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Reviewer: falconbeach123   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:24 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

great story...please write more chapters



Reviewer: Elli Mac08   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:24 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

OGM! That was so intense it was so beautiful I was crying in my seat please continue with this great story you created. T_T



Reviewer: ravenreux   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:23 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

I don't usually stop to read this type of fic, but I have to say you've made me a fan. This story is simply a masterpiece of the human condition, with each and every character vividly caught in the moment. Your talent for wielding the emotional wand is amazing and eloquent. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful work, I patiently await the next installment. Kudos, Reux.



Reviewer: Hot Hime 1300   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:22 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

This story is the total package; romance, drama, angst, PLUS small comedy! Plz update soon! I'm crying and going mad over this story!



Reviewer: Jessica S   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:21 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

i love this story its so sad, so real. ive had a cheating problem before so i can relate (minus the marriage and having a kid, ect you get my drift) but the emotion is plainly there it isnt like many other fan fic's where u have to really look for it. your a great writer update soon i cant wait to read more (if there is more . which i hope there is)



Reviewer: Megan Consoer   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:13 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?



Reviewer: Sidalee   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 4:01 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.

OMG! Luv, Luv, LUV! Onegai, update!



Reviewer: Shichinintai's girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:08 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

OMG! what's going to happen to Jayden? the suspanse is killing me! i hope he'll be alright!



Reviewer: veena   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:07 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

pls don't let anything happen to jaden then inuyasha will blame it on kagome for no reason they got together just right now don't make them break again.



Reviewer: TheMikoShivae   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

aw

i hope jay-jay isn't too hurt.



Reviewer: dewrose   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

Hi Inugrrl, as always I love your stories. As always, your writing just gets better and better. In fact, I just went to your website to reread some of them and that is where I came accross this nice gem!. I really love this story and ask that you will update soon. Hey when are you going to update the Sengoku Medical Center and the G.F.E.. Love them both!. I think what I like about EverAfter is the family theme. It's a nice change. Thanks for writing and hope all is good with you. J



Reviewer: xXKimiko SakakiXx   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:05 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

uh oh...please dont let inuyasha hate her for it. aw, poor kagome...well please update soon! nice lemon by the way ;)

Kimiko =D



Reviewer: LoVe23   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:05 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

OH MY GOD! NO! I loved this chapter...they finally got it together and now this! Please, please update soon!



Reviewer: Shel.Daring2Dream   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:04 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

You can't leave it like that! PLEASE update soon, thanks!



Reviewer: ravenreux   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:04 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

omg...i can just see what going to happen in my head. I really hope Jaden doesn't get too hurt...he's just too adorable. Anyway, this chapter was great...the lemon was beautiful and the interaction between Kagome and Jaden was extremely realistic. Your writing is amazing! Thanks so much for sharin'

Reux



Reviewer: Black Betty   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:03 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

OH MY GOODNESS! That is such a terrible cliffy! Oh goodness, I can picture that scene in my mind...and oh goodness, I just really hope that you update soon so we all can see what happens!

Thank you for the update though and I can't wait to read what happens next!



Reviewer: AutumnTheReviewer   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:03 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

ah stupid cliff hangers no! What happens what happens what happens next? oh no oh no! *tries to stop hyperventaliting* Oh please don't keep us in too much suspence. Poor Jaden! I hope he doesn't get hurt. I hope Kagome gets to him in time. Dear God. Okay, i go now. Keep up the terrific work!



Reviewer: jessica s   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:03 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

omg please update, your fanfict is amazing, its so real you can hardly call it fiction at all. you get the emotion in these characters so well it baffles me how you do it. please continue and update asap!

luv, Jess



Reviewer: xxArtistic-Asian22xx   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:02 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

omg plz plz plz update soon, this is completley awsome,i'm adicted, but hopefully kagome gets to him in time. I realy hope she does. How much longer is this story going to be n e way?



Reviewer: BowandArrow08   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:02 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

Oh my gosh! I went to hit the next chapter button...and it wasn't there! Now i'm freaking out! They just got everything back together and now he is going to fall out of a tree! dude, i am seriously flipping out! Keep me posted!

Great job by the way! Keep it up!

Think i have used enough exclamation points? haha, there are never enough!



Reviewer: poems2songs   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:00 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

interesting story... really like it so far... felt bad for kagome & inuyasha... glad that inuyasha & kagome are back together and working it out... nice that kagome & jaden are getting along slowly too... hope kagome will catch jaden and he'll be fine... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!



Reviewer: LOVE.U.FOREVER   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 3:00 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

OH MY GOD. FIRST I LOVE THIS STORY, IT IS SO GOING ON MY FAVORITE'S AND YOU ON MY FAV AURTHOR'S. SECOND I WAS SO WORRIED THAT KAGOME AND INUYASHA WASN'T GOING TO BE TOGETHER. THIRD PLEASE LET SOMEBODY CATCH JADEN,DONT LET HIM DIE IT WOULD REALLY MAKE ME CRY.UPDATE SOON PLEASE AND PLEASE DON'T LET ONE OF THE MOTHER'S CACTH HIM.



Reviewer: whitetiger-isabella   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 2:59 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

i love your story. i cant wait to see if kagome gets to jaden before he fall. please update soon.



Reviewer: Amaya-Oneesama   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 2:59 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

So, wow. I just finished reading the original on feudal-pulpfiction. net and this story is absolutely freaking amazing. It's my new favorite and I'm looking forward to your next update! :D



Reviewer: Onyxlight   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2012 2:58 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.

OMG how could you stop there! *faints dead away*



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