wow, this is such a great fanfic. i'm curious to know what will happen next. it's been a awhile since i've read a lemon fanfic that was so vivid and fluffy. i sort of like the fact that is didn't have too much profanity or fluffiness. it worked well with this fanfic. i also cannot believe that this will end in two chapters, but i look forward to those last chapters. thanks for the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks, Daisy. ^_^ And since I don't remember seeing your name before, I'll welcome you to Absolution (just in case!)

LLW is actually not a lemon fic. That lemon wasn't even supposed to be there, lol. It just struck me to write one when I did this chapter and it happened to work out. And yes, one of my normally raunchy lemons would NOT have worked in this story. >.< So it's nice to know I can adjust when I have to. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and with any luck, 2 more chaps will put this baby to rest!

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Awww... I love the ending of this chapter. I would do the same, like Kagome, if someone asked me to marry him!!! Lol.  Can't wait for the next chappie!  

Till then, Take care and *Huggles* ;)  

Awww that was romantic! I can't wait to see what will happen next!  I want them to be together so bad!

Awww That was soooo sweet!!!! See now I want InuYasha to give up his family name and run away with kagome!! You do this everytime lady making me all sad & happy at the same time...that just not right women lolz. I'll get you back for it tho. Well now I really want to see who it ends.

oooppss forgot to sign my name -__- ::blushes:: I'm such a scatter brain....

"lol sans profanit indeed. It was so loving and for lack of a better word, dare I say clean lol =]... amazing chapter as is the norm when I read your updates. And of course I didn't miss Toga's referal to Yash as an "it" when he was remenising about Izayoi instead of the endearing term child, baby, son, or his name.... poor Yash =/ update soon ^__^"

More stars because it was just that good dofl

"You will never have to beg for something that was always yours."

Wow! That was powerful. In fact, that whole scene tugged at the heart-strings. The little dumplings in the pumpkin patch line, InuYasha asking and getting her blessing--so incredibly sweet! It sucks that Touga has to put up a resistance. I mean, I kind of get why he's the way he is...and the scene with him in Izayoi's birthing room added to that...but the part of me that wants Inu/Kag to have a happily ever after still wants to punch him in the head. That contract move was foul, and kinda makes me wonder why he hasn't spoken to Kagome directly yet..AND why he's waiting until Sesshomaru's marriage. That seems almost cruel, like he's dangling what InuYasha can't have in his face. Probably not intentionally, but the man has ISSUES. I'll never understand how propriety and tradition could ever come before his kid's happiniess, especially when its the kid he hasn't exactly been fair to.

..but its sweet seeing Yash/Kag make the best of it. The ring, house, consummation, and InuYasha calling her his "wife eternal," had me squeeing sideways. I love it! They're so pure and sweet and innocent. The time-jumps between chapters gave us such a vivid picture of them and how they're relationship grew and it makes the whole story so beautiful with just a touch of tragedy/light angst (cause you're da Grrrl ;D), and humor (lol, the boys stealing treats--Sesshomaru and the pie, InuYasha and the chocolate mousse!)

I'm excited to read what else you have in store for them. Still hoping Touga will lighten up, intrigued about the sand, and curious about where Yash/Kag will go from here. There's no wedding, but they're pretty much got everything else about marriage covered. *gasp!* And a "clean" lemon? Had to read it over twice! Even with the era-appropriate language and innocence of it all you've still got it. So intense and emotional with just the right amount of fire. Amazing. I reeaaally, really like this one!

~Am :D

Supa giddy that you liked the chapter. It inspires me to hurry and do another!

Girl, you don't know how badly I needed this extended dose of mega-fluff.  Seriously.  Mega-fluff deprivation over here. 

That being said, I think this has now become my second favorite story of yours (my first being In His Eyes).  The love and WAFF is kicking my awful day right in the ass, and I'm loving you for it.  Sorry for the lackluster review, but just know that I have this huge shit-eating grin on my face right now, and it's because of you.  :loves:

And this was a mighty fine review -you know you don't have to write me a book. Just as long as you liked what you read, I'm satisfied! *hugs&loves*

No problem, all gravvvyyyy goodness! I enjoyed the wait *winks*

I am in need of cloning myself! I am loving another InuYasha! The way you portray him in this story is so Incredibly Awesome! 

