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Reviewer: FreemanPwns All   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2008 6:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

I think you deserve another poke for this one - I feel like Im in a drought and you're the oasis! Anyway, looking forward to this and all your others.

Author's Response: That made me grin. Thanks for caring enough to give me a poke. I'm going to get something out soon. It may be a little short >.< but I swear it's coming!!



Reviewer: Nikore   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! i hope you will add in another chapter soon... i REALLY want to know what happens next! plez update as soon as possible!!!! thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks, Nikore! A new chappie is actually in the works, so expect something soon! Thanks for being my 100th review!!!!



Reviewer: inuaddict   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2008 1:46 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Such a sweet story!  Hope you continue soon!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! This one is like pulling teeth for me, but I'm slowly working on it. :)



Reviewer: inuaddict   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2008 1:09 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Hollow Through the Struggle

Yay!  Go get her InuYasha!  I am enjoying this soooo much!



Reviewer: inuaddict   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2008 3:12 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: With the Best Intentions...

This is so sweet! I'm really enjoying it and love the descriptive writing. On to the next chapter!



Reviewer: Mage Delbene   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 4:01 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Ohhhhhhhhh.... I'm here!!! You see... came straight to the site, should continue reading it!!! LOL

Gosh, it's beautiful and, and... don't know. Hearbreaking? Oh Drama Queen!! I know, just know you are going to make me cry endless with this story!!! But you are going to make it better, ne? LOL

Know you have a lot of thing in your head now!! I'm with you, and you know it! Gonna write you an e-mail this night, just to be with you!!!

Be fine baby!! Hugs you senseless!! Lots of love!!!!!!!

MamaHen



Author's Response: Mama Hen! <333 Thanks for reading it. Like all of my stuff, I'm behind, but I'll catch up soon. *hugs*rnAnd I'm okay, don't worry. :)



Reviewer: Fiona   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 3:44 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

I really am in love with this story. The concept is amazing, and it's quite touching. Your writing always seems so utterly human, and this story is no exception.

I love the fact that you have really gone into Inuyasha's past to show why he is the way he is. So many authors never do that and it's always slightly irked me. 

Anyways I'm loving this story, it has a great potential, and I have no doubt that you will live up to it.

Thanks for thegret read!



Author's Response: Thank you, Fiona! ^_^ I'm really happy that you like it. I'm behind on chaps because of universal block >.< but I'm working on this one along with a few others. Canon-esque is different for me, but I'm really hoping I give you guys a decent read. :)



Reviewer: GrammyInuLvr   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 10:38 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Okay, THIS is gonna be a great story.  I can feel it.  I LOVE the premise behind it already. 

~Liz



Author's Response: Thanks! But it's gonna be a short one, though. >.>



Reviewer: Zach   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2007 10:16 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Wow, I love this story and I hope you update it someday soon.

Sincerely,

 

Your Fan,

 

Zach 



Author's Response: Hi Zach! Thanks very much for reading this one. I know the updates for it have been slow, but I promise that I'll get something out soon. :)



Reviewer: The Daimyo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2007 5:57 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term!

Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month.
http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-InuKag-Romance-Fic-1st.jpg

After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php

The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year.

Our official website can be found here -
http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/

And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here -
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/

Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!

~ The Daimyo
Owner of the Feudal Association



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2007 12:21 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

I finally got a break from school work XD This chappy was sooo kawaii!! Kinda got mad at kagome for getting so scared over inu, even more so that he was worried about that same behaivour she had.

but all is well now, ne? Well hopefully! ^__^ and i saw you updated KOR... O.O I'm a happy inu lover! *squee* tho am leaving it for last *Sigh* the agony of waiting, lol

ja kiki! hope all things get better for u, n less hectic... XD



Author's Response: Bubbles!! Thanks for popping in. ^^ Things are crazy with the server change, but we're hanging in there. My updates are slow atm, but getting better. Hope to have more for yall soon. <3



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2007 10:38 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Oh, Sweetie, this is good! DAMNED good! Where on earth did you come up with these chappies?

It's like a one of those old romance novels that my mother would buy from the drugstore not far from where we lived when I was just a kid (needless to say, I'd pilfer them when she wasn't around).

I can't wait to read the next chapter. And the artwork that I saw for this story is pretty fantastic, too.

Until next time, 'grandaughter'.

Luv Ya.



Author's Response: Mammy!!!! I told you that you're too young to be my grandma :P I'm so happy that you like it. I haven't done anything "canonesque" in a long time so I stumble trying to get these out, lol. But at least you're enjoying them, ne? I'll probably post a piece of the artwork with the next chappie sincce it will be fitting. ^_^ Loves ya!!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2007 9:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Desperate Times

As I started reading this chapter, something from very long ago came back from memory.

I remember a story very similar to this. I was but a very young girl when my grandfather told it to me.

