Date: September 08, 2007 12:16 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
OMG!!!! you have to update pronto!!!!!
Author's Response: I will, promise!! ^_^
[Report This]Date: September 07, 2007 10:58 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Oh boy, Inuyasha have some explaining to do. Update soon.
Author's Response: I know, lol. And thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 07, 2007 1:27 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Awesome story and now I'm wondering what happened when he had the bottle of JD....LOL.....Sucks to be him right now....LOL...Looking very much forward to the nexted chapter...love it, love it, love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Cheryl! ^_^ Hell yeah it sucks to be him, lol. The next chappie is halfway done, and with any luck, we'll be seeing him squirm! Okay, that was mean... lol.
Date: September 06, 2007 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Ooohh, please make this angsty - as angst ridden as you can! :)
Author's Response: Somehow, I think if I did that Chibi would kill me, lol. Thanks for the review, Mare!
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
OOOOh... dun, dun DUUUN! And the plot thickens.. or should I say... shit? Lmao.
You've got alot of explaining to do, Inuuuuu... lol. :P
I wonder how much one can remember whilst drunk... then again, I cant remember what I had for supper last night, and I don't drink, lol.
Gettin good onna... Hugzz....
Author's Response: Onnamaru!! thanks for the review! Inu is in trouble, ain't he?? :P
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 6:04 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
HOLY CRAP. O_____O that was an unexpected twist if I ever read one. WOW. um. more?? >_< *doesn't wanna beg....but she will* <_< Now. for the more substantial part of the review: I love Inu's and Kags' relationship. heehee. <33 I want mine to be like that!! Course you know. lol. They're so sweet and kawaii. =P And Kikyou!! o_o meep. Is partly hoping it's not at all what's been implied, but I know it is. lol. GREAT update and I can't wait for more!!! *lovesloves* ^_^ ILY <(^-^)>
Author's Response: CHIBI-NEE-CHAN!!! Yesh, I knew you'd be shocked, lol. But you know me... I'm so happy you like it! rn< ( ^_^ ) > I'll make more asap!!
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 5:52 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
haha... I'M POOR BEAR! LOL... i cant blv i wrote that instead of kagome313 XD
I'm so crazy... seriously XD
But inu...!! I wonder if he was rough n wild when he was drunk--- even if it was with kikyo *pukes* ....... JA!
Author's Response: Crazy girl!!!
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
pooh bear?? lol... it's cute i tell u XD
I hope inu didnt cheat on kags anytime if that kid is his... and who know's that could be the kid that inu and kags could have... and the egg in another woman thingy... dont kno the rightful name i only saw it on that soap show called passions.. hehe.
*clears throat* Well, another chapter and i'm loving it as always. I knew sango was pregnant! Kags handled it really well i must say, tho a tear dropped from my eyes... lol, i'm so sappy! But she really showed some maturity at that given time. so ya... pooh bear?? LOL... i am so gonna use that sometime... hehe
Now now... shh!! i kno once again i'm not suppose to b on, but im home alone and a girl need a break from homework expecially accounts >.>
P.S Do u want me to send the second chapter of "softly" or do u already have it... oh oh and do u kno any beta who is um willing to beta my work including those that are posted? It could me more than one, two or even 3 ^.^ cuz i kno some of the chaps are LONG.... Well Ja! I'm sleepy *sigh* n the sun is still out ya kno, wat a day... *huggles* tlk to u later! ^__^
Author's Response: Yah, pooh Bear but he's in hella trouble atm, lol. Definitely send me the chap. It's easier than getting it off ED and I'll post it right away!! ^_^ Thanks for reviewing, girl. I appreciate it. *hugs*
Date: September 06, 2007 2:45 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Okay, I admit from the very beginning that I didn't know where you were going with this story. Especially since you emphasized that Kagome could never have kids, so I wasn't expecting a miracle. But NOW I think I know what's going on! That's Inuyasha's son and he got Kikyou pregnant the night that he drank all that alcohol (the night he found out Kagome could never have kids) and Kikyou is finally making him take the kid for x amount of time and Kagome is going to learn to love him and... *excited* I can't wait for more!
