do that shit! xD

And yes, you're sooo PMSing, girl! I mean, it's fluffy, but lawd. The romantic in you is breaking to get free! But ish happy that you're lubbin' on it. Makes me feel better for being shitty with updates. >.>

BOSOM! LMAO!!!



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2009 4:56 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

Aw, this is a cute story.

Author's Response: Thank you much! :D



Reviewer: Simmer_Dee   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2009 1:02 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

wow, I'm wondering why I never read this one before today.... amazing story, I'm anxious to read the next chapter =] update soon

Author's Response: Shankies, Dee Dee! <33

It's kinda hidden on my site because I suck at updating it. >.< Happy you're enjoying, though!



Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 11:00 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

"...Nilla?"

you sold me at that quote, hook, line and sinker, (I also a firm lover of vanilla but do love the occasional dark chocolate).  This fic just makes me all floaty inside and I think that their pairing in this has quite possibly the most heartfelt interactions despite Inuyasha's lack of verbal communcation. Every chapter in this story brings a whole new appreciation to my favorite pairing and reminds me always of my love of these two.

And how are you doing lovely?  I hope you're taking some quality time out for yourself every now and then and not sweating over a keyboard.  I'm sending you some virtual pancakes just in case ^_^ mmmmhmmm who doesn't love pancakes?  I any case my love and thoughts are always with you and I hope to hear back from you sometime!



Author's Response: My Paw Print! *hugs*

I think he had me at the Nilla, too! I could totally picture his face and simply had to put it in. :D

Thanks so much for the review lub. I know I suck for not updating this sooner. I've just been swamped, and even when I cut a few things back, there never seems to be enough time for writing the way I want. Then, my carpal flared up last week and everything just HURT. It's better now, good enough to write a bit, but I'm taking it easy.

I like the way these two are working out. They're slow, but deep -if that makes sense. They're connecting on a deeper level than physical, and as the next chapter will reveal, they're willing to change for one another and meet halfway. They're endearing. :)

In "me" land, I'm okay, other than the carpal. I'm not 100%, but better than I was 2 days ago when my shoulder felt like someone punched me 80 times in the same spot. >.< But the pancakes help greatly -especially if they're chocolate chip pancakes (Not a big choco fan, but in small doses, yes!). :D

How are YOU fairing? I hope the summer has been good to ya!

*loves 'n snugs*



Reviewer: InuSoul   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 9:45 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

I love this story i'm so glad your working on it again!! *jumps up and down* YAY

Author's Response: Thanks for the review lub, chica! :D

Sorry I haven't been updating this. I keep saying I'm going to put more time into writing and I keep slipping up. But I'm slooooowly working my way there. :D



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 8:27 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

ADORABLE chapter.  Inu and Kag are so sweet in this story.  I keep telling you that you underestimate yourself with the fluff.  This was just right without sending folks into sugar shock.  :D  I look forward to seeing what you do next.  And I have got to drop you some mail, girl.  We haven't chatted in a while.

Author's Response: MS. GODDESS!

You're right! We haven't shot the shit in WAY too long! Hit me up when you get some free time. :D

I'm still not keen on the fluff. I'm tryna 'work it out' but it does beat me up. >.< For whatever reason, I felt the immediate urge to pile-drive into chapter 7, so expect it shortly. I think a lot of it has to do with shorter chapters. I think my method is actually working for a change!



Reviewer: Nutella   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 6:29 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

OMG! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!! AND UPDATE!! Grrrl, you never fail to please. :D LOL. Great chapter! Don't know how long I've been waiting for this. *stern face* But I'm glad you finally updated. Smashing job, as always, dove. ^_^ Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next one! XD

Author's Response: MY NUTELLA!!!!!

Girl, I'm SO sorry. I totally forgot that you've been waiting on this one. You know what? Next chap is all yours, babe! :D

I wanted it to be longer, but I'm trying to get away from thick-ass chapters that slow me down and make me not want to update for a while. >.< But keep your fingers crossed; you may see your chap a lot sooner than you think! <33



Reviewer: Lindsay   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 5:51 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Ache That Won't Let Me Wait.

I'm so glad for an update! I started reading this story on FF.net, and was waiting for the next chapter! Can't wait til theirs another update!



Author's Response: Thanks Linds! :D

I admit, I've been INCREDIBLY lazy with this story, but as you can see, it's not dead. I refuse to let it go without an end! Thanks for the review. ^_^



Reviewer: artviewer12889   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2009 5:06 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

I was hoping to find more chapters here where they left off on DA, but alas, only 5 chapters. Are there any plans to add to this one? It's my favorite.

I'm also curious about the Girlfriend Effect sotry. I just finished Chapter 15. Do these stories have endings?