Djeda would tell me a story about a young waif who had to live like this beside a magical forest. The similarities are absolutely amazing.

He told me that his older cousin, Anastasia, (a few years before she disappeared; some say she was killed, others swore that she had been sent to the 'states') was the one that had taught him this particular story while he was just a toddler himself.

Her grandmother had told it to her.

I'm sure that it's just a coincidence, but it's still remarkable.



Author's Response: Wow, are you serious?! THE ANASTASIA?! I'm floored, and really amazed! You're related to royalty! Wow! I based this fiction on Beauty and the Beast, though one of my readers thought it reminded her of Tarzan, lol. Since this plot is fairly simple, I doubt it's the same since each chap pretty much consists of whatever I think of at the time. But still, I'm totally impressed!



Reviewer: Caitriona   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2007 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

I'm glad that you have updated this story.  I just love it.  When you first started this chapter I thought that she had seen Inu at the beginning, but it being a bear cub was cute too.  Now she can take care of him! 

pardon the fangirlness  *squee*



Author's Response: Caity!! I know this update was a long time in coming. I'll have tomake up for that. I've had block for so damned long tho. Gah! But there will be loads of fluff in the next! Awww, you gave it a squee :P That's as good as two thumbs up! ^_^



Reviewer: sweetkijo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2007 2:53 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Well, it has taken me longer than I thought to review this. I really like this story, I think out of the ones waiting on updates, this one tends to be my favorite. Its kinda a little like Junglebook, in the idea it was just him and the wolf. God I cant wait to read the first kiss.....uggg, its so tragically romantic!

Author's Response: Thankies, Neddi <333 This update kicked my ass so bad. I think I know what I want with the next chap, but it hasn't been easy. >.< Thanks for reading, biscuit!!!



Reviewer: eatthetrees   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Super. Cute.

You are just too amazing. 

 Why are you so amazing? 

 Haha. :D

 Update soon, please.



Author's Response: LOL! You so crazy! *glomp*



Reviewer: Rosie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2007 2:41 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Yay! They finally meet! Even though this chapter isn't exactly what you wanted, I still thought it was great. I was so frustrated by how both InuYasha and Kagome acted.

 

When InuYasha gave up, I wanted to cry because I thought they weren't going to meet. Although, I felt so sad about how little he thought of himself.

 

And then Kagome, I was completely surprised by the way she acted. But it was realistic so I wasn't that annoyed. I mean, I would be afraid too if a stranger just ran off with me. Anyways, this was another great update and I hope you can finish the next chapter soon! :)



Author's Response: Rosie!! Thank you, hun. I'm happy you liked it. I know Kagome was a little bitchy, but she was afraid and didn't know what to think of a guy with dog ears, lol. But I think she realizes that he's a good person now. And yesh, they finally met and we can get this show on the road -especially since there's only a few chapters left! <33



Reviewer: hiccups3254   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2007 2:03 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

I know what you mean now. I can tell this isn't the type of your writing but it's still pretty damn good. Keep it up and I hope your shit goes/went down smoothly.

Author's Response: Thanks, girly. ^^ I appreciate it -this is definitely not what I'm used to! And where is your story?? I went to that site 3 times and couldn't find it. Did you take it down? I really wanted to read it. :(



Reviewer: New Fan   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2007 11:57 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

You may not have like this chapter, but I did. I hope that you will update soon.



Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. I really hope the next one is better, though. >.<



Reviewer: Lunar84   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 11:50 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Amazing! Truly amazing. You have outstanding talent.I have never before been drawn into a fanfic like  i have this one.  I'm so glad I came across your story on fanfiction.net. Which was very lucky since I'm not usually on that site since I detest it so much. It gets very upsetting going through 75,000 fanfics trying to find the very few decently written ones. The plot for this story is wonderful and very original. This is my first time reading one of your amazing stories and I simply cannot wait to devour the rest of your stories and those of your guest authors. Please continue to update this wonderful fic when ever you have a chance to do so. Also, I read that you were considering ending your updates on Fanfiction.net. If this is true is there a way to get on a mailing list where I could be notified about newly released updates? Thank you for your time I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Welcome Lunar84! ^_^ I'm with you. I really don't like posting on ff.net, mainly because it's a very young crowd for the most part; I've been plagiarised there 3 times, and the site has an issue with the kind of stuff I usually write. This story is actually mild, which is why I started posting there. But as you can see, this is my true home and I *always* post here first. So feel free to visit me here because I really don't know how much longer I'll be messing with ff.net.

Just a warning though, (chuckles) my stories are almost always AU, the early ones have HORRIBLE grammar that has not been fixed as of yet, and my characters are often pretty OOC. Oh, and I write a lot of angst and hardcore sex. So *blush* yeah, just wanted to give you a heads up. :P

On the homepage, if you like, you can sign up at my yahoo group. When I update I send out notifications to my readers through there. Last, but not least, a thousand thanks for reading my story and leaving feedback. I appreciate it a lot. I love hearing from my readers!