Happy Writing!
Author's Response: LOLOL. Only you, Tina! *hugs* I'm working on your "freeloader banner* too! <3
Date: September 06, 2007 2:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Uh Oh! Inuyasha endend up doing a one-night-stand thing when he went to the bar that night. I didn't expect that...lol. Great update!
Author's Response: Crystal!! No one expects such a great guy to screw up, but it happens, ne? :P
Date: September 06, 2007 10:15 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
dear god i KNEW he had a one night stand. i KNEW it. damn him. how is he gonna explain his way out of this one?
Author's Response: LOL! Why, C-note! Ye of so little faith!! We don't know if he did or didn't...
Date: September 06, 2007 9:25 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
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HOLY SHIT!
Author's Response: *nods* Mhmm.
Date: September 06, 2007 8:48 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
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Author's Response: <.o
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 8:07 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Uh, oh! It sounds like Inuyasha's pain caused him to make a terrible mistake.....like cheating on his wife! It isn't the little boy's fault, of course. But it still has to hurt a woman to see living proof of her husband's infidelity. And the sad thing is, that Kagome will know she shares a lot of the blame because of everything she put Yash through. But the baby sounds adorable. This is so good!
Author's Response: Girl, can you imagine?? I'd be beating the shit out of him as we speak!! But this is Yasha, so we need to give him the benefit of the doubt. :P
Date: September 06, 2007 7:53 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Oh hell yes I want an explanation too. Great chapter 2. Can't wait till chapter 3. Oh, everythings getting better on this side of the fence. Life kinda hit me hard this summer hope it's over with wish me luck.
Author's Response: D-gurl! Good luck!! I know what you mean. This summer has been so bad for me >.< I'm hoping the end of the crap is drawing near! And thanks for the review. I already started chap 3!
[Report This]Date: September 06, 2007 7:45 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Uninvited
Holly Shit!! No way!! That has got to be one of the BEST cliff hangers ever!!! Oh girl!! You have done it again!! My INUGRRRL is BACK!!! I really missed that writing of yours!!! You are a true goddess when it comes to this shit!! Baby please! Don't take long to update!! You got my panties in a knot!! I need to know what happens next before I have a heart attack!! Great chapter!! You are amazing!!
Author's Response: Midcat!! Thanks for R&Ring, chica. ^^ I know that cliff was a bad one and I was like <.< exactly how many people are gonna kill me for that one <.o LOL. But y'all will get the deal >.> in the next chap. Or at least some of it... <33
Date: September 06, 2007 12:23 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Good start. The story is compelling....and it's already filled with angst which is right up your alley, lol. I look forward to seeing where you go with it, although it's going to be really hard for Kagome to accept not being able to have her own baby. I just hope she doesn't push her husband too far away while she's coming to terms with it; she was horrible to him here. But she DID just find out. It's definitely good, so I'll be watching for the update.
Author's Response: Hey Girly! Thankies for the review. I know this started off pretty angsty <.< but it will get better -sorta, lol. But I wanted y'all to see just how bad it was before I >.> lower the boom, lol.
Date: September 05, 2007 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Hey, I read when u first posted but I forgot to review. Did I mention that I was absent minded as well as lazy? Well your writing is of course amazing, but I am holding off on tears because I am hoping there is a "happily" before the title. Hey I also wanted to put in a request in for the Yash and Kaede fic, I must say I am curious to see the end.
Author's Response: LOLz! You're awesome! And thanks for reviewing. I'm lazy too, so you're SO not alone! You know, it's funny that you mention the Inu-Kaede because I was writing that 2 days ago. It's about 2 chaps away from the end so I'm definitely gunning for completion. And no tears just yet >.> for Ever After. You may want to save them for later. >.< Kidding!!! lmao
Date: September 05, 2007 8:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
omg this story is so close to my heart...im pregnant right now, and i honestly cant imagine the heartbreak that losing my baby would bring...this is so sad, i bawled...i keep wondering how youre going to have them handle it...i know your style, so im expecting a few problems before it gets better...=(
Author's Response: SHEEEEEENA!!!!! OMG, you like read my mind. I was thinking of you yesterday and I was like, I need to hit her my space and make sure that she's okay and here you are. Congrats, girl! That's supa sweet! My friend, Jen, is preggie too!!
