Summary:
The knife of romance, the embodiment of pain. How can a sin so vile produce a love so pure?
Categories: Novellas
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 103818 Read Count: 27893
Penname: Thisismesmiling [Contact] Real Name: Joined: February 07, 2012 Last Visited: September 22, 2013 Status: Member Bio:
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Summary:
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 103818 Read Count: 27893
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2007 Updated: September 15, 2012
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed 
Date: September 17, 2012
Chapter number: 20
Title: Chapter 20: Cry for Me, Little Sister
Date: September 17, 2012
Chapter number: 20
Title: Chapter 20: Cry for Me, Little Sister
"Yeah, you've got about sixty-nine reasons to be really proud."
^ I really almost snorted my coffee out of my nose and onto my laptop when I read that. Of all the ways to react to finding something like that out about a person, that was the BEST xD Can't wait to see what Bankotsu plans to do with what he knows. Got a total "calm before the storm" feel from this chapter, especially with how things between Kagome/Sango/Miroku ended up.....and that was the BIGGEST tease of a scene ever, lol! I got SO anxious and scared with him when Miroku started fessing up, AND WHEN THE PHONE RANG =O I swear I heard Kevin Hart going "It's about to go down." Did not expect things to end the way they did, but I loved it because it's fun and at the same time deliciously frustrating seeing everyone else come close to figuring I/K out or noticing certain things/behaviors that they're gonna wanna kick themselves for not paying closer attention to later on - especially when Izayoi just logically explained away her daughter's jealousy!
Great/exciting chapter as always :D
Da Grrrl Says: AMMMMMMMM-SKIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!! <3
You know this review made me guffaw (Kevin Hart! XD). I had a feeling you\'d like Bank (Cause he\'s your boy n\' all!). I just pictured him being stupid that way -not all fazed, just taking it in like it\'s funny.
Miroku and Sango were fun because I knew everyone would expect the spot to get blown apart right then and there, but..... those two are not ready to acknowledge it yet. It just feels better to make excuses for what they\'ve seen, rather than have to face what the truth probably is. But since it\'s clear that neither would support incest, it will be interesting to see what they\'ll do when shit hits the fan. And the parents, forget it. When they realize that they\'ve missed ALL the signs... gah. Not many chapters to go on this one; hopefully I can (realistically) get this thing finished before the new year.
Thanks for the kick-ass review, as usual!
Summary: He grew up alone in a world that doesn't understand him and she just lost the only one she ever had. But when fate steps in, will Kagome find everything she needs in InuYasha's eyes?
Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60950 Read Count: 12815
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2007 Updated: June 16, 2013
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: September 20, 2012
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Caged by Fragile Bars
Date: September 20, 2012
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Caged by Fragile Bars
Oh damn O.O Yet another twist I don't think I could have ever seen coming. Everything before that was beast cute, though - they always are in this fic, so the touch of angst is perfect. Can't wait to see how they work through this one now that Kagome's seen a completely different and scarier side of InuYasha and left him confused and probably really hurt. Such a MESS, but...
They're precious. Even their angst is precious in this story xD Not so much the ending, but when IY got frustrated about not being able to say what he wanted to say - my heart melted. And Doc Hiro is precious, too! Adorable scene with his wife and HIM being the one meddling and trying to play cupid. I love these characters. They're so simple and sweet. Even *le gasp* KOUGA doesn't seem so bad (though Logan is definitely bad news bears). Interesting! :D
Da Grrrl Says: AMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!
I meant to answer your review on KoR, too, cause it twas awesomesauce! I\'ll get to it, though. My hands KEEP me slow. >.< I\'m so glad you liked this one, tho! I struggled with it a bit, especially near the end. I wanted that scene to be as close to what I envisioned as possible, which can be frustrating when shit won\'t cooperate... >.>
But I was fairly satisfied with what I was able to churn out. I may update this one sooner rather than later just because it\'s on my mind right now, but yeah. They\'re in a mess, but now she\'s seen EVERY side of him, so she knows what she\'s fully getting. There\'s far too much fluff in this fic for me, which makes it hard to pen, but I\'m pushing through somehow. >.< LOL @ bad news bears!
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: February 08, 2013
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Hope is Found With Time.