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 10:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

And the chap is so aptly named. Awesome chap Onna, and it do have bite too, lol. ;)

I have always marveled at the way youre able to describe something so vividly. Whether it be a simple conversation, a fight scene, heh... a lemon *grins*...  to an action scene such as this one. You never cease to amaze me with your tellings.

I am so in Awe of you. You make me so pruod. Huggzzz...



Author's Response: Onna, wow, thank you so much. It means so much that you enjoy my crap, honestly. I hate so much of teh stuff I write because I see all teh flaws and stuff I wanted to do but couldn't pull off. >.< I know you tell me to just write for myself, and I try, but I can't help but try to please my readers. After all, they can read anyone, but they chose to read me so I owe them something that's worth their time. *big giant hugs* You're like a mother to me; you know that, and I can't thank you enough for all that you do. Thank you for being there and for being as wonderful as you are. <333



Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 8:12 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

awww !!! omg that is so sweet! they finally have a solid, actual interaction! i wonder how its gonna go when she tries to get him into the house, the wolf is gonna be good right?

Author's Response: Sheena!!! Girl, that wolf better act right if he's got any sense, lol. I'm already working on the next chap along with PBE and a few others. Everything istaking me so long >.< but I'll squeeze them all in. ^_^



Reviewer: Kagome019   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 7:54 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Hermana!!! I really loved the chapter!!! the end was so cute, and so was the cub!!! InuYasha like always is so awesome... I like the way you portray him in your fic because is the same way I see him... and I wanted to slap Kagome for the way she acted towards InuYasha in the begnnig... but I will try to understand her XD...
Hermanita I want you to know that I will always support your work... so keep up!!!...y tambien te quiero agradecer por que aqui en Chile 'Coheed and Cambria' no son conocidos, y gracias a ti tango la suerte de saber de esta GENIAL banda!!!! gracias gracias gracias!!!!!

hugs and kisses!!!! para mi hermanita!!!

Author's Response: Mi Hermana!!!! <3333 How are you?! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I took so long to update >.< but I will be faster with the next. I had no idea that so many were annoyed with Kagome -haha. But a man with dog ears is a little weird, ne? lol. I'm happy you liked it. It wasn't quite what I wanted, but I'll try to fix that with the next chap since I don't have as much block. You like COCA?! That makes me soooo happy! *huggles* They rawk -they're my all time faves now. xoxo



Reviewer: Tina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 3:34 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Awwww, Inu...yasha. K'gme.  I have to admit, I was surprised that you didn't do the whole "adorable ears" routine.  But pleasantly surprised. SO many fanfic authors do that (including me) and it gets annoying after awhile. I like that you have a bit more imagination in your writing.

 Sorry So Short.

 Happy Writing!

TLH



Author's Response: Naw, lol. No ear tweaking yet, but I'm sure she'll get to it. Thankies, Tina! ^^



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 2:20 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: InuYasha.

Hi, girl!  Thanks so much for the dedication.  But, as I told you before, giving credit where credit is due is not hard to do. 

 

As for this chapter........YES!  They finally met.  And fate intervened so that they would......because Inuyasha was going to give up before he even officially met her.  And his logic for that could just break your heart!  He is such a terrific guy.....and his mother DEFINITELY raised him right.  But, the world has been so cruel to him, it's no wonder that he doesn't believe he's worth anything.  Now that Kagome is finally with him (or at least at his house), maybe she'll be able to show him how terrific he really is.

 

I must say, though, that Kagome got on my nerves a bit in this chapter, especially when he first rescued her.  Uhh!  I just wanted to snatch her baldheaded when she started screaming at him after he saved her from a damn BEAR!  She bounced back at the end, but when they first met.....MAN she needed punching.  Of course, in fairness to her, she had just been attacked by a BEAR.....so rationality would be a bit hard to come by (to say the least).  So, I'll cut her SOME slack.  BUT, it WAS annoying, lol. 

I look forward to seeing where you take this next, especially since you said you know where you want it to go.  Thanks again for the dedication!



Author's Response: Good lord I laughed my ass off. I haven't heard "snatch her bald" in YEARS! LMFAO!!! I love that, lol. I really didn't feel like having the typical sweet kagome that immediately fell in love with his ears and wanted to be his wife, lol. She's just a bit more realistic, and after nearly dying, she'd be all twisted, lol. But she remembered her manners at the end. And you're very welcome. You're one of the handful that always leave a review no matter what and I appreciate that. Hearing from my readers is what motivates me to get more chaps out. When 400 people read a chap (like this one) and 7 bother to review, not only am I in no rush to give them more, but it makes me think they didn't like it. So what's the point of rushing to post? I'll just take my time, and if I never update a fic, I guess it won't really matter, ne? ^_^



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