I know this one starts sad, but it won't stay that way, promise. You're brave for even reading it. Jen couldn't do it and I don't blame her, but what you saw in the prologue is the bulk of that situation, promise. ^_^
Date: September 05, 2007 8:46 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
You know this fic touched me. *sniff* I have a close aunt that went through something similiar to this that for a good while she hated being around kids and pregnant women ya kno. So she never really got to spend the time with my little siblings and baby cousins n stuff... *sigh* This fic is really touching girl, and i understand Kagome's pain greatly. It's a terrible thing that could ever happen to a woman. Maybe she can try the whole egg thing in another woman? XD
I'm sure you're wondering why i'm sending a review in the week huh. I had homework XD I finished tho. I'm telling u, i fell more inlove with highschool all over again. hehe. I was freaking out about my grade and all, but i got baq in the top class.. and no shitty teachers as far as i can tell. lol. I jus love it ya kno AND there's this cute boy sitting next to me, he's kinda a pervy, but he's like a miroku n i'm sango hehe. But hey, i have a whole year to find out the real deal, ne? ^^ This is an awesome fic like always girl... i'll b looking forward to an updation.
Oh and you're right! HS is to be enjoyed, and i'm taking advantage!
Oh ps... i dont kno if i told ya, but i did to types of exams n the new one, i got MASTERS in english, and when i saw that i jus couldnt stop thinking about writing XD oh and i score the highest in enlgish for exams amongst my peers---how cool is that?! lol... well ja, n thanx alot again... hehe
Author's Response: *Hugs* Bubbles, that's flippin awesome!! See, I told you that you could write, girl. I'm proud of you. Speaking of, I'm going to update your story here. Give me a heads up when you update, or better yet, send me a copy of your chaps for "softly" so I can add them on time.
Sympathies for your aunt, I can totally understand her upset. This story starts really angsty, but it will >.> kinda get better, lol. And don't worry, read when you can. School just started and that's way more important than a fan-fic, lol.
[Report This]Date: September 05, 2007 10:30 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
awesome!!! you rawk grrrl. yes I'm still alive.. but soemthing happened to my computer and it completely cleared out everything... so it took me forever and a day to find this site so I could contact you. Do you think you could end me the link for HOA? :( it got cleared off my computer. :(
thanks<333
Author's Response: Keiko!!!! Girl, I was wondering where you were. I was gonna call a search party!! I sent you the link, now get up in there!
Date: September 04, 2007 4:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Kiki...that was so sad...tragicly angsty and painful and...just plain sad. Poor Kagome...she'll never have a child and Inuyasha will never be a father and they'll never have their "own" children. But there ARE plenty of children in the world and I think over time Kagome could love one...but then, I've never had a miscarriage so I don't really know what I'm talking about. What I do know is that I really like this story and I hope that you update it REALLY soon! ^_^
Happy Writing!
Author's Response: Tina! ^^ Thanks for the review. I know this starts really sad and it has hard moments, but I'll try to make it decent. Next chap will post in a few hours I think.
Date: September 04, 2007 2:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
I like the new story you are writing I hope you up date soon
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoy the next chappie. ^_^
Date: September 04, 2007 11:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
Nice chapter one, it got may attention, hell any thing you write gets may attention. can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response: D-Gurl!! It's been a while. Thanks for the review and I hope things are great on your side of the world. ^^
Date: September 04, 2007 11:19 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Day the Sun Set.
ohhhhh, it has to be happy cause it's a b-day gift right? but you just called it ever after....not happily ever after. sight. now i just have to wait and see.
Author's Response: C-note!! I like when I keep ya guessing, lol. And yah, it just says "Ever After" so ya can't really tell, eh? Tee hee...