Date: February 08, 2013
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Hope is Found With Time.
That ending! :)
(and what a quick answer to her prayer! Girlfriend didn't even get to the Amen, lol).
I can't help but find everything and everyone in this fic adorable. Even though these are angstier times, it's all so gut-wrenchingly cute. One thing I especially loved was the tiny hint at IY's wolf's POV. Loved that instead of reading how he was crying, we got the wolf all confused about why his master's cheeks were always wet...and it was just powerfully sweet to see his best buddy so confused about what InuYasha was going through but hurting all the same. And then thinking about how they're 17 & 18 (...I talk like I'm that much older, haha), the emotions they're going through having experienced their first big fight/separation are so precious and perfectly captured.
I picked the perfect day to read this, too, because the bad weather they're having sounds exactly like the "Nemo" (Nor'easter) hitting us today xD
Excited to read what'll happen next!
Summary:
They were fated from the very start, but their worlds were too far apart for it to matter. Now he will try to fit a lifetime of love into one last winter.
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38112 Read Count: 5486
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2013
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: April 18, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Nefarious.
Date: April 18, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Nefarious.
OH. MY. GOD.
That ending!
I actually really loved Sesshomaru and his apple-pie loving self in this one. Wow, though. That was NOT something I would have ever seen coming, but such a good twist!
...and InuYasha in this is too precious. Him and Touga have serious issues to work through, but that confrontation in the study - powerful stuff! I felt so bad for him when he seemed to regret saying what he did, and now I actually feel bad for Touga (a little bit).
Can't wait to see what's up with Sessh and what this'll do to I/K and InuYasha/Touga now. IY spoke waaaaaaaay too soon about being grateful he wasn't in Sessh's shoes xD
~Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: AM-SKIIIIIIIIIIIII! XD
This was so hard to write, but it had to be done. I want to finish the old stuff, so I gotta jump in it, even if I\'m not feeling it. I wasn\'t 100% happy with this, but it\'s pretty decent for a story I haven\'t updated in years. I actually want to start on the outline for the next chapter and get it written soon. Can\'t have another crazy wait like this last one. >.< And I haz happy that you liked the twist! (Always gotta toss something out there, right? :P)
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: February 08, 2013
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Ineluctable.
Date: February 08, 2013
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Ineluctable.
This was an exciting one!
Even though I'm nervous for what'll happen to I/K now that InuYasha's decided to step up and help his father/avenge his brother, this "take no prisoners" side of him was badass and I can't wait to see him take on the South!
Also LOVED what went down with InuYasha and his father, and how even though they still have A LOT of issues to work through, they were able to unify on this.
Poor Sesshomaru, though! I adored his character in this one. It actually might have been my favorite portrayal of him in one of your stories yet (though I'm not sure, because you make me like him a lot even though he's usually one of my least favorite characters ever, lol).
And this: "...she would crawl across shattered glass to see him smile once more. But the only request he ever made was to be held."
Beautiful line! I love these two. Great/exciting update!
~Am :D
Summary: "Let me make this clear so there's no misunderstanding." He lifted her chin with a single finger. "I get what I want, Kagome, and I'm not afraid to get my hands dirty."
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, Guest Character, Hakudoushi, Hojo, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jakotsu, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs. Higurashi, Myouga/Myoga, Naraku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou, Souta, Souten, Toga/Touga, Tsubaki
Genres: Angst, AU, Crossover, Drama, Friendship, Hentai, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, School Life, Shoujo, Slice of Life, Tragedy, WAFF, Yaoi
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, Bisexuality, Explicit Sexual Content, Implied Rape, Language, Punishment, Underage Sexual Relationships, Violence
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23350 Read Count: 4950
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2011 Updated: June 16, 2014
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: March 22, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Smokescreens
Date: March 22, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Smokescreens
InuYasha's so bad xD ...and I LOVE it. Kagome calling him "Lucifer" was too fitting (using Photoshop for evil...for shame! Lol), and it had me cracking up. Poor girl has no idea what's coming, though I'm hella excited to see how it all plays out. And then damn. Eri REALLY let her have it, too o.o (not that I blame her). Can't wait to see what she and the "king" are like together, though I already get a pretty bad feeling about him. What's funny is that Light is actually pretty in-character (and you haven't even read DN, right?). I think he had teacher's on lock in DN-universe, too because he was such a star student, and he could be REALLY good at manipulating people when he wanted to be.
