Date: May 17, 2008 10:34 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
you must must must update this story!!! it's wonderful!
I love all your stories, but most of the ones i'd read by you so far had been very lemony without a large amount of character development. I'm so glad i clicked on this one because its absolutely wonderful! I realize now that you arnt just a one-style writer, kudos =]
Author's Response: Awww, thanks. :) No, I can actually tell a story without any hentai at all. ^_^ But I'm a pervert, and my readers are perverts, so I tend to give 'em what they want to see. Glad you enjoy this fic and hope you enjoy the update.
[Report This]Date: March 26, 2008 10:15 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
OH MY GOD!!!!! what a place to end! im going to have a heart attack. please update soon i love all of your stories so much, i hope jay-jay is ok. oh my god. like seriously having a freaking heart attack. please let him be ok.
Author's Response: Aww, honey, I'm mean, but not THAT mean! :P I posted the update, and I'm sorry this took so long. I've had some killer block as of late! >.<
[Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 10:53 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Holy crap! What a cliffhanger!
K-chan, I hope that one day you'll find it in you to finish this one. This place was my first stop when I turned on the computer today. My second was your xanga. I never pray but today I asked the universe to grant me a boon that you didn't do like you said you might and just delete everything. I'm sorry I didn't come by as often and I wasn't really there for you because I was too caught up in my own shit.
Anyway, I love this story to bits. There were so many powerful scenes, too many to count. They cut me open and then they put me back together. That Stevie Nicks song, well, that made me cry. That's a song that really speaks to me...
Love you, K-chan! *hugs* I'll hit you up at HOA and LJ later once I've put some food into me and had a hot shower. Oh, and I love the new skin. I see that Chibi's on a bit of a candy kick. :)
Author's Response: C-girl! *hug* Thanks for popping in and checking out EA. I've been working on the next chap, but you know how things have been. >.< I'm really REALLY hoping to get some inspiration. The longer I take to update the less I want to. Not good. I'm just tired of shit. You know about all of that.
Anyway, Landslide is such a sweet, sad song. I think a few people cried for him. It was a touching scene that I'm really proud of. :) One of the few in my writing.... Eh. I'm hard on myself. But thankies, for all the encouragement -means everything.
Love you back. *hugs*
Date: January 19, 2008 8:27 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
OH Please Oh Please tell me there is more to come to this story!!!! It is such a good story. And now I want to know what happens to Jay Jay. I think I might have nightmares when I go to sleep thinking about him jumping. :-( I so know that my two year old would be jumping and laughing with all kinds of delight. I would be out of my mind with complete panic. I can't wait to see what you have in mind for this, hopefully soon. Dei Dei
Dei
Author's Response: Thanks, Dei! :P I know that was a horrible cliffy, but hell yeah more is coming! That's a definite. I just need a little time to get myself together, lol. Thanks for reading it -means a lot!
Date: December 03, 2007 10:30 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Dayummmmmmmmmm, talk about a cliff hanger!! As with all your stories, loved it. Can't wait for the updates. Hope your hands are doing better today. Talk to you soon!
Lurv Ya,
~Liz
Author's Response: Liz! <33 Thanks for reading it. I owe an update so I'm hoping to have it ready this week. :D My hands are >.> acting up, but I'm getting there. Thanks for asking!
Date: November 25, 2007 6:09 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Try For Me
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Date: November 07, 2007 1:11 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Shattered
Ah this is a really touching fic and it really affects me like no other. Especially since my mother and father kinda went through this kinda situation... I wish I could read more, but it brings really awful memories. Just wanted to tell you that you did open my eyes to my father's mistake... and his regret. Thanks. <3
Author's Response: Thanks, Anila. This story has been difficult for many people, so I understand your not wanting to continue. I'm just happy that you gave it a chance at all. Thank you. <33
[Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 1:27 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Its amazing how little kids can do that. Its like magic I swear. They just appear on the most dangerous places when you drop you phone or look for something in a bag FOR A MINUTE. haha.
adorable little danger magnets.
=D
I liked this chapter. This story is much easier to handle now. Yet Im worried to see what is to come, because Im not so sure that your ending it soon. ANd lets just hope Peter Pan wanna be survives this experiance.
Author's Response: R4K! You came back -I didn't think you would. I'm happy that the fic is somewhat easier to read for you. It will be ending soon. And yesh, kids have this way of being everywhere you don't want them to be, lol.
[Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 7:50 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Why, oh why do you DO this to me, little one? You know how I feel about cliff-hangers!!!
Damn, but I hope that the next chapter isn't too long in the near future.