I loved the way InuYasha was watching the snow as it fell and how it meant love to him more than the usual feelings felt when seeing snow.

I am just stunned by Toga. He seems to think that Love can only be permitted within proper social levels. Nobles to Nobles servants to servants. His constant jabs at InuYasha will only turn out in tragedy for all involved. He'll only see the truth only after something happens that can never be fixed/repaired. But then he is stuck on outward appearances like a broken record.

 OH my!! I had this weird thought of InuYasha talking to his arousal like two friends relaxing having brandy in the smoking room! I adore the way InuYasha respects and loves Kagoem so much that he waiting for her to make the first move in the next step of their relationship. *goes into gushy Romantic mode*

 The scene between InuYasha and Kagome with regards to her dress and being a servant was so incredibly touching! I got misty eyed. She was seeing it as the one way she can be his wife without the legality ofthe role... and he was seeing it as demeaning herself and to upset him.

Another Misty-eyd moment: That line about how many reasons Kagome cherishes her beloved and every day he gives her another. 

That was very poigant I found... him the prince who would wear a 'crown' resting his chin upon the 'crown' of his beloved's head.

Oh that is a very serious low blow!! Toga can't throw his weight around with InuYasha so he'll use his title and his power on Kagome. 

Right Toga, you are happy that you still Sesshoumaru because he is yours... but if something is important to another that is mere dirt beneath your feet to be ground into filth more... 

He truly doesn't value the friednship when it comes to how he looks to others. *shakes head* Toga this is the first of many things you will be/have destroyed in your incredible blindness... A blinders are for horses that spook easily.

I am shocked that he went after Kiyoko to reign in her child/make her decision. 

I was giggling over the interaction between Kagome and Yura and the friendship they have. Such a Delicious new look to Yura!! 

I had a feeling to what InuYasha picked out but it wasn't until he presented Kagome the gift that I was smiling and crying - a wedding band.

I LOVED the way InuYasha became that little boy that Kiyoko looked after again when he sought her permission to be with Kagome as a husband even if he couldn't do so in the eyes of others. more misty-eyes... The way he went to his knees before the woman he highly respects and sees though he doesn't recognize it his Mother-figure.  Their interaction with each other was beyond words!

That was so awesome for InuYasha to get them a house and a wonderful "NYAH! NYAH!" to his father who would give him a wing that he can control and dominate over for them to have their own world without barriers and borders. I fangirled! 

I am very very intrigued by the Sand and its meaning and why Toga would open a letter meant for Sesshoumaru. I get the feeling there is something very very important about that sand! And Toga will make everyone's life miserable about this.

I was laughing over Kagome complaints over him feedign her the mousse she made for him after stealing it away from the kitchen only to snatch her treat away with kisses!!! 

That lemon, no... the written treasure of a love scene was just Prefect! So hot and so incedibly tender and connecting on so many levels! and I was being a mushy sap by crying..

*STANDING OVATION* BRAVO! BRAVO!!!!! Magnifico!! Bello!! Poesia!!

mi ha lasciato senza parole!!! (left me speechless)

Il mio cuore canta le tue lodi chi le parole no possono (my heart sings your praise that words can not)

I can actually seeing Toga hauling in a princess for Inu just to 'save' him from his delusion even though InuYasha has made it unfailingly clear his stand.

The ending had me hearing Sting's The Secret Marriage and that did it... I was in tears even more. 

** Side Note: THIS (exception of the love scene for those younger)  is what girls/women should be reading to see/feel and understand what is Love... not Twilight.

And I love the Italian! Totally makes me feel like updating 'Treasure"! Also have to laugh at the Twilight crack. If they only knew how you hate them so! lmao. I still haven't watched it, or read the books and I probably won't. Too busy, don't care enough... you know, the usual. xD