As for the rest of MBC, Bank is awesome xD Though it was pretty valiant of Miroku to bust his hand on that jerk's face, I loved Bank's insane threat (which he was probably serious about).
Can't wait to read what happens next!
~Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: AM-SKIIIII! <33333333
I\'m way behind on answering reviews, but you know I had to answer this one! I\'ve never read DN. Wanted to, but never did, so I\'m WILDLY happy to hear that Light isn\'t too far away from who he\'s supposed to be. XD
InuYasha is a lot of fun, but I think everyone is. I have my most fun when I can wreak havoc without needless FLUFF >.> so I\'m hoping this one will just flow for me. LOL @ o.o for Eri. That made me laugh. I could totally see you doing that! I feel a little sorry for Kagome, but she can handle harshness. She\'s <.< had practice. I knew you\'d like Bank, too. He\'s a good guy at heart, but he can be totally nutso -which makes him fun and hilarious. I think I wanna start the next chapter of this. Look what you did! XD
Summary: She would wait for him. She would wait for him until the end of time.
Categories: Blood & Roses
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Oneshot, Songfic, Tragedy, WAFF
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1255 Read Count: 852
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2011 Updated: November 07, 2011
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: March 22, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Here With Me
Date: March 22, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Here With Me
Awww...this was so beautiful! Bittersweet, but beautiful. And it was different. I don't think I've seen you do first person too often, but you really nailed Kagome's 'voice' and brought me into her head and made me feel everything she was feeling. The Dido song was perfect, too. As soon as I realized that I knew it I could totally hear it in my head while I read and the lyrics/mood of the song really complemented the story. Seriously, no one does songfics the way you do. Really good and emotional and beautiful.
~ Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, Am! <333
This one is really mellow. It just came to me when I heard the song and I\'m like, wow. First person AND canon. GAH! @.@ And you\'re right -first person is something I don\'t mess with. I dunno, it feels complicated for me due to the amount of characters I normally use in a story and all the side stories. But for something simple and small like this, it seemed to fit (without killing me). Glad you liked it! :DDD
Summary: I don't want to be saved. I don't want to be sober. I want you on my mind and in my dreams. Behind these eyes, I breathe you in again, just to feel you underneath my skin. I hold onto this sweet escape… but it's always laced with the familiar taste of poison.
Categories: Novellas
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Jakotsu, Kagome, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Toga/Touga, Yura
Genres: Angst, AU, Drama, Family, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, Psychological, Romance, Shounen Ai, Yaoi
Warnings: Controversial Subject Matter, Drug Use, Explicit Sexual Content, Gay Sex, Incest, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2922 Read Count: 265
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2012 Updated: October 06, 2012
Reviewer: Thisismesmiling Signed
Date: October 08, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Never Tear Us Apart
Date: October 08, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Never Tear Us Apart
OMG! xD
I love the setup to this one. Little Yash is adorable and interesting that he's actually the tougher of the two twins and looking out for his hanyou(? or is he full demon?) brother. Loooovvvved how he took on Kasei...and teenage Sessh is precious, too. The idea of him trying to deal with not one, but TWO IY brats is so hilarious. Just the one trying to distract him from his important coloring seemed like one too many. Interested to see where this'll go from here ;)
Da Grrrl Says: I KNEW YOU\'D BE THE ONE TO PICK UP ON THAT!!!! <333
HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
You always notice the little things, lol. YES, Human InuYasha is the \"tougher\" of the two. I wanted to play with that concept since we know the beloved hanyou is always the \"badass\". What would it be like if HE was the calm one? I couldn\'t resist. Plus, Hanyou Yasha was such an adorable chibi; I could totally see hi looking all adorably bullied!
Hanyou Yasha is not full demon, but his normal hanyou self. (The golden eyes gives it away), and he\'s watched over fiercely by his human twin. Sesshomaru is a doll, too. I like having him be young and still pompous, even more so than his dad. Haha. I was supposed to have the next chapter done already, but of course, I got distracted with other stuff... but I haz working on it! Totally want to see your reactions to the storyline! *glomps*