Hey, Sweetie...thanks. For everything. I'm pretty darned sure that ya know what I mean. I'll get back to you soon. I just read what ya sent me today.
Oh, by the way, can we see a happy ending for this story? Like...can we kill Kikyo? (chuckles)
Luv ya, my favorite 'grand-daughter'.
Mammy
Author's Response: Mammy :P I knew you were gonna get me for that :P I'm working on the next update and you'll soon find out if he busted his head open. rn*hugs to you* I'm happy that I could be there for you in some small way. And >.> no killing Kikyou... yet. :D Love ya!!! <33
[Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 9:32 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Sis You better update this soon!!! Did he jump, is he hurt??? Ahhh you have to tell me!!!!
Author's Response: Kid Sissy! I'll update soon. :P Thanks for reading!
Date: October 24, 2007 3:12 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!
The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year.
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Date: October 23, 2007 7:12 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
If I may say so, that was hot! ^^ It’s great that Jaden didn’t interrupt it this time. Oh my gosh, I hope you update this one soon!!!! I’m on the edge of my seat hoping that he’s alright. Oh gosh, oh gosh… Silly Jaden and wanting to copy the birds. That is one of every mother’s nightmares… Poor Kagome too, they were just starting to have a great relationship.
Author's Response: Nat ^^ Good to hear from ya. I'm glad you liked the chap and I hope to have more soon. I'm going "concert" crazy right now, but after Thursday when I see Coheed & Cambria I'll try to throw something up.
Date: October 22, 2007 12:41 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
KIKI!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm still loyal! I'm STILL LOYAL!!!!! sorry i haven't been writing in a while but this last year of high school is NOT what i thought it would be. *huff!* anywho.. (takes in deep breath) JADEN!! NOO!!!!!!!!my mother would of had a heart attack if she saw that. i'm glad that Inu and Kags are finally meeting each other more than half way but this is putting too much of a twist on things..I LOVE IT!!! and jaden just seems like a cutie pie fa real, fa real. keep updating and i'm still waiting on Hakari!!!
-love ya,
Boop
Author's Response: Boop! How're you doing, girly?? Last year of HS, huh? It may seem bad, but enjoy it. Those are the glory years that you'll look back on fondly, lol. 'cause let me tell ya, adulthood is a trip! Thanks for reading this fic -I appreciate it! I know lots of people (see review below) think I'm trying to fuck up kids. Sigh. What are ya gonna do? I think just about everyone has seen that scenario -kids doing something crazy and busting their heads open, lol. It's not childhood if you don't catch a few lumps. ^^ *hugs* Don't be a stranger.
[Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 3:36 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
OMFG, girl!!!
I make my fucking rounds to see whats new and find out you're already trying to kill a fucking kid. What the hell is wrong with you?!
LMFAO!! But it's a great story btw >.< lol. Wonder whats next... xDDD
Author's Response: o.O you're retarded, lol. I'm not killing kids. Now I oughta bring Kouga into it for the sole purpose of killing him off -my gift to you. *smooch* Thanks for poppin in. Hope all is well over there, ya fucking nut! :P
Date: October 20, 2007 12:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Hello there!First of all is to say that I’m a German girl, so please don’t be angry with my bad English writing skills. You know reading and writing of a foreign language are two different things…So I have to try to tell you what is on my mind with my low skills from my English classes at school. I adore your stories, no, I love them.I read a lot of fanfictions (German AND English) but not a single one of them affected me in such a way like yours. It’s right you’re the queen of angst, but in my opinion also of romance and erotica. I love how you choose your words, how you describe the feelings of your characters and how credible they are.It’s fucking amazing how you make me laugh and cry at the same time, although I normally don’t cry because of a simple story. I would write for every story a review but it’s just so exhausting to write in English, so I hope you will not be angry with me, when I write a review for only one story. Nevertheless I want to tell you which stories I like the most and why I like them this much. First place is: “True Colours” It’s just great how you describe Kagome’s nervousness, after the moment she met Inu Yasha. I was as excited as Kagome at their first call and on their first date and hoped as much as Inu Yasha that they would just kiss. I was carried along by it… Second Place is: “Ever After”I like the angst scenes pretty much, but the relationship between Inu Yasha and Kagome, when they are happy is so sweet, so pure, so awesome.The bad, bad cliffhanger of the last chapter is killing me… Third Place is: “Je t’adore” God, I was so sad after reading this, but I like Kagome’s character a lot. She’s just an awesome girl, so selfless and pure. Breaking her own heart for the one she loves, absolutely amazing, but also very sad. It was very hard for me not to cry after reading it. I like every story of yours, but this three are my favourites.In “Suicide Rain” I liked the songs you choose and I heard them