Reviewer: Neddi   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2009 10:34 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

Oh the shame I feel for not seeing this update. Do you know how much I love this story. It is so innocent and sweet. It will be all the more enticing when they have their first lovers embrace. Exploring the unknown. Lawd Im a perv. Anywayz. Thanks for the beautiful chapter you wrote and dedicated to me. I love you for it. Hugz.



Reviewer: I love it   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 5:45 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

Are you planning to continue this story? it's too cute=) I hope youupdate soon...

Author's Response: Thanks!! :D Yesh, I definitely plan to continue this one. >.< It just takes me a little longer...



Reviewer: kimberly johnson   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2009 9:21 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

Inugrrrl, I'm in love with your stories!! i love this one so much!! there's just something about this one that is unique (don't get me wrong, all of your stories are deliciously unique!! lol) but idk, this one is...different and i really like it!! Thanks for creating it, Ms.Brilliance (lol!! that may be my new nickname for u!!)

Author's Response: Hey Kimmy! Whoa, you are making it through all of my fics! I'll have to make new ones to slow you down. :D Thanks bunches for all of the review love you've shown me. <3 These days, it really inspires me to know that my lovelies still like the fics and are having fun. I'm a bit behind, well, on everything! But I'm writing again, so who knows? I just may update this very soon!



Reviewer: Inu Tenshi 1   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2009 9:06 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

I'm sorry if you get confused with my last review.  It was meant for this chapter heh heh heh *scratches back of head* sorry 'bout that.  But I still think this whole story is ABSOLUTLY ADORIBLE AND POSITIVLY ROMANTIC!!!!  Like I said in the other review, UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks again, and I totally understand. :D Sometimes people review the first chap by accident thinking it's the current one. It's cool -and I'm glad you're having a good time with it. An update should be coming soon!



Reviewer: Inu Tenshi 1   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2009 8:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

Awwww!  Kawaiiiiiii!  That is soooo cute!!!  Please! Please! Pllleeeeaaaasssse!!! UPDATE SOOOOOON!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm happy you like it! :D



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 1:57 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

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Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here:
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Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here:
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Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!

Please pick up your award here:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

Our official website can be found here:
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/

Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here:
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/

Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here:
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html

First place awards will be on permanent display here:
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html

Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!

Please pick up your award here:
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~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots
Owners of the Feudal Association



Reviewer: Inuyashaloverr - Feudal Association   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 23, 2008 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

Our official website can be found here:

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The current nominations pages are here:

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Check them out to see what you were nominated for!

Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here:

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Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!

 

~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots

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Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2008 9:53 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

KIKIIIIIII!!!!!! 'glomp'

I'm so sorry it's been so long since I've reviewed, but don't worry I've been reading everything when I get free time.  This fic always makes me squeal (that and true colors).  I love Inuyasha's soft nature towards Kagome and the old fashion romance.  It's almost a breath of fresh air to read this fic.  Hmmm, I wonder when Kagome will give in to Inuyasha's alluring self???!!! 'wiggles eyebrows, patience is not always a virtue! go get him while he's hot kaggs!' ^_^  And how are you dear?  Everything going well I presume and hope?  Until my next review Kik!  Keep up the oh so talented and fantastical work okay?  I'm always rooting for you.



Author's Response: PAW PRINT!! *squeezes*

How the heck are you?? I know it's been a little while, but so long as you check in every now and again I won't have to worry. ^_^ Things are good on this end, if not hectic. ED is having an anniversary and I'm remodeling all of its sites and it's been... @.@ Hardly enough time to write, but I'm getting there. And how are you?? I hope all is well and the holidays are good for you. <33 I'm SO sorry it's taking me so long to get in gear with the stories you like the most. I don't know where my inspiration vanishes to. But I'm trying to pull it together, so keep the faith that 2009 is the year when I complete everything -finally!! *hugs*



Reviewer: Natilie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2008 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: A Wish for Tomorrow

I’ve always liked this one for many reasons. Mainly because there’s no technology; more back to the basics. It’s more similar to the InuYasha anime when they go to the feudal era. I love it. ^^It’s great that you have so much to play with in this story. You’ve kept the characters down a lot so it gives the ones you do show, more time and space to develop together and separately. Until you add more characters. How is everything going with you? Anything new and exciting happen recently?

Author's Response: Nat! ^_^ There won't be that many more characters, honestly. I'm trying to stop this fic from becoming an "epic". I want to have almost all of the focus on InuYasha and Kagome, and let them evolve into what I want them to become. And you're right. It's a "back to basics" kind of story where they don't have many modern conveniences, and the characters aren't worldly. They're kids living in the terrain, so to speak, so that's different for me. But I do have fun writing it and I don't hate it yet, so... xD

Thanks for a lovely review! <3



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