all on Youtube, they went so well with the feelings of the characters. Through this I’m now a big fan of Stabbing Westward’s song: “Shame” and Evanescence’s song “Everybody’s fool” In “The Edge of Seventeen” I was impressed of the end and started crying. There is so much more I could say about your stories, but now I’m really exhausted of writing this.It’s so hard for me to explain what I feel when I read your stories, because this is the first English text I wrote without being forced to write in English, like in my English tests… But one more thing before I’m asleep:I’m writing fanfictions about Inu Yasha and Ranma by myself. Only in German, but this is not the point. What I want to say is that I’m impressed and a little bit jealous too of how you aren’t afraid of breaking taboos and writing about them like in “The Knife of Romance”. I don’t think that I’ll always be so brave to write in the way you write, but I want to work on this now. Oh, before I forget to tell you: I’m over aged and allowed to read your stories^^ So, I hope you will write a lot more, because you are just great! And please stop laughing now about my bad English…^^ Liebe Grüße aus einem Land weit, weit weg von deinem! (Greetings from a country far, far away from yours) Biene1709 alias Lara
Author's Response: OMG, thank you!! *hug* That was such a lovely review, and I understood you perfectly! I can imagine how tedious it is to write in a language that isn't your native, much less reading it, and I really appreciate the time and effort!
I'm ecstatic that you enjoy my work and are impressed by my lack of fear -it means a lot. It's true, I don't fear anything when it comes to writing. I just go with my gut and write what I enjoy, and hopeffully, others will like it as well.
Admittedly, I write tons and TONS of angst. I'm just good at it and I'm not sure why, lol. But I love digging into the emotion and just pushing it as far as I can go. It gets to some of my readers, but most can handle it because I usually make it up with a happy ending. ^^
I'm sorry that I haven't updated True Colors in a while. It's half-written on my desktop and should post pretty soon. That's probably one of my more 'fluffy" works, which I don't do often. But people seem to enjoy it so I can't complain.
But anyway, thanks again for taking the time to tell me what you think, even if it's just once. I love hearing from the readers and finding out their faves -it's a treat. I hope to have more for you soon! ^_^
Date: October 19, 2007 11:53 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Their Landslide.
I was super excited to see this new fic. It was different from your others because Kagome wasn't made out to be the villain in some way. In your others things are always her fault or she gets mistreated and brushes it off. But this one was very different. It was Inuyasha that messed up and he was doing penance. A lot of it and it made sense. But this chapter disappointed me. It got turned back on Kagome again. It's like you can't help yourself. lol. I get that Kagome shouldn't be treating Jaden badly, but it's hardly her fault for not being able to get over everything right away. It was less than two weeks? People that sprain their ankles take longer to heal. He should really understand that there will be setbacks and maybe they should be thinking about a paternity test before trying to become a family? Or maybe you're planning to do a big reveal later on. Either way, I look forward to it. Just maybe a little less Kagome bashing for not getting past it immediately? Also, in chapter 2 I think you say that Kagome is 24, but in this chapter they've been married 8 years. I'm a little confused. ;)
Author's Response: Hi ^^ thanks for the review. I'm going to be real honest with you, because most people already know this about me. :) I don't really care for kagome that much, and that's the truth. Everyone pretty much knows it. I feel she is better suited for InuYasha than Kikyou, and that is why they're my preferred couple, but I'm not a fan. She is whiney; she is a pain (most of the time), and way, WAY too many fictions make her a victim and InuYasha is always the bad guy. I choose to break that mold by giving Kagome her fair share of blame, which a lot of people appreciate, or so they've told me. My portrayal only feels really heavy-handed to big Kagome fans, which I am not one.
As for this chapter, I don't see where I blamed Kagome for anything (that's if you're referring to the latest chap). If you're referring to the "rain" incident, she didn't get bashed. The situation was very real. There is a child involved and she decided to come back home. She did, under the pretense that she was ready to accept everything and she wasn't making the effort. IMO, both her reaction and InuYasha's were pretty realistic.
And you're right - I should have written 7 years because kagome married at 17. That will be addressed later on in the story, though.
So while I fully appreciate the review and your thoughts, I write my stories in the way that suits me. I know it makes me a lot less appealing for Kagome fans, but that's why there are so many other writers. :P What you can't find on my site is readily available everywhere else. ^^
Date: October 18, 2007 10:43 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
You didn't just leave this chapter like that! iGrrrl, couldn't the poor things have one full chapter of things going their way? One lovely sex filled chapter? One rambunctious cute child filled chapter?
As usual I love Jaden, and his reaction to Kagome at breakfast was wonderful, both the fit and the fun. I also liked the phone sex that Inu forced on Kagome. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Caity!! I love Jaden, too. I patterned his speech after my baby cousins. They can't grasp "I'm" so everything is "I", lol. And you know it wouldn't be an IG fiction if I didn't toss a wrench into things. You should know that I'm not a fluff writer! :P Happy you enjoyed!!
[Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 7:24 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Oh man, that's a evil way of ending it! *pouts* lolz but the best part is; I have no tears! lolz... i cant stop grinning. OOh ... and the sex part! *clears throat* dang, you know how much i love you're lemons ^_~
I can jus see inu in his working hat and clothing since my dad is a construction worker; i can get a visual image easily... and it's sooo sexy! But then Inuyasha always makes things sexy ne? =p
So will Jay-jay start calling kags "mommy" ... i hope he does cuz then and only then will i forget the fact that he's another's child cuz the hair could be past off as her trait ya kno.
well ttyl! oh oh, and plz read my dairy fic! I've updated a few n am still waiting for your reviews ^_~ Ja!... homework now *groans*
Author's Response: Hey Bubbles!! Yup, an evil cliffy just because, lol. Why not?? And no tears! *hug* see, I told ya it would get better! The lemon was mild, and I feel myself shifting toward that more. Sex doesn't have to be graphic all the time, ya know? I mean, how many times can I tell y'all they screwed -haha. But, knowing me, I'll figure out more ways. :D I can't drop any hints on the next chap because I haven't decided yet, but we'll see, ne? Thanks for reading, girl!
Date: October 17, 2007 5:35 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
You can not end there!!!??!???!!! You must update soooooonnn!!! PLEEEAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading!!
Date: October 17, 2007 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Ahhh, how cruel! *lol* Just when I thought the story was ending, you do this. Can I tell you I love it? I'm sure you know though. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 4:31 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Awesome I sooo missed this story.....Love this chapter, but the cliffys are alittle tough LOL!!! Keep up the great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry for the cliffies, but you know I'm good for them! I'll try to update soon!
Date: October 17, 2007 3:43 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
What a crazy kid! XD I hope he doesn't fall ; ; That would just ruin everything! Kagome and Inu have finally gotten onto repairing the damage and Jaden's finally warmed up to her =) You're doing exceptionally well (for a person with 'writers block'...I swear its all in your head, this stuff is great ._.). Your descriptions are great - not too many boring details - and I can picture everything like i'm watching it on film. This would make a great movie, by the way! But with the utterly 3-dimensional characters you have, they'd need to find some fantastic actors =p
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Ax! Thanks for reading. I had block, but I was also kinda busy and out of it. But slowly, I see more chapters coming for this and the others. I'm glad you're liking this one, really. Means a lot.
[Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 12:43 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Oh, why not just kill me now why doncha, dammit, lol. Neddis right... you doin Lifetime TV, haincha? :D You got just an angst couch or is that an angst sectional, lol.
I think Ill just go and take my 'calm-down' meds now, thank you very much... Lol. :D Huggzzz
Author's Response: Awww, Onna, it wasn't that bad. Neddi is just breaking my balls -tee hee. And yeah, and angst sectional would fit well in the HOA. :P
Date: October 16, 2007 11:46 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
Finally!! more Kiki´s SMUTTTT ;P but OMFG!! now what?? hope Jay Jay is ok!!! XD
awesome chap nee-chan!! can´t wait to read more of your fics!!! I miss u!!
Author's Response: Maria-nee-chan! I miss you, girl! What's going on?? I'll have to drop you a note at DA. That was mild smut :P but smut nonetheless, coming from someone who hasn't been feeling like writing lemons. So, I guess I'm lucky I was able to get anything out at all. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Mommy and Me.
that is just cruel!! jayden falling like that. truly a mom's worst nightmare. things like that happen in slow-mo... i swear. i hope he's o.k meanie. lol nice cliffy ACK! other than that, things look to be omproving for kag and jay jay. (i love him) i wonder if kag will really be alright when sango and miro have their baby. it would be hard for me to deal, i think. any woman willing to go through this is a remarkable lady. she has all my respect. and as for the make-up scene... heheheheh *holds out hands* more, please*
Author's Response: Court!!! That was sooo not evil... was it? Tee hee. I like Jay Jay a lot as well. He's sweet and I pattern his dialouge after all of my cousins and adopted nieeces and nephews. I guess it's a tribute to the kids. :P And horay for sex, even >.> non-